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One to be seperate.

PostPosted:Mon Feb 25, 2013 4:32 am
by LumberWolf
I don't want this to just stand for me, so I'm not posting it under the usual thread. If you like it, pass it on. It didn't take long to write, so it may end up getting revised, but it needs no more prelude than that.

Knights Reborn:
This is the Knights Reborn
Clan of the Black Sun
and to this clan, an oath is sworn
to uphold until the time is done

This family is honorable, of that I can attest
With different backgrounds, but one common goal
never short of skills, never fail to be blessed
by this clan as a family, a community, a body as a whole

As many enter,
many drift away
As family is center
I vow to stay

Reality is null, yet somehow close
real families, some good, some not so much
and as life's happiness slows and slows
this family offers a healing touch

Support for each other, and hope for today
A force to be reckoned with, the strongest Will
a group to trust when you're falling, from that I won't stray
A family, a clan, and great friends, for that is the biggest thrill

PostPosted:Mon Feb 25, 2013 4:38 am
by Fraea
i like it yosh!!

PostPosted:Mon Feb 25, 2013 5:42 am
by Jato
Well written

Re: One to be seperate.

PostPosted:Mon Feb 25, 2013 6:44 am
by Sakito
Yoshimatsu wrote: Knights Reborn:
This is the Knights Reborn
Clan of the Black Sun
and to this clan, an oath is sworn
to uphold until the time is done

This family is honorable, of that I can attest
With different backgrounds, but one common goal
never short of skills, never fail to be blessed
by this clan as a family, a community, a body as a whole

As many enter,
many drift away
As family is center
I vow to stay

Reality is null, yet somehow close
real families, some good, some not so much
and as life's happiness slows and slows
this family offers a healing touch

Support for each other, and hope for today
A force to be reckoned with, the strongest Will
a group to trust when you're falling, from that I won't stray
A family, a clan, and great friends, for that is the biggest thrill
Idk what "pass it on" ment so I quoted this one to be separate because it is so... Very well said. Idk what else to say. I like it yoshi

PostPosted:Mon Feb 25, 2013 7:05 am
by Clank
Perfezionismo

PostPosted:Mon Feb 25, 2013 9:12 pm
by Seeker
Clank wrote:Perfezionismo
Brillante.

PostPosted:Mon Feb 25, 2013 10:06 pm
by Gollum
Magnificent!

PostPosted:Tue Feb 26, 2013 12:04 am
by Mandalorian
Fantastic.

PostPosted:Tue Feb 26, 2013 1:18 am
by Key
superb!