PostPosted:Thu Aug 22, 2013 2:52 pm
My only poem with a twist ending.... I found it kinda funny.
Over-reaction:
All alone for no reason
Toime slowly ticks by
Was there a cause for this treason
Make haste before I die
This party of 5
Now suddenly minus 4
Is leading me to take an emotional dive
Right out of the cabin door
Maybe it's an over-reaction
We've flown too high to tell
Maybe my emotions need a little retraction
But what can release me from this Hell?!?
Against me you've done the Devil's bidding
But I've got something to report
That all of this was just me kidding
I'm just stuck at an airport
Over-reaction:
All alone for no reason
Toime slowly ticks by
Was there a cause for this treason
Make haste before I die
This party of 5
Now suddenly minus 4
Is leading me to take an emotional dive
Right out of the cabin door
Maybe it's an over-reaction
We've flown too high to tell
Maybe my emotions need a little retraction
But what can release me from this Hell?!?
Against me you've done the Devil's bidding
But I've got something to report
That all of this was just me kidding
I'm just stuck at an airport
I like the mock-emotional theme as it gets more visible throughout the piece.
Do you think you could whip something up?