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 #162711  by Atsila
 
Oh yellow rose you glisten in the sun taking upon the radiant beauty only to go unnoticed by someone. Your beauty shines across the ground causing your smile to glow and the the things around to blossom, but a tear can be found flowing from within. The inside feels withered and heavy but the outside shines through like a glass case letting nothing from within get seen by those around you.
Yellow rose you look so heavenly but feel as though you are burden and worn from within. The outside is tough while the inside is delicate. How much longer yellow rose can you take before you break? The steams are sturdy but the ground is shaky however you still stand tall and proud to be called a yellow radiant rose by those around you while you do not seem to notice that yourself. Your shy and want to turn away however it is the light that keeps you happy while the darkness inside still lingers.
Yellow rose may you grow into a mature and happy rose and not find yourself withering within the past knowing that once was is now faded vastly into dark and taken out of sight.
The night is long the day is short but your so elegantly glittering with delight only to be sadden by the shadow of the past. Like a cloud of black smoothering dust the past lingers and clouds and seeks to remove the light as you whither in darkness haunted from the light as memories flood your roots but cannot shape your future.
Poem a wrote after the fact kinda hard to believe in a blink your gone. Its the silence I deal with daily but its the silent memories that brings back the times when some things should have been said and forgiveness sought to us both. Time is short time is long however we are never the keepers of time we are only part of the time which is to cherish what time we have not dwell on the time we lost. But it is the lost time when we fought that lingers still knowing we said what can never be taken back only time in remembrance of the time from the past.
 #162913  by cf.Steak
 
This is beautiful, Jedi D! I would love to see more!
 #162914  by Primordial
 
Jedi D. wrote:Oh yellow rose you glisten in the sun taking upon the radiant beauty only to go unnoticed by someone. Your beauty shines across the ground causing your smile to glow and the the things around to blossom, but a tear can be found flowing from within. The inside feels withered and heavy but the outside shines through like a glass case letting nothing from within get seen by those around you.
Yellow rose you look so heavenly but feel as though you are burden and worn from within. The outside is tough while the inside is delicate. How much longer yellow rose can you take before you break? The steams are sturdy but the ground is shaky however you still stand tall and proud to be called a yellow radiant rose by those around you while you do not seem to notice that yourself. Your shy and want to turn away however it is the light that keeps you happy while the darkness inside still lingers.
Yellow rose may you grow into a mature and happy rose and not find yourself withering within the past knowing that once was is now faded vastly into dark and taken out of sight.
The night is long the day is short but your so elegantly glittering with delight only to be sadden by the shadow of the past. Like a cloud of black smoothering dust the past lingers and clouds and seeks to remove the light as you whither in darkness haunted from the light as memories flood your roots but cannot shape your future.
Poem a wrote after the fact kinda hard to believe in a blink your gone. Its the silence I deal with daily but its the silent memories that brings back the times when some things should have been said and forgiveness sought to us both. Time is short time is long however we are never the keepers of time we are only part of the time which is to cherish what time we have not dwell on the time we lost. But it is the lost time when we fought that lingers still knowing we said what can never be taken back only time in remembrance of the time from the past.
Very nice!
 #163549  by Atsila
 
I have several boxes full of poems I wrote over the years one of these days I will get them out.
 #163553  by MysticalPotato
 
This is very nice JD. Glad to see you posting again!