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PostPosted:Thu May 02, 2013 2:11 am
by LumberWolf
Man, really pumping these out lately, here's a couple more. No really deep meanings in these, just for fun.

Fear:

What's your biggest fear?
Spiders? Snakes? Mauled by a Bear?
Getting your throat cut from ear to ear
or a lethal virus released into the air?

Stunned by the sight of that man at the door
knife in his hand
blood drips to the floor
he raises the knife, knowing where it will land

Maybe it's just the dark
or the screams drifting in the wind
maybe it's the cultist with the demonic mark
or the psycho here to kill you for how much you've sinned

It's the ghost in the library who lives in the books
It's the shadow following you home at night
It's all of society casting you dirty looks
It's being attacked with no way to fight.

Ghosts, Ghouls, spirits of all evils
buried alive with a thousand weevils
Maybe you're screaming at your most fearful tone
Only to discover you're all alone...

Next one is named odd..... I was bored.

Suits:

Clubs hoppin' to some fast beats
dens of sin, get outta your seats
The casino's better anyway
and it seems like a place he can stay

Hearts ablaze, lit with lust
love for the games, lust for others
it's in the wrong place, doubled-down in dust
but for now we're all brothers

Diamonds strewn throughout the crowd
one, two, three hundred jewels on her neck
he brings her upstairs, gunshots so loud
then the bloody diamonds fell to the ground

Spades used to break the dust
put the corpse in the Earth
Saw the jewels, taken by lust
Now to sell them for all they're worth

PostPosted:Thu May 02, 2013 2:36 am
by Jato
oh boy gotta keep up har

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and a random bieber-lol I stumbled on
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keep up the good work Yoshi!

PostPosted:Thu May 02, 2013 2:39 am
by Gollum
Very creative Yoshi, nice work!

PostPosted:Mon May 13, 2013 11:58 pm
by LumberWolf
Yo-Yo:

Your mind is like a yo-yo
Always here and there
Should I stay or should I go?
Should it be secret, or should I share?

Pull me close or push me away
Just make sure the string won't break
Lock me out or let me stay
I'm here as long as your awake

With your mind like night and day,
Meet me in the middle; at noon
Just consider your options, decide on a way
And please let me know soon

Bottom line, I love you, my best friend
But you know I want to be more
Either way I'm here in the end
Unless YOU shut the door.

PostPosted:Tue May 14, 2013 4:47 am
by Uscari
Woah, y you be blowin my brains like dat!?!?!?! :)

PostPosted:Tue May 14, 2013 3:57 pm
by LumberWolf
Philosopher wrote:Woah, y you be blowin my brains like dat!?!?!?! :)
Because it's fun.

Newest one

Give me some time:

Give me some time
Before you begin to sink
Give me some time
It will help you think
Give me some time
Here's my cup, take it and drink

Give me some time
Just a beginning, give me a start
Give me some time
I'll be the board, cast your dart
Give me some time
Because you still have my heart

Give me some time
It wouldn't hurt to try
Give me some time
because, around you, I'm always high
Give me some time
And I promise not to lie

They say time heals all wounds
But scars can still remain true
So give me some time
And I promise you'll find
That you will have my time too.

PostPosted:Sat May 18, 2013 2:07 am
by Gollum
This should be a sticky :(((((

PostPosted:Sat May 18, 2013 3:11 am
by jawfin
OT: In the Writer's section stickies are usually reserved for sagas; on-going stories with chapters.

PostPosted:Mon Jul 22, 2013 3:48 pm
by LumberWolf
Well, I haven't been able to use this for a while, for reasons members know, but I should probably do another one, so Timer starts NOW:

Farewell My Fri-END:

The words that you left me are not yourself
But the lies that you told are worse
This brokenness isn't something you can just place on a shelf
It's more of a dark, looming, imminant curse

Never look back at me
I can't bear to see you leave
Because when you leave, you throw me to the sea
I'm too busy drowning to grieve

So just leave me be, I can't stand you now
I loved you... once... but now you anger me
So leave me here and I'll wipe the sweat from my brow
That was built from digging a grave for your memory

This is goodbye, au-revoir, I bid you adieu
Adios. cest la vie. My heart will never renew
So shut the door on your way out of town
Because when you're gone I can never frown



Well, that was 10 minutes well spent. also Jaw...
Jawfin wrote:OT: In the Writer's section stickies are usually reserved for sagas; on-going stories with chapters.
Usually isn't ALWAYS ;) just to defend my wife on this one.*points to Gollum*
I'm not saying it has to be stickied, either way is fine with me. as long as it isn't locked for quite some time, I'll be fine

PostPosted:Mon Jul 22, 2013 4:46 pm
by Uscari
Another great one yoshi :)

PostPosted:Mon Jul 22, 2013 6:39 pm
by Aventador
If I ever need a poem for school can I steal one? Lol

PostPosted:Tue Jul 23, 2013 2:48 pm
by LumberWolf
Aventador wrote:If I ever need a poem for school can I steal one? Lol
for a small fee

Next on the list, A very similar one to the above. Why ones about leaving? ask me to find out (because honestly it should be mildly obvious, but I still don't feel like sharing it publicly)

Faded Memories:

Farewell, my love, well....that's no longer true
for tensions are high between us two
I told you "I love you".......not enough for you...
but honestly, darling, there's nothing more we can do

I was the task at first, it was me you had to train
refusing kindness, even in driving rain
and that sparked a friendship of saddness, toil, and pain
yet all seemed lost, we were insane

Love loomed over you from me
you showed me scars so plain to see
revealed the others hidden so deeply
as I matched your pain with my own debris

I confessed to you my love
that I felt it was ordained from above
who would have thought that this revelation
would be the end of this blessed creation

For as you left, so did I
walking apart,
both feeling like we should die
discarding your faded memories from my heart

PostPosted:Tue Jul 23, 2013 4:13 pm
by Raison
srs I like these poems :)

PostPosted:Wed Jul 24, 2013 4:28 pm
by LumberWolf
Okay, last one of the whole "oh woe is me, The person I was going after left me" poems, for now....... anyway it's also shorter because i wrote it at, you guessed it, 3:30 AM! Also, all the ends rhyme (for the most part).

Careless:

My love shot me dead
put a bullet right through my head
with all the lies that had been said
blood drips down and stains me red
and as my love hangs on by a thread
I lay in silence on my deathbed
for my sorrow has spread
and it keeps my anger fed
I've moved from this path I've led
and my sin... you... will no longer be wed.

Okay, That's a wrap for this one.

PostPosted:Wed Jul 24, 2013 4:59 pm
by Uscari
Your poems with dark concepts are well made and very immersive, but I think you have potential in comedic and light hearted poems too :)

PostPosted:Thu Jul 25, 2013 3:09 pm
by LumberWolf
Philosopher wrote:Your poems with dark concepts are well made and very immersive, but I think you have potential in comedic and light hearted poems too :)
Yeah, i might be able to do comedy..... but for now, another horror theme! I have to confess, this one took an hour, which is honestly 40-55 minutes longer than it usually takes me to write one. This one is NOT FROM PERSONAL EXPERIENCE! Why? because I don't kill people.

The Case of the Two Women:

Never, ever, have I told the tale
Never, ever have I loosed the story
Of the two women Fran and Gale
And their ends so gruesome and gory

Fran was a common housewife
Her husband was a bit of a mess
Fran had begun to lothe her trivial life
And her man found another to caress

Gale was a less comon sort
But she was common to men
For Gale hired herself as an escort
But fell in love now and again

The husband was a shady man
And created this curious tale
Because even though he claimed loyalty to Fran
Hidden in his bed was Gale

Months and months of this had passed
Fran grew dark and Gale, in love
But nothing this evil can last
Until one fateful night when they exposed what the man was made of

He came home early one day
To meet his "guest" at the door
Little did he know of the awful way
That his actions would begin to roar

Fran came home early as well
Finding it strange he was too
It was then that she began her decent into Hell
She knew what she must do.

The knife was sharp
The poison seeped in
Wrap them in tarp
They will pay for their sin

The first to wake was the girl
Fran asked her her name, she whispered, "Gale"
Suddenly Fran's knife began to twirl
As the girl woke the man with her wail

The man was too late
Fran began to cut and instantly became irate
He knew he must end this twisted date
As Fran began to decapitate

He searched for something to defend
A couple brooms, a toy sword, but this wasn't pretend
But wait, what is this? A candle and some gas?
Better set a trap because this chance will quickly pass

But he was late again, breathe deep, inhale
Fran was back, sharp knife, impale
And there he was, lit candle over gas
As blood spilled to the floor, painting it like stained glass

It was Fran who did not see that her situation was dire
She was too absorbed by bloodlust to notice the bomb
And as the whole scene burst forth with fire
It turned to ash Fran's satanic prom

Never, ever, did you hear the tale
Never, ever, did you read the story
Of the two women Fran and Gale
And a man who sparked the flame, so unholy.

PostPosted:Fri Jul 26, 2013 3:56 am
by Uscari
I love the inner combination of litteral and figurative meaning here, instead of forcing rhymes, you paint them clear and consistantly, you really have talent for this, plz make more :)

PostPosted:Fri Jul 26, 2013 5:11 am
by Aventador
Don't go the Edgar Allen Po style. That guy freaks me out....

PostPosted:Fri Jul 26, 2013 7:11 am
by Uscari
Lulz

PostPosted:Fri Jul 26, 2013 3:32 pm
by LumberWolf
Aventador wrote:Don't go the Edgar Allen Po style. That guy freaks me out....
But here's the ironic part though!
Yoshi's Birth Certificate wrote: Born January 19, 1994, Norwich, Connecticut, U.S.
Biography.com - Edgar Allen Poe wrote:Born January 19, 1809, Boston, Massachusetts, U.S.
So.... I was born 79 miles away from Poe (plus a few years).... but on the same day.

ALSO! Phil.... I attempted something happy. I got to the title and couldn't think of anything. 2 hours wasted.

On that note:

Roses are red,
Violets are blue (but not really, they're closer to purple)
I have a gun
get in the van.

PostPosted:Fri Jul 26, 2013 5:35 pm
by Uscari
LOL that's funny and creepy xD

PostPosted:Mon Aug 19, 2013 4:07 pm
by LumberWolf
Well, It's been another while since I wrote one, so what the heck, might as well.

Rise:

Out of the ashes
I rise
From the dust, away from the clashes
I rise
Away from the lust and the lashes
I rise

As I see the stars, I see my scars
A mark to catch the eye
The moment that was ours, burned fast as cigars
So quickly that moment went by

Dress my wounds, heal my gashes
I rise
Until, from me, brilliant light flashes
I rise
And all around me, color splashes
I rise

That is the prize, so heavily priced
because even through life's pain
"Mihi enim vivere Christus est, et mori lucrum"
"To Live is Christ
and to die is gain"

PostPosted:Tue Aug 20, 2013 4:04 pm
by Kris
aw its beautiful Yoshimatsu!

PostPosted:Tue Aug 20, 2013 4:10 pm
by Creed
Keep it up Yoshi your good at this.

PostPosted:Tue Aug 20, 2013 9:07 pm
by Uscari
About time you did something uplifting again lol. Great Job regardless and you do a good job of using rhymes without making them feel forced. Impressive indeed.

And on another note love ur sig creed lol. :P