[Akimoto]

I am attempting to design T-shirts. Thus, I want to know what people think! I am new to this and open to suggestions and feedback!

1.0



1.1



1.2



2.0


2.1

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I will be adding more "Products" when I make them. ^_^

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[Jato]

I'd try flipping the light saber the other way around and see if it would help not run through so much of the lettering

[Akimoto]

It was supposed to be on top of the letters. It actually looks worse when behind it - and if i flip it, it looks... un natural. When ever do you see a lightsaber upside down in star wars?

[Reflex]

I would move the wording up a bit, and make it so that the saber doesn't go through "Happens."

EDIT: Maybe making the saber smaller, yet a bit fatter would make it avoid going through "happens."

[Greed]

Thats shad's line...

[Akimoto]

Thats shad's line...

No, not really.

I would move the wording up a bit, and make it so that the saber doesn't go through "Happens."

EDIT: Maybe making the saber smaller, yet a bit fatter would make it avoid going through "happens."

Like this?

[Aayci Warrick]

I was thinking having the words offset a bit so the lightsaber joins the H instead of through by the A
like this?


although I do like the last version you made a lot too

[Akimoto]

I was thinking having the words offset a bit so the lightsaber joins the H instead of through by the A
like this?


although I do like the last version you made a lot too

Like this?





EDIT:

Added a new shirt design:
2.0


2.1



Opinions?

[Jato]

Sry i didnt see the others, my comp didnt load it for god knows why, i like 1:1 the best

[Zabuza]

id buy 1.1 and 1.2

if they were for sale