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 #116683  by Wind
 
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 #116685  by Uscari
 
God I love the way your piece plays with love and hatred. How your describing the mountain range of conflicting feelings and thoughts. What's probably best is that we see it in an outside perspective, how one watches the demolition in relationships and how explosive and damaging they can be as well as beautiful. And the outsider simply watches it all, but ever knowing they can never feel the heat and force the same way the lover's do. Bravo Wind :)

 #116780  by Wind
 
Thanks Phil :)