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 #172799  by deathscyth
 
So, I've been struggling mentally again lately and decided to write a song about it in hopes that it would help my mental state. I thought I'd share it with you all. I considered posting a vocal on YouTube but decided against it. Let me know what you think. I also labeled the sections.

(Verse 1)
In the quiet of the night, where shadows gently fall,
A heart beats softly, barely making a call.
Loneliness surrounds, in the silence it’s so loud,
Seeking just one soul, who can lift this heavy cloud.

(Chorus)
I’m reaching out, can you hear me now?
In the darkness, I am lost somehow.
Hold me close, don’t let me go,
In your arms, I want to know.

(Verse 2)
The days blend into nights, a blur without a fight,
Hoping for a dawn, where the sun can shine so bright.
In the mirror, I can see, someone I don’t know,
A stranger in my skin, feeling all alone.

(Chorus)
I’m reaching out, can you hear me now?
In the darkness, I am lost somehow.
Hold me close, don’t let me go,
In your arms, I want to know.

(Bridge)
Every tear that falls, is a silent plea,
For someone to hold, to finally see me.
Whisper words of hope, show me I belong,
In this fragile world, where I’ve felt so wrong.

(Chorus)
I’m reaching out, can you hear me now?
In the darkness, I am lost somehow.
Hold me close, don’t let me go,
In your arms, I want to know.

(Outro)
So I’m reaching out, in this final hour,
Hoping for a touch, a hand with gentle power.
Save me from the night, bring me to the light,
In your love, make everything alright.
 #172806  by Sakito
 
Nice DS! :o To me, the melody I pictured in my mind sounds like acoustic guitars with a nylon lead; while a violin has some subtle inclines.