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 #26510  by Kenshin
 
nice update.. lookingforward for the next one.. ( and lookin forward for when i make an apperance :P )

 #26590  by Raziel
 
^_^ another great update up


*thumbs up* its great :D

 #26764  by Matt
 
wow, fckin amazing
keep it up :)

 #26765  by Hime
 
The request and concerns
Phoenix and his team returns to the Jedi temple to report on Chinosara.
“Yes, from the reports from Naboo, it seems the Sith’s twelve extreme sabers are on the move already. HIME was found on Naboo. Hopefully everything would be turned out alright.”
“I see; should I go to Naboo to reinforce as well?”
“No Phoenix, we cannot afford everyone goes to Naboo just because we have two Sith sightings. Master Danger and Nintendo and their team should be able to handle this mess.”
“IC, then if there is nothing else, I would like to return to my quarters.”
“Yes, you have earned a rest.”
As Phoenix is on his way back to is chamber, couple of students run into him.
“Hey, it is not good to run in the hallway.”
“Sorry, master Phoenix, we will be careful from now on.” The students say as they are about to go on their way.
“Wait, I am not done yet. It is also not good to spy on a Council meeting. You are lucky the council does not come after you.”
“I am sorry Master Phoenix. We are just worried about the situation going through out the galaxy. We also caught rumours that the Sith are on the move again. We want to help.”
“Then the best for you to do is to complete your training. Worry right now will do you all no good.”
“Yes Master Phoenix, we will train hard and become Jedi Knights sooner.”
“Ahh, I always admire the fire within the youth. So, what are your names?”
“My name is Kenshin,”
“Kakashi”
“Raziel”
“Alright, now back to training all of you. Master Sol Silver is waiting.” Phoenix says.
“Yes Master.”
After a bit of rest, Phoenix goes to the medical center. An medical officer comes to greet Phoenix.
“Greetings Master Phoenix, how can we help you today? You need any medical attention?”
“No, I am here to see Silvercloud. Is she here?”
“Yes, if you can wait for a moment, I will go and inform her about you.”
“Thank you, Ninjasarah. Your help is always….welcome.”
Moments later, Silvercloud comes out. The two exchange greetings and the two then go to the café.
“So, you manage to come back here in one piece, again. How did you do it? I was back there treating Kane and his wounds from the last fight with Chino…whatever her name is.”
“So, how’s he doing?”
“Thanks to the force, he will live. That Sith landed couple of hard attacks on him. Well, I believe you didn’t come to see just because you miss now.”
“You always have a sharp mind. Yes, I do miss you but I also have something to discuss with you.”
“Let me guess, it is about Tricky and Scythe. Those two still haven’t chosen a master yet. You are worry about those two.”
“Yes, if they don’t pick a master soon, they will become wash outs. I am surprised that they don’t like the Masters that are station here. I cannot think of any master who can teach those two. The other masters or knights are either have students already or they are out there.”
“You cannot think of anyone? I do.”
“Who? I cannot think of any masters or knights.”
“The Sword Maiden, I think she can she can handle those two quite nicely. Odd people can only be countered with odd people.”
“That’s a good idea Silvercloud. However, we have to wait till she comes back or we have to get the others to bring her back. Either way, I don’t know if those two will ever see her for that matter.”
“That’s true. Is there anyway for us to get those three meet?”
“Yes, the best way is to send them to Naboo. Then again, I do not have a reason for them to go anyways.”
“Well, if you want a reason, I can make one up. You see, war on Naboo means there is need of medical supply. I can volunteer myself to send supply over there. In that case, I can bring those two on my ship.”
“You have a ship?”
“Yea, for now I am one of the senior medical officers and I captain the ship SORA. Didn’t you hear about my promotion?”
“Obviously I am very behind on currently promotion news. Then again, it’s good to know that you are moving on. I just thinking it’s a shame that you use your talents in healing. You could have become a great Jedi with that sharp mind of yours.”
“What can I say? I like the medical center more. Besides, I find studying the way of healing is much more interesting. Someday, I am going to devote myself into force healing. Anyhow, I will arrange for the transport to be done. Hopefully I can still make it there on time.”
“Thanks Silvercloud, besides it will be good to see that HIME come back here once in a while. It’s too depressing for her to leave her home for so long.”
“That’s very true.”

 #26766  by Raziel
 
Matt wrote:wow, fckin amazing
keep it up :)
what he said 8)

 #26775  by Kenshin
 
great chapter hime.. hopefully il be mentioned more :D in future chapters

 #26784  by Starcomand
 
great update and bad Kenshin Kakashi and Raziel spying and running lol

 #26785  by Kakashi.Archive
 
HEY! nice chap ^^

 #26923  by Kane
 
Ooh im wounded :D a horribly disfiguring scar maybe? Keep up the writing Hime its all great :)

 #27037  by Hime
 
Battle of Demdrona: Maiden fall

As Danger and the others enter the Gungan city, Demdrona, they see nothing but wreckage.
“By the force, you are right, Master Danger. The city is under attacked just as you said. I just hope we are not to late.” Starcomand says.
“If my guesses are right, the city shouldn’t fall in a short period of time. At the rate I am looking at it, she did a good job helping the Gungans defending the city.”
“Master Danger, you mean HIME is here? How can you be so sure?” Ronin asks.
“Easy, the Gungan have their ways of war. However, they are not familiar in the ways of urban warfare. If no one here was to teach them how to fight urban warfare, the city should fall in a matter of days. Look, the city is still belongs to the Gungans. That is already a proof. Also, HIME helped building this city during the times of the plague. Only she knows how to defend this city well.”
“You sound very confident in your student’s abilities. How can you be so sure? She is only one girl against….dare I say many? Plus, she is never the leader type to me.” Starcomand asks.
“Star, she doesn’t seem to be in good terms with fellow Jedi does not mean she is not in good terms to everyone else. I know my student well enough.”
“So did Yoda, when he was talking about Count Dooku before his fall to the dark side.”
“Star, will you shut it? You are not really helping here! At least I do not think HIME will fall into the league of the Darth!”
“Sorry, but the more I study her, the more I thin she is dangerous! I am starting to think that Stump may be right.” Starcomand says.
“You can judge my student when you work side by side with her. I will say no more aside from we nee to move on now.”
“Yes, Master Danger.”
The more they enter the city, the quieter it gets. All that is left are nothing but burnt buildings, rubble, and nothing more. There is not a single living soul around.
“This is strange; I think battles should have dead bodies laying around the place. Do you think the Gungans just hide while the coup army just taking their time burning buildings as such?”
“I want to think about the same thing Ronin. However, this is way too quiet for a battlefield.” Danger says.
Suddenly the lights went off and the Gungans appear from nowhere and start attacking the three. The Gungans bombard the three with Gungan weapons. Danger uses the force to pull a huge piece of wreckage as cover for cover. Ronin then ignites his double saber and start deflecting the attacks. Starcomand also gets his dual sabers out. The Gungans continue o bombard their enemies. They soon realize that their attacks are not going to do anything to the three.
“They are very organized in their attacks. Master Danger, you have any ideas?” Ronin says.
As Danger is about to respond, the attacks stop. The three begin to wonder what is going on when a shadow lurks from above. It is very fast, faster than Danger expected.
“Careful, it is coming straight for us.” Danger says.
Before anyone does anything, the shadow already unleashes its attacks. A blue light comes out from it’s hand and start slashing at the three. Danger ignites his saber and blocks the attack while Ronin and Starcomand are going to support. However, the shadow stops its attacks once it made contact with Danger. The Shadow takes a back flip and lands safety on the ground. Then, the shadow kneels in front of Danger. The Gungans turns the lights back on. Everyone sees a person in Jedi black robe.
“Master, what brings you here? Please forgive me rude behaviour moments ago.”
“It’s alright HIME. I come because we need you back on the surface.’ Danger says as he brings HIME up.
“The surface needs me? I would go with you without question if it is a normal situation. However, as you can see….”
“I understand. How are you and the Gungans holding up the city?”
“I got here just in time. We managed to push the coup forces back just two days ago. We have no idea when they will come back. But I am sure they will be back soon. This Admiral Justin is not someone who gives up easily.” HIME says.
“Why does he want to attack this city so bad? This place has no strategic value.” Ronin asks.
“True, however the Gungans are in good terms with the government of Naboo. If the surface has any problems, the Gungans will assist the Royal army. The deal goes the same way with the government as well. I think Justin wants to eliminate one of his possible threats to his take over. Therefore, the Gungans must be dealt with.” HIME says.
“Now that makes sense now.” Ronin says.
“A number of Gungan cities had already fallen to Justin’s army. Many innocent lives were lost because of one man’s ambition. The surviving Gungans came here looking for refuge. Go and study strategy for once!” HIME says with a certain mocking tone.
“WHY YOU!!” Starcomand says with a voice of anger.
“Stop it you two! This is not the time for this.” Danger says.
The four return to the Gungan out post in the city. The Gungan generals and officers give HIME and Danger a salute. HIME returns them with the same salute as respect to the generals. Danger also pays respects to the generals and Gungan soldiers.
“So Master, why did you go through all the touble to come here. You didn’t come just because you miss me right?” HIME asks.
“Well, we have come to bring you back to the surface. You are needed there.” Ronin says.
“Oh really? I last time I recalled there were a dozen of Jedi up there and one of me down here. What? Even a dozen of Jedi couldn’t handle certain Sith threat, when I have to held defence all by myself in this city? Can’t you see these people here; need me more than those guys up on the surface?” HIME asks.
“Don’t you have any idea what we have to go through to get to you? I have to endure that underwater path to get here! Not to mention we had to fly from systems to systems just to find you! Now you better just leave and come with us.” Ronin says.
“Now, what am I suppose to do with the Gungans who entrusted their lives to me? I am suppose to just leave them to their deaths when the enemies arrive? We are so close to pushing them back. I cannot possibly leave now! I cannot leave the Gungan who fell in this war of non-sense not avenged.” HIME says.
“You need to explain yourself and helpfully clear your name for shooting on both sides during the battle!” Starcomand says.
“I do not need to explain myself for this! I have nothing to say for my actions. I merely just want to stop the fighting. I have nothing more to say.” HIME says.
“I am sorry, but you have to come with us now. Do not force us to drag you with us. You know you cannot beat me or Ronin here.” Starcomand says.
“Are...you….threatening me? Was that a threat?” HIME asks with a slow voice. She slowly turns around and glares at Starcomand.
“Oh, that’s very scary. Now come on before we are forced to injure you pride or something.” Starcomand says.
“HIME, listen to me, you need to clear you name!! Everyone is waiting for you up there. Please listen to your fellow Jedi for at least once. Master Danger! Say something!” Ronin says.
“You know, I an see HIME’s point. There is people needed protection here. She rezlized that protecting these people is more important than anything else. I would support her.” Danger says.
“BUT, I AM NOT ABOUT TO GO BACK EMPTY HANDED!! I HAVE NEVER FAILED A MISSION BEFORE.” Starcomand says.
“This is not a failed mission the way I see it. I would like stay here and help if I can.”
“MASTER DANGER…..I am sorry. But we must bring her back whether you like it or not.”
“Star, I am not going to get my hand in on this. However, I do not think you two can ever drag her back with you. I can be sure of that.”
“Then let’s find out Star.” Ronin says.
HIME looks at her master. Danger nods his head as approval. HIME then posts a stance in bare hands.
“What? You want to fight us with nothing but your fists? You must be out of your mind!” Ronin says as he ignites his sabers.
“Surely you should know the two of us with sabers are deadly.” Starcomand says.
Suddenly, HIME charges up towards the two and puts her palms on the both of their chest. That hit knocks the two back to a distance.
“Clearly……we have never fought each other before.” HIME says in a soft voice.
“What?....What was that?” Starcomand says in shock as he is trying to get up from the ground.
HIME twirls her body around as if she is dancing. Her body seems to be as light as a feather as she moves. It is so graceful.
“Advent, above everything else, I walk in the ways that is above everything. Maiden Dance.” HIME says as she stops. She is smiling. However, there is something more behind that somewhat warn smile of hers.
“You two ready for an encore? Or you just want to shut up and die?”

 #27038  by Kenshin
 
cool update keep writing

 #27039  by Starcomand
 
great update hime keep them comeing

 #27073  by Hime
 
The two charge towards HIME at the same time. HIME just once again twirls e body around and evades the attack and then grabs on to both of their arm and flips them on the ground in an instance. She then uses the force to pushes herself back to keep some sort of distance from the two. As the two gets up again, HIME charges in once more but this time she goes for starcomand. She kicks off one of Starcomand’s lightsaber and takes it and then blocks the attack from Ronin’s saber. Then she wraps her arm around starcomand’s head and launches Starcomand against Ronin. Ronin dodges but then HIME already uses that time to land couple of heavy kicks on his chest and then uses her legs to hold on to Ronin’s neck and flips him down on the ground.
“What is that fighting style?” Ronin says as he gets up.
“It is like she read al our movement.” Starcomand says.
“Your two tired yet? Because I can keep this up all day long you know.” HIME says as she once again keeps some distance from the two.
“Gentlemen, you have just witness and experienced HIME’s anti-saber bare hands fighting style. GenShinken.” Danger says.
“I know I cannot beat some of you people in terms of saber. Therefore, I have created this. Although it is something different from Vaapad that you people worked so hard to recover, it is powerful against anyone who is using a saber.” HIME says.
Ronin doesn’t respond but charges forward to fight again. This time Ronin unleashes force push on to HIME. Ronin is expecting HIME to have some sort of reaction upon impact with the force. However, Starcomand is the one who is being pushes back.
“What?....I didn’t….” Ronin says.
HIME just stands there without putting up any emotion. The Gungans try to assist HIME but HIME gives them a signal not to get involve plus to clear the area. That’s why no Gungans were trying to do something stupid. They all just stand guard on the side
“We can all stop here or we can keep wasting our energy like this. Personally I don’t want to play with you two anymore because I have more important things to do.” HIME says as she turns her back on the two and walks away. Starcomand gets up and throws his saber towards HIME’s back. HIME didn’t expect anyone would attack her back. Therefore, she is a bit slow to evade the incoming attack. Hence that attack manages to hit her shoulder. Blood spills out from HIME’s shoulder as she falls one knee on the ground. She uses her hand to cove her wound. Danger rushes out to check her wound. The Gungans quickly send their medic and order their troops to have Starcomand and Ronin surrounded.
“STAR!! What have you done? Why did you do that? That was dirty!” Ronin screams out.
“Don’t worry! I will get us out of this.” Starcomand says as he gets up and shows his identification to every Gungan.
“I am Starcomand of the Jedi Temple. I am here to bring back our member who went against her orders. This is Jedi business, so just mind your own business. Stay back or we ill have to arrest al of you too. Don’t force use to hurt you okay?” Sarcomand says as he ignites his saber.
“HIME! HIME! You okay? Snap out of it!” Danger says.
“Don’t…worry….I am…not dead. But….about to snap though.” HIME says with a smile.
“Glad you can still joke around.” Danger says.
“Master Danger, please take your student….we have to go now.” Starcomand says.
“How could you injure one of my students right in front of me? You did it when she had her back turned on you.” Danger says.
“She is just being careless….that’s all. Who told her to fight us?” Starcomand says.
“There is no us in this fight. I would never have attacked her from the back.” Ronin says.
“Ronin! Not you too! We completed our mission right? That’s what it counts.”
“Star…..I wonder how you got to knight.” Danger says.
“It’s alright….I am fine now. Thanks for buying me some time.” HIME says as she slowly gets up. Her scar heals in front of everyone.
“What….how? Force healing that fast?” Starcomand asks.
“Master, I told you that I am about to snap right? Here I go now!” HIME says as she charges towards Starcomand in full speed. A fist appears in front of Starcomand’s face before he can react. It is then a Gungan soldier runs in and report.
“This City isa unda attacsa.”
HIME stops her fist right before she hits Starcomand. She stands up to the Gungans who are watching on the side.
“Everyone move out! We fight according to the plan. Master, take those two with you and go back. This lace is getting dangerous. It is more dangerous than I thought.”
“HIME. Are you sure about this? You know we can help. At least I can help.” Danger says.
“Master, I just do not want to see those anymore. Maybe after this fight, I should go far away…..from everything.” HIME says.
“HIME, at least let s help. We are here anyways. We just might as well do it.” Ronin says.
“Just everyone who is not a soldier out of here, take good care of them. See that they come to no harm; or I will personally come to collect your heads.” HIME says as she marches with the Gungans into battle.

 #27092  by Starcomand
 
great update hime keep it up

 #27096  by Kenshin
 
star got owned lol great update hime

 #27283  by Hime
 
“Where did she learn so much about styles and fighting?”
“Ronin, isolation from people can push a person to do more. She has been studying. She even created some of her own force attacks like mixing force powers.”
“Mixing force powers?” Ronin asks.
“Yes, she is only one who can do that because of her hybrid nature. Oh well, she is just experimenting it thought. It’s nothing too big. However, by all the training she put herself through, I feel some thing is developing inside of her.”
“What do you mean master Danger?”
“Haven’t you notice her tone? She tones feels like ice cold. Something must have happened to her. She’s starting to lose that human side of hers.” Danger says.
“Isn’t that make her the more dangerous?” Starcomand asks.
“I don’t know who’s more danger is. Someone who can fight in the front or someone win by hitting someone’s back.”
“RONIN!!”
“Stop it you two.” Danger says as he worries about HIME.
It is then HIME sends a hologram message to Danger.
“Master, if it is alright for you to guard the rear. The wounded and the non-combatants will be pouring in to your location. Ronin, I need you to watch the right of the attack and see to it that no one comes in or out.” HIME says.
“What can I do?” Starcomand says.
“Why do you want to help me?”
“For not finishing me off.”
“You do not worth the effort. Now, since you want to help, please watch over the water gates. As you see Ronin charges in, you pull the lever and flood this level. Do not worry, once you pull the lever, the Gungans will assist you to the lower levels.”
“What? You want me to flood Ronin? He is going to die in there you know? How are you going to get him out?” Starcomand says.
“Don’t worry, I will think of something. Now let’s move!” HIME says.
Danger and Ronin quickly advance to their position and get ready. Starcomand gets to his position and waits. He then calls Ronin.
“Ronin, are you sure about HIME’s plan? For all we know, she about to flood you, I do not trust her!”
“Don’t worry Star. If she wanted to kill us, she would done so long ago.” Ronin says as he gets into position.
The coup troopers are pouring in like rivers of war, HIME orders the Gungn to clear out. She glares at the incoming troops. She ignites her lightsaber to deflect all the attacks. She takes a deep breath and then she lets out a scream. As she screams, a shock wave is created from her voice and knocks every incoming trooper back. She then waves at the Gungans and everyone falls back to lure the troops in. It seems the troopers have no idea that a trap had been laid; they just rush in for pursuit. As HIME retreat to the center, she signals Ronin to come into the fight. Ronin nd his squad rushes in without any time wasted and start attacking. HIME gives the command for every Gungn to retreat. Then she notices Starcomand leads his troops to come and join the fight instead of stay put at his station.
“What are you doing? You should be stay out at your own station! That was not part of the plan!!”
“I am sorry HIME. But I fail to see your plan is anyhere that is near perfect! You want to kill Ronin or something? I am not going to pull that lever!”
“YOU FOOL!” HIME yells.
The whole level becomes a battlefield. Ronin and his troops hold back the invading forces as hard as they can and as long as they can.
“What should I do…..clearly the other side has us outnumbered.” Starcomand says.
“Get to the lower level! Get everyone to the lower level too! Make sure you leave no one behind.” HIME says.
“What? In that case we are not going to have any place to run! Besides, in our condition right now, it is impossible for us to win. you are going to doom us all!”
“Star, if you have anything better than this…..share. If not, then do as HIME says.” Ronin says.
Starcomand grunts as he gets everyone and Ronin back to the lower level. HIME stands guard at the rear and waits for everyone to get through.
“Everyone has gone through; you are the last one HIME. What is your grand plan?” Starcomand says.
HIME just smiles as she pushes the button to seal off the level. Starcomand cannot believe that HIME just seal off the door before she got through.
“HIME! What are you doing? HIME!” Starcomand screams.
Ronin and Danger rushes to the location.
“She is still going to flood the level!” Danger says.
“What are we going to do now? I mean how are we going to help her?”
“Ronin, her life is in the hands of the force.” Danger says.
HIME looks at the situation. She jumps over squads of troopers and get to the lever all by herself. She uses the force to pull down the lever and the water just rushes right.
“Here goes nothing.” HIME says to herself.

 #27296  by Starcomand
 
great update hime keep them coming

 #30232  by Hime
 
SORRY FOR THE UBER LATE RELEASE

Down at the lowest level of the city, Starcomand, Danger, and Ronin managed to get the Gungans safe.
“Star! Why didn’t you follow the plan?”
“Ronin! Didn’t you forget that she was going to use the flood gates and flood you?”
“Don’t you see she already had that part covered? You see those pods on the ceiling? She was going to use that to transport both me and her down here! Now she had to trigger the flood gate all by herself!”
“Then can’t she transport herself down here with those pods?”
“No Star, you don’t understand. These pods are built only for times like these. Once the flood gate is open, these pods will be sealed. Now, HIME has no way of getting down here. She is trapped upstairs!” Ronin says.
Then there is a huge rumble sound from above and the upper level of the city detached from the lower part.
“Come on, this not a place for everyone to stay. We have got to go!” Danger says.
“But where? HIME led us down here and now we are stuck. There is no food, no supply, and I do not know how long we are going to be stuck here until help ready arrives.” Starcomand says.
“She had that solved already. She already called in the Royal Navy. They are going to be here sooner than you think.” Danger says.
“Wait, how’s HIME going to come down from upstairs?”
“Star, she doesn’t…watch.”
Starcomand and the others watch as the upper level of the city detached from the lower part and carried away by the ocean current.
“Her plan was to trap the enemy upstairs, and then detached the upper part. Now, she is in that upper part. She couldn’t get out.”
“It’s….all my fault. I shouldn’t have…..” Starcomand says as he walks away from the group.
“Hang in there. May the force be with you.” Danger says.

Back at Admiral Justin’s base, a soldier reports to him in the main Operation Building. He brought the news of the defeat in the Gungan city and some other locations.
“It seems the Jedi’s intervention causes more trouble than I have expected. Someday, I have to deal with them for what they the trouble they brought me. They are not going to stop me from taking this planet. My family had served this weak system for generation. It is time for a more firm rule on this planet……these Jedis are not going to stop me from getting what I want!”
“Then, are you saying you are the only answer to all these mess? Is this conquest was just for your own personal gain isn’t it?” the soldier asks.
“Why are you speaking to me with this kind of tone? You are still just a private.”
“Yes, many apologies. However, I do have a right to question our goal in this….conquest. Is this worthy enough for us and my brothers to die for?”
“Peons like you should just follow orders. You should just be what I want you to be. Now get out and do your job.”
“I must say you are so full of rubbish. You wanted your position on this planet. You want it so much that you have to put innocent people’s lives at risk.”
“HOW DARE YOU insult me! Guards!! Take this man away and have him shot for in subornation!.”
No one moved an inch after Justin barked out his orders. Justin then looks to his men. They are all just standing on the spot as if they are statues. Just as Justin is about to give one his men a push, all Justin’s guards collapse on the ground leaving Justin standing there. Just at that moment all the lights in Justin’s room went dark.
“Not so tough without anyone behind your back now isn’t it?” A voice comes from the darkness.
“Who are you? Show yourself! Come out!” Justin yells like a mad man while pulls out his gun.
“How unsightly this is! An admiral is afraid of the dark. Very well then, I guess I have to step into the light and have somewhat of a conversation with you. the voice says.
Justin is backing up to the wall behind. He is also pointing his pistol at every direction.
“Where are you looking?” the voice asks.
Justin looks up and finds a figure is crouching on the wall above him. The figure is wearing a gray robe. The figure is wearing a hood that causes shadow to cover his face. That’s why Justin cannot see the figure’s face. The robe is flowing in the air even though there is no wind inside the room.
“What do you want?” Justin asks.
“Information, this war with such gigantic scale, you couldn’t be able to support it just by your family fortunes. Who are you working for?”
“I work do no one!”
“I am only going to ask once more. Who are you working for? Do not try to conceal the truth from me. It is going to hurt you a lot more than me.”
“Don’t make me laugh! You forgot I can draw pretty fast!”
“Oh you mean this?” the figure says as he holds up Justin’s own pistol in front of Justin.
“WHAT! When did he?” Justin says in shock.
The figure leaps down from the wall and approaches Justin. Justin is being engulfed by the shadow of the figure. The figure stretches out his hand and grabs Justin by his collar and holds him up against the wall.
”Let’s do this one more time, who are you working for?” the figure asks again.
“It’s too late for you Jedi! Our plan is already in motion!! Soon the Jedi will be no more!” Justin says as he tries to struggle out of the grip of the figure.
“I know there is more in your pans. You do not just want to destroy all the Jedi. You have something more you are not telling me. Now you either give me the information I seek or you are about to have a flying lesson out the window.” The figure says.
“You are NOT getting anything from me.”
“That’s fine by me. I will just have use some other methods to pull it out of you.” the figure says.
“What are you going to do?”
“Try very hard not to think about your plans and the people that are working with you.” the figure says as he stares into Justin’s eyes.
Justin feels his entire body is going into shock as the figure stares straight into his eyes. He can feel the figure’s eyes stare into his soul and his mind. It is like nothing can be hidden from him. He feels his mind is being slowly drain away as well as his strength.
“DAMN YOU….soul hacking….You are…..” Justin says s he fainted.
“Tch, I didn’t get all the information I need before he fainted. Either he is smart enough to faint or I need more training. Still, I got some important information. I better report this back to the others.” The figure says as he head towards the window.
All of a sudden, a red saber flies towards the figure’s face. The figure jumps up and dodges it.
“I can never image I can meet a member of the Lunar Knights. I have always wanted to fight against one. Please tell me your name before you die by me hand.” a sith says to the figure.
“Then why don’t you tell me yours before you die by my hand?” the figure says.
“Twien. I am one of the twelve extreme sabers, and the first sith who is going to kill a Lunar Knight.” Twien says as he unleashes his saber whip.

 #30235  by Starcomand
 
great update hime keep it up

 #30239  by Kenshin
 
cool up date hime ^_^

 #30791  by Hime
 
he figure just dives out of the window into open air. Twien follows. The two dives out of the window and start exchanging blows as they are falling. Twien would starts swinging his whip against the figure. The figure just dodges it and leaps to the other side of the building. The game of cat and mouse continues for a short while as the figure suddenly jumps off to the top of a nearby building. Twien is somewhere not far behind. The figure lands on the top of a building and he stops.
“Impressive. You can actually follow me this far. I guess you should be more fun than those Jedi. What is your name again, boy?” the figure asks.
“It’s Twien. One of the twelve extreme sabers. The last name you will ever hear before you die.”
“Such aggression. I truly hope you are up to the task. If you are trying to end my life …..that is.”
Twien then unleash his attacks on the figure. The figure just counters every attack without igniting his saber. However, he is closing in on Twien as he is dodging all the attacks. Suddenly the figure ignites his saber. A line of white light appears near Twien’s throat. Twien is so shock at the turn of events.
“What are you waiting for? Kill me now before you regret it. If you don’t kill me here, I will be coming after you!”
“One question: What’s in it of you? What’s your goal by helping Justin? Surely, there are more in Justin’s plan than ridding of the Jedi. What? You want to open a Sith academy on Naboo or something? I do not think Justin’s plan is that simple. You Sith better watch out too.” The figure says s he kicks Twien on the ground. As Twien gets up, the figure has already vanished.
Twien is still looking around as Kabrojiros arrives on the scene.
“Lunar Knights huh? They can be a troublesome bunch at times. Still, we have to say with our plan. The target is lost. We are pulling from this campaign.”
“What are you saying kabrojiros? We are pulling out? Why?”
“Our target is lost not too long ago. We are pulling out from the open. From now on we are going underground and search this planet inside out for our target. The leader of the sabers is not going to be happy about this.”
Surprisingly enough, Justin decided to retreat from the battlefield along with his main forces soon after the attak from the mysterious figure of the Lunar Knights. Most of the troops starting too pull out on the front line..

Back at the Royal army/Jedi united front base.
“What are you saying the coup forces are puling out from the front line? How is this possible?”
“It’s true master Nintendo. I am at the front line right now. We have no resistance as far as we know. I will conduct more searches around the area. Then, I will return to base as soon as I am done here. It seems the Gungans are all hiding in their secret place. I have also got word from master Danger. He and the two are both alright. They should be arriving at your location shortly.”
“Thank you, Raven. It has been hard on you as well.”
“See you in a few days, Master Nintendo.”
At this time, NewspapaerNinja enters,Nintendo passes Raven’s report to him.
“This is strange news indeed. However, I have heard certain rumour about Justin was being attacked at his own command center. That can explain why the coup forces are either withdrawing or getting disorganized.”
“Justin was being attacked at his own base? By how many people?”
“One.”
“You know there aren’t many people who can get pass that kind of security alone.”
“Master Nintendo, I do have some other information. It seems the Lunar Knights are behind this. From what I gathered, the one who attacked Justin is wearing a grey robe. Only the members of Lunar Knights wear that kind of colour.”
“The only question is what their motive on this is? One thing is that the members of Lunar Knights never answer to anyone. They announced themselves as neither Jedi or Sith. Even with such big reputation in terms of force and combat abilities. They are ever elusive. If they decided to make an appearance, that means something terrible but be going on.”
“What do you think Master Nintendo? I have already report to the council about the Lunar Knights situation. Do you think we should send someone to look into this matter?”
“I don’t think so Newsie. At this rate, all we can do is guess. That is not doing us any good. Right now, we need to find HIME. She was reported MIA during the battle of the Gungan city.”
“It has been three days isn’t it?”
“Yes, she did well protecting the Gungans. That’s why we need to find her. She deserves that much. I can feel that she is still alive. We need to find her, whatever it takes.” Nintendo says.
In space, in a Jedi medical ship:
“So Why are we on this mission again? You do know we are still students.”
“Tricky, we all know you and Scythe are still students. You two also have been students for FAR TOO LONG. You two are coming with me to help me on this mission and long for a master!” Silvercloud says.
“Which one are we talking about this time?”
“HIME”
The two just stand there without saying a word for a while. Silvercloud just giggles as she sees the two’s reaction.
“We are talking about the Sword Maiden right? Not Lessa, but the other one who doesn’t get along with everyone else. That Sword Maiden?” Tricky asks.
“I have heard lot of stories about her. Have you met her before Silvercloud?” Scythe asks.
“I never managed to get to talk to her face to face. However, there was one time she came to the medical center to pay Lessa a visit when Lessa was injured from one of her assigned missions. She just passed me by. I still remembered the chill I felt up my spine when she passed me by. I did manage to see her long hair but not her face.”
“Wow, it was that interesting huh? I would like to see if she is as good as some said she is.”
“You can met her and find out. Just so you know, she never taken in anyone as padawan. Even, you may want her to be your master, but I have no idea if she wants to take you two.”

On the shore, Ronin, Dnger, and Starcommand managed to make to shore with the help of the Royal navy. Starcommand is trying very hard to search for HIME’s signal.
“HIME! HIME! Come in! Please respond!” Starcomand keeps on screaming at the transmitter. Danger just tab Starcomand on the shoulder.
“Give it a rest. We cannot reach her here. We can only hope for the best.” Ronin says to Starcomand.
Danger is going back to base to have a meeting with Nintendo. Danger is also puzzled with Justin’s movement. More over, Danger wants to know what the Lunar Knights are doing on Naboo. First the Jedi need to find HIME. She cannot be fallen into the hands of the Sith.

In a village far from all the conflict, a group of villagers are gathering up in the village’s hall. The hall is the largest building in the whole village. It can fit a lot of people in there. In the middle of the crowd, a girl is laying on a bed. Soon after, a doctor comes in from the outside. He orders everyone to clear out in order to give some fresh air for the girl. The doctor takes a look at the girl. She is all drenched, and also covered with injuries. The doctor quickly cleans the wounds and patches her up.
“Is she going to be alright?” the head of the village comes up to the doctor asks.
“She is going to be alright. Her recovery rate is amazing. When and where did you find her? Do you know why she is in such a condition?” the doctor asks.
“We do not know. You see, we found her crawling out from the river bank. We thought it was some kind of beast. Then we found out it is a girl. We brought her up from the river bank and brought her here. We called as soon as we found her.” The village head says.
“You have no idea who she is?” the doctor asks.
“No….but we looked at her clothing. We took it off because she was all drenched and torn. It seems she went through a big drift from the ocean. That’s because she had some see weed on her. We have never seen this kind of clothing before. However, we found her holding on some sort of metallic equipment. We tried to get it out from her hand but it fell into the river.”
“I see. Well, let’s see if we can ask her some questions when she wakes up. We shall discuss what to do after that.” The doctor says.
It is after three days the girl finally wakes up. She tries to get up but her strength fails her as she falls back down on the bed. The doctor quickly helps her up.
“You have finally awake. It’s okay. You are among friends now. You are alright. Now, can you tell me your name?” the doctor asks.
The girl looks at the doctor and her surroundings. She looks at her hands. She sees a pair of hands that are as white as snow. She tries to think but it seems nothing comes to mind.
“It’s okay. I am a doctor. My name is Dr. Coliean. You are among friends here. The villagers who rescued you are waiting outside. They are all worried about you. Now, can you remember your name and where you live? We can contact your family and friends to come get you. Can you remember anything?” Dr. Coliean asks.
“I cannot remember. She looks around and see a set of torn clothes. She tries to get up but still she cannot summon enough strength. Dr. Cloiean helps her to walk to the torn clothes. She picks them up and has a good look at them. However, nothing comes to her mind. She looks at the mirror. She finds herself have long, thin black hair and skin that is white as snow. She takes some time looking at the mirror. Then, she shakes her head.
“No…..I do not remember at all.” The girl says as tears come down to her cheeks.
“It’s alright. Maybe it will come back to you in several days. You just rest for now. There is no rush.”
“It’s strange doctor.”
“What is?”
“I should be in fear or in sorrow for something for losing my memories. However, somehow I feel rather relieved for some reason. It is as if I have just thrown away a big burden off me. I have no idea why but right now I am a ease.” The girl says.
“Take your time. The people in this village are wiling to take care of you. Maybe they would let you stay here. Right now, the head of the village wants to have a word with you. Do not be alarmed, they are good people.” Dr. Coliean says.
“You have my thanks.” The girl says.
The head of the village enters the room. He is a very good man.
“My name is Oldman. At east that’s what the people in this village call me. I am the head of this village. You are very lucky to have survived. If there is anything you need, please do not feel shy and tell us. However, this village may not be as advance as the well developed towns out there. Please forgive us for the inconvience.”
“No, I should thank you. Your village saved my life. I owe this village a great debt. Maybe I can help around to earn my stay.” The girl says
“Remember this village is our village. We help each other. You just rest for now.” Oldman says.
It takes around three days for the girl to finally to be able to walk on her own again. Oldman and the villagers host a welcoming party for this girl. Since she does not have a name, Oldman and Dr. Coliean give her one. She is to be called “Sista”.

 #31072  by Starcomand
 
great update

 #35384  by Kakashi.Archive
 
sorry i havent posted lately, nice updates hime :D

i finally got time to read it ^^

 #35391  by Cross
 
great story as always Hime (raziel)

 #40756  by Hime
 
Bounty Hunter

Back on the planet Tattoine, a man dressed as like a bounty hunter steps into a bar looking for someone. He is wearing protective face wear for the cruel sun that heats up the planet. He is also wearing a very dusty cape to protect himself from the sand. He goes into the bar. No one raises an eyebrow because there are many travelers dress like this when they come on to this planet. It is quite funny to think such a planet with nothing besides hot sun, sand, and some very big and friendly creatures that would gladly swallow you whole can be very populated.
Many of these people who take refuge on this planet are wanted criminals. The huts on this planet would hire these criminals to do their bidding. In return, the huts would offer them shelter, and wealth. This planet became one of the hotspots for bounty hunters. These kinds of tradition never change.
“Hey, scum! You remember me?” the man with the cape says as he kicks down one of the chairs when another man was sitting on. It seems he found his target.
“Lucien, Lucien the Wind Chaser. I didn’t do anything wrong for the past six years. I have been running a honest business on this planet. Please! You have got to believe me!” the man on the ground says.
“Honest business you say? Sure, you do run a honest business in smuggling slave girls and firearms. Do not play innocent with me, ya scum bag. I can smell that you are lying since I saw you. I am taking you in not matter what.” Lucien says.
The man looks at Lucien and then he throws a flash bag. Lucien then uses his cape to cover his eyes. After the flash was gone, the man he was chasing disappeared. Lucien then jumps out from the bar’s window and start tracking him. It seems his target is not too far away. He then gives chase. After running several blocks and some twists and turns in the market place. The man runs into a dark alley. Lucien also follows without hesitate.
“HA! You have fallen into my trap, Lucien.” The man laughs as some other men come out into the alley and they are all armed.
“Lucien, Lucien, Lucien the great bounty hunter who never let a prey got away from him. You always manage to bring terror to your targets. It seems this time the table has turned right?” the man laughs.
Lucien just sighs. He then takes out a notebook.
“Anock Kajiro, wanted dead or alive on 12 planets for kidnapping, murder, smuggling, slave trade, and other things. Was captured once by Lucien and then six months ago escaped from prison. You know Anock…..it took me three months to track you down here. Seriously, I would advise you to make it easy on yourself and just come with me.” Lucien says.
“Are you out of your mind? You are nothing but one person! Look at us! I think you should beg for a quick death!” Anock laughs.
“Last chance.”
“Bite me Lucien!”
“Alright, ya funeral.” Lucien says as he presses a button on his controller. Then the whole alley exploded. Most of the people who were with Anock including Anock himself were taking a first hand lesson of flying without being in a spacecraft. Of course, the landing part seems really painful.
“Told cha…..how come no one ever listens?” Lucien says.
“How…..?” Anock says in pain when he is lying on the ground after the nasty fall he took.
“Anock….my dear Anock, obviously ya do not know me well enough. I specialize in cheating. Why did I wait three months to come get ya? I just booey trapped every corner of this market place before I come get you. I know that ya set ya ass on this planet before you even get there! You are just lucky that ya ass didn’t get blown off to low orbit. Now come with me….told you it would be embarrassing.” Lucien says as he drags Anock with him.
Lucien’s partners are waiting inside Lucien’s ship, the craw, for his return. One of them is a Rutian Twi’lek female named Devonia Dirk. The other one is a near human male named Sde Makentos.
“Tell me Devonia, why does Lucien spend three stinking months in booey trapping the whole market place just for that little scum Anock? You know, we could have walk in and we could have caught them easily. Besides what’s the point of being flashy? You know..”
“I guess I am going to have some fun blowing up things on that big piece of sand and rock……that’s what he said. You do know how much he loves to be flashy. He said about being flashy is a path to make yourself famous.”
“I tell you it is a path to get yourself both on the black list and wanted list. That’s for sure.” Sde says.
“If ya two have all da time to have regular chit-chat, maybe you can help me in moving this little scum back into the cell.” Lucien says.
“Wait! You did it again! How did you manage to sneak behind all of us every time you come back?” Sde says.
“Well, you better get use to it. This is something he loves to do.” Devonia says.
“Okay….while Sde is at his work, tell me where can we put him for a good price? And can you please check are there any fugitive seen hiding on the way as well?”
“Already on it Lucien, it seems that Endor is the place to go. Also, the planet Naboo is rather near by. From what I heard….a few wanted ones are hiding on that planet.”
“I like this, my kind of trip. Alright, we first go to Endor. Then, we go for Naboo. I am sure those folks wanted to hide due to the coup happened earlier. Well, that means more business and competition for us. Let’s go as soon as we are ready. Time is money.” Lucien says.
After Lucien and the other left Endor, they began their search on Naboo. Of course, not many one raises an eyebrow because everyone is busy rebuilding. That also made Lucien’s work a bit more difficult before not many can provide him any information he seeks. At one time he heard the notorious speeder gang leader Vicor Freguch and his gang are one this planet. Lucien then starts tracking their whereabouts. He knows that they are still on the planet.
“Never know tracking a few people on a small planet could take this long. Good thing Anock’s price money is large enough for everyone. From our last source, it is shown that our target is in the city of Theed. It is still being rebuilt. I wonder what they are doing over there.” Sde says.
“If bounty hunting is easy, everyone would be doing it. Get ya ass moving…..to Theed it is. If they want rubble warfare, they got one.” Lucien says.
The crew arrives at Theed. The once beautiful city is now a ruin of rubble. They are about to go search around and survey the area when Lucien sees a lady being chased by the gang he is looking for. The gang is circling the lady with speeders. The lady looks like she is in danger. However, she does look terrified. Devonia then takes out her sniper and start aiming. She then snipe don couple of them. Lucien jumps out and starts firing his duo pistols. The lady drops down on the ground with fear as the gunshots start firing away. Lucien comes and helps the lady up as his partners giving cover fire.
“Hey lady, ya alright? You would have been in deep trouble if we weren’t here in time. Are you hurt anywhere?” Lucien asks.
“I am fine. Just a scratch here and there but I will live.” The lady says as she reveals her face to Lucien.
“YOU!! It cannot be. What are you doing here?” Lucien asks.
“What? You know this girl?” Sde asks.
“I am sorry. But do I know you?” the lady asks.
“This must be serious if Lucien doesn’t use his painful accent.” Devonia says.