Please leave feedback and such, but remember this is my first story and is still in progress 
Into the control room two officers enter. Lieutenant Jenkins and Commander Cassara pause at the desk to examine the data pad lying upon it.
“We sustained a pretty heavy attack”, said Jenkins. “You think?! We barely escaped into hyperspace in one piece! Prepare to start rationing food and ammunition, They’ll be coming back for us”, replied Cassara.
The Commander hands the data pad back to the Lieutenant as he walks over to the window and gazes at the stars. Commander Cassara is a muscular trandoshan in his mid 60’s well along in his military career, having several triumphs on Rori in the attempt to muster up the remainder of the Remnant forces.
“You monsters!! “, a young Bothan male shouts, “Your endless slaughter of innocent civilians ends here!” He flicks on his light saber and walks through the door.
In one quick motion Lt. Jenkins flips over the table, unholsters his DL-44 blaster pistol, and activates his Personal Shield Generator. “You’re not authorized to be in here young man! ”, he shouts as he aims his pistol at the small figure passing through the doorway, “ disengage your weapon at once or I’ll shoot!”
The young jedi rushed at the Lieutenant deflecting several shots into the table Jenkins is behind. “I’ll kill you for what you’ve done!” , and with several quick motions the young bothan chops up the table and the man taking cover behind it.
Before the boy noticed Commander Cassara grabbed the boy by his arm, wrenched the saber out of his hand, and in one swoop beheads the angered jedi.
Cassara takes off his hat in respect for the officer that just died. “call in a droid to clean up this mess”, Cassara tells one of the junior cadets who hurried into the room to check up on the commotion. They all replied in unison, “Aye Sir!” “Poor guy didn’t have a chance”, he says to himself as he exits the control room.
Update 6-21-08
The jedi knight Harroa awakes with a start. “That was an odd dream”, he says to himself as he walks over to the window of his ship, an old Decimator model salvaged from the remains of the imperial forces in Bestine, Tatooine.
Over the comlink Master Aveege contacts Harroa. “I’m sorry to tell you this Har”, he says quite worried, “ while you were on your peace keeping mission we were attacked by the imperial remnant.” “What happened? “, the young knight asks. Reluctantly Aveege answers, “your padawan grabbed one of our fighters and boarded one of their cruisers, and we don’t know what happened to him.”
“Where did they go after they jumped? We must get him back! He is one of the most promising students of our academy!” Harroa shouts.
The Master Jedi mutters something over the intercom. In seconds, an elite commando team specializing in reconnaissance rushes into the room jumping to attention with a crisp salute.
“Aye Sir! What might you have us do, sir”, says the squad leader in a tone suggests that he will be sent on another mission to infiltrate an abandoned remnant bunker.
Aveege reaches into a drawer for a few seconds, snatching an miniature data pad. “ I need for you to scout around these coordinates and infiltrate the imperial flagship that is somewhere in the area. As you know this is in the dantooine system, so watch out for any black sun fighters”, he says, “ I trust through your experience that you know what you’re doing, and meet us in the Naboo system when you are done.”
“Aye sir!”
“Move out soldiers! We’ve got work to do”…
Into the control room two officers enter. Lieutenant Jenkins and Commander Cassara pause at the desk to examine the data pad lying upon it.
“We sustained a pretty heavy attack”, said Jenkins. “You think?! We barely escaped into hyperspace in one piece! Prepare to start rationing food and ammunition, They’ll be coming back for us”, replied Cassara.
The Commander hands the data pad back to the Lieutenant as he walks over to the window and gazes at the stars. Commander Cassara is a muscular trandoshan in his mid 60’s well along in his military career, having several triumphs on Rori in the attempt to muster up the remainder of the Remnant forces.
“You monsters!! “, a young Bothan male shouts, “Your endless slaughter of innocent civilians ends here!” He flicks on his light saber and walks through the door.
In one quick motion Lt. Jenkins flips over the table, unholsters his DL-44 blaster pistol, and activates his Personal Shield Generator. “You’re not authorized to be in here young man! ”, he shouts as he aims his pistol at the small figure passing through the doorway, “ disengage your weapon at once or I’ll shoot!”
The young jedi rushed at the Lieutenant deflecting several shots into the table Jenkins is behind. “I’ll kill you for what you’ve done!” , and with several quick motions the young bothan chops up the table and the man taking cover behind it.
Before the boy noticed Commander Cassara grabbed the boy by his arm, wrenched the saber out of his hand, and in one swoop beheads the angered jedi.
Cassara takes off his hat in respect for the officer that just died. “call in a droid to clean up this mess”, Cassara tells one of the junior cadets who hurried into the room to check up on the commotion. They all replied in unison, “Aye Sir!” “Poor guy didn’t have a chance”, he says to himself as he exits the control room.
Update 6-21-08
The jedi knight Harroa awakes with a start. “That was an odd dream”, he says to himself as he walks over to the window of his ship, an old Decimator model salvaged from the remains of the imperial forces in Bestine, Tatooine.
Over the comlink Master Aveege contacts Harroa. “I’m sorry to tell you this Har”, he says quite worried, “ while you were on your peace keeping mission we were attacked by the imperial remnant.” “What happened? “, the young knight asks. Reluctantly Aveege answers, “your padawan grabbed one of our fighters and boarded one of their cruisers, and we don’t know what happened to him.”
“Where did they go after they jumped? We must get him back! He is one of the most promising students of our academy!” Harroa shouts.
The Master Jedi mutters something over the intercom. In seconds, an elite commando team specializing in reconnaissance rushes into the room jumping to attention with a crisp salute.
“Aye Sir! What might you have us do, sir”, says the squad leader in a tone suggests that he will be sent on another mission to infiltrate an abandoned remnant bunker.
Aveege reaches into a drawer for a few seconds, snatching an miniature data pad. “ I need for you to scout around these coordinates and infiltrate the imperial flagship that is somewhere in the area. As you know this is in the dantooine system, so watch out for any black sun fighters”, he says, “ I trust through your experience that you know what you’re doing, and meet us in the Naboo system when you are done.”
“Aye sir!”
“Move out soldiers! We’ve got work to do”…
Last edited by Sanction on Sat Jun 21, 2008 12:14 pm, edited 1 time in total.
been having computer problems and whatnot, lost my jka discs and whatnot, and need to get new ones, but when I do expect to see me on quite a bit 
take a read and comment away plz.