[ShadowX]

When the jedi had to fight the sith in a war! their was so meny deaths in that war..the jedi tryed their best to stop the sith from takeing down the jedi council.. and in that war their was a jedi named Raziel. He was only a rank jedi. And he was able to get into the siths side of the battle. He brought some jedi with him to stop the sith lord.. but the sith lord was too strong he had killed all of the jedi with Raziel..and so Raziel had to fight the sith lord by himself and he was able to kill the sith lord but he had amost gotten killed... ever since that war their was peace to the galexy...and Raziel was given a rank council member... but he had desapered one day.. but after he despered there wasn't many jedi lift. but people had said they saw a few jedi in a bar but then they were gone..

it has been 15 years since that happend.

{part 1} To be continued!

[Raziel]

Interesting ;P looking forward for next chapter

[Fazz]

{part 1} To be continued!

erm, he hasnt finished first chapter yet...

[Raziel]

erm ty for your wisdom fazz I will truly take it to my heart. And Shadow keep good writing

[Fazz]

raz has a heart?!?!?!?!??!??!?!?!?

[Raziel]

raz has a heart?!?!?!?!??!??!?!?!?

it was sarcasm ^___^

[Fazz]

well that wasnt

[Raziel]

well that wasnt

ok ^__^ and please keep it on topic because this is shadows Story section and dont want to make him upset . ^__^ keep up good writing Shadowx

[ShadowX]

thanks raziel.. and i was gonna say something about keeping on the topic XD but i guess i dont have to say that now.

[Greed]

Nice story

[ShadowX]

One day there was a man he was on a ship headed to a planet. His name was Kakashi he was ordered to watch for attacks on the ship with his partner Sarah. Then they saw something on the radar. Kakashi and Sarah ran to the captain. but when they got there the ship was already under
attack.Kakashi asked the captain. "Captain what should we do? The ship is being attacked." the captain said, "Can you see the ship who is attacking us? Sarah said, "No we don't see anything." Then the captain said to fire at anything you see that might be attack us. But when Sarah and Kakashi were at there posts the ship stopped being attacked. So Kakashi and Sarah waiting for something to happen. Later Sarah said I'm going to report to the captain that the ship has stopped being attacked. Kakashi said okay I'll be here waiting. While Sarah was gone Kakashi was feeling tired, and wanted to rest. He was going to bed. But then the ship went under attack again! By now the ship was breaking, before they could fire at who was attacking the ship. It was useless, almost the whole ship was destroyed. Kakashi got knocked out on hes way. Soon he woke up and he started to search for anyone alive. It looked like no one was alive. Then he remembered about Sarah. Kakashi started running through the ship. But most of the rooms on the ship were just a dead end. While he was running, he rain into a man in a coat. He couldn't see their face, but the way they looked he could tell it was no one he knew. He reached for his blaster but he'd lost it! The man said to him. "Ah, so we meet again Kakashi!"

too be continued!

{part 2 of chapter1}

[Greed]

Gj keep working on it

[ShadowX]

thanks Evil

[ShadowX]

Kakashi said "How do you know my name?"
"That doesn't matter right now. Follow me if you want to get out of here alive."
"Why should i follow you? I don't even know who you are"
"Since you don't trust me you might need this." He threw a gun to Kakashi. Kakashi picked up the gun and went to find Sarah. Once Kakashi ran to a other room. The man said to himself. "ah so this is the one!" Kakashi ran to the captains room. When he reached to the room he saw droids in the room. He shot them down, then he found the captain he ran to him and said "Captain are you alright?" But the captain was dead.
Kakashi couldn't find Sarah anywhere. Kakashi looked around the ship some more, but one part. The bottom of the ship he went down there and it was filled with droids!. Kakashi had bombs he threw some and started shooting the droids. Once it was over he looked around and he saw Sarah on the ground. He ran to her and said "Sarah! Are you okay?" It seemed she was knocked out. Then more droyds were coming Kakashi couldn't defend himself there were too many droids. He knew if he tried anything he would die. Then the man came down and took out a saber! And started to attack the droids. Kakashi was shocked! Of what the man had in his hand! Then the droids started to back away, then ran back to where they came from. Then the man put away his saber and said to Kakashi "Get the girl. We need to get out off of this ship.
"Why?"
"Theres a bomb in side the ship!" Kakashi grabed Sarah and they were on there way to a ship. Kakashi had to go with the man to live, but he didn't understand why he attack the droids to protected them. They got on another ship and went into space. They headed for a planet called coruscant. While they headed there Kakashi asked "Who are you? and why are we going to corusant?" the man said "You want to know my name? its Kenshin. And we are going to corusant because we are gonna have to do some important things there." "I don't even know whats going on can you tell me?" Kenshin didn't say anything back. But Kakashi didn't really trust Kenshin. After a while Kakashi was getting tired and fell asleep. Kakashi started wondering what would happen when he woke up?.

too be continued!

{part 3 of chapter 1}

[Kisame]

This is gettin good!!

[ShadowX]

sorry i have been busy. i will post a other part of the story soon

[Raziel]

cool story

[Fazz]

lol, its good, but in part of it u said rain instead of ran... lol

[NinjaSarah]

I likes it a lot!

[ShadowX]

i am really really sorry for not posting the next part for so long. but i have started to write the parts i think il be posting the next part maybe sometime soon i hope. but anyway i hope you guys like the story .

[Wolferion]

Mainly keep it going =) ( I understand you with being busy and trying to write a chapter. Myself have the same ) . Good luck and.. Get the another chapters in here Interested in it, realy

[Kakashi.Archive]

Nice, keep going. God so many stories to keep up with, im going to go insane.

[ShadowX]

lol maybe when i write a few next parts il ask for it to be sticky. so ppl can see it . or if i am lucky enough someone will do it on their own to make it sticky XD.