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 #52891  by Wolferion
 
Hello everybody!

I found out I'm pretty keen on writing, shamefuly Kakashi is too busy to release next Naruto village stories and Hime's legendary stories are paused too, I've thought that I'd like to give it a try and start writing a KR story in different world than any story given here, although the core idea might be in some way similar to Kakashi's Naruto Village. My holidays are starting really soon, that means a hell of a time for writing and other stuff like coming on server and enjoying real life.

I'd like to ask everybody who would want to be in the story from KR to answer a question "sheet" written in down, just like it was with other KR stories =)



Personality - What qualities you want your character to have, how to behave and like inner behaviour would really help for "mind thoughts" at certain places.
Appearance - Contains clothes, hair, eyes, just what you want to look like :)
Weapon selection - Which weapon you prefer the most. No sabers, more like slash&blunt weapons as various swords, spears etc till exceptional pistol. Weapon can be combined like for example one pistol + one handed slash weapon, that's up to you. I'll make logical pros and cons of each combination against other one, just like it's in Naruto with the elements, one is better at one and bad at another one. That doesn't mean though you'll be useless against some combo, skills are there for reason =)


Thank you for reading,
Wolferion

 #52938  by BadWolf
 
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Basic Info

Name: Senbou
Weapon: Envy Sin Keyblade
Elemental / Power: Elemental Absorption
World of Origin: Unknown

Bio's & other Info

Original Name: Senbou
Nickname: The Unlucky Mirror
Age: around 25
Gender: Male
Race: Naughtriface
Occupation: Naughtrifi of Sin
Weaponry: Keyblade

Physical Description
Hair: Raven black with dark green highlights, strangely spiked
Eyes: A dark blue, a mix of obsidian and blue sapphire, slightly dilated
Complexion: slightly pale
Height: around 6'3"
Weight: 200 lbs.
Distinguishing Marks: None
Clothing/Appearance: Wears a vertical half mask that is made of broken mirror. His shirt is held shut by belts and extends clear down past his knees and is mainly shadow black with some green highlights, he wears fish net mesh as an under shirt. Wears baggy black pants with dark green highlights, and a pair of black boots.

Personality: He strives to be exactly like the strongest fighter, not much is known as to why he feels this way. One of the odd things, is that he doesn’t even act remotely like anybody in particular
Traits: Seems to know how things work, can’t seem to leave Sora's friends alone.
Skills: Can absorb elemental energies using his Keyblade. Also seems to be extremely fast
Likes: Winning and achieving his dreams
Dislikes: Being treated as if he can’t do anything
Strengths: Has the uncanny ability to confuse an opponent and catch them off guard
Weaknesses: His overactive need to be just like everyone else
Begin Battle Phrase: "I want to be like you!"

Background
Family: Unknown
Friends: He doesn’t really embrace anyone as his friend, due to his personality
Enemies: Sora
Home world: Unknown
History: When he was around 17 he was severely depressed, he never seemed to fit in anywhere. All of the people he thought were his friends had turned their backs on him, leaving him to wallow in his own despair. Naturally, despair is one of the most loved treats of the Heartless and so they came and destroyed his world, killing all of his 'friends' in front of him. Nevertheless, he never shed a tear, all he could do was laugh at them (a crazy maniac laugh mind you o.o). The Darkness felt his painful joy and rewarded him with a Sin Keyblade, the one that best fit him, Envy. Three years after that Senbou had spread his joyful hatred to several other worlds, just trying to find a place where he could fit in. Eventually he found Twilight Town, here he had met a blond haired man that promised him a place where he would fit in entirely. He was the last one Vexen needed, number seven. After he had been given his name, Senbou was furious, he didn’t like the idea of being the one that had to be self-loathing, and he wanted to be strong! After the years passed in his pod, Senbou slowly lost his mind. And when he was finally freed, he immediately left to search for another place where he could belong. When Sora finally found him it was at the Coliseum, there Senbou had been entering in tournaments and been defeating opponents left and right; he even defeated Hercules within seconds. Sora had trouble at first defeating Senbou, but he finally found Senbou's weakness and struck him down, Senbou's last words were "Oh grateful Darkness, I am done, take me into your ever lasting chasm and please let me be one with you. I only want to belong..."
Affiliation: Naughtrifi of Sin
Status: Unknown

soz if this is too long :S

 #52939  by Wolferion
 
The more the merrier =) You have a lot of information here and background, means I'll be able to use your character at full potential on almost every way! Thanks, I'll start writing tommorow, I've got already a plan ready :)

 #53030  by Hime
 
one thing...

I did added a number of chapters
just no one noticed

:)

 #53033  by SilentOne
 
:o Hime..your alive? lol
Basic Info

Name: SilentOne
Weapon: Gem Swords
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Elemental / Power: Fast as wind
World of Origin: somewhere in far reaches of galaxy

Bio's & other Info

Original Name: SilentOne
Nickname: One of the silents
Age: around 17
Gender: Male
Race: Silentan
Occupation: Keeper of Peace/Silence
Weaponry: Gem Swords

Physical Description
Hair: Short Brown Hair
Eyes: Pure Black With Orange Circle
Complexion: tan
Height: around 6'6
Weight: 192 lbs.
Distinguishing Marks: Scar from the civil war
Clothing/Appearance: Red Ceremonial Warrior Robes..Half mask covering mouth/Civil War Scar..

Personality: Try to keep peace/silence where i am needed...will fight if he has to defend his rights
Traits: born fighter...trained all life
Friends:Ruggzeh(cant find nickname) Bringer of death...Aussie Reborn...Winged woman of sky...Flickering Flame...Fazzybear(cant think of skins name)
Skills: Fast as wind with striking with ancient gem swords...Keeper of Peace
Likes: Keeping the peace
Dislikes: disrespectful people..Rule breakers..
Strengths: Can sneak up on you and strike you down
Weaknesses: Not being as silent as i should be :)
Begin Battle Phrase: "Why Fight?"

Background
Family: Unkown
Friends: The ones im close to^^look up^^
Enemies: Tries not to have any
Home world: Far reaches of galaxy
History: When He was born he was decided if he was to be a warrior or not.When he turned 7 i had my first ever fight.It was to be the fight of his life SilentOne Vs. his brother DistinguishedOne. SilentOne ended up killing his brother and therefore earned his first Gem to put in his sword.Warriors were given a gem for their sword. When he was 9 he was put on his first survival mission. That is where he found the ancient Gem Sword that was used by the greatest warrior of his planet Akibu. He was the only one who could weild this magic blade without succumbing to the power. He came back from his survival mission 2 years later and was granted a full warrior and joined the royal army. At age 15 a deadly civil war broke out and his city is ruins.His family was called to be lost during the destruction of Nekadu(his town) He then used all his anger and used the true power of the Akibu Sword and became to be known as the greatest warrior. SilentOne now resides as Keeper of Peace and head gaurd at the castle of the renewed Nekadu City.
Affiliation: Royal Army
Status: Keeper Of Peace
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^^Nekadu Destroyed^^
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^^Homeworld^^

 #53051  by Wolferion
 
I'm sorry I didn't notice Hime >:0

Thanks for details SilentOne , I was right about to add you in next chapter and didn't know what to give you.

 #53107  by Dirge
 
Name: The Undertaker
Weapon: Dirge
Elemental / Power: Necromancer/Black Magic
World of Origin: Earth, Death Valley

Bio's & other Info

Original Name: Mark Calenway
Nickname: The Demon of Death Valley
Age: ??
Gender: Male
Race: Wingless Angmon (Angel/Demon Hybrid)
Occupation: Originally a Undertaker of the small town of Brisbane
Weaponry: Daggers, Double Bladed Swords

Physical Description
Hair: Long, to around his hips, mangled and not straight
Eyes: Blank, no Pubils
Height: 6' 10
Weight: 299 LBS
Distinguishing Marks: A scar on his left arm
Clothing/Appearance: Undertaker wears a long Duster coat of black color, wears a black cowboy like hat, has purple gloves of leather, purple stocking coming up from his shoes, and his pants are loose and leather, and on the left side of his pants is the Symbol of the Dead.

Personality: Dark, Evil, and no remorse for anyone, useally a loner and careless, if he doesnt like you, he will hurt you....it came this way from his past with the Kylpeto.
Skills: almost invincible, Strong, has knowledge in the art of Black Magic and Neromacing, also has knowledge in Shamanestic magic
Likes: the taste of blood
Dislikes: The Kylpeto ( The Thing that Should not Be)
Strengths: Souls.......(he captures the souls, which gives him more power)
Weaknesses: Pure Light Magic

Background
Family: No Record, it is believed he had one around the years of 1880's and the late 1890's
Friends: Kaine, the Lord of Fire
Enemies: The Kylpeto, ArchKage, Ministry of Light
Home world: Earth
History: Undertaker has become a living legend, once a actual undertaker, he now seeks revenge on the Kylpeto for the death and destruction of his Brisbane home. Undertaker came up from the grave in the distant future to avenge his family, but it came for a price, the power he was given soon over took his emotions and thoughts turning him into a animal of death, with this new attitude he would seek out to kill ANYONE in his that stood between him and the Kylpeto.
Affiliation: N/A

Wolf you any change any dates, or home worlds or planets and locations (to match YOUR story ;) you may change anyhthing in that case if you have to in order to fit it in your story) but keep everything else the same, here is a better description of his enemies.

The Kylpeto: Is "The Thing that Should not Be" and is the monster created by ArchKage to destroy any soruce of Black Magic
ArchKage: Creator of the Kyleto and has a hatred for black magic

 #53112  by Wolferion
 
Heh I see you want to be bad***. Will be done.

 #53121  by Dirge
 
Thanks Wolf ;) cant wait to see my character in action, make sure he uses his powers more than his weapons ;) ^_^

its actually pretty cool, considering i'm not in anyone elses story's lol =P

 #53123  by Greed
 
Just a question, Does it hav 2 be a fantasy-like character with the magic and swords n what not? or can we think of one thats more... realistic?

 #53147  by Wolferion
 
To cut it to core. Characters can have a weapon, can use their bare hands. They have something sort of mana that's called yoki, but has different uses than mana. Could be used for special magic ( You'll see in case with Hime once I get to writing next chapter ) and as it's a possibility, Undertaker will be with his kind of black magic ( but to not make everybody uber god-like, yoki has quiet a limit for everybody, almost same for everybody, just it depends on what tricks they use. Doing it like in Naruto with chakra, will make huge differences between many people , because f.e. Undertaker would have uber chakra storage against f.e. me with low chakra. Logicaly Undertaker will get ahold of the situation. That's why I put yoki here with almost same limit for everybody. But to not make it so disadvantageous, people who learn how to use their tricks properly, will lower yoki use for it, just like it worked in Naruto with his shadow clones. Bad use uses much, proper use uses less ).

 #53157  by Dirge
 
am i with KR or Against?
or do i start to be against them, and then join them?

what im asking is, how are you going to be able to take the history our characters have and implement them in your story?

good stuff so far lol

dont forget i have weapons, so theres another option, also remember, im dark, evil, somewhat demonic, and the living dead mind you lol. but buried (no pun intended) down deep inside me is my past life of my family and happiness. and my main spells usually include lightening casting.

However you use this new information is up to you ^_^

The Kylpeto and ArchKage can be used if you wish, up to you, but hey, theres more characters ;)

 #53159  by Wolferion
 
Honestly, your character is pain :) As you're asking, now look. You wrote the information that you character is pretty evil. I honestly do not know how a clan should keep so evil character =S but I'll make you appear, you'll see :)

 #53161  by Dirge
 
woooooo, lol, ok Wolf sry, im excited, i was never in any KR Story so im excited as heck ^_^