[spyder]

(i thought id give this a go, coz its might make an Okish story, if any1 likes/dislikes it etc, all coments welcome ^^, and here we go)

Chapter One : In The Beginning.


A shabby looking man with jet black hair stood at a bar, periodically looking at a wrist watch and tapping his feet.
Without a noise a cloaked figure entered the room walking up to him, he sighed a breath of relief grinning widely.
"You took your sweet time huh?" he said in a hushed voice, trying to sound stern.
"At least i came, your message wasn’t very informative, write it in a hurry?" replied a female voice from the shadows under the hood.
"This is important" snapped the man, in an irritated tone. "Stop picking holes and take off those rags"
The female figure chuckled slightly, and dropped the rags to the floor. Underneath the robes, stood an elegant woman, tall and thin, an aurora of power seemed to be emmited from her.
"Always so happy, Gotenks" she said, with a wide smile hugging him tightly.
"Well you know.." mumbled the man, turning slightly pink in the cheeks.
"Now, can you please tell me why you dragged me all the way out here"
"No, i cant tell you, but ill show you. Come with me" Gotenks said, waving his hand for her to follow him.
They both walked for some time, not talking, occasionaly Gotenks would stop and close his eyes, then alter his direction slightly, and continue to walk.
After what seemed like hours of marching under the hot sun Gotenks suddenly stopped and pointed to his left.
"In there" he said softly "yes, he's in there."
The female figure looked in that direction, and saw only a small crumbling old house.
"Are you sure?" She asked hesitantly "This wouldn't be the first time you've managed to get lost."
The man stared at her.
"Im sure."
Then without another word, he strolled up the the hut, and opened the door slowly, poking his head inside. The woman followed suit.
A noise echoed around the room, and both the figures tensed.
The female figure hand droped to her waist, ready to grasp her saber hilt. Gotenks shook his head at her, and she relaxed slghtly, still keeping her hilt visible. She of all people knew only to well how it could bring fear into the hearts of possible attackers.
From out of the gloom a shape walked into a small patch of light.
It was a boy, no older than 13 or 14 holding a stick in one of his hands. At the sight of this, the woman relaxed, and Gotenks streched out his arms as a sign of peace.
"Calm down" said Gotenks slowly "We aren't here to hurt you"
The boy kept his stick at his side, grasping the base of it with thin dirty fingers.
The female inhaled gently, and closed her eyes, facing towards the boy.
"You feel it?" Said Gotenks
"Yes, its strong in him, but doesn't feel controlled."
Gotenks nodded in agreement.
The two retreated into a corner and began to talk fast, as if arguing in hushed voices.
The boy watched them, cocking his head slightly, eyes never moving from the figures faces.
After a lengthly discussion the female nodded a few times and sighed.
She walked over to the boy slowly with a forced grin on her face.
"Do you live here?" she asked, with a kind, understanding tone of voice.
"Sometimes, If i cant find anywhere else to go" replied the boy in an unconvincing brave voice.
"Alone?"
"Yes, for a while now, but i can look after myself, i dont need friends, i dont need anyone!" Snapped the boy quickly.
The woman stared at him. The longer she stared the more the boy felt calmer. They both stood there for a few seconds, locked eyes, neither of them blinking.
All of a sudden the woman broke into a wide smile, and ruffled the boys hair.
"I like your spirit kid" Then the turned to Gotenks. "Your sure im ready Tenksy?"
"Don't call me that" replied Gotenks "And yes your ready, teach him all you know Ivy."

(more comming soon, btw i dont know if this will make sense to any1 who didnt know ivy and tenksy)

[spyder]

(dont know if u guys liked that or not, but ive started now so i might aswell continue)

Chapter Two : The Wolf And The Cub.

Hours had passed since Gotenks and Ivy found the boy at the shack, and the trio where now marching back in the direction of the bar. Gotenks walked ahed, occasionaly checking a datapad for news, and the direction they where heading in. While Ivy, who had not spoken since they started their journy, walked along side the boy, keeping her light blue eyes trained on him, studying his movements.
After some time Ivy stopped walking with the boy and moved up to Gotenks.
"Why am i training this one?" Inquired Ivy. " Surely the council would prefer you to do it, after all your my old master."
"The council will not grant me more padawans Ivy, they say that i alreayd have my hands full." said Gotenks distractedly, his dark brown eyes scanning the surrounding area for any signs of danger.
"Well they may have a point there Tenks" Said ivy quickly, not catching the comment befor it left her mouth.
Gotenks mearly glared at her and grunted.
The boy, who had been drifitng in and out of day dreams, suddenly straightened up and trotted up to ivy, pulling on her sleave.
"What are u going to train me to do?" asked the boy, eyes shining with cureosity.
Ivy looked down at they boy, who hadn't said much the entire time she had walked with him.
"You have a big mouth, for some one so small and grubby." she said as she smirked down at him.
The boys face broke into a wide smile and he laughed. Ivy was taken aback by this. One Minute this boy was walking along slowly, kicking the dust, and the next he was full of life, talkign with her as if they had been life long friends.
"I havnt officialy told the council i'll be training him Gotenks." said ivy queity "Should we keep it from him until they have aproved?"
"There will be no need to inform them, they know of his existence, and that i wished for him to be one of my own, but as i can't do that, im sure they will count on you doing it instead."
Ivy nodded and turned to the boy.
"Im going to train you to become a jedi." she said holding his shoulders and lowering her self to his level.
The boys smile faded and a stunned look swept across his face. He stood there for a while searching Ivy's features for any sign of a lie or trickery. Then once he was satisfied he opened his mouth and tried to talk.
"Im.. Going...To be....Be a jedi?" he stuttered.
Ivy nodded and grinning stood up.
"But before we do any of that young man, we'll have to get you cleaned up, and dressed acordingly."
After Ivy had straightened up the trio once again continued off in the direction of the bar, Gotenks still scanning the surroundings, Ivy walking alongside her new padawan, feeling very pleased with herself, and the boy, jogging slightly to keep up with them, grinning from ear to ear.



The sun was low in the sky as the group entered the bar, and Gotenks called for a ship to pick them up. Once inside they sat down at a table in the corner and ordered a few drink, which ivy talked Gotenks into paying for.
As the trio drank Ivys attention turned once again to the boy.
"Whats your name boy? I've just realised that you didnt tell us it"
"My name? Oh! Spyder, people call me Spyder" replied the boy in a surprised voice, as if he had never been asked this question before.
"An unusual name" noted Ivy " Well this is Gtenks" She said gesturing towards him. Gotenks waved his arm in a half friendly manner.
"And im Ivy, they call me EvilIvy"
The boys eyes narrowed.
"I thought jedi where good. I've never heard of an evil one before."
Ivy chuckled and shook her head.
"Im only evil to those who have wronged me, or my friends"
"So do as your told!" snapped Gotenks cutting in.
Ivy clipped him around the ear with her hand.
Soon the ship arived, it circled the bar once or twice and set down just a little way outside it.
The trio boarded it and it took off almost imediatly.
"Where are we going" Spyder squeeked exitedly.
"I cant tell you the name of the place, or what system its in, but basicaly we are going to the base of operations for the Knight Reborn"
Spyder looked up at her eyes glazed over.
"Its a place where jedi, or padawans of the jedi in the order, go to train and to confer with the council if needs be" Said gotenks once again cutting into the conversation.
Spyder, still looking at Ivy whispered
"Is that where your going to train me, Miss Ivy?"
Both Gotenks and ivy laughed.
"Don't call me miss ivy, it makes me feel old, call me Ivy, and nothing else."
Spyder nodded "Yes mis... Yes Ivy" he said with a grin, going to sit down.
"Oh No!" Gotenks burst out "Your not sitting anywhere in my ship, until you;ve had a shower"
He pointed down the corridor handing Spyder a towel and a set of padawan robes.
After a short time Spyder emerged, wearing a new set of cream colour robes, and holding his old clothes in a bundle. He set them down under a chair and jumped into it, strapping himself in.
"Do i get a lightsaber?!" he said bouncing up and down in his chair.
Ivy nodded and he grinned even wider than before looking out of the windows of the ship at the stars passing by. All of a sudden a shutter closed over the windows and Gotenks appear wagging a finger at Spyder.
"Now now, we cant have u knowing all our secrets to soon can we?"
Spyder shrugged and settled down for a sleep in his chair.
As he closed his eyes he imagined himself, meditating in a room with his new master Ivy, constructing his own lightsaber, Training to use it with Ivy. Soon his imagination began to wander further. He was in a great battle himself and Ivy fighting side by side dipatching their foes with easy, he imagined himself growing up, as a powerful jedi, master of the force, he imagined hismelf as the most powerful jedi, a red auror surrounding him, and a grim look on his face.
Suddenly Ivy tappen him on the shoulder. He woke with a start and looked at her calm, pale blue eyes. She didnt asy anything, she just smiled and gripped his shoulder firmly. Her grip was tight, but at the same time kind. Spyder smiled back and closed his eyes, drifting into a calmer sleep, not dreams of power, or glorly, mearly sleeping, queitly and peacefully in his chair.



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[spyder]

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Chapter Three: Home At Last

It was Mid morning by the time the shuttle entered a platents atmosphere and Gotenks finaly decided to lower the window screens.
As the cold metal slabs decended spyder gazed out over a relativly small planet. Although small in size the planet was bristling with lift. He gazed over feilds of green which at first he thought where vast expanses of grass, butas time passed he realised they where trees, huge trees reaching up to the sky, growing so closley together that the ground, perhaps many hundreds of metres underneith them, could not be seen.
After the initial impact of this sigh had passed over him, he looked forward at where the ship was heading, and noticed a temple built into the side of a cliff face. The temple intself was built to look like the cliff, but as they moved closer he saw tiny figures of jedi, and ambasidors from other worlds that must have come to request the help of the jedi.
As he was still gazing at the structure Ivy and Gotenks stood up, strapping on harnises to themselves.
Gotenks held one out to Spyder.
"Hurry up and put it on!" he said irritably, reciving another swift slap on the head from Ivy.
"Aren't we going to land?" asked spyder with a shakey voice.
"Have you looked outside, there isn't anywhere TO land" mumbled Gotenk, rubbing the back of his head.
Ivy lowered herself to spyder's eye level again.
"We're just going to drop down to the temple, its faster this way. I'll go with you if you like."
Spyder nodded and ivy strapped him into her harness. Once all three had been secured to a rop the cargo door opened and gotenks jumped out, sliding quickly but in a contolred mannor down the rope.
Ivy walked to the edge of the ship looking over.
"Hold on tight" she bellowed as the wind tried to whip her from the ship.
Without another word she jumped. Spyder closed his eyes against the tidal wave of cold air rushing past him, and all of a sudden it stopped, his feet where on solid land and Ivy was unstrapping her harness.
The ship left theme there at the foot of the great temple.
At once the two jedi started walking up the stone steps to the temple. Spyder struggled out of his harness and followed them. Once inside the temple he realised that it must extend far back into the cliff it was built into. The main hall was at least 100 metres high and 200 metres across each side, there was a bustle of people comming and going from the temple, and Spyder had to stay close between Ivy and Gotenks just to aviod beig swept away by the crowd.
The three pushed through the swarm of people towads a narrow stair case, as the got to the bottom of it Spyder noticed a gaurd. Gotenks nodded at the gaurd, who smilled letting them pass and they clambered up the stairs to a small corridor, once they had entered it Gotenks stopped.
He looked at the other two.
"I'll be heading off this way now." He gestured down the corridor. "I've got a meeting with the council. You two might want to get started on your training"
Ivy nodded, grabbing Spyder by the wrist she dragged him off in the other direction, and out to a small training courtyard.
Ivy strolled in quickly and stood in the center, she turned and looked at spyder.
"We can start training now, considering you got a good long rest on the way here." she spoke hurridly as she was removing her long robes and looking up at the sun in the sky. "Its about mid day. So we've got a good 12 hours training before u get any rest again."
These words hit Spyder like a cannon ball in the stomach. Twelve hours! Was she joking. Some of his surprise must have shown on his face, no longer than a second after he had thought this was ridicuolous Ivy said in a strict voice.
"Well, you didnt think becoming a jedi would be easy did you?"
Spyder shook his head.
"Can we start training then?" he asked, trying to sound enthusiastic.
Ivy grinned and unclipped two saber hilts from her belt.
"Ever seen or used one of these?" she asked him spinning them in her palms.
Spyder shook his head. Ivy ignited on of the sabers and waved it casualy in the air.
"Every jedi needs one" she said as spyder examined the fine beam of purple light that was being emmited from the hilt.
She turned it off her saber and clipped it to her belt.
"Here." she said, unclipping the other saber and throwing it to Spyder. The hilt hit him on the side of the chest and dropped to the floor. "Try to take care of it" she sighed shaking her head.
He fumbled with it. picking it up from the floor and wiping dust from it. He held the hilt close to his face examining ever detail. The cold metal, with a dark black grip and a small blue switch on one side.
"Now be carefull, normaly we don't give sabers out just like that. but your my first padawan and i don't want to have to wait weeks for you to construct your own."
Spyder nodded at her still in awe that this weapon was his. He looked at Ivy.
"Can i turn it on?"
She nodded and stepped back.
He pressed the switch up and immediatly a thin streak of dark blue light erupted from the end of the hilt. The weight of the weapon increased aswell and he fumbled to hold it up right, dropping it low down at his wais, and gripping it tightly with two hands.
"Its heavy!" he gasped hoisting it back up.
"Yeh, they all weigh differently, but over time you'll get used to it and won't even notice the weight." said Ivy casualy.
He stood for a few seconds, eyes wandering up the blade and back down, then he waved it gently in the air, listning to the soft whooshing sound it made.
Ivy stepped up to him, holding her own hilt in her hands, igniting it as she moved forward. For a split second he thought she was going to attacking him, and he felt ready to lunge forward at her with the delicate weapon, but once he saw the smile on her face he relaxed.
She stood next to him, showing him how to hold the saber correctly. Explaning that it would enable him to hit harder and fast, and also he couldnt drop it. She then began to show him how to adjust the position of his body, according to how he wished to attack or defend. The hours passed as the two stood in the courtyard. Ivy showing Spyder how to do basic moves, and to feel for oponents movements, not to watch them with his eyes.
She then went on to explain that there where three types of basic stance he could use with a single saber, which where fast, medium and strong, and she went over the essentials of all them. As she got to medium she side tracked slighty, describing its quick movement and how it could easily better the other styles, she then shook her head andcarried on in a more controled mannor.
After thair first lesson Ivy showed spyder back to a small room that had a bed in it with a small bathroom through a door at the end. Here she bid him good night and headed off to find Gotenks.
Spyder layed down in his new bed and closed his eyes running through things he had been taught in his head. He placed his saber hilt on the floor next to his bed, and tired from the day of training, he drifted into a deep sleep.

The next morning he was woken at dawn by Ivy hammering on the door and telling him to 'get his lazy butt out of bed'.
He walked with her to the same training area and they started on the second day of training. Ivy was teaching him more complicated moves now, and had started getting her own saber out to teach him how to block simple attacks. This method of training kept him on his toes. If he got something wrong repeeatedly ivy would slap the back of his head and mutter.
"Do it right next time"


The days turned into weeks and the weeks into months. The same routine each day, a morning of training, then a break, then more training. The lessons varied from saber combat, to difusing situations with out combat, and to using the force as an aid in battles.
As the seasons changed Spyder grew more confident and stronger with a saber. Ivy and himself would often spar for hours at a time matching eachother blow for blow, though he often thought that she was holding back her full power.


After around 6 months at the academy, training every day with Ivy, Spyder was waiting for her at the courtyard. She hadn't woken him thismorning and she was late for their lesson.
Suddenly she entered the area, with a broad man walking behind her.
"Is this the one Ivy?" he boomed in a deep rumbling voice.
"Yes Dennis, this is Spyder." replied Ivy
Spyder grinned nervously at the stranger. Why had Ivy canceled his lesson for this?
"Well lets get on with it then!" snapped Dennis. "Havn't got all day you know!"
Spyder jumped. Did Ivy mean for him to fight this strange man?
Ivy looked at Spyder noticing his shocked expression.
"Dennis is here to watch us today." She explained slowy, and calmly. "Hes going to tell us wether your ready to be an official Jedi yet."
Spyder's shocked look didn't leave him. A jedi? Him? he hadn't been with the academy that long and didn't feel ready?
"You'll be fine" said ivy smiling kindly. "Lets begin."
The two began training as usual. Not sparring like that would normaly, but going over basic attack cycles, and how to counter them. They then moved on to diplomacy and how to handle volatile situations. And finaly they sat down and Spyder had to demonstrate his ability to controle the force. Which he did with difficulty, most of their training was lightsaber based, he very rarely used to force.
After about 6 hours of testing Dennis stepped forwards andbegan to murmer to Ivy, out of earshot of Spyder. He stood and watched them, thinking that his force controle had let him down.
Dennis stepped forward with a blank expression on his face.
"Spyder isnt it?" he growled
Spyder nodded
"I'll never remember that, how bout just Spy?"
Spyder nodded again, not really thinking about it. What did this have to do with his trials?
"Well, anyway." he said catchig himself and trying to sound official. "You passed your trials. You saber skills are well eveloped, but if i where you." He winked at Spyder." I'd work on your non combat skills a bit more."
With that he turned and walked away down the dark corridor.
Ivy was grinning at Spyder, who still had a pale shocked expression.
"Well done" she muttered, trying to hide a giggle. "You can have today off, but don't get lazy, your not getting away from me now. Young Jedi."
She the jogged down the corridor after Dennis.
Spyder stood in the courtyard, listning to the sound of his own shallow breathing. He was a Jedi. He shook his head and gazed up and the light blue sky.
He was a Jedi in the order of the Knights Reborn.

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[spyder]

(Ok another bit coz im bored. Comments please guys, im seeing that some ppl are reading it but no1 has said what they like/dont like about it.)


Chapter Four : All But Blood.

IT had been a few days since Spyder had learned he had been officialy titled a Jedi, and many people had patted him on the back and congradtulated him. Ivy had also stuck to here word, he had not had any more care free days since he passed his trial, and training was now getting harder.
Ivy had moved onto teching him the more complicated countering techniques, and had started pointing out that his footing was all wrong.
They had also moved on to weilding two sabers at once, which was harder than it sounded. During their first lesson Spyder managed to cut one of the saber hilts he was weilding in half while trying out an attack. Thankfully snce that incident Ivy had seemed reluctant to let him use two sabers again, and had reverted back to standard training.

One morning in mid june when, like clockwork, Ivy woke Spyder up hammering on the door. He openes it and preparied to follow her out to their regular training yard. Absent mindedly he left his room ywaning and headed towards the courtyard. All of a suddend he had a sharp pain in his left ear. Spinning around he sawIvy holding her hand at head high, her palm out flat. Again she had slapped him around the back of the head, though this time he didn't think he deserved it.
"What was that for!" He hissed, rubbing thebaack of his head. "We havn't even started yet! How can i have made a mistake!?"
Ivy smiled Evily.
"We arn't going that wasy today." She said happy with herself " I feel like a change of scenery."
With out another look at Spyder, who was still rubbing his head, she span on her heel and walked the other way down the corridor. Spyder followed her, sulking and dragging his feet.
As he walked he though how long it had been since he had been down this corridor. It was the only way into the main temple, and as he had no reason to leave the comfort of his home, he had not ventured outside the temple for sometime.
They walked straight down the corridor, past the door gaurds who let them out with out question, and into the main hall.
The hall was as usual filled with people. Spyder thought that most of these people didnt deserve the help of the jedi and had no reason to be here.
They forced a narrow path through hthe crowd and eventualy got outside.
As they stepped out into the sun Ivy looked around.
"I had sent for a ship to pick us up. Looks like its late" She murmered. "Oh well. looks like we can walk."
She set off with a grin.
"Walk?" Spyder said in a horrified voice. "In this heat, u want to walk through the jungle" He paused for a second "Where are we going anyway?"
"None of your business" said Ivy, sticking her tongue out and taunting him.
He glared at her, she remained smiling. Ivy knew that Spyder liked her really, and was only grump because of the heat.
They headed down the steps until a danse jungle foliage greated them. Curled roots of trees streched across the floor, with patches of thick bushy grass inbetween them. The roots grew along the floor out from the base of huge trees. The trees grew so close togheter they where like a wall of wood that had grown up to prevent any form of land access to the temple.
Spyder looked left. the trees seemed to carry on as far as he could see, no gaps in them, not big enough to fit a person through anyway. They he looked right. The same sigh greated him. A long line of thick trees like a giants fence as far as he could see.
This sigh didnt seem to bother Ivy. She had been brushing the moss from one of the trees and whistling to herself.
After the moss was brushed off spyder noticed a small emblem carved into one of the trees. Ivy placed her hand on this and the tree split, revealing a small doorway, just big enough for one person to walk through. She stepped through it and spyder followed.
The inside of the jungle was as welcoming as the outside. The leaves from the trees cut out all light, not one ray was shining from the canopy over head, the only light source was the narrow doorway behind them. Vines hung from braches, they twisted and turned, lazily between the branches of trees. At places the vines connected and had knotted around eachother formong what looked like natural hammoks.
All of a sudden the doorway they had came through snapped shut and they where plunged into darkness. This sudden change put spyder on edge and he instictivly gripped his saber hilt. He heard Ivy sigh and laugh. She ignited her saber holding it infront of her as a source of light. Spyder followed suit, his eyes still darting around the jungle for signs of movement. Often as the light moved over different patches of the undergrowth it cast long shadows around them, these shadows seemed to move and sent shivers down Spyder's spine.
They walked in silence, the only sounds where the soft crunching of debris under their feet and and occasional rustle from a bush or plant near by as the faint rays of light passed over them.
Eventualy Ivy stopped in a small circular clearing and turned to face Spyder.
"Why are we out here" he grumbled at her.
"To train of course, why else?"
"Why couldn't we train in the training yard!"
She slapped him around the ear again and he growled angrily.
"The training yards to exposed, i want to show you something secret"
Spyder's anger left him at once, what could this secret be?
"Whats the secret?" he asked hesitantly. He wasn't sure of this, if Ivy was showing him it in private, it was probably something the council wouldnt aprove of.
"Its a new saber techinique" she said with a grin " well actualy its MY new saber technique."
"Whats it called" asked Spyder, his doubts forgotted, eager to improve his skills.
"Its called.. Tw..Y.. Stl..." muttered Ivy, turning slightly red in the face.
"What was that?" he asked
"Its called..." Ivy Sighed " Twisted Evil Yellow Style." SHe looked away from him as she said it.
Spyder burst out laughing and recived a sharp, and rather harder than usual, slap around the head.
Ivy glared at him and took up a strange stance, she gesutred for spyder to prepair for an attack.
He stanced ready for her, still giggling inside his head.
Almost as soon as he had prepaired for the attack it came, hitting him hard and fast, forcing his saber up and leaving him defenceless. He struggles to regain control and did just intime to recive another lightning fast blow across the base of the saber beam, forcing it down low and leaving his head open to attack. He went to move his saber up and protect himself but before he could, his eyes met with a long thin purple beam of light, that was poised inches away from his face.
Ivy moved the beam from out of his face and helped him to his feet.
"Not laughin now huh?" she threw him a dirty look.
He stood still, still stunned from the attacks.
"Well what are you waiting for?" She added " You want to learn how to do it or not?"
Spyder's words caught in his throat.
"Me learn to.. what.. now.. Yes of course?!"
Ivy then proceeded to show him how to stand and how to hold the saber to maximise for speed. Spyder soon noticed that although the strength and speed of this technique was great, it was also vunerable to counter attacks and the grip on the saber hilt made it easy to drop it.
They proceeded to train long into the night util spyder had the basic of the technique.
Ivy had said this was the only time she would do this, and after that night he was on his own to develop the skill further.
They walked out of the woods sometime after midnight, and headed back to the temple.
They headed back up the temple steps into the main hall. Which to Spyders surprise was still heaving with people. Once they had battled their way back through the swarm of people they headed into the temple precincts.
Ivy waved good night to spyder and left him outside his room.
He walked inside slowly, weiry from the hard days training and collapsed on the bed, drifitng into an use easy sleep. He had an uncomfortable dream in which when he got his saber techniques wrong, Ivy Would chase him around and around the courtyard slapping him in the back of the head.


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Chapter Five : The Knight.

The next morning Ivy was banging on Spyders door as suaul, telling him to get up and come outside. He rolled over and looked at the small clock he kept on a table next to his saberhilt. It was 4:30 in the morning! He must have only been asleep a few hours.
He stood up slowly and staggerd to the door, opening it and looking at ivy yawning.
"What is it Ivy?" He groaned "Its too early to train"
Ivy slapped him around the head. He was to tired to flinch or notice it.
A person standing next to Ivy Coughed gently, Spyder looked up only just notcing the stranger.
"Just come outside" Hissed Ivy.
Spyder nodded and closed the door, meaning to get changed. His room was a mess, and all of the very few clothes he had where dirty. He opened a draw at the bottom of his bed side table that he had never used. To his surprise there was a set of dark blue robes in this draw. Seeing as it was all he had got it quickly changed into it. Oly after putting it on he noticed it had a hood on it, which he kept down as it was an annoyance if it was up.
He strode over to the door and opened it, stepping outside.
"What are u wearing Spy" sighed Ivy
"Its all I've got left" He mumbled, turning scarlet and wishing he had the hood up.
"Lets go then" said Ivy, and she started walking to their training are. Spyder noticed that the stranger did to, and that he wasn't talking much.
Once they ahd reached the courtyard Ivy stopped and took out her saber hilt but didnt ignite it. So did the stranger. Spyder simply stared at them.
"Well?" asked Ivy impatiently. "We've been training for your Knight trails for some time now. Don't You want to take them?"
"Knight Trials!" He squeeked, his heart sudenly pounding in his throat.
Ivy nodded and the stranger grinned slighty, pushing a lock of long brown hair from his face.
"What do I have to do?" asked spyder nervously.
"Not to much" replied Ivy "You have to dis arm both of us." She pointed from herself to the stranger. " At least once out of two fights."
Spyders legs turned to jelly.
"Oh and then you have a test on your force skills and tactical knowledge" she added casualy.
"Is.. Is that all huh?" said Spyder in a whisper.
Ivy beamed an nodded.
"So lets begin"
Herself and the stranger Ignited their sabers. Ivys purple one glowing brightly infront of her still grinning face, and the strangers dull green saber held low down at his waist, his face constricted in concentration.
This wouldn't be easy, thought Spyder, igniting his saber.
The two moved like water, effortlessly as a team, stricking mostly one at a time but never leaving an opening, sometimes they would both attack in short bursts and force spyder back quickly, leaving him panting for his breath at the end of the barrage.
As the battle lengthened spyder soon got the hang of blocking their attacks, which althogh fast, where in some order, and each set was the same as the last, within a few swings.
Around 10 minutes into the battle he made his first move, ducking under one of Ivys higher swipes. Before he knew it he was behind the attackers and they where as shocked as he was with his move, he took advantage of the situation triping ivy and making her drop her saber. Now it was just a matter of the stranger, who still had a look of strict concentration on his face, and who was also holding his saber much higher now.
Not willing to get trapped in another group of attacks spyder charged at him his saber tight in his hands.
The two comabtants sabers clashed and became a blur, both concentrating not on thinking, but on feeling for the next place to block, or the next opening to strike at.
Spyder's arms tired quickly and his attacks slowed, this left him open to a blast of force energy which pushed him back into a wall, he slumped down it and hit the floor, dropping his saber.
Ivy was at his side immediatly.
"Are you ok?" she asked
Spyder nodded angry with himself.
The stranger walked over to him, holding out an arm to hgelp him up. He took it and was hoisted to his feet.
Ivy struck the stranger around the head.
"That was too hard Templar! You know the rules!" she growled at him.
Templar laughed, and in a calm, cool voice.
"Yes, i geuss it was a bit. Im sorry youngling"
Spyder met his eyes.
"Im not a youngling" he said, maintaning eye contact with him.
"Of course not, i apologise again, no youngling could fight like that. Shallw e proceed with the second duel?"
Spyder looked at ivy who nodded, then the two stood side by side again and ignited their sabers.
Spyder did the same. 'This time he would win' he told himself, and with that he charged at the two.
The sabers clashed and bounced of eachotehr as spyder sped past them using the force to aid his speed slightly. he span on his heel and shot back in the oposite direction, going in for another quick attack. He was aiming for Templar but met Ivy's saber in his path, he blocked it and was left unprotected. Templar was moving in for a shot. He summoned ever ounce of energy in his body foreceing it out of his left hand, the blast of force that issued force was enough to crumble a small house. Templar was hit hard in the gut and sent spinning back into a wall which cracked as he hit. He dropped to the floor in a heap breathing heavily, his eyes closed.
Ivy was now infront of Spyder grinning. She winked at him. He noticed her hands switch on her saber hilt and her stance alter slightly. This was not good, spyder thought.
She leapt forward like a cat pouncing on a mouse. She landed blow after blow on Spyders blade each one pushing him back further and further. It was all he could do to stop himself falling over.
He concentrated. What was the weakness of this style? Of course! It was vunerable to counter attacks.
He allowed Ivy to hit his saber a few more times, counting the time between each blow. It was only a half a second of so between each hit, the timing of this would have to be perfect.
Ivy moved in for another blow. NOW he though. Instead of meeting her saber with his. he turned it off and jumper sidwaysm flattening his body in the air, he corkscrewed over the blade. Ivy was not expecting this and the over swung watching him glide gracefully over her beam.
He landed on his feet and instantly ignited his blade, Holding it close across Ivys face.
She looked stunned. Then she borke into a smile.
"Well done Spy" She said "Very well done indeed."

(Gtg now will add more soon)

[Darko]

I don't like it because its not realistic, where am I? Wheres Blademaster? God.

Its like Harry Potter, Ron and Hermione. You cant just write about one of them.

(You being Hermione btw )