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 #115598  by Darth Rage
 
-yawns- Hey guys im back. first i want to say i will not be on the server as much since my laptop's internet connection will occasionaly bully me :( . But yes i am coming back for a little more fun on the server! :D

The other thing is that im wanting to know what you guys think so far on how im doing with a story based off of one of Valve's games on steam known as Half Life 2 that is in progress for creation. I am obviously not done since i had started like... 15 minutes ago. And i decided to stop and let my fingers rest. More will be added. But yes. i want to know if i should make a little more and if you like it so far or not. This should be finished by Friday or Wednesday. But most likely by Friday. I won't have so much time to work on this during the week itself due to some homework, and even studies because of my large thirst for historical knowledge lol :) .

Anyways, heres the link. AGAIN, ITS INCOMPLETE. If you dont remember why (you shouldn't ask that xD) then read the second paragraph. LINK:

http://www.gamefront.com/files/23732333 ... +Enemy.rar

EDIT: when a new chapter is complete, the whole chapter will be posted. stay tuned. im going to continue my work. for this, i will be making both versions readable in posts, as well as downloadable so you dont miss out. download will be updated when a chapter or two is complete. expect various under construction signs in this post. heres the prologue, stuff etc

For all fans of Valve's Half Life series and fans of Gmod.
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Table of Contents/Chapter Order

Chapter 1: Point Insertion
Chapter 2: "A Red Letter Day
Chapter 3: Route Kanal
Chapter 4: Water Hazard
Chapter 5: Black Mesa East
Chapter 6: "We don't go to Ravenholm"
Chapter 7: Highway 17
Chapter 8: Sandtraps, Chapter 9: Nova Prospekt
Chapter 10: Entanglement
Chapter 11: Anticitizen One
Chapter 12: "Follow Freeman!
Chapter 13: Our Benefactors
Chapter 14: Dark Energy.
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Prologue
The Citadel let out an alarm that could be heard from everywhere in City 17. Many citizens got scared. Barney caught up with Gordon and gave him his crowbar back. Barney: "Hey, I think you may have dropped this back in Black Mesa, around 20 years ago, right? Here!" Exclaimed Barney while handing Gordon the crowbar. Gordon rushed over to the next doorway and got the boards out of the way wit hhis crowbar and moved quickly to the next trainstation. An adventure, has begun.
Last edited by Darth Rage on Sun Sep 29, 2013 11:58 am, edited 2 times in total.

 #115600  by Mandalorian
 
I'd perfer you actually post the story here instead of making us having to download it. (It better have the boreallis >:O).

Btw, there is a theory that the next Half Life will be a portal/half life crossover, seeing how the Boreallis makes a reappearence.

 #115601  by Darth Rage
 
Mandalorian wrote:I'd perfer you actually post the story here instead of making us having to download it. (It better have the boreallis >:O).

Btw, there is a theory that the next Half Life will be a portal/half life crossover, seeing how the Boreallis makes a reappearence.
Ya, i have heard about the Boreallis being in HL3 or HL ep 3. but this is COMPLETELY HL2 based. what im saying, is its Half Life 2, but with alot of extra stuff. lastly, the reason why i used a download with ZIP is because i include images for fun. but yes i see what you are saying :) and my btw? i have no idea why, but im strangely obsessed with the GONG, GONG, GONG, GONG sound that the prisoner pods in the citadel make o_o

 #115603  by Clank
 
who?

 #115606  by Darth Rage
 
Clank wrote:who?
what do you mean who

 #115627  by Darth Rage
 
BEEP BEEP! -IMPORTANT- !PEEB !PEEB
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LISTEN UUUUP! because of their being 14 chapters im forcing myself to make a part two and part one. half of 14 is 7, so each part has 7 chapters.

 #115658  by Clank
 
each chapter has 7 chapters?

 #115676  by Darth Rage
 
Clank wrote:each chapter has 7 chapters?
ya it might sound overwhelming, but half of the 14 is 7. cause 7+7=14. chapter one is almost complete. wait.... what? lemme see..
EDIT: I dont know what you mean, i know i said something like that, but its not in the posted topic!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!!!!?!?!?!? i read it 3 times and i didnt see anything like that