Kind of. I've decided to write a few more, since I received some good feedback from that first one.
Some are depressing,
some are sappy,
and some made me cry
but the real meat of these heartfelt poems
is the fact that I'm normally shy.
So, here they are, starting with:
Love:
The heart's greatest torment
is the affliction of love,
the start of the ascent,
to find the one from above.
The wrongs of the past
Lie deep within
and make the present last
kept secret with sin
This love and I
together at last
no longer shy
forget the past
Remember the torment and embrace pain
For my love for her is forbidden
different views, like the sun and the rain
make her love for me overridden
For this is love's design
Reaching for the unobtainable reward
for the one you enshrine
hoping and praying to be of one accord.
Day of Reckoning (With Renne):
Day of the wicked, the restless, the damned
Day of the free will, the easily scammed
Day of the runners, the outbreak of sheep
Day of the innocent hiding in sleep
Day of the mocking, day of the fight
Day of no moonlight, the darkness of night
Day of regret, day of mistake
Day of the Feast, Day to partake
Some are depressing,
some are sappy,
and some made me cry
but the real meat of these heartfelt poems
is the fact that I'm normally shy.
So, here they are, starting with:
Love:
The heart's greatest torment
is the affliction of love,
the start of the ascent,
to find the one from above.
The wrongs of the past
Lie deep within
and make the present last
kept secret with sin
This love and I
together at last
no longer shy
forget the past
Remember the torment and embrace pain
For my love for her is forbidden
different views, like the sun and the rain
make her love for me overridden
For this is love's design
Reaching for the unobtainable reward
for the one you enshrine
hoping and praying to be of one accord.
Day of Reckoning (With Renne):
Day of the wicked, the restless, the damned
Day of the free will, the easily scammed
Day of the runners, the outbreak of sheep
Day of the innocent hiding in sleep
Day of the mocking, day of the fight
Day of no moonlight, the darkness of night
Day of regret, day of mistake
Day of the Feast, Day to partake
Last edited by LumberWolf on Fri Feb 15, 2013 5:29 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Mundus vult decipi -- the world wants to be deceived