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 #8937  by Lessa
 
Great! Love it =D hopefuly you post another chapter soon!

Such a peaceful place that Shinsen :)...
eeek Ivy has a courage lol

 #8960  by Hime
 
“Okay, people. I think we are not alone on this trip. My ship detects a huge number of cruisers roaming around the space near Shinsen. My bet these are the non-force users.” Raven says.
“Don’t worry! Our ships can throw them off. With speed, finally I can really get this bird to fly on its fullest.” EvilIvy says.
“Well then, good luck on that. I have contacted Sparky and his team about these abnormal movements around here. That’s better than finding leads and such.” Nintendo says.
“Well, let’s out it this way, these guy is going to see us. But still they cannot just fire at us. Then again, I am sure some of those troops are already land on the planet doing their things. Whatever it is, we need to find out, and fast.” EvilIvy says.
Then, the two ships charge right into the planet.

Tricky and the other HIME are helping in the Orphanage. HIME comes across a little girl who always sits under a tree, or in some corner. She rarely speaks to other people except Nako and Loking. Every time HIME tries to get close and talk to her, the girl just runs away to Nako or Loking. The other thing is that, people in the Orphanage already noticed that HIME and Nako look so much alike besides the hair style. Everyone got used to that after awhile.
Everyday is the same for everyone. They wake up; help prepare breakfast for the children. Then go wake up the children. After breakfast, they will instruct the children to clean up after themselves. Tricky takes a position as drill master. He teaches the children on how to defend themselves. He sometimes like to showoff his skills but swinging his huge sword around. The children first were cautious about him, after a little while they are all playing with him. The problem for Tricky is that the children will start pulling on his robe. That actually made him trip and fall many times. HIME just helps the children at field work alongside with Nako. The back of the orphanage is a huge farm with a huge garden beside it. Nako and HIME will go out with the children and help them sow seeds on the field. She then teaches kids how to plant flowers. When lunch time comes, Loking will start serving food with his “kitchen crew”. Loking is a very good cook and his trains some children on cooking skills. Loking and Nako also teach the children on how read and write. It seems those two’s lives are devoted to look after these children. Everynight, when everyone’s asleep, Nako will start sowing back the tears of the children’s clothing. HIME decides to help Nako because she cannot stand Nako just keep working everyday and night like that. It took HIME some time to learn sowing but at least she finally got it.
“So, why don’t you go to sleep?” Nako asks.
“Well, please don’t laugh at me but I always have nightmares these days.” HIME answers.
“Oh? You want to talk it? Don’t worry! It is between you, me, the wall, and maybe this girl sleeping on my lap. ”
“Well it is like this. I saw myself sinking. I was sinking underwater or something. Then suddenly a light came towards me. I saw a dark room. A room full of monsters. They only have one eye, but the eye is so big and it is located right in the middle of their faces!” HIME says.
“That sounds bad. How often do you have them?” Nako asks.
“Well, almost every single night? Please do not ask my why I have those. I do not even remember I have encountered people or monsters like those before. But that room did look familiar to me.” HIME explains.
“I see.” Nako says. Then suddenly the girl who sleeps on Nako’s lap starts screaming.
“Oh no. She is having a night mare again.” Nako says. Nako holds the little girl up and start smoothing her. Then, the little girl quiets down after a little while.
“What’s wrong with her? I have seen her cling on to you or Loking all day long. Does she have some issues or something? I did try to talk to her once, but she ran away as soon as she saw my lightsaber. She ran away in fear.” HIME asks.
“Well, okay. I will tell you. This girl’s name is Kurino. She is one of the unlucky ones. I mean very unlucky ones. I found her on another planet during my travels with Loking. We found her wandering around like a living dead. We then decided to bring her back to Shinsen with the others.” Nako says.
“What happened? She watched her parents got blown to bits or something? There was a war going on. This kind of thing must be common.” HIME asks.
“It is something even worse. Her father died during the war fight the force users. Her mother was killed after the war by some force users.” Nako says.
“Force users? That’s just impossible! You found her in the non-force user realm right? How did her mother got kill by a force user? No force users would cross over. Like how did you know her mother was killed by a force user?” HIME asks.
“That is what confuses me as well. We found her walking in the street. She was dragging a huge black garbage bag behind her. The garbage bag was leaking with blood. Loking and I went over and take a look. We almost did not throw up our entire breakfast once we looked into the bag.” Nako says.
“So, what was in the bag?” HIME asks.
“Her mother’s chopped up remains. Still very fresh I might add. Kurino was forced to watch her mother being mutilated in front of her eyes. She was still in shock when I found her. All she was saying was a person with a metal rob that lights comes out from both ends. Loking and I gathered that it could be a staff lightsaber. We buried Kurino’s mother and we take her back here. She still has nightmares about her watching her mother killed in front of her.” Nako explains. HIME has her eyes open wide and her jaw drops. It seems she cannot believe what Nako has told her moments ago.
“By the force, how could someone do things like this? This is not war. This is called murder! Why did the officer or whatever that bastard’s rank had to kill Kurino’s mother?” HIME asks in rage. Nako made a sign to tell HIME to quiet down.
“I do not know. I do not even want to bring up this girl’s sad memories. This is too much for her. All I know that that person forced Kurino watch how he and his men cut her mother to piece alive. I cannot forgive such an act.” Nako says as she gets all fired up. HIME put up a sign to remind Nako to keep her voice down. Kurino just keeps on sleeping.

“Sir, there are two ships landed on the planet. They are force users.” An officer informs his commander.
“WHAT! How did they know of my plans? No matter, I guess we just have to move in for the kill just like the last time.” The commander grunts as he walks towards the window.
“But sir, we have no popularity on this planet. We cannot just charge in and expect everyone to listen to our commands. That would be difficult.” The officer explains.
“Who gives a damn about popularity? All you need is an iron grip then you are in business. If they chose not to listen to me, a great model to all people, they do not earn the right to live. Remember last time? Once my lightsaber tastes blood, everyone will fall before me and listen! Spare no one! Remember, I am a great leader. I am a great model to all! Care for an object lesson to clear that moronic head of yours?” the commander says as he slaps the officer in the face. Then the commander ignites his lightsaber staff and point at the officer’s neck.
“Yes, sir, all should learn from you. I realized my mistake for doubting you. I will do my job well.” The officer begs.
“Good.” The commander says as he slices off the officer’s head.
“Opps, even great models makes mistakes too! But, I am too busy and far more important to reflect on my actions. Well, Captain, we will land a landing party on Shinsen. We will sercure a place first then move on with the invasions of Shinsen!” the commander makes an ugly smirk.
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 #8962  by Lessa
 
:shock: OMG terrible what happened to Kurino and her mother! Only someone insane would do that.

Really good Kana! Post another chapter for us soon.

 #8985  by RoNin
 
Hime your doing a great job :D i know i havent posted much but i eagerly read every one :D

 #9003  by SilverCloud
 
dood, i hope someone tells Nako that no one in the order would do that to a person (no one that would live long to brag in any way shape or form, atleast)

other than that, kudos, it's very good

one sentence that i noted: HIME made a sign to tell HIME to quiet down.

lol, i'm assuming that the first one is supposed to be Nako. I wouldn't worry that much about it, I've made similar typos in my writing.

keep it up
<3 S.Cloud

 #9005  by Starcomand
 
freat story its realy interesting looking forward to next part

 #9168  by Hime
 
Nintendo and his party landed on the planet. They put their ships in stealth mode so no more would notice them. Also, Nintendo instructed that everyone should change into civilian clothing. He figured out that this is not a good time to be noticed by anyone. They have been wandering in different cities for days. Akimoto and EvilIvy are talking among themselves in an inn.
“Yes, this place is, very peaceful and very boring. The worst thing can happen to you is a guy rushing towards you with a vomit bag that is full of vomit or something of the sort. I hate this planet.” Akimoto says.
“That because just a moment ago some person just ran into you with a vomit bag that is full of his stuff doesn’t mean this planet is bad or something. Well, I do not want to but I would rather not omit that part where the vomit bag did break and that guy’s stuff sprays all over you.” EvilIvy says.
“Oh you pile down. You do not know the pain the….ugghh.” Akimoto fires back.
“It is bad enough that we have to team up already! If it weren’t for Nintendo’s orders I wouldn’t have ended up with you anyways! This peaceful planet is just too damn big!” EvilIvy shouts to Akimoto. Akimoto just turns the other way. At that time, their transmitters start beeping. Akimoto and EvilIvy turn it on. Ronin’s hologram shows up.
“Have you people found anything useful? We have no luck on our side.”
“Same here, aside from Akimoto just got a nasty shower moments ago.” EvilIvy answers.
“Then, he should go clean himself rather than having one of those love quarrels with you.” Ronin says.
“What? How did you know?” Akimoto asks.
“Well Aki, your transmitter was on the whole time. I am sure Nintendo and the others have already seen the whole thing as well as I did. Well. Good luck. So, continue your little conversation. I hope it can bear fruit in a way. Ronin out!” Ronin says as he smiles. EvilIvy is still resisting herself from slapping Akimoto for this misunderstanding.
Kakashi and Ronin are still wandering around the city without any leads.
“Usually we do have a lead or two. This time, we just landed on some random planet without anywhere to begin with. We do not even know what we are trying to find!” Kakashi says.
“That’s the both of us.” Ronin says. They keep walking when they see a poster. The poster has many children’s pictures on it. It is a poster about the musical performance of the Shinsen Orphanage. Kakashi takes a good look at it since he was an Orphan himself. Then, he spot something.
“Master Ronin, I think you better take a look at this girl whom the children are surrounding her. She has short hair but look at her and the girl on the side.”
“I’ll be damned. We need to call the others about this.” Ronin says.

In space, obrit near the planet Shinsen.
“What? Vice Admiral Justin! Why did you push back my advance?” the commander asks.
“Are you stupid or brain dead? With a move like this, everyone is going to notice our coming! You want to ruin us all or something? I shouldn’t have entrusted you on this mission! You have to take it slow! Must I teach you everything?” Justin’s hologram screams out.
“But, if you want to have some fun. Can open that package I gave you before you go.” A voice comes out behind Justin. Justin moves aside, and then Gotenks’s figure steps in.
“So, you have given me something useful?” the Commander says.
“Yes, of course you all round prick! You did say force users are entering this planet. Maybe you can use what I have given to you to teach those who dare disrespect you some respect. You did aim for being the head of the New Jedi Council after all right?” Gotenks asks.
“Yes, all because of me wanting to clean up a little mess, they all wanted to trial me without knowing my great potential. I will show them all! For I am a great Jedi! Everyone should learn from me.” The Commander laughs in an insane tone.
“Yes, and on the note. Your ways of doing things are rather over the board.” Gotenks says.
“Well, someone has to learn respect like you said. Besides, that’s a way for me to have some fun too.”
“Right. Well, I would suggest you go with a team, not the whole fleet. You can have your fun. Just remember, do not go over board no matter what. It will damage our name. So, don’t you go and mess around you all around prick! Remember we are the ones who took you in when you are still trying to escape the Council’s wrath!” Gotenks says.
“Yes. I am very thankful for that.” The Commander answers.

“What you want me to train you? Why?” Tricky asks a little girl.
“I want to have revenge on the person who killed my mother. And I need strength to do it. Big sister Nako and big Brother Loking wouldn’t train me. So I have to come ask you.” The little girl answers. Unknown to Tricky, Nako and Loking are hiding somewhere near by and monitoring the whole situation.
“Let me ask you, after you get your revenge then what? What’s next?” Tricky asks.
“Fine, let me ask you then, can I be strong? Can I really become strong?” the little girl asks. Tricky starts to ponder.
“How you answer this question will determine if he is a good master or not.” Loking says.
“I hope he knows how to answer. I never get pass that question honestly. And here I am watching a student becoming a master.” Nako says. Loking just nods.
“Okay, let me ask you this, how strong do you want to become?” Tricky asks.
“Well, please do not laugh at me but I want to be strong enough that someday I can protect my friends. Someday, maybe my love ones.” The little girl says.
“I need to ask you one important question.” Tricky says.
“ok.”
“What’s your name?” Tricky asks. Nako and Loking also start banging their heads to the trees.
“How could you wait till so late to ask other people’s name?” Nako whispers to Loking. Loking just has a hard time retain himself from laughing out loud.
“Kurino. May name is Kurino.” The little answers.
“How could that girl answered so calmly?” Nako says.
“Please…do not ask me.” Loking answers. Just then, a shadow lands in front of Tricky and Kurino.
“There she is.” Nako says. Lurino and Tricky look at the shadow.
“Big sister HIME, what are you doing here?” Kurino asks.
“I was training somewhere no too far away, and I overheard your conversation.” HIME answers.
“WHAT? You were spying on us? You sick freak!!!” Tricky screams out. Then he received a punch from HIME in the face.
“Who wants to listen to you senseless murmurings? You talk so loud that I can hear you even in my sleep!” HIME yells out. Kurino starts to laugh. Nako and Loking are both surprised.
“Well, I think this girl can have a better future with these two.” Loking says.
“Okay, little Kurino. You want to be strong. I can help you, but I am not going to teach you about revenge…..”HIME says.
“HEY HIME back off! That’s my student! What are you doing here?” Tricky says.
Those two still have many summits to cross. Nako and Loking are both giggling when suddenly they both stop and have a serious look on their faces.
“We have uninvited visitors. The children, we need to get back.” Nako says.
“You did call him for help right? Your student, I mean.” Loking says.
“Yes, hope that he can make it before we do. This can be troublesome, so much for wanting a peaceful life.” Nako says.
Then the two rush off.

At this time, outside of Shinsen Orphanage center. Two robed figures are standing outside of the building and watching the children playing.
“Well, let’s go. Let’s see if we can get anything here.” One of the robed figures says.
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 #9171  by Sparky
 
This is reall good... man i need to get my story going...

 #9175  by Starcomand
 
great story keep it comeing hime

 #9198  by Lessa
 
Amazing! Waiting impatiently for another chapter =D
I really enjoy the combination of serious story and amusing dialogs like Aki and Ivy or Tricky and HIME!

 #9258  by Hime
 
In space, Sparky and his team are rushing towards Shinsen. While Rage and Martin are piloting the ship, Lessa, Sparky, Matt, and Scythe are studying the poster Ronin copied.
“This cannot be.” Scythe says. Lessa nods in agreement.
“How many times have we said this through our years? These are strange years indeed.” Sparky says.
“Seriously, I have to agree with Raven. You are starting to talk like an old man. You are very much like Nintendo now.” Martin says from his seat.
“Hey, concentrate on your flying! I am not that old. Mind your own business would you?” Sparky screams out.
“Well you have just pulled another Nintendo.” Lessa says. Everyone laughs.
“One problem, how are we supposed to meet up with Nintendo and the others? We lost contact with them for some good reason.” Scythe asks.
“Maybe we should contact HQ first before doing anything else.” Lessa says.

“Your arrival is earlier than I thought. What brings you here so fast, Chantelle?” Nako asks. The two robed figures reveal themselves as Chantelle and Blade.
“I see you are as sharp as always, Nako. I am getting used to calling you with that name now. How are you doing? It has been a while.” Blade says.
“Well, everything up till now is fine.” Nako answers.
“It is still a wonder to me about your decision to stay here.” Chantelle says.
“Well, like I said before. Loking decided he wants to stay here. So, I decided to stay with him. Where ever he goes, I go.” Nako says. Loking just turns away from Nako. Chantelle giggles a bit.
“Yes, I am touched.” Blade says in a cold tone. Nako gives out a glare at Blade, and he just jumps behind Chantelle. Then, all four of them laugh.
“Nako, they are guests.” Loking says.
“Oh, curse my scar. Where were my manners? Please come in.” Nako says.
“Something to drink will be very nice of you. I have been walking all day in the hot sun. Chantelle here could use a bath as well.” Blade says. The four of them walk into an office. Once all of them entered, Loking shuts the door.
“Tell us, what news have you brought us?” Loking asks. Chantelle takes out a round piece of mechanism. Then, she presses a button on it and show the holographic version of Shinsen. She then push another button, couple pictures of people appear.
“Do they look familiar to you?” Blade asks. Nako and Lokin take a good look.
“So, they have come this far. That means, coming here is only a matter of time. If I can only leave now, but the children…..” Nako says with concern.
“I still do not understand. Ever since that time, you haven’t made any contact? Why is it so hard to let them know that you are alive and well? You still bear a grudge or something?” Chantelle asks.
“In a way, maybe I still bear somewhat of a grudge. Every time I see the scar of my back. I cannot forget what happened on that day. I cannot forget.” Nako says.
“Yes, I understand. You feel betrayed. Your road was pretty rough during the years when you are still a force user. I know, I understand.” Chantelle says.
“You do not understand ANYTHING! No matter what I do, I have work extra hard than any other people to raise my ranks. You have no idea what it likes to be hated by the people around you! Stop telling me that you understand or you know. And don’t argue with me about fairness, I tried to earn my trust. Just no matter what I do, I get to be put on trials and almost get myself killed every single TIME! You do not have a single clue of what I have to go through and how I feel!” Nako says as she glares at Chantelle. Loking comes along and puts his hand on Nako’s shoulder; then Nako seems to calm down. Blade sighs.
“Okay, you made your point. No need to be or fired up or something. But first thing first, what are you going to do with these people who are coming here. They were your friends once. Still I do not think you are going to walk out and meet them right?” Blade asks.
“Well, that’s why I thought it would be a good idea to actually get you two to sub in for Nako. The others do not know me. If you can do that, Nako and I would be gateful.” Loking says with a smile.
“What are you going to do with the two new employees you have here? One of them looks exactly like you. Well, okay, you actually look younger than she is but you can still guess what would happen if they find her here right?” Blade asks.
“Yes, that can be…difficult. Not to mention that white masked guest we have here. He’s more like a regular now.” Loking says.
“Well, he found peace living here. That’s why he stayed for so long.” Nako says.
“Speaking of which, you two want to stay for the night?” Loking says.
“Sure, I also want to know if Nako’s skills have improved or not? Chantelle says as she takes out her saber whip’s hilt.
“I want to say no time like the present but this have to wait for now. You forget about the two guests we have right now?” Nako says.
“But, you can always help us with the chores! It will be good if we have another pair of hands.” Loking says.
“Make that two pairs of hands.” Blade says. As they all head out, a person in a pitch black robe jumps in. He looks at Nako and the others. He looks tired and dust is all over his robe. Sweat is all over his face.
“Oh you are here Sidious, great! How goes your scouting on this planet. Tell me over dinner with the others. You do not look so well. Did something happen? ” Nako asks.
“I am sorry Master. I cannot explain much, but please come with me to the outside and look. We have a situation here.” Sidious says. Nako then follows her student to the outside. Loking and the other follow as well. During this time, Tricky and HIME return with Kurino. Nako tells HIME to take Kurino inside and signals Tricky to come with her. HIME goes inside with Kurino and tell the children to wait in the dining hall. Nako and the others come out and found to people lying on the ground. One is a human male and one is a human female. They are cover from head to toe with injuries. Nako and the others get closer to the two and survey their condition.
“What happened? Was there a fight or something? Where did you find them?” Loking asks Sidious.
“I find them not too far from here; 4 miles south west from here. I was on my way back and I heard a huge blast of sound. I went over and check and I saw a pile of crumbling rocks. I found them under these rocks. Then, I put them of my speeder and carried them here. They are….Jedis from the academy right?” Sidious asks.
“Yes, they are.” Nako says. She looks at the two when suddenly the human male wakes up and grab Nako by the hand. Everyone is more or less startled.
“HIME?....How?” then he goes unconscious again.
“That’s EvilIvy and Akimoto. How did they….” Chantelle asks Sidious. Sidious just shakes his head.
“At any rate take them inside and we need to act fast!” Loking says. Nako just stands there without any reaction to the situation.
“So, they have finally found this place.” Nako thinks to herself. Loking comes to Nako and pull her inside as well.
“No matter how you feel about the academy and the council, this is not the time! We need to safe their lives.” Loking says.
“I know, cannot let EvilIvy and Akimoto end like this.” Nako says.

 #9266  by Sparky
 
This story is getting better and better... talking about my age.... and saying i am doing another nintendo.... I am not old...and i am not ninny!!

 #9267  by Starcomand
 
great story ahime and love the ninny mkII (sparky) lol

 #9541  by Lessa
 
I love it Hime ! =D Hopefulyl Ivy and Aki will be alright, Please post next chapter soon, I can´t wait!

 #9868  by Hime
 
“Akimoto, EvilIvy! Please come in! This is Nintendo!”
“They still haven’t answered right? Raven asks. Nintendo grunts as he shuts off the transmitter. They are now waiting somewhere at the country side where Akimoto and Evilivy last contacted. Right here, Nintendo and Raven are both waiting for the others.

“What are we going to do with those two? Should we go leave them in some town nearby or something? You know if they see Nako and her “sister”. That would mean trouble for those two.” Tricky asks. Blade and Chantelle start to ponder about the question.
“I now, but they are two lives after all. Plus, they did not anything wrong anyways. Loking is tending Akimoto. Nako and HIME are tending EvilIvy. Let’s see what those two has to say.” Blade says.
“I never get her. Why did she cast away her old name and let someone else took it? The funny thing is I can still sense her power. It has increased since the last time I saw her. She has been training herself. If that body still aches for battle then why, why did she leave her name behind like that?” Chantelle says.
“Well, that’s something only she can answer. But, do you like she is going to tell us even if we go up and ask?” Blade says.
“We are most likely ending up as little pieces of whatever scattered across space.” Chantelle says.
“But Nako isn’t THAT scary looking though. Aren’t you two going a bit overboard? Like the time I spent with Nako, she is like any caretaker for kids. Yes, she does look like my master but……” Tricky asks.
“You know, you should learn to look into others more. Maybe you will learn something about others instead of swinging that piece of useless junk around. She is more than you think she is. Or should I say she is whatever you think she is? ” Chantelle says in a mockery manner. Tricky is about to take out his sword when Nako and Loking come out from the temporary medical center.
“What are you children fighting about this time? We can hear you even with these supposing sound proof doors. By the way, those the thick-skulled dual are both out of danger; all they need is recovery.” Nako says as she takes off her gloves.
“Correct. They will wake up in a matter of hours. I feel that, Nako and I are not good with introductions and “first” impression. Maybe Chantelle and Blade can do the honors?” Loking asks. Blade and Chantelle just sigh. Then, a boy runs towards Nako.
“Big sister, a group of people are at the door. It is them again.” The boy says to Nako. Nako hears that and grunts.
“Maybe we should get change and meet them. Chan and Blade, please look after the kids for now.” Nako says as she walks away with Loking.
“Who are there people?” Tricky asks.
“Well, one word: trouble makers for the orphanage. They are aiming on two goals: the land, and Nako.” Chantelle says. Tricky has his jaw dropped behind his mask.
“What’s their problem?” Tricky asks.
“Well, to cut the story real short. There is a big, nasty, rich man with a spoiled son. That’s his only son as well. This son goes around cause trouble and his daddy has to buy off all the law enforcements on this planet in order to prevent a criminal record on his son’s mark. Well, this little brat actually set his eyes on dear Nako here. Plus, his father wants buy this place for a long time. Nako and Loking are not selling this place to anyone. So this little brat with come here with his personal army every now so often.” Blade explains to Tricky.
“But, every time Nako manages to hold turn them down right?” Trickys says.
“Yes, but they have never come with this much people. This does not sound good at all.” Chantelle says.
“Then, what are we waiting for? Let’s go scare them off!” Tricky says.
“NO! Loking and Nako say this will only cause more trouble. We are to stay put.” Blade says. Tricky just grunts but he goes to someplace hidden to monitor the whole situation with Sidious.

Nako and Loking walk out from the Orphanage and meet the group of people. There are about 20-25 of them. Those people are all well dressed; up to date fashion. The only problem is, none of them looks anything close to friendly. When Nako and Loking came out, they all have their eyes on the two. Then a voice comes out from these people.
“Oh, my dear Nako. It pleases me everything you are in my presence, but it also pains my greatly that you chose to stay beside Loking and running this useless, dirty orphanage than stay by my side and rebuild this place into a much more better looking resort together.” A young man walks out from that group of people. There is a disgusting look from Nako’s face as she sees this young man coming into her presence.
“Look Uriayo! How many times do I have to tell you to never come here again? This place is not closing and I am not coming with you. All you ever thinking about are your desire, your fame, and your private parts. It is always, me, me ,me, and I, I ,I.” Nako says.
“Aww…don’t be such a disappointment. You know my father owns most of these lands you know. He is willing to buy this land from you people. He has better plans to use this land rather than feeding little brats. He is willing to go for a higher price, if you are willing to come with me and leave this place. We can have a better future.” Uriayo says to Nako with a Smirk on his face. Nako just leers at him.
“You just do not get it. I am staying here with Loking and the children. This is where I belong. No money can buy this place, nor am I leaving these children. You are wasting your time. If you want pleasure, there are lots of places for you at the red light district. Now, please go and don’t waste my time ever again.” Nako says.
“Now, now, I am willing to make an offer. You are worry about the children right? How about I hire all for them for my father’s labor forces? There, they can earn a living rather than just sit there and get fed all the time. They can learn important skills to make a living for life rather than learning how to plant trees or sow crop. You and I can lord over them like our little kingdom. Now, this is an offer you simply cannot refuse right?” Uriayo says as he makes a gesture to offer Nako to come to him and into his fancy looking speeder. He faces shows that he thinks he just manage to stuck a deal with Nako. Then he hears Nako’s laugher. It is a laugher that fills with mockery. He looks up and sees Nako’s changes from laugher from a face that’s full of anger.
“What are you brain dead or something? You actually told me this IS an offer that I cannot refuse! Lording over children? I cannot believe you are THIS retarded. Have you got NO SHAME?” Nako asks in anger.
“What? Look I am determined that you are coming with me today one way or another. This stinking place is going to be sold one way or another!! Now, I am going to ask you once more nicely, are you coming with me obediently or not?” Uriayo asks. Nako turns her back on him. Loking starts laughing at that moment. Uriayo’s face then shows extreme embarrassment and then anger. He then singles to his guards. The guards all take out their blasters and rifles and point them at Nako and Loking.
“What do you think you are doing?” Loking asks.
“No one says NO to me! If I cannot get what I want, then NO ONE CAN! We could have been great together. Now, you all must die, along with the children. That should be enough to make me feel better.” Uriayo says with a sad face.
“You think the local law enforcement is going to let you get away with that?” Nako asks.
“What? My father can buy them off as easy as breaking a baby’s wrist. Now one more chance, you either come with me and sell this place or die with them! Take your pick!” Uriayo threatens Nako. Nako just shakes her head.
“Okay, then you gets to die. I have always liked you anyways. Guards, take aim and let’s party.” Uriayo says.
Last edited by Hime on Tue Jan 30, 2007 7:53 am, edited 1 time in total.

 #9869  by Starcomand
 
ooooo battle time :) lol

 #10030  by Lessa
 
oh dear! We all must come and help there!
Great story Hime, love it more and more!

 #10237  by Hime
 
Suddenly a huge sword flies out towards them from behind Nako. Two dark robed figures jump out and land right in front of the group. One of them has a white mask on.
“Did someone just ask for trouble? We are here for the trouble.” The one with a white mask on says.
“You are not going to dirty this place! Let me tell you one thing. A usual fight between a lightsaber wielder to another lightsaebr wielder, or to a non lightsaber wielder has three parts: the intro, the climax, and the end. I always start right at the climax till the end. It is all out to you people no matter who you are.” the other one says. Tricky is stunned when he heard what Sidious has said. He knows only HIME could have said that. But now, there is no time to think about that. Sidious is about to dash out when he suddenly notices Nako is standing in front of him. Her face is not happy.
“Hey, SID! I will not allow any bloodshed in front of the door of this building! If you want to go into your climax, take it somewhere else. You there with the huge sword, please watch over this guy before his climax gets everywhere.” Nako says as she moves out of Sidious’s path. Sidious and Tricky is about to move out when they hear Nako’s voice once more.
“Remember, if you trouble a big ruckus, retribution waits for the both of you.” Nako says as she walks back inside the building with Loking. Tricky then charge out with Sidious.
“Wait! I didn’t know there are Jedis in here? This is not fair! This is bad for me!” Uriayo screams and then he turns around and flees.
“You people have no idea who you are messing with! Where r u going? Coming back here! I want to join the party too!” Sidious says as he jumps into the fight. Tricky follows sidious and then all hell broke loose. Tricky smashes his sword into the ground and rocks are being throw up into the air due to the force of the sword. Tricky then swings his sword like a baseball bat and hit the rocks. Thus, these rocks are flying towards Uriayo and his men. With that one hit, Uriayo and his men retreat from the Orphanage. Tricky just laughs at them.
“Yes, that’s right! Run home with your tails placed between your legs! That’s right! Run back and NEVER COME BACK!” Tricky screams out to them as he places his sword behind his back.
“Damn it Tricks! I didn’t even get to do one thing! Man, you just have to hog all the fun for yourself!” Sidious yells out to Tricky.
“Hey pal! I am just helping the children here, not letting you to have your fun! So, if you don’t like it, go cry me a river!” Tricky pushes Sidious away.
Uriayo and his men managed to get away with their speeders. They made it back into the city and they are now resting in one of the bars that is run by Uriayo’s father. Uriayo is screaming to his men in the bar.
“Damn it! Damn you Jedi for meddling into my business! They have NO RIGHT to butt in!! I will destroy them! You men! Why did you retreat from the fight! They are only two people! You have disgraced my image! My honor has been destroyed!” Uriayo is yelling to his men.
“But young sir, don’t you see the power that the one with the white mask process? There is no way we can even go near him. We can confront the other one since he has a lightsaber in his hand!” one of Uriayo’s men says.
“That’s NO EXCUSE! You maggots have GUNS!! If you all fire at the same time then problem’s solved right?” Uriayo’s screaming to that person.
“But sir, don’t you know those lightsabers can deflect lasers? If we fire, it is going come right back at us. We cannot imagine if one of our shots manages to hit you!”
“Then isn’t it your job to protect me from that! WHO GIVES A DAMN IF YOU DIE! I am the only important one here! Now do what you are paid for and solve my problem! Those two force users are my problem! Now go solve it!” Uriayo is screaming like a mad man.
“Did you say something about two jedis? Can you tell me more?” a man’s voice comes in when Uriayo is still screaming. Uriayo is not really pleased to retell his story once more, not to a stranger anyways. He turns around and shouts.
“NONE OF YOURS BUNIESS!”
Then the man just waves his hand across Uriayo’s face.
“You will tell me everything. Yes you will tell me in a respectable manner. Now, tell me what you know.” The man says as he reveals a staff saber hilt.

Back at the orphanage, Chantelle, Loking, and Blade are watching Tricky and Sidious fighting each others. Nako and HIME are both looking after the children.
“Remember, even we are going to fight; make sure we don’t damage too much property here.” Sidious says.
“Yea, I know. Then let me ask you why we still have to fight in this place! We can slice and dice anything once we are outside!” Tricky asks.
“OH! Look’s who’s talking? You are the one who said something about since we make are ruckus outside, it will be problematic if we fight in the open again! So, there is no choice but to fight here!” Sidious says to Tricky. Tricky just sighs and gives a signal that stands for “Let’s get this over with.”
“Wouldn’t have it any other way.” Sidious says as he jumps towards Tricky.
Just then, a saber flies out of nowhere and stops Tricky and Sidious from moving towards each other. All the others look around and find EvilIvy comes out.
“Should have called me if you lot are having a party.”
“So, where’s Akimoto?” Blade asks.
“Well, he is doing his usual crazed loner thing. I couldn’t stand it.” EvilIvy replies.
“It must be hard for you then, coming all this way with a person like this.” A voice comes out from EvilIvy’s back. She looks back with shock and finds Nako and HIME coming towards her from behind.
“Yea, especially we are actually searching for you HIME! We are going back to the academy! So, be good and come back with me! I have already sent a signal to Nintendo and the others. They are going to be here within days!” EvilIvy says as she walks towards HIME.
“No! I am not going back with you people! You people have no sense of Justice! I did not do anything wrong. Yes I admit I run around and kill people, but those people deserve to die for what they did!” HIME says to EvilIvy.
“Are you saying that you are going to resist?” EvilIvy says as she draws out her saber.
“Enough! This is not a place for you people to draw your sabers and swing them around like there is no one around.” Nako says to HIME and EvilIvy. EvilIvy and HIME both stand down because deep down they know they owe Nako and Loking helping them when they needed help the most. The last thing they want to do is to trash up the orphanage.
“Say, that aside, how did you ended up in that stage. It’s been days since you recovered.” Chantelle asks. EvilIvy nods, she recalls when she finally awaken the first thing she sees is the white mask of Tricky staring at her. Then, she saw the twin sisters. She almost had a heart attack because of it. Then, she ended up helping Nako and Loking looking after children. She learns about the after math of the war. From her two bunches with death, she started to think about her meaning of life. EvilIvy so suspect Nako is who she thinks she is but, still witnessing what Nako is doing right now; she felt she has no right to destroy what she is looking at now. She had many arguments with Akimoto about this matter. Akimoto thinks they have to bring both HIME and Nako back to the Academy for trial. Then again, bring Nako is already a problem. HIME is a bigger problem all together. Not to mention now there’s Tricky, Sidious, Blade and Chantelle here. Still, she has to act tough in front of the others. One night EvilIvy is standing outside in the dark. She is thinking back to the times when she was on her first mission, then the war, then to where she had her coma.
“There has to be something within all these events. I still have no clue.” EvilIvy is getting frustrated.
“When you have no clue about your life, maybe it is a good time for you to take a rest and stop thinking about it.” A voice comes out behind her. She looks and find out it is Nako. Nako walk towards EvilIvy.
“You are a force user. But sometimes when you have endured so much you tend lost your purpose of life. Your purpose as who you really are. The more you think about it, the more you are going to get lost.” Nako sits down beside EvilIvy and stares at the moons.
“Speaking like a true force user, I am starting to think you are who I think you are.”
“Then, tell me, what do you think this who you think she is person is going to do? Or I should ask: what would she do?” Nako asks with a smile on her face.
“That person never talks about her problems or concern anyone. She always puts keeps everything to herself. But she always lets it out with her unpredictable temper. Once she does, most people close their eyes for what’s going to happen next.” EvilIvy says.
“Then do I make you feel I am like that?” Nako asks.
“Not in the least.”
“Then I am not who you think I am. Try not to think too much. Look at these children. They have been through so much. Yet, they are now sound asleep and ready to face the coming morning….”
Just as Nako’s still talking to EvilIvy, a dark shadow creeps up behind Nako and suddenly it jumps towards Nako. That gives Nako and EvilIvy a huge shock. They look and find out it was Kurino. She is crying.
“Having the same nightmares again?” Nako asks. Kurino nods and then she sits beside Nako. EvilIvy just sighs.
“The universe is such a big place.” EvilIvy says as she stares at her saber hilt and her KR coat of arms.

 #10262  by Lessa
 
Ahhhhh great chapter! I enjoyed alot reading it. Especially the last part with dialog between Ivy and Nako. Really good job :*

 #10279  by Starcomand
 
looking great hime keep it up

 #10349  by Kakashi.Archive
 
As lessa said really good job!.....WRIGHT MORE!

 #10384  by SilverCloud
 
boo-freakin-yah

i've been playing catch up and just this page took a while >.<

i only have one comment... I LOVED YOU WHEN YOU WERE AT THE ACADEMY NAKO/HIME!!!!

yup ^^

 #10401  by Hime
 
Starcomand is in the communication room in the KR Academy.
“Sir, there is an incoming message.”
“On screen.”
Then Star sees Martin’s face on screen.
“Star, I think we have a situation at Shinsen. There are multiple carriers and cruisers sailing high and low orbit of Shinsen. They are from the non force users. More to it, they are from the battalion Blood Hounds!”
“Blood Hounds? They commanded by none other then Justin and Spike! What are they doing over there? You just need to go and contact Nintendo and the others. I will inform the council about this!!!”
“Sure will do! We will dive right into Shinsen and try to get to the others. Who knows what’s going on down there?”

Back in Shinsen, Kurino is sleeping on Nako’s lap. She dreams:
“Mother….who are these people?”
“They seem like non-force user troops.”
“But mom, didn’t you tell me the war’s over? Then why are these men still walking around with their guns and looking so mean?”
“Well dear, even though the war is over, there are still lots of things to do. I will explain to you when you get older.”
“Mom, do you think we can have something good for tonight?”
“We shall see dear. Everything is so expensive. But with the war’s over, I think we can try our luck right?”
“Yay!”
The two walked to the market. Kurino’s mother start look at the prices.
“How come everything is still so expensive?” Kurino’s mother asks one of the merchants.
“Well with the new army stationed here, most of the good food goes to them and we are left with the bad ones. Plus they increased the taxes for the army.”
“Mother, where does the army lives?”
“Well little girl, it’s over there.” The merchant points to a big building.
“That building is so big and so new mom!”
“Yes, we better stay away from that place. It is dangerous.”
“Yes mom!”
“Be careful now you two! See you tomorrow!” the merchant yells out.
Even though Kurino’s family is poor, but they are happy as long as they have each other. They live in a run down temple with some other families. That’s because during the war, most of the houses and living quarters were destroyed. Families squeezed in local temples are normal sights to be seen.
For Kurino, as long as mother is here, she will be fine. Her mother is her most important person in the world. The last thing she wants to see is her mother crying or suffering.
“So mom, when do you think we can go home? Can you tell me about dad?”
“Dear I don’t know when. I miss home and I miss your father too. He was a brave man. He was so happy on the day you were born. It is ashamed that you do not even get to see your dad’s picture.”
“What does he look like?”
“Well, he is……”
Just then, a group of soldiers busted into the temple. There are about 30 of them, the commanding officer walks in and yells. The officer is a human male, not much feature for him beside that goatee on his chin and a scar on his right side forehead.
“Nobody move! You people are violating the new laws! For homeless people, you are to go to the local shelters!!”
“I am sorry sir, but we do not know where the shelter is because of all the bombing and changes going around. Please tell we where it is and we shall go at once.” One of the families’ fathers comes out and speaks.
“Are you saying we are not doing a good enough job for you low-lives to know where are you suppose to live!” the commanding officer says as he slaps that person. He slaps so hard that the father is being knocked down on to the ground. Then the commanding officer comes over and kicks him.
“Get up! Show me that attitude again and I will make sure you do not get to see your kids’ birthdays.” The officer says with an ugly smirk on his face.
Kurino’s mother covers Kurino’s eyes. She is also hugging Kurino in her chest.
“Mom, what are you doing? I cannot see.”
“Don’t move now sweetie. Mommy’s here. Shsssssh.”
The commanding officer turns around and sees Kurino’s mother.
“Hey woman! What do you think you are doing? You are hiding something? Show me!” the officer yells as he walks towards Kurino’s mother. When he discovers what she is doing, he gets even angrier.
“YOU! Why are you hiding your daughter like that? You should have let see the power of the government! Let her know what is going happen to those who decided to oppose the government! This is good education!”
“Sir, pardon me but isn’t this a little overdoing it? I mean, they are just a mother and child. It is only natural they are afraid when they see things like this.” One of the troopers says as he walks up towards the officer.
“Is that all you have to say?” the officer asks. The trooper is about to answer when the officer draws out a metal looking tube and swing it across the trooper’s head. There is a blue light comes out, then the trooper’s head falls off from his body.
“I suppose you are done. That’s what you get for questioning me. My staff will not forgive anyone like that.”
The other troopers are shocked. The other families were equally shocked, some people scream out. The officer turns around and points his staff saber hilt at the rest.
“Anyone cares for an object lesson?” the officer asks. Everyone shakes their head.
“What’s going on mom? What’s with all the screaming?”
“It’s nothing dear. Just keep quiet. It is alright!”
“Then why is that man scream at you mom? He sounds scary! Why is he screaming at you?” Kurino struggles herself out of her mother’s reach and pick up a rock and throw it at the officer. The rock stops in mid air before it comes in contact with the officer.
“Now, now, that’s call violation.” The officer says as he ignites his saber staff.
“You stay away from my mommy! You big meanie!”
“You know, I just have a good idea on how to teach you by using your mother as an example! TAKE THEM BACK TO BASE! 4th Floor basement!” the officer yells. Then the officer swings his arm and knocks out Kurino and her mother
When Kurino wakes up, she finds herself tied to a chair. Then she sees her mother is being strapped on an operation table right in front of her.
“So, you are finally awake. Today your mother is going to teach you a valuable lesson: what happens to those who oppose or not pleased with the ways of how the government runs their affairs. You see, we are not happy when you people are not happy. So, we are going to make you happy; therefore we are happy. Okay? This is going to fun!” the officer says to Kurino as he enters the room with a number of troopers with him.
“What are you doing to mommy?” Kurino cries.
“How dare you cry when I am trying to make you happy? Stop crying this instance!” the officer says as he slaps Kurino in the face.
“Please stop! Please stop hitting my child. Please let her go!!” Kurino’s mother cried.
“Oh, don’t worry. This girl will be just fine. She is just going to…..watch you go.” The officer says with a smirk on his face.
“What are going to do to my mommy? Let her go you big bad meanie!!” Kurino cries. She is trying struggle her way out but the steel chains are just too strong.
“Oh, what’s the matter? You are not happy about your seat? Okay men, do it!” the officer commands with great pride. The other troopers stop for a moment because they cannot believe their commander gave out such an order.
“WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR? IS THIS WOMAN AND GIRL MORE IMPORTANT THAN ME? NOW DO IT!”
The troopers grunt as they bring in the cutting tools. After that, there were screams, blood, and laugher coming out from the room. Kurino’s mind just goes blank.

“Now, you have learnt a great lesson from me. Now go and reflect on your actions before I am forced to do what I just did to your mother. Take her and go.” The officer says as he hangs a huge garbage bag to Kurino. The bag is still dripping blood. Kurino’s eyes are still wide open. Her expression is still blank from what just happened.
“WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR?? NOW GO!” The officer says as he ignites his saber staff and swings it against Kurino. Before Kurino can react, there is a scar on her arm.
“Let that be a lesson to you pigs.” The officer says as he returns to his office. Kurino drags the bag away still with that blank expression on her face. She cannot let go of the bag because she knows that’s what left of her mother. Other people stay away from her because of the bag she is dragging. Days have passed since that day. She still doesn’t let go of that bag. One day when she is wandering the streets on her won with that bag. Someone stops her. There are two people. One is a human male with shit black hair and the other a human female with skin as pale as snow.
“What is the matter little girl? Why are you carrying this with you all the time?” the human male asks. Kurino looks up and look at the both of them. She ignores them and tries to walk away.
“Please wait! Let me help you!” the human female says as she stops Kurino. She looks up once more and sees her mother’s image and this lady’s image mix together.
“MOMMY!!” Kurino cries. The human female holds Kurino in her arms and let her cry all she wants. Then the human male speaks.
“Nako, you better come take a look at this. This is serious thing.”
Nako then nods.
“My name is Nako, and this is Loking. Why don’t you come back to Shinsen with us?”
Kurino does not know how to answer. Before she knows it, she finds herself cling to Nako ever since.

 #10403  by Starcomand
 
great story hime looking forward to next bit

 #10425  by SilverCloud
 
mm, very sad indeed...
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