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Help - Invite form[?]

PostPosted:Sat Oct 28, 2006 3:05 am
by Akimoto
Ok, im trying to make a very neat invitation text which i can use to invite people into the ogame alliance named Shinra Corp...

My english sux, so i was wondering if any1 knew any good (short/long) invitation forms i could borrow and use? Neat and "complicated" english word appreciated! (im sure fluffy knows some =P )



This is what -I- was able to ... make just now.
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Subject:

-Invitation-

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Text:

Greetings.

Shinra Corp. Alliance is looking for new members with a Strong sence of dedication to the game. We are looking for support and influence among other Alliances aswell as players.

If you are interested, or/and want more information about this alliance, you can visit us at our forum (http://shincorp.proboards61.com)
or you can PM me ingame.

Alliance: Shinra Corp.
Tag: ShinCorp

//Akimoto - Shinra Corp Diplomat and Founder

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Any help appreciated! :wink:

PostPosted:Sat Oct 28, 2006 8:56 am
by Phoenix
Looks nice Aki :)

Although this sentence:
vissit us in our forum
Should be:
visit us at our forum
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Pho~

Re: Help - Invite form[?]

PostPosted:Sat Oct 28, 2006 9:28 am
by RoNin
Akimoto wrote: strong sence of dedication to ogame.
Strong Sense of dedication to the game.

PostPosted:Sat Oct 28, 2006 10:20 am
by BloodRose
wow look a spelling bee :) how do you spell... no just kidding looks good

PostPosted:Sat Oct 28, 2006 11:10 am
by Akimoto
lol tnx, i've edited it - anything more i could add, should add? Hmm...

PostPosted:Sat Oct 28, 2006 1:15 pm
by Master Dennis
sure how about this


join us or die!!


or what the hot newb paris hilton say's ...''that's hot'' XD

Re: Help - Invite form[?]

PostPosted:Sat Oct 28, 2006 3:45 pm
by Phoenix
RoNin wrote:
Akimoto wrote: strong sence of dedication to ogame.
Strong Sense of dedication to the game.
Ogame is the name of the game. Its an "ogame" alliance.

Re: Help - Invite form[?]

PostPosted:Wed Nov 15, 2006 5:53 am
by Akimoto
Phoenix wrote:
RoNin wrote:
Akimoto wrote: strong sence of dedication to ogame.
Strong Sense of dedication to the game.
Ogame is the name of the game. Its an "ogame" alliance.
Edited the invite post.

And I think it's done and ...no more room for improvements (max 500 letters)

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