[SilentOne]

as i have just started making large art i would like to make a ff wallpaper series here is a cloud one i am working on the tifa, lightning, and noctis wallpapers but these are for everyone to use and if you want a specially made wallpaper i can arrange that

[Akimoto]

Constructive Criticism:
You should find a way to "merge" the 4 images better. (It looks like the 2 images in front are overlapped) and if you smudge/smooth all edges it gets very obvious. Or perhaps you could disguise it as an "aura"... or perhaps use custom shaders when "deleting" (making it look more proper instead of a smudge)

Or perhaps:
You could render cloud a bit better or get an already "finished" render at http://planetrenders.net/


End result: 6.7/10
Creativity: 3/10
Originality: 5/10
Colors: 9/10

[BadWolf]

i relatively agree with aki, it needs to be better composed than a smudge :\

also the fact that cloud is inverted throws me off, the sleeved arms sposed to be the left @_@

good attempt though ^^

[SilentOne]

i found that render and i actually am re doing it and doing something else im not good at large art yet but im getting there