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 #83128  by Clank
 
Mandalorian wrote:
alex wrote:
Mandalorian wrote:

we will continue it
Here we go everyone! Chapter 3!!!!!
Can't have Alex waiting can we? :P

And now, ladies and gentlemen, here's the moment Alex has been waiting for :P

Chapter 3

"I don't care, i just want you to die." Anarra said, his blade raised in front of her. Months ago, she would have been horrified at the thought of striking her friend down. Now, her mind told her not to care. And inside her, her heart screamed a different answer.
"Anarra, i won't fight you." Revan replied, his own saber now in his hands. "Come with me, we can defeat Mandalore together!We can end this here!"
"Enough!The war no longer holds my intrest!After i kill you, i can live in peace." And with the end of her sentence, Anarra threw herself into a vicious assualt, her blade moving so fast that Revan barely brought his blade up in time to deflect the blows. Anarra continued to press her attack, each blow coming dangerously close to Revan's body.

Three Years Earlier
Dantooine Jedi Enclave


"I'm...i'm not sure. What you're asking is a great risk, Revan." Anarra said as she continued to walk along the Enclave courtyard. The weather was bright and sunny, causing the war to seems so far away. And yet, as the rumors continued to pour in, the tension was gradually seeming to rise.
"Anarra, i wouldn't ask it of you if it wasn't completly necessary. I need people out there that i can trust."
"I understand that. But is it wise to defy the Council? Surely we would be exiled upon our return."
"If we don't act now, there won't be anyone left to exile us." Revan replied, stopping to look directly his friend. "This war is going to engulf everything we've sworn to protect. And i'm not going to stand by and watch."
"I...i...Yes. I'll come with you." she said, smiling at him with her usual mannerisms. "Where ever you go, i'll follow. And together, we'll protect the Republic."

Present Time
The Invincible


"General, we're receving a transmission from the Titan. Shall i patch it through?"
"Yes. Patch it through Bao-Dur." Brianna said, turning back from her spot at the front of the bridge. Outside, the blaster fire still cast it's colors onto every inch of the bridge. Just then, the Invincible's escort erupted into a ball of flames, the shockwave knocking everyone on the bridge down to their feet.
"Status report?" she yelled above the chaos that the bridge had fallen into. Returning to her feet, she put a hand to her temples, and throwing a glance at her fingers, she noticed they were stained with blood. It was most likely a simple cut, and she ignored it.
"All systems are still operational. We took no damage."
"Bao, you alright?" Brianna asked, turning her attention to the Zabrak engineer. The chaos surrounding them was dying down as the soldiers returned to their normal routines. For a split second, she wondered if that was how the Mandalorians delt with the loss of any of their ships. She wondered if they felt any sadness at all.
"Argh, i'm alright." she heard him say, but she knew there was something more in his voice. Pain. He had been injured, and there was no use trying to hide it from her. As she approached his station, she noticed there was blood all over the floor. And the engineer was missing his arm.

Mandalorian Command Ship

The two lightsabers clashed together in a brillant display of blue and green, their touch creating a wave of sparks that showered over the floor below them. As they locked together, Revan could feel the power coming out of Anarra. The Dark Side had given her powers that even Anarra herself would have never thought possible.
"Anarra, don't do this! We're friends remember?"
"We WERE friends. I loved you at one point. That's the past." Anarra replied as she pulled her blade away from the saber lock. There was sweat covering her forehead, Revan could see that. He knew that Anarra was indeed his equal in lightsaber combat, but he didn't know how much longer he could keep this up.
They stopped and stared at each other for a moment, both waiting for the other to make the first move. The ship shook briefly, an reminder of the battle that roared around them. Inside each of them, their hearts screamed for the battle to stop. And yet, as Anarra swung her saber again, the battle raged on.

 #83129  by Clank
 
ummm its kinda messt u (talking about the quote) chapter 3 is makeing me drull for chapter 4 im like a 2 year old child that want lolipops

 #83132  by Buffy's Shadow
 
alex wrote:ummm its kinda messt u (talking about the quote) chapter 3 is makeing me drull for chapter 4 im like a 2 year old child that want lolipops
Glad to hear you want more Alex. Gives me all the more reason to write.

 #83133  by Mandalorian
 
alex wrote:
Mandalorian wrote:
alex wrote:
we will continue it
Here we go everyone! Chapter 3!!!!!
Can't have Alex waiting can we? :P

And now, ladies and gentlemen, here's the moment Alex has been waiting for :P

Chapter 3

"I don't care, i just want you to die." Anarra said, his blade raised in front of her. Months ago, she would have been horrified at the thought of striking her friend down. Now, her mind told her not to care. And inside her, her heart screamed a different answer.
"Anarra, i won't fight you." Revan replied, his own saber now in his hands. "Come with me, we can defeat Mandalore together!We can end this here!"
"Enough!The war no longer holds my intrest!After i kill you, i can live in peace." And with the end of her sentence, Anarra threw herself into a vicious assualt, her blade moving so fast that Revan barely brought his blade up in time to deflect the blows. Anarra continued to press her attack, each blow coming dangerously close to Revan's body.

Three Years Earlier
Dantooine Jedi Enclave


"I'm...i'm not sure. What you're asking is a great risk, Revan." Anarra said as she continued to walk along the Enclave courtyard. The weather was bright and sunny, causing the war to seems so far away. And yet, as the rumors continued to pour in, the tension was gradually seeming to rise.
"Anarra, i wouldn't ask it of you if it wasn't completly necessary. I need people out there that i can trust."
"I understand that. But is it wise to defy the Council? Surely we would be exiled upon our return."
"If we don't act now, there won't be anyone left to exile us." Revan replied, stopping to look directly his friend. "This war is going to engulf everything we've sworn to protect. And i'm not going to stand by and watch."
"I...i...Yes. I'll come with you." she said, smiling at him with her usual mannerisms. "Where ever you go, i'll follow. And together, we'll protect the Republic."

Present Time
The Invincible


"General, we're receving a transmission from the Titan. Shall i patch it through?"
"Yes. Patch it through Bao-Dur." Brianna said, turning back from her spot at the front of the bridge. Outside, the blaster fire still cast it's colors onto every inch of the bridge. Just then, the Invincible's escort erupted into a ball of flames, the shockwave knocking everyone on the bridge down to their feet.
"Status report?" she yelled above the chaos that the bridge had fallen into. Returning to her feet, she put a hand to her temples, and throwing a glance at her fingers, she noticed they were stained with blood. It was most likely a simple cut, and she ignored it.
"All systems are still operational. We took no damage."
"Bao, you alright?" Brianna asked, turning her attention to the Zabrak engineer. The chaos surrounding them was dying down as the soldiers returned to their normal routines. For a split second, she wondered if that was how the Mandalorians delt with the loss of any of their ships. She wondered if they felt any sadness at all.
"Argh, i'm alright." she heard him say, but she knew there was something more in his voice. Pain. He had been injured, and there was no use trying to hide it from her. As she approached his station, she noticed there was blood all over the floor. And the engineer was missing his arm.

Mandalorian Command Ship

The two lightsabers clashed together in a brillant display of blue and green, their touch creating a wave of sparks that showered over the floor below them. As they locked together, Revan could feel the power coming out of Anarra. The Dark Side had given her powers that even Anarra herself would have never thought possible.
"Anarra, don't do this! We're friends remember?"
"We WERE friends. I loved you at one point. That's the past." Anarra replied as she pulled her blade away from the saber lock. There was sweat covering her forehead, Revan could see that. He knew that Anarra was indeed his equal in lightsaber combat, but he didn't know how much longer he could keep this up.
They stopped and stared at each other for a moment, both waiting for the other to make the first move. The ship shook briefly, an reminder of the battle that roared around them. Inside each of them, their hearts screamed for the battle to stop. And yet, as Anarra swung her saber again, the battle raged on.
great addon to the story emp :D keep it up!

 #83136  by Buffy's Shadow
 
Mandalorian wrote:
alex wrote:
Mandalorian wrote: Here we go everyone! Chapter 3!!!!!
Can't have Alex waiting can we? :P

And now, ladies and gentlemen, here's the moment Alex has been waiting for :P

Chapter 3

"I don't care, i just want you to die." Anarra said, his blade raised in front of her. Months ago, she would have been horrified at the thought of striking her friend down. Now, her mind told her not to care. And inside her, her heart screamed a different answer.
"Anarra, i won't fight you." Revan replied, his own saber now in his hands. "Come with me, we can defeat Mandalore together!We can end this here!"
"Enough!The war no longer holds my intrest!After i kill you, i can live in peace." And with the end of her sentence, Anarra threw herself into a vicious assualt, her blade moving so fast that Revan barely brought his blade up in time to deflect the blows. Anarra continued to press her attack, each blow coming dangerously close to Revan's body.

Three Years Earlier
Dantooine Jedi Enclave


"I'm...i'm not sure. What you're asking is a great risk, Revan." Anarra said as she continued to walk along the Enclave courtyard. The weather was bright and sunny, causing the war to seems so far away. And yet, as the rumors continued to pour in, the tension was gradually seeming to rise.
"Anarra, i wouldn't ask it of you if it wasn't completly necessary. I need people out there that i can trust."
"I understand that. But is it wise to defy the Council? Surely we would be exiled upon our return."
"If we don't act now, there won't be anyone left to exile us." Revan replied, stopping to look directly his friend. "This war is going to engulf everything we've sworn to protect. And i'm not going to stand by and watch."
"I...i...Yes. I'll come with you." she said, smiling at him with her usual mannerisms. "Where ever you go, i'll follow. And together, we'll protect the Republic."

Present Time
The Invincible


"General, we're receving a transmission from the Titan. Shall i patch it through?"
"Yes. Patch it through Bao-Dur." Brianna said, turning back from her spot at the front of the bridge. Outside, the blaster fire still cast it's colors onto every inch of the bridge. Just then, the Invincible's escort erupted into a ball of flames, the shockwave knocking everyone on the bridge down to their feet.
"Status report?" she yelled above the chaos that the bridge had fallen into. Returning to her feet, she put a hand to her temples, and throwing a glance at her fingers, she noticed they were stained with blood. It was most likely a simple cut, and she ignored it.
"All systems are still operational. We took no damage."
"Bao, you alright?" Brianna asked, turning her attention to the Zabrak engineer. The chaos surrounding them was dying down as the soldiers returned to their normal routines. For a split second, she wondered if that was how the Mandalorians delt with the loss of any of their ships. She wondered if they felt any sadness at all.
"Argh, i'm alright." she heard him say, but she knew there was something more in his voice. Pain. He had been injured, and there was no use trying to hide it from her. As she approached his station, she noticed there was blood all over the floor. And the engineer was missing his arm.

Mandalorian Command Ship

The two lightsabers clashed together in a brillant display of blue and green, their touch creating a wave of sparks that showered over the floor below them. As they locked together, Revan could feel the power coming out of Anarra. The Dark Side had given her powers that even Anarra herself would have never thought possible.
"Anarra, don't do this! We're friends remember?"
"We WERE friends. I loved you at one point. That's the past." Anarra replied as she pulled her blade away from the saber lock. There was sweat covering her forehead, Revan could see that. He knew that Anarra was indeed his equal in lightsaber combat, but he didn't know how much longer he could keep this up.
They stopped and stared at each other for a moment, both waiting for the other to make the first move. The ship shook briefly, an reminder of the battle that roared around them. Inside each of them, their hearts screamed for the battle to stop. And yet, as Anarra swung her saber again, the battle raged on.
great addon to the story emp :D keep it up!
Mandalorian, i have just one request.

PLEASE STOP WITH THE QUOTES!!! :twisted:

 #83144  by Mandalorian
 
The Emperor's Hand wrote:
Mandalorian wrote:
alex wrote:
great addon to the story emp :D keep it up!
Mandalorian, i have just one request.

PLEASE STOP WITH THE QUOTES!!! :twisted:
ok lol i will stop with the quoting people :P

 #83150  by Clank
 
The Emperor's Hand wrote:
Mandalorian wrote:
alex wrote:
great addon to the story emp :D keep it up!
Mandalorian, i have just one request.

PLEASE STOP WITH THE QUOTES!!! :twisted:


yeah mand stop with the quotes XD (this is my stoping line) o and one more thing WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 #83154  by Buffy's Shadow
 
Ok, don't worry. Once again more is on the way.

And, i've also got another story in the works. :shock: I'll post it once this story is finished

 #83155  by Clank
 
roger,tomorow is the last full day im gona be on my vacation.so the day after tomorow ill be back.

 #83156  by Buffy's Shadow
 
Good to hear it Alex! :D

 #83165  by Buffy's Shadow
 
Chapter 4

The Invincible
Malachor V


"Bao-Dur?" she screamed again, even though the chaos on the bridge had died down within minutes. "Bao-Dur, answer me!!"
"I'm...fine...General." Was the engineer's response, drawn out with the clear expression of pain. As Brianna reached his side, her eyes immediately flared with worry. She could sense that the engineer was close to death, perhaps even closer than she could bring him back from. Time was ticking away, and she had no time to waste paying attention to a battle.
"Stay with me Bao. I'm going to send you into a healing trance. Just hold on." she said, closing her eyes as she reached out with the Force. Bao-Dur was barely conscience, but she had no trouble finding his life-line and plunging it into the healing power of the Force.
"General?" One of the other soldiers asked, standing over the two of them in a fabricated sense of power.
"Be quiet." Brianna responded, her voice breaking slightly as she continued to concentrate. Although she had a powerful control of the Force, she had never been a master at healing techniques. And yet, she poured every inch of her power into the Zabrak in front of her.
"Revan's ship is still requesting communications. Shall i patch it through?" the soldier asked again, Brianna's words obviously not phasing him.
"Fine. Patch it through."

5 Months Earlier
Mandalorian Stronghold


"I'll ask one more time, Jedi. Where is the Republic fleet?" Inside her, Anarra's body screamed for her to give in as another wave of pain coursed through her body. Slamming her mind shut, she fought back to the urge to scream. She wouldn't let the Mandalorians win this time.
"Still giving us the silent treatment huh? I can fix that." she heard him say before the jab of another needle poking through into her arm. Her inch of her skin erupted into fire. She swore that she screamed, although it sounded unlike her own voice. Behind that helmet, she was sure that he was smiling.
"I grow tired of these games, Jedi. Tell me what i want, and i can make all of this stop."
"Never." Anarra replied through gritted teeth. She was exhausted, and her body wracked with pain. A powerful combination in any species. "Monster"
"Still acting strong. Let me tell you something, little girl. No-one is coming back for you. You're ours now."
"You think lies will break me Mandalorian? You're a fool." Anarra replied as the Mandalorian grapped her by the chin and pulled her closer to him. He had taken his helmet off, causing her to be met with the sight of his eyes. As she looked him in those eyes, she saw him smile. And that truely sent fear into her heart. He could see it, she knew from the way he moved his eyes around her.
"Hold on to your faint hope then. It won't protect you or save you." He turned away from her, activating a comlink in the process. Without his eyes upon her, she let a few tears flow down her cheek. Revan, where are you?
"I'm finished with her. Return her to her cell."

Present Time
Mandalorian Command Ship


"Anarra, please, i don't want to do this!" Revan's words wrapped around her brain, burning like the same drugs that the Mandalorians had used on her during her imprisonment. Shrugging it off, Anarra scowled back at him. She wanted nothing more than to thrust her saber into her opponent's heart.
"SHUT UP!" she screamed back at him, leaping forward with her saber in hand. She didn't notice until it was too late that Revan had side-stepped her, his own saber falling down upon her saber arm as she flung past him.
"So be it." Were his only words as she landed against the wall, pain throbbing where her elbow had once been. She wanted to scream, to throw her saber into her other hand, and continue the battle. But, she didn't, and remained silent as Revan towered over her, his saber extinguished back into the hilt that remained in his hand.
"I'm sorry Anarra. I didn't want it to end this way." he said, kneeling beside her on the ground. She stared back at him, her eyes still sickly yellow. Her saber remained in her severed hand, extinguished, the markings on the hilt visible to the naked eye.
"Kill me. End it then."
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 #83200  by Clank
 
more more more more MOREEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

 #83242  by Clank
 
come on TEH u are KILLING ME i need my dose.

 #83243  by Buffy's Shadow
 
alex wrote:come on TEH u are KILLING ME i need my dose.
Sorry, Alex, you're gonna have to wait until Monday. I'm visiting family this weekend. Or am i.... :twisted:

jk, yeah, i'm visiting some family, but i am working on the next chapter. I was up til 3 am last night writing in my notebooks.

But then again, you are used to a new chapter per day........[Robin Williams voice] "It's like two junkies argueing over a plastic spoon".......

Don't worry, just two more days! I'm going to hopefull make the new chapter longer, and it will quite possibly be the LAST chapter of the story. :cry:


But once again, don't worry. As i have said before, when this one ends,i have another KOTOR story in the works!

 #83277  by Buffy's Shadow
 
Ok, i might be staying with family until Wednesday, MAYBE. So, if that is so, i won't be on the server for a few more days. So, until then, here's the FINAL Chapter of the story. Hope you all enjoyed it, and had fun reading it.:D
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Chapter Five

Mandalorian Command Ship
Skies Above Malachor V


"Kill me. End it then." Anarra replied, her eyes burning with a uncapped passion. She had been so close, so near to achieving what she wanted. And now, here she lay, disarmed, and about to die by the hands of someone she had once loved.
"No." The single word echoed throughout the hanger, bouncing off every wall and rebounding back to her. This would be his final laugh at her, to deny her the end that she had wanted for months. And now, he had won.
"No?" she asked, although her mind has failed to stop her. There was a certain softness in her voice now, gone was the black trimmed thread of anger that had dominated her voice earlier. Inside her, something was changing, and the Dark Side was losing it's iron-gripped control on her.
"No. I will not strike you down, there's too much at stake right now. And i need all the help i can receive."
"Then what will you do? Leave me here to die?" Removing the mask from his face, Revan stared down at her, no sign of any emotion in his eyes. If this was a trick, then it was indeed one that Anarra would fall for.
"No.I"m getting you out of here." He said, pulling a small comlink from his belt. "Alek, come in."
"Revan? What's going on, the fleet's falling apart out here!" was the response from the other end as Revan's second-in-command answered with a sense of urgency. Alek, who had escaped from Mandalorian imprisonment merely two years earlier, had been the first to follow Revan to war against the Mandalorians.
"Get a shuttle into the Mandalorian's command ship. Lock onto the signal from the channel i'm using."
"What? Are you insane?! The Mandalorians will rip the shuttle to shreads the instant it leaves the hanger bay!"
"Alek, Anarra is here. She needs medical attention." Revan replied, noticing that Anarra was trying to return to her feet. He felt no threat of danger through the Force, at least coming from her. No, the fight was over, and she had lost. Anarra had nowhere else to go.
"Anarra?I...i....Sithspit! I'll send the shuttle now. Just hurry up and get out of there!"
"No, pick her up, and leave. I'm staying."

The Invincible

"General, we have no choice, we need to activate the Shadow Generator! If we don't, the Republic dies here." Inside her mind, Brianna regretted hearing those words. The Mass Shadow Generator still hadn't even been tested. If they used it now, it could easily destroy not only the Mandalorians, but also the Republic fleet. And yet, they had been pushed back into finally using this last resort.
"General?" Bao-Dur asked, covering his severed arm with one of the oil rags that had always adorned his belt. Turning to face him, Brianna avoided looking at the arm, another reminder of how this war was going for them.
"Activate it Bao-Dur.....activate the Generator." she said quietly, bowing her head. This was it, the moment that the Republic had waited for, the moment that the galaxy had desired for the past three years. The moment that Brianna was about to fulfill.
"Right away General. I obey."

Mandalorian Command Ship

"Alek, get her onboard!" Revan shouted above the sounds of the battle outside the hanger. As he slowly handed Anarra over to Alek, Revan gave her one last glance. His former friend had finally lost conscience despite all that Revan had done to stop the flow of blood from her arm.
"Revan, Brianna is going to activate the Shadow Generator. If you stay here, you'll surely be destroyed with the rest of the Mandalorian fleet." "Alek said, taking Anarra into his arms and setting her down slowly on the medical bed beside him. "We have to retreat to hyperspace.It's the only way we'll survive."
"No, my friend. If it is my fate to die here, then i will go with the Force. Take Anarra, get her away from this place. She...she deserves better than this." Turning away from the two, Revan slowly began his journey to the bridge, taking his saber into his hand once again. One way or another, one death or another, this was going to end today. The Mandalorians wouldn't threaten the galaxy one more day.
"Revan." Alek called out, he himself turning back from the top of the boarding ramp of the shuttle. Revan twisted his head back towards the shuttle, his face unreadable behind the mask once again.
"May the Force be with you."

Bridge, Mandalorian Command Ship

As he disembarked from the shuttle lift, Revan had expected the thousands of troops to immediately raise their rifles and open fire. And yet, they bowed to him. Bowed to him in their blue, red, and yellow armor. And standing in the center of the bridge, was their supreme command. Mandalore The Ultimate.
"It is a glorious sight, is it not Revan?" he said, staring out into the heart of the battle. "The sight of a million warriors, fighting to their last dieing breath."
"A glorious sight to you. To the rest of the galaxy, this is a nightmare." Revan replied, his lightsaber still gripped in his hand, his thumb dieing to activate the weapon, and strike his opponent down. For three years, he had fought against this foe, and now, their god was in front of him, willing to met him in one final instance of hand to hand combat.
"Don't you see Revan? This is what we were DESTINED for! We were destined to meet here, at this moment. To take part in the greatest battle of our time!"
"Save me your words Mandalorian. Draw your weapons, and let's finish this." Revan said, activating his lightsaber and readying himself for the battle. Mandalore in turn, pulled his vibro-blade from it's sheath, and charged.
The two weapons met each other, clashing as they received contact, and again as they disengaged and met again and again. Behind them, the Mandalorian soldiers watched in silence, in their minds knowing that they would emerge victorious. They knew.
Revan remained on the defensive for most of the battle, waiting for his enemy to tire or make a mistake and leave an opening in his defense. Just as Revan had done during a spar between himself and a young apprentice. An apprentice that had refused to join them, and had left her battle meditation out of the war.
And his waiting had paid off. As Revan ducked underneath another slash from the vibro-blade, he attacked with his saber at the Mandalorian commander's side. The blade met armor, and soon after met flesh. Pushing away, Mandalore looked back at Revan, anger flowing beneath his mask. And then, he laughed.
"Well done Revan. You are indeed as impressive a swordsman as the rumors have made you out to be." he said, before he launched another assault against the Jedi General. However, his attack patterns had grown sloppy, and Revan gradually began to push back, the advantage in the duel was his now. The two swordsmen exchanged blows for what seemed like hours, but in reality was mere minutes. And then it was all over.
The lightsaber blade disappeared into Mandalore's chest, his vibroblade dropping to the floor with a loud clang. Behind him, the Mandalorian soldiers spoke in hushed whispers. They had lost. It was over.


The Invincible
Minutes after Mandalore's Death


"General, the Generator is ready." Bao-Dur said, his remaining hand flying over the control panel. In front of him, Brianna stood, his eyes closed, her mind already mourning for the millions of lives that were about to end.
"Activate it. Let's end this." were her only words as she continued to stand completely still. At her sides, her arms were trembling. And with the movement of a finger, the Mass Shadow Generator erupted.
Around the ship, explosions quickly began erupting, the remains of ships beginning to fall towards the surface of Malachor itself. Closer and closer the explosions came to the Invincible. Turning back towards Bao-Dur, Brianna merely nodded, and continued to look at him, saying nothing. And then, the next explosion came from the ship itself, as the engines erupted into a ball of fire.
Inside Brianna's head, the Force erupted into a deafening room of sound. All around her, outside and on the bridge itself, the souls of the dead and dying screamed. Screamed into her head. She fell to the floor of the bridge, her palms covering her ears in a desperate attempt to block out the sounds.
"MAKE IT STOP!!!!!" she screamed, tears streaming down her cheeks from the pain. And then, as quickly as it had began, there was nothing but silence. Nothing more than an echo. The war was over.

Epilogue

"I remember standing on the bridge with you and watching the destruction of the Republic—watching ships full of soldiers and Jedi burn and die. I remember the look you had when you turned to me. It was the longest you'd ever looked at me. You didn't say anything—just a nod. Events move quickly then, even in my dreams. Flashes, explosions, you—falling. I could feel the pain around me. And then the memory. The drifting hulks of the Mandalorian ships, the dead—allies, friends, strangers. And then the echo. Lingering. The sound I awaken to in my nightmares"- Bao Dur

The Mandalorian Wars continued to haunt the Republic for decades after.
After that final great battle, Revan and his follower Alek ventured into the Unknown Regions, 'To find the last remaining traces of the Mandalorian Fleet' in their words. But they discovered something out there, something that twisted their minds. What they found turned them to the Dark Side of the Force. And they proclaimed themselves Dark Lords of the Sith, and took the names Darth Revan, and Darth Malak.

But there was also another artifact that they discovered. An artifact that they had found clues to during the entire course of the war. On the planets Dantooine, Korriban, Manaan, Tatooine, and Kashyyyk, they discovered the remains of an Infinite Empire, and with it, a group of five Star Maps that soon led them to the Star Forge.

And from out of that war was born another, The Jedi Civil War.
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 #83278  by Buffy's Shadow
 
THE END

 #83291  by Clank
 
beutifull done **aplauses**

 #83294  by Buffy's Shadow
 
alex wrote:beutifull done **aplauses**
*Bows* Thank you. This story was INCREDIBLY fun to write. I'm knee-deep in my new story that i'm writing as i try to finish this post. So, perhaps in a week, watch for another KOTOR story.

While i'm keeping the major details of the new story under wraps, i will allow you one detail. It takes place between KOTOR 1 and KOTOR 2. So, it basically tries to wrap things up from KOTOR 1, and also set things up for KOTOR 2. And.......it does sent Revan & Bastila on an adventure that i hope will please.


And so....thanks for reading all. Hope you guys had fun. :D