Knights Reborn

well everyone i told a few of you that i was a song writer and i also told those few id post a song so here it is

today you see me over again tomorrow you will see no one.
you hear my voice and now you hear it fade.
everyday i stand here i waist my life waiting for you.
i should have known that you didn't care.
i should have just left when you said it.
now everyday i think about it i say oooooh what have i done.
oooooh what have i done to deserve this fate.
im not a fool im not a fool.
now and again i think back on it and see a confused child.
now i see it only made me stronger.
today is the day i make my stand.
today is my final stand i will not wait for you anymore.
all i can say now is its over for good.

so let me know what you all think about the song i wrote when i first started out writing if you have question about why i posted this one you know how to contact me leave feed back so i can continue to improve thank you all

Give me some tabs and I can record guitar for ya!

I was just playing FIFA12 and for a second thought that you made a post about Alex Song who is a midfielder for Arsenal lol. But yeah anyways, good stuff.

Pheaw....as soon as i read my name,i tought it was something to do with me.

From what i can tell,It is really good,but you should practice it more to perfect it.I'm no song writer so i cant really be much of a critic.

nice