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was up late

PostPosted:Tue Aug 24, 2010 1:35 pm
by ~LK~
Walk with me into this dream
This open door this all new theme
The road is new I can not say
What lies in store, what costs we’ll pay
My past is gone my pain is to
My mind is set what shall we do
I bare my soul all fears go by
I share with you what makes me cry
I know your mind what’s kept unsaid
I see your thoughts those things you dread
What shall we do what shall we find
What lies within what lies behind
We walk alone yet hand in hand
Along the shore atop the sand
-LK



Who have I been in this life
What shall I soon come to be
Though many a year I saw strife
Finally I find I can see
Alone I looked from the inside
Though surrounded by strangers I knew
I covered my ears from the lies
I opened my heart to so few
My strength leaves me in sorrow
My secrets leave me in fear
The song of my soul has been borrowed
The path I must walk has been clear
It’s end is around every corner
What changes will I get to see
Unbowed to the place of the mourners
What is there left for the fee
-LK

PostPosted:Tue Aug 24, 2010 4:34 pm
by Rugg
nice!

PostPosted:Wed Aug 25, 2010 3:39 am
by Hime
man....I am always bad at poetry
sorry if I cannot give a more....clear....judgement

but sounds nice though

PostPosted:Wed Aug 25, 2010 8:09 pm
by MasterM
Good! I like it.