[Exiamu]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tTaFpfEUrFM

its a video of me and my friend.... let me know what you think

[Richard]

moves wise very very very good, and well choreographered

If you kept it up it would allow you to completeley go through the set and allow some acting performance to come in also.

The kick bit after about 12 seconds looked a bit dodgy though lol

[Exiamu]

that was like a rough version... and the quality is so bad cuz it was done on a phone =/ it says it all in the description... but yea im the one with long hair..

[Scythe]

*nod* i agree, the kick was the only bad part

[Exiamu]

i had also come up with alot more to it like another like 30 to 40 seconds... but we never got around to filming it cuz we couldnt find a camera.... and now my friend forgot hes part... so we have to go through it again =/

[NinjaSarah]

*agrees with the others* It was really good though 0-0

[Cross]

Where is j00's shoes!

[Exiamu]

haha it had just rained... which made everything harder =/ got hit in the head really really hard a couple of times because of how fast we were going.... and the sticks were alot slipper... but i wasnt feelin shoes at the time =D

[Melissa]

Moves wise perfect.. if you keep it up ull be able to do alot more emotional addition to it when the moves are completeley synched

[saunby]

Pretty good

[Chantelle]

Pretty good! yeah as others said id review that kick bit a little.
Hey when you pick up the other sword if you dived rolled and garbbed it , it would be cool (maybe do that on grass )

[Exiamu]

lol never though about doing that.
ive been tryin to think of a cool way to pick it up.. i might just do that
and i could do it on concrete.... as long as a jump rolled right =D