Knights Reborn

hello all i am finally back to writing and i will be uploading my older songs that i posted before so i can get some music for them for all who want to help just pm me now time for my lastes unfished edition lol

there is no time for amends
there is no time for praise
i lay here on my own every day
with no one by my side
then i saw you your beauty drew me in
i know nothing about the life you lived
but you know so much about mine
you helped me through tough times
as i have done for you
you are a once of a life time girl

let me know what you everyone its not done yet as i said before but i need a lot of feed back because its for my girlfriend

Awwwwww... that's solo sweet lol. Its good scythe. I like the poems focus on the man 's/woman 's feeling of apifany towards the woman whip expressing his /her love.

lol thx phil

Pretty well written DS, it's very nice (:

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