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 #32029  by Hime
 
good update
cannot wait for the next one

 #32037  by Wolferion
 
Nice story, but makes me sad to think of Kakashi "dieing" :cry: :cry:

 #32040  by Kenshin
 
great update kakashi ^_^.

 #32069  by Kakashi.Archive
 
Hime and everyone made it out of the barrier. Kenshin looked back at everyone. “KEEP MOVING DAMNIT, THAT BLAST WILL WIPE EVERYTHING IN THIS AREA OUT!” Kenshin kept running without looking back at anyone. Everyone else soon followed behind him running as fast as they could. Hime was still holding onto Obito as best as he could.

Kakashi kept drawing more and more chakra from surrounding creatures and ninja. Those ninja of Sasochi had no choice but to slowly give bits of there chakra to Kakashi. They felt heavy and weak.

Darko could feel himself wearing down. The chakra inside of the three tailed demon was draining extremely fast. He slowly went out of his feral form and back into his human form. Sasochi as well started to lose a lot of chakra. The barrier around everyone broke. Wanderer, Melissa, Akimoto, and Raziel met up. “Its time to go you guys. We need to move fast.” All four of them began to run as far and as fast as they could go.

“KAKASHI STOP THIS NOW!!!” Sasochi yelled over the screaming of Kakashi, Kakashi was drawing in far to much chakra for his body to maintain itself. His pain was causing him to yell so loud that sound waves started to raze rocks and boulders, which crashed into Sasochi.

Kakashi began to think to himself. –“After all I’ve been through, it has to end like this to make sure, people like Sasochi cant live any longer.”- He kept drawing on more and more chakra then finally in an abrupt moment, he stopped. Tree’s, rocks, and other things in the area fell back to once they came. “I think that is good enough, I wont be able to hold onto this chakra for long.”

Sasochi gave Kakashi a dirty face. As if trying to make his final attempt he called all of the ninja around him to come to his aid. Hundreds of thousands of ninja started to come to Sasochi. Surrounding Kakashi finally, he had nothing to do. That many ninja could surly kill Kakashi in the short run. Kakashi erected his white chakra barrier. He stood there with his arms at his side. “What do you plan on doing Sasochi?”

“First off I plan on killing you, then going after every village and every living person around here.”

-“I’m so sorry Tsunade, for betraying the hidden Leaf village. I’m sorry Obito that I left you behind and didn’t. I’m sorry to everyone I hurt in the past few months. It wasn’t my place to judge everyone around me. I hope with this final act, maybe I can be forgiven.”- Kakashi looked at Sasochi. He smiled, not the evil and sinister smile that he had given Sasochi before, no this smile was a friendly smile. –“Im doing this for everyone.”-

“Sasochi, maybe, just maybe someday you can come back as a better person. But for now. HUUUUUUUUUUUUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH”

Kakashi’s body started to release all the accumulated chakra into large black streams. A large blast of light engulfed the area as Kakashi’s body began to blow itself up. Kenshin and the rest picked up the speed trying to escape the blasting range. Kakashi hadn’t given them enough time to move out of the range.
“HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUH!” The blast carried on for miles, Hime and everyone had just been able to dodge out of the way as the blast picked up and halted at a specific distance.

The rouge four also made it out of the blast. Wanderer looked up, a tear in his eye. “Kakashi, no, KAKASHI!”

Obito had finally started to awake from Himes hit to the head. He shook his head then stood up realizing what was happening. “BROOOTHER! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” Hime and Kenshin had to grab onto him and keep him from jumping into the blast. “LET ME GO!”

Hime looked into his eyes, “It’s over Obito, ITS OVER!” She balled up her fist and punched Obito in the face as hard as she could. Obito looked hard into her eyes and realized what happened. He fell to the ground in tears. Everyone watched as Obito had his break down, a tear balled up in each of there eyes. Banshee stood forward. “He protected all of us, and saved all of us. He was a true ninja, worthy of honor.”

Kakashi wasn’t dead just yet, as the blast continued he could see the ninja all around him basically disintegrating. Sasochi was near Kakashi, “GOD DAMN YOU, I WONT DIE!!!” Parts of his body started to completely disappear.

A final blast of light took everything in the area. The dust in the area settled. Obito ran forward almost immediately, breaking free of Hime and Kenshin. He ran forward calling out Kakashi’s name. “STOP FOOLING AROUND, GET OUT HERE KAKASHI!” Obito’s desperations were in vain, nothing survived the blast. Obito fell to the ground once again. His hands balled up in a fist. The same chakra Kakashi emitted was starting to slowly come out of Obito.

Kenshin caught up. “Obito its not worth it, don’t you dare think of killing yourself. Kakashi did this for you, he gave his life so you could live on. SNAP OUT OF IT YOUR ACTING LIKE A CHILD!” A single tear drop fell from Obito’s eye.

“I didn’t even get to say goodbye to him. Nor did I get to hug him. My own brother.” Kenshin slowly walked up to Obito. In the background all the other hidden leaf members caught up and slowly walked in. Other ninja from different villages came in. All five Kages stood directly were Kakashi had sacrificed himself. Moments passed as the rouge four appeared. They all got in the way of were everyone else was. Obito sat directly in the spot. Wanderer gave Obito, Kakashi’s head band. Then the rouge four disappeared without anyone even noticing how.
Hime stood in front of everyone now. “Today someone gave his life in hopes to bring peace to everyone, and give everyone a second chance. Kakashi KaguyaUchiha sacrificed himself so we may live on.” With that Hime turned around and slowly walked away. Then Kenshin took stage.

“Let everyone go back to there remaining village and rebuild. Let this be were all of the previous mistakes die and all villages begin a new.” He walked up to Hime and shook her hand. “Its time for me to become the full Kazekage and take over the sand village. I will visit the hidden Leaf when possible.” Hime looked into his eyes and nodded. She smiled.

Everyone turned around and slowly started to walk away. Obito looked up as a raindrop fell on his forehead. It began to ran out then poor. Obito stayed there for an hour or so without moving an inch. Everyone had cleared out.

The young child that was hiding behind the tree far off in the distance was gone. Only a small spot of ruffled leaves were left.

As everyone returned to there villages, the rebuilding began. Many building were still intact but either damaged bad enough so they weren’t suitable for living, or still flooded.

Hime, Fluffy, Phoenix, Raven, and Starcomand returned to the Kage faces. “Its time that we rebuild and make this village as strong as we possably can.”

Obito finally mustered the courage to move and slowly walked off from the area. It had been a while but he finally got out of the completely torn up area, but something caught his attention. A small flour sat on the ground. Life itself had began to rebuild. Plants and animals started to return to there original state.

Obito looked down at it and let out a heavy sigh, then smiled with some tears running down his face. He continued to walk back to the hidden leaf village alone. Thinking of everything he would miss out on from now on. Not having Kakashi around was a heavy burden on Obito. He couldn’t get his mind off of it.


When he was off of the blast area, life started to rebuild itself, again more and more tree’s began to bring in fresh new air and rebuild the habitat. Suddenly something from under the ground trembled a good ten foot radius as a hand reached out of the ground and stammered to its feet. The body was very warn and unidentifiable. It slowly walked off into the woods, as a small metal bar fell to the ground with a scorpion symbol melted into it. –“Curse you Kakashi.”- “CURSE YOU DAAAAAAAAAAAAMNIIIIT!” The badly beaten figure slowly moved away, his body was so bloody and so badly scratched that he wasn’t recognizable.


For the weeks to come everyone put there backs into rebuilding the village. It was as if everyone was at peace finally.

The Kage wall was almost completely rebuilt. Many homes and stores were rebuilt. Obito and Ignis stood atop the Kage wall. They looked over the entire village. Ignis looked at Obito. “I know your still upset Obito. But realize Kakashi did this in the hopes to save us all. He felt he owed us, and this is how he repaid us, giving us a second chance.”

Obito looked over at her. “I know. But I should have stopped him, or at least tried.”

“Obito, there was nothing you could do. Kakashi made up his mind before he even got there.”

Hime without noticed had appeared behind the two. She placed a hand on Obito’s shoulder. “I know what your thinking, but if it wasn’t for Kakashi, we wouldn’t be here right now. If it wasn’t for him, no one would have survived except Sasochi and his army. They would have destroyed this entire planet.”

Obito looked up at him as tears ran down his face.

“He did what he needed to do, and I thank him for it.” Hime looked into Obito’s eyes, “I want this village to bloom and grow from here on in. Kakashi has given us that chance. Don’t cry because he’s gone, instead be happy for the most wonderful thing he gave us. Our lives, our health. That’s what he did. He followed the ninja way, as the third Hokage said, ‘Protect those that are precious to you’”.

Obito looked deep into Hime’s eyes. He realized that she was feeling the pain from the loss of Kakashi. “I see now, you hurt just as badly as I do. But you try to stay positive from what he’s done to help. Thank you Tsunade Hime, thank.”

Hime looked over the ridge, she smiled for a second then looked back at Obito and Ignis. “Its time for you two to get back to work. We want this village up and running as soon as possible. After words we can all go to the tea shop and get something nice to eat.” Obito and Ignis nodded at her and slowly descended the wall.

It was night fall as Hime, Obito, and Ignis met up. They went into the tea shop for a round of Saki, and some cinnamon buns. Ignis stuffed her face with them, melted frosting all over her face she smiled at both of the others. Ramen bowls were soon passed out, along with nice hot ginseng tea. Hime picked up her cup and rose it high into the air.

“A toast to Kakashi. For his bravery.” Obito and Ignis rose there cups and clinked them. They all took a small swig of nice warm tea.

Obito lowered his cup and looked into the slow moving tea. An image of Kakashi appeared. The image smiled back at Obito. –“You really are gone, aren’t you.”- He smiled into his mug.

Ignis looked up at him. “Are you ok?”

Obito looked towards her. “Oooh yea. I’m fine, this tea tastes great.” Obito moved his right hand across his left eye pretending to scratch his face but really wiped a tear from his left eye.

The night went on but was finally cut as Hime made her farewell and went to her new home. Obito soon left after. Ignis sat at the table. She like Obito looked into her mug and saw Kakashi. All she could remember was the kiss and the sweet smell of nectar all around her. She took the last bit of tea in and then said good night to the waitress. She slowly got up and walked out, stumbling back to her house.


For many weeks every ninja worked as hard as possible in every village to rebuild that which had been destroyed.

In the hidden leaf village all buildings that were standing but not usable, were torn down and then rebuilt into something usable. It only took about five or so weeks to finish all the building. But when it was finished it was better then before. Stronger and much more sturdier walls, and buildings.

Ignis sat in the tea shop eating down cinnamon rolls and fresh hot tea. She was having rather a good time when something caught her attention.

Five hooded figures in the shop on the other side caught her attention. There sat a young child swinging his feet under the chair. They were at peace quietly talking with one another. Four of the figures stood up and walked out with the young man.

The last person left money on the table and slowly walked out. The figure slowly walked by Ignis. As he did she heard a small murmur, “Someday ill be back.” Ignis felt the same the day she saw Kakashi last.

-““Your plan is to kill yourself to end this war isn’t it.”

“Smart as ever aren’t you. You need to get out of here Ignis, I have to catch up to Hime. Take care of Obito and everyone else for me.””-

The sweet smell of nectar swift by her as the figure walked out of the shop. Ignis got to her feet in a rush and ran to the door. But it was to late now. The five figures and the young child had already been too far out of reach. –“He’s still alive?”-


Kenshin looked up into the desert sky. Sand shifting all around. He looked over the village that was now his own. A feeling of having a purpose. “So this is what its like. To finally be on my own, taking care of more then just myself.” He flicked his head back to look at the sky again. He smiled and then walked back into the newly built office.

Hime looked out over the village from her office. Phoenix and Fluffy standing there ready and waiting. “Alright you two, I need papers and files of all previous ninja from this village, I also need new paper so I can file these reports I have now. Make it snappy.”

Phoenix looked down at Fluffy, “Hasn’t changed a bit has she.”

“Nope.” Fluffy smiled up at him and got straight to work. The village had nearly been complete. Hime was happy as ever. She loomed over the entire village.

“To protect those precious to you. Thank you Kakashi Uchiha.”

The sun was just starting to rise as all the genin, chuunin, jounin, anbu, and sanin started to wake. Hime knew this was a new beginning.


~~~~~End of Series One!~~~~~

 #32072  by Kenshin
 
Series one is ended ;P aww great ending kakashi. :P is there going to be a series 2? ^_^

 #32078  by Kira
 
^.^ make it into a file so i cn print and read ^.^

 #32096  by Kenshin
 
i have it as a word document kira. if u wana read it just snd me a message through msn.

 #32113  by Hime
 
wow....nice ending....a very fitting end to a good series
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