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 #31025  by jawfin
 
Help you I can, yes
Judge me by my size, do you?
Wars not make one great.

*Clears throat*

There once was a green dude from Dagobah
Who ...
-oh nevermind

 #31032  by Darko
 
huh?

 #31034  by Greed
 
XD what was that!!!???!!!

 #31037  by Akimoto
 
hear, hear.

 #31038  by jawfin
 
Is a haiku.

 #31051  by BadWolf
 
LOL!

nice!

 #37605  by jawfin
 
*push*

As I get to know the KR crowd better, I'm seeing a lot of Japanese influences, particularly their art and culture.
So, I want to detail the points perhaps missed in my Haiku.

It is the traditional 5/7/5 syllable count; where the first line sets the scene, and the last is the conclusion. I’d like to think I hit the kireji with the “do you?” in the second line.
Also, note that the entire dialog comes from Luke’s first encounter with Yoda on Dagobah.
Believe it on or not, I spent quite a few hours writing this. Hmm, perhaps I shouldn’t of minimalised it by following up with a limerick !

FYI: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku

 #37611  by Kakashi.Archive
 
i found it pretty cool :o :)

 #37612  by Fazz
 
shud have told us 2 read it in a yoda voice, lol

 #38891  by Eagle
 
very awesome =)

 #38902  by Cross
 
How did you not know about haiku if you watched SW movies?:X