Knights Reborn

hello all as u all know from my previous post here i am a song writer i have been writing a new song and i hope u all read it and i hope u like it

now and then i come to see the truth beyond the lies
everytime i forgive the one i knew
now i know that you are not the same perosn
i fell i love with
everytime i see you i say what have you become
everyday and everynight i come here to say
i will not fall apon anymore
no more of your lies
no more of this fake reality
no more of this darkness
oh no oh no all i can see is the truth beyond the lies now
no more ever again

that is the song i hope u like it and plz give feed back

did you make actual music for the song or is it just lyrics so far, cus I'd like to hear the instrumental part to this

i havnt made the music for it but itll kinda be like a sad fast tempo good beat all that

Really nice Deathscyth

thx man

Nice, REALLY NICEE , you are a good writer, when i have a music band(i hope) we gonna contact :DD

*thumbs up*

Again thank you all

Dude, that's great! if i had a little more practice, i think I could get ya some music........ but it would take A LOT more practice........

Aww I love it death<3

thankyou all and im glad mai i will post more soon hope u all give feed back

deathscyth wrote: sad fast tempo

to be honest i don't think a sad fast tempo would be good for the whole song but then again i did not write the words and i don't really got a good ear for music lol

oh ya good job buddy

ty meta and if u knew the tunr of how to sing it u would know why its that tempo

ya true thats why i said what i said death

Ok everyone I posted a new song I left a message in it about eat song u all want me to record so go leave a comment and I will record 1 song for u voice only because my amp is broken