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Chronicals of Starwars

PostPosted:Tue Dec 15, 2009 4:31 am
by Evan
20 years after Luke Skywaker opened up the Jedi acadamy there was a 11 year-old boy named Evan. Ohh he is very talented for he is a Force-path, the only good one at fact well the story begins on his home planet of shaatara...*baby crying* Mother: Shh shh shh shh shh its going to be alright sweetie
Soldier:Ma'me! you Need to get into that evac ship NOW! *blasts stormtrooper and a droid*
Mother:But sir! The evac ship only carries two and one person is already inside, What will i do with my baby?!
Soldier:Well I wouldn't leave this baby idle with no protection..*thinks to himself*I'll protect him
Mother:Ok *whispers to the baby* don't worry honey this man will protect you *hands the baby to the soldier and heads to evac ship*
*soldier blasts droids*
Soldier:HAHAHA! Take that you stuipid droid!
*group of droids ambush the soldier*
Droid1:Halt! we are ordered to shoot!
*soldier pops a thermal detanater between droids #1 and #2 and escapes*
*more droids ambush the soldier*
Droid commander:Come on give up we win this battle fool!
Soldier:No no you don’t *throws thermal detanater*
*droids fire at the soldier*
Soldier: GAH! Owch YIIEEE!
*watches droids throw the bomb over at troopers*
Baby:……WAHH BUAAA WUAAA! *some how <.< >.> uses the force to blow up the droids*
*runs torward ship heading to yavin4*
*gets in*
Soldier: *whew* Finally made it….Ok set a course to the jedi academy on yavin4
Pilot:Yes sir.
The next day
Pilot:Sir we are landing at the jedi academy.
Soldier:ok oh by the way don’t call me sir call me Kyle, Oh don’t mistake me for Kyle Kararn I’m not him.
Pilot:Ok sir…I mean Kyle
*as they land…..*
Kyle: Luke!
Luke: Hello Kyle how are you, Are you hurt?
Kyle:Just a little but I’d be more worried about this baby
*Luke uses the force to tell the baby’s name*
Luke:His name is Evan…I can sense his power…he is a forcepath...
Kyle:A Forcepath?!
Luke:Yes… I will train him in the ways of the force
11 years later….
Luke:Ok I believe you are ready to have a padawan…
TO BE CONTINUED!

PostPosted:Tue Dec 15, 2009 1:54 pm
by Lothar
Great now you have ripped off the way i write storys - sorta= P

PostPosted:Tue Dec 15, 2009 1:55 pm
by Lothar
its W.A.R Evan! ( wannabe Action of revenge = P )

PostPosted:Tue Dec 15, 2009 2:16 pm
by Tidus
question!! what happened in those 11 years? :(
good story mate :)
<3 the awsome baby skills

PostPosted:Wed Dec 16, 2009 4:03 am
by Evan
^ZeN wrote:its W.A.R Evan! ( wannabe Action of revenge = P )
umm zen you just gave me an idea of how to write a story (and P.S. i relized i forgot to write this :p so no I'm not trying to rip off your storys either :p) And tidus ty :)

PostPosted:Wed Dec 16, 2009 7:38 am
by Rugg
what the hell kind of mother leaves her baby like that?!

i hope that evac ship has a fuel containment leak and she dies slowly :twisted:

PostPosted:Wed Dec 16, 2009 8:41 am
by Lothar
lol evan im just teasing = P i dont care if u love how i do things ; ) = P

PostPosted:Thu Dec 17, 2009 12:24 am
by Evan
Hehe...

PostPosted:Thu Dec 17, 2009 1:58 am
by Evan
PART 2 IS NOW HAPPENING!
Luke:Ok i believe you are ready to have a padawan...
Evan:Ok, If you believe I am ready then I must believe i am ready...
Kyle:LUKE! LUKE! I NEED YOU NOW!!!
Luke:What is it Kyle?
Kyle:WE ARE BEING ATTACKED, and we need a jedi's help now!
Luke:*looks at Evan* Evan....
Evan:Yes?
Luke:I have a quick job for you before you go take missions.
Evan:What is it?
Luke:The Acadamy is under attack by a small amount of assasins and i want you to take care of them
Evan:But I don't have a light-saber yet!!!
Luke:*hands Evan training saber* Use this it will help you.
Evan:Ok...
Luke:And may the force be with you
Evan:Always *goes off to battle scene*
Evan:*looks around* What the heck happened around here??!!?!?!!??
*As a shadey figuer comes around*
Shady Figure:Hello jedi...
Evan:Hello....Who are you, And what are you doing here?
Shady Figure:I am here to kill Luke Skywalker
Evan:So your an assasin
Assasin:Yes....Well you know to much so now it is time for you to die*uses force lightning of Evan and flings him across the acadamy*
Evan:AHHHHH! *lands on feet* You will pay for that one....*Pulls out training-saber*
Assasin:You can't beat me with saber to saber battle *Pulls out light-saber*
*as Evan tries to Rdfa the assasin woman*
Evan:HAAAAA!
Assasin:*dodges* *strikes Evan* Thats Fool's play kid
Evan:ARRGGGHHH! *falls on ground* *gets up* Ok thats it! *charges at the assasin*
*sabers clash*
Assasin:Come on you really think you can beat me?!
Evan:Well I'm not sure but i will try!
*Evan wins the saber clash*
Assasin:*falls over* OWCH! Grrrr
Evan:You will not touch Luke! *attacks the assasin*
*the assasin dodges it*
Assasin:Ok you have won this battle jedi...This isn't the last time we will meet!*runs torwad ship and flies away*
And then luke runs over to Evan
Luke:EVAN!!!
Evan:Yes luke?
Luke:Are you hurt?
Evan:I'll live
Luke:Kyle get the medical squad A.S.A.P!
Kyle:Ok
5 minutes later
Docter:Evan you got hurt quite badly since you fought that assasin
Evan:Really how did I not know? *rolls eyes*
Docter:No need to be sarcastic with me or I'll beat you with my cast *as he mutters.....I know that was a horrible pun*
Evan:Ok well when can i get out of here?
Docter:When you need (or want) to
*as Evan dissapears*
Docter:But i want you to take this medi....oh he already left...
20 minutes later...
Luke:Evan i think you should make your own lightsaber tonight ok?
Evan:Ok..
Later that night....
*ZZZAAAPPP!* *thunk thunk thunk* *thrash thrash thrash* *tink tink tink*
Evan:Ok i think that does it *turns on lightsaber* ahh and its perfect a black saber blade...Ok well I will head to bed... *goes to sleep* *dreams of who he really is and who will be his padawan* *sees vision*
Kyle:Ok well i want you to be my master Evan...
Evan:.....
*vision ends*
Evan: *wakes up* AHH! oh it was just a dream.... well i better get back to sleep *falls asleep*
Later that night
Kyle:Luke i would like to learn the ways of the force and i want Evan to be my teacher soon
Luke:Soon Kyle I sense he might be your master.
Kyle:Ok.....
The next moring
Evan:Ok time to go take a mission....
*sound sirens say...* Evan! Luke Skywalker and Kyle want to speak with you! End of message....
Evan:Well that was suprising....Ok I will go see them *walks torwards jedi acadamy across Yavin 4*
Evan:Owch! Owwie! Iyiyiyiy! Iyieeee! *gets to fountain* Finally my bare feet can get a rest...*drinks water from fountain* Ahh refrehing...
*THUMP!* *GROOOAAARRRRRRRR!*
Evan:WHAT THE?!
*Thump thump thump thump thump*
Evan:OH NO!!! A RANCOR!
Rancor:ROOOAAAWWWRRRRR
Evan:Aww great my only option is to fight it since It's blocking the way *glares*
Rancor:GHRROOOAAAWWWWRRRR *stomps on ground* ROOOARRR!
Evan:*Turns on lightsaber* Oh this will be fun with a single saber...*gets ready*
Rancor:GROOOAAARRR *swings at Evan*
Evan:*Dodges* Hup
Rancor:*swings again..*
Evan:*jumps* HEEYA!
Rancor:RAAWWWRRRR! *swings repeatively*
Evan:*jumps and dodges repeatively* Hup Yeah HAAA! *gets on top of rancor* Now your dead meat!
Rancor: GHRRAAWWRRR *tries to shake off Evan but fails*
Evan:THAT'S IT! I HAVE HAD ENOUGH *stabs head* HAAAAAA!!! GRRRAWWWW!
Rancor:Grrraww Rooaarrr....urrggg...*falls over and dies*
Evan:*whew* glad thats over....*heads over to the jedi acadamy*
Luke and Kyle:You're late...
Evan:Sorry guys i had to take care of something....
Luke:No matter well we have a mission for you
Evan:Really?
Luke:Yes....Kyle tell him what he needs to do.
Kyle:Ok Evan You see there is this factory at Naboo getting runned by the Imperial remnant and we think they are using the factory as a cloning facility to increase their numbers and the amount of sith guards and imperial guards and such are growing causing a major threat to the new republic and we want you to destroy the main generator there so they can't do this anymore ok?
Evan:Yes...Oh before we go I must ask if my starship Storm Destroyer is ready...Is it?
Kyle:Yes now go!
Evan:Alright I shall *bows and walks away*
*as Evan lands on naboo*
Evan:I sense an assasin..like the one i encountered a few days ago.....
Assasin:I sense him...I sense you EVAN!
TO BE CONTINUED!

PostPosted:Thu Dec 17, 2009 3:31 am
by Evan
Tidus wrote:question!! what happened in those 11 years? :(
Long and boring training tidus
Rugg wrote:I hope the evac ship has a leak and she dies slowly :twisted:
umm acually you don't see her again in this story..

PostPosted:Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:13 am
by Evan
Ok Part 3 Is Now starting!!! (...w00t!...)
Assasin:I sense him...I sense you EVAN!
Sith Apprentice:Master we have an Intuder!
Assasin:great..just what i needed.....Get the droids and Stormtroopers in positions noW
Sith Apprentice:Yes Ma'me
*as the assasin girl uses a hologram projecter to her evil master*
Assasin:Lord Kelthi the cloning proccess is nearly complete for the next shipment.
Kelthi:Good exellent my apprentise...Now i sense there is a jedi near you...A very powerful jedi...Shinera I want you to kill him.
Shinera:I will do as you wish my lord.*hologram ends* Now Evan you will die
*as Evan walks into the facility*
Evan:Hmm this is a complex factory...*hears a bunch of foot steps*What the?.....
*as a group of stormtroopers surround Evan*
Stormtrooper#1:HALT! Let's see some Id before you pass
Evan:How about we see some gun fire?
Stormtrooper#2:You don't want to mess with us *loads rapid-fire blaster*
Evan:Come on don't be so violent with me *starts to grab lightsaber silently*
Stormtrooper#3:GIVE US THAT DANG ID OR I WILL BLAST YOU INSIDES OUT!
Evan:Be quiet *Turns on lightsaber* Just let me through.
Stormtrooper commander:Blast him!
*stormtroopers fire at evan*
Evan:good bye.....*blocks blasts into the stormtroopers and they die*....hehe..*walks past them*
Emergency siren:INTRUDER ALERT INTRUDER ALERT!
Evan:Aww great just what i needed *readys saber*
*as a figure walks through the halls with this metel staff with a saber blade on one side*
Imperial Guard:......Go away or you will be exterminated.
Evan:No you go away *uses force lightning on the guard*
Imperial Guard:AAAAAHHHHHHHHH! *falls on the ground*gah....*gets back up* you will die now...*charges at Evan* *swings saber*
Evan:*blocks it* Wow....Just wow....You are Too easy..*attacks the guard*
Imperial Guard:Die jedi...*dodges attack and counters*
Evan:*as evan is flying across the room*AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *thump*Owch....now will fall *prepares super dfa*
Imperial Guard:Good bye jedi....*charges at Evan*
Evan: *uses super dfa* Now you fall...
Imperial Guard:GAHHH! *cough cough* grahh ughh *breaths deeply* uhhhhnnnnn.....*dies*
Evan:Man i really don't those guys...Oh there's the main core *detenates* Oh hey a secret door *goes through* Whoh....This place is biiger then i imagened... o.O *looks up* aww no no no no no no NO! Don't make me have to climb up that high...
Shinera:Hmm Isense him....HE is closer....I can feel it......APPRENTISE!
Apprentise:Yes master?
Shinera:there is a jedi...i want you to kill him...
Apprentise:Yes i will...*runs off*
*as the shipment cargo arrives*
Shinera:Ahh the shipment cargo is finnaly here....
*While back over where Evan is*
Evan:Wow this place is huge...*goes up stairs*
*sees vision of Shinera have a few clones go into a cargo ship*
Evan:Hmm i better hurry.....
Apprentise:Hehehehehehehe......I have found you Evan
Evan:....I sense soemthing.......
*as the apprentise attacks*
Evan:WHAT THE?!?!
Apprentise:hehehe good bye jedi *raises lightsabers and attacks*
Evan: *clashes sabers with the apprentise* Why did you skip the whole bad guy intrence intro thing and attack me?
Apprentise:Umm because i can?
Evan:*facepalm* Thats just no fair...
Apprentise:SILENCE! *attacks*
Evan:No you.*counteres and slices the apprentise's arm off*
Apprentise:AHHH! GAHH ugghhh uhhnnn.... Why haven't you killed me yet?
Evan:Your not worth it. *walks away*
Finally Evan got to the top floor....
Shinera:Ahh welcome Evan to the main core of the factory...Now here is where you will die.*grabs both lightsabers*
Evan:No...*draws lightsaber* i think you are the one to be defeated..
Shinera:DIE!!!*Attacks Evan*
Evan:HA! You missed! *counters and uses force push*
Shinera:WHOAAAAA! *hits wall and lands on ground very close to the generator's death beam* you will DIE! *attacks and hits Evan*
Evan:GAHH! *attacks Shinera*
Shinera:*gets into saber clash* Do you really think you can beat me?
Evan:Yes I do.You shall not win *breaks saber clash and slices shinera's hand off*I told you..
Shinera:GAHHH! I will KILL YOU! *jumps*
Evan:DON'T! *uses force push and pushes shinera*
Shinera:AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHh*falls to her death*
Evan:....Why do the sith do this?....Well i better getis thing to explode then get out of here...*sets detonaters on machine*
*as evan heads to his ship and flies away the factory explodes*
Evan:WOOOOHHOOOOOOOOO!! *heads back to yavin4*
Kyle:Is it destroyed?
Evan:Yes well im gunna get some rest for the night.Bye.*heads off to his small temple on yavin4*
Luke:Kyle i would like to talk to you for a bit.
Kyle:Sure Luke.
*5 minutes later in Luke's room*
Luke:Kyle tomarrow i want you to accompany Evan to the Knights-Reborn temple.
Kyle:KNIGHTS-REBORN?! ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR DANG MIND?! THE LAST TIME YOU WERE THERE YOU ALMOST GOT KILLED!
Luke:By an assaisin....I don't know if they are still good or if they are bad so i want you to keep him safe while he is over there talking with the council there.
Kyle:I have a bad feeling about this...
Luke:Trust me if he goes there he will be able to realize his true power...
Kyle:Ok...... i will
TO BE CONTINUED!

PostPosted:Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:14 am
by Tidus
:) great... just great!!!!

PostPosted:Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:17 am
by Evan
:) wow that was fast :)

PostPosted:Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:29 am
by Tidus
heh i started readin right when you posted ;)

PostPosted:Sat Dec 19, 2009 5:17 am
by Evan
nice

PostPosted:Sat Dec 19, 2009 9:36 am
by Wolferion
Sticked

PostPosted:Mon Dec 21, 2009 12:17 am
by Evan
ty wolf :)

PostPosted:Tue Dec 22, 2009 4:23 am
by Evan
Part 4! :o It is now HAPPENING!
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Kyle:Ok I will
Luke:Good....We need him to learn his true power before its too late....
The next morning
Acadmy Siren:WAKE UP ITS MORNING!
Evan:ugghhh I HATE that siren....>.<,Well i better go head to Luke Skywalker to get my mission...
Kyle:Want an escort?
Evan:...Sure....
As they walk torward Luke's Chamber....
Luke:Ahh welcome back you two,I have something special for you Evan.
Evan:Oh, cool..
Luke:And this is important....And Kyle will be coming with you.I want you to head to Knights-Reborn to under-go some training...This won't be easy task or trip so I want you to be careful.
Evan:Ok so where is this clan at?
Luke:Well its an uncharted planet but I will give you the cordnants (P.S the planet is the -[KR]-map)
Evan:Hmm Get my Starship Storm Destroyer ready ok kyle?
Kyle:Sure *rolls eyes*
5 minutes later..
Kyle:Ok Evan are you ready to go?
Evan:Just about! *while pulling a heavy bag full of stuff*
Kyle:....All you needed was a sleeping bag....
Evan:Oh? Ok *tosses bag into storm destroyer* Ok lets go before I fall asleep......
Luke:Good luck and may the force be with you...
Kyle and Evan:We will..*heads into ship and flies away*
Luke:Well I hope Evan and Kyle will be ok....*watches them fly away*
Mean-while Back on the ship
Kyle:Man its crowded in here....
Evan:Oh shush Kyle.
Kyle:Ok ok sorry....it looks like we are getting closer to the planet, and there is something HUGE on the radar........Oh....crap....
Evan:What is it Kyle?
Kyle:Look out the window....
Evan:Ok...*looks out the window*.....WHAT THE HECK IS THAT ABOMINATION?!
Kyle:Its a sun destroyer...
Evan:Don't you mean star destroyer?
Kyle:No...No this is way bigger than a star destroyer..With a super ion cannon.....no two of them.....and i think i see some ties coming in...Do you have any ship guns here?
Evan:Yeah why?
Kyle:Ohh you'll see *watches tie fighters close in*
As they get hailed
Fyyar clone:You are in Imperial territory, show us id and if you are not authorized to pass we will blast you and terminate you unless you leave..So lets see some Id.
Evan:Lets see some gunfire? Umm we have cookies?
Fyyar clone:Ok you had your chance *eats a cookie* Scamble air support
Tie-Pilot:Yes sir
*Blast!*
Kyle:WHAT THE?! EVAN!!!
Evan:Just wait Kyle, Wait till they send in the lazer killer *watches lazer killer close in*.......FIRE!!!
As Kyle fires and the lazer killer blow up causing a massive explotion destroying all the other ties and badly damages the sun destroyer
Evan:Lets get out of here! *uses hyper space* WEEEEEEEEEE!
5 seconds later....
Kyle:Ugghh....Umm where is the bathroom here?
Evan:Over there
Kyle:Ok thanks *barfs in toilet*Blarrrghhh!
Evan:o.O I think I will clean the toilet tonight.....@_@ Well theres the planet the Knights-Reborn clan is on........Hmm lets dock near this temple...
When they land...
Evan:Hmm this is interesting a fountain...Whoh....I sense a lot of people who are strong in the force...
Kyle:Umm Evan...
Evan:Just a sec Kyle...I mean this is a beautiful fountain...
Kyle:Evan.......
Evan:Ok Kyle what *turns around* do you want from......oh...... crap ambush.....
Shadey Figure #1:Who are you? *pulls out green saber-staff*
Evan:Umm you have Flashing green eyes...
Shadey Figure#2:Hey give him a break *Pulls out dual sabers that are blue and green*
Shadey Figure#3:*Pulls out blue lightsaber* Come with us.
Evan:ok.....*Pulls out lightsaber*
5 minutes later Evan sees 5 figures....
Figure#1:Necros turn off your saber-staff.
Necros:Alright *turns off saber* RaVeN.
Figure#2:Ok rugg Ninja Sarah Turn off your sabers as well
Sarah and Rugg:Yes Jawfin *turns off sabers*
RaVeN:So may I ask who are you?
Evan:I'm Evan..I was sent here with my friend Kyle to under-go some training...
Figure#3:Training you say?
RaVeN:Hmm Falcon does need a padawan..
Figure#4:DOES NOT!
Jawfin:Starcommand stay out of this.
Starcommand: :( ok.....
RaVeN:Wow Phoenix you have been quiet...
Phoenix bot:I am not Phoenix i am a bot i am here to take place of phoenix....ZZZZT!
as Falcon destroys the phoenix bot before it causes trouble....
Falcon:Man i don't like it when phoe sneaks off like that... >.<
Jawfin:Back to the subject please....K thank you
RaVeN:Hmm i sense your power....you're a force-path....Hmm ok you must duel one of us to become part of the clan...CHoose wisely
Evan:Hmm
RaVeN:Oh i forgot to tell you this you may only battle council members and Falcon, Jawfin, Starcommand, Phoenix, and I are the council (but phoenix is at the two castles messing around with the traps i bet)
Evan:I choose......Jawfin...
Jawfin:Why me?
Evan:Cause you're the one with the flashy eyes :P
Jawfin: :(
RaVeN:Ok head out to the main duel room.
Evan:Ok
While they are heading to the duel room.
Evan:Kyle why are you so afraid of these guys? They are nice so far. :)
Kyle:Well one time a Long while ago Luke Skywalker came here and apparently he said something wrong to these guys and when he left he almost got killed by them.....
RaVeN:Shush Kyle.
Kyle:OK *wimpers*
Evan:Stop wimpering Kyle!
Kyle:OK.....
Jawfin:Nice one Evan....Well untill I hurt you....
Falcon:Jawfin why are you smack-talking at Evan?
Jawfin:Cause I can :P
RaVeN:>.< Moving on.....
As when they finally reach the duel rooms
RaVeN:Ok this will be a 1 on 1 battle..when you are ready you may battle ok?
Evan:Ok
Jawfin:Ok
Kyle:Hey Falcon do you think Evan will live?
Falcon:There is a very shallow chance of it...
Kyle:Great....
Jawfin:Ok I am ready.
Kyle:Wait Evan may i tell you something?
Evan:Sure....
Kyle:Ok this guys sounds tough and he MIGHT kill you.
Evan:ok..... ALRIGHT! I am ready........
RaVeN:Ok.....BEGIN!
as Jawfin Hastely attacks Evan but got blocked and countered but then Jawfin used force grip on Evan and then threw him on the ground but then Evan got back up and took revenge on Jawfin by using force-drain up close to jawfin and hurt jawfin quiet a bit but then jawfin used force heal and used an uncommon force power called force blast but Evan countered it with a force reflect and Jawfin hit the ground hard but then his eyes turned Pure yellow and went beserk on Evan and Evan blocked most of the hits and then got into a saber clash with Jawfin but Jawfin lost it and Evan used the force to control Jawfin and Stabbed himself 5 times (cause of Evan's mind control) then brokee free but then used force push on Evan into a lava pit but thankfully got on a wall and got out of the pit and then knocked out jawfin by using force push on him into a wall and he hit the wall VERY hard and Evan won the battle.
RaVeN:O.o
Kyle:@.@
Falcon:0.o
Starcommand:o.O
Phoenix:0.0
RaVeN:Wait Phoe how did you get in here?
Phoenix:I was here the whole time i just used a cloaking devise
RaVeN:Oh....
Phoenix:Is that Jawfin on the ground knocked out senseless?
RaVeN:Yes? o.O
Phoenix:Very well...Who is that kid over there?
RaVeN:Evan....*whispers*He is a force-path too
Phoenix:WHHHAAAA?!!????!!!Thats immposible!I thought I was the last one that was good!...But this is not a bad thing...
RaVeN:Ok Evan you have passed this test....Congratulations you are now a member of Knights-Reborn :)
TO BE CONTINUED!

PostPosted:Fri Dec 25, 2009 10:36 pm
by Hime
started reading also....it is nice
waiting for the next chapter

PostPosted:Fri Dec 25, 2009 10:53 pm
by Tidus
nice :) hey hime!!

PostPosted:Sun Dec 27, 2009 8:28 pm
by Evan
:) I'm glad people are enjoying my story :)

PostPosted:Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:04 pm
by Evan
Ok part 5 shall come into the story now!!! @.o
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RaVeN:Ok Evan you have passed this test....Congratulations you are now a member of Knights-Reborn :)
Evan:...Are you serious?
RaVeN:Yes Evan you are a member now.....:)
Evan:Hmm there must be a catch *looks around for T.V.cameras*
Kyle:Umm Evan I think this is real...
as Jawfin gets up....
Jawfin:It's true mate.
Evan:....Hmm ok if you say so......*Pulls out party snacks*Want to party?
Necros:ME!
Phoenix:Wait where did he come from?
Necros:Everyware :o
POOF!
Jato:Lies
POOF!
Evan:How does he do it?
Phoenix:I have no idea...
RaVeN:Anywho...LETS PARTY!
Everyone in temple:WOOT!
as they partied for hours untill they had a party crasher...
KABOOM!
RaVeN:WHAT THE?!
Guard:Umm we have an*as some one stabs the guard*GAAAAAAHHHHHHH!*falls on the floor dead*
as a shady figure comes out of the shadows behind the dead guard..
Figure:......*Pulls out a saber staff*Hehehehe I have found you all......partying?......Well I guess I could get my men to take out you weakilings......MEN ATTACK!
All of the raiders:YEAH! CHARGE!
RaVeN:Umm guys lets take these guys out
Jawfin:Yeah no-one calls Knights-Reborn weak!
Every clan member:YEAH!
Phoenix:CHARGE!!!
as the battle went on for a while but the clan members were getting tired and eventually fell on their butts but then..
Evan:Wow these guys keep coming and coming..........excuse me for a sec....*Runs into a mini KR fighter* WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *Blasts the raiders before they kill the members*
Jawfin:*inhales and exhales* whew that was close
Senbou:Yeah......
RaVeN:...wow he is good at ship fighting....
Kyle:Yeah..and the scary part about it is he is 11 years old.....
as Evan lands
Figure:Mehehehe very well done Evan...but I must warn you that the one factory you destoyed isn't the only one, infact as we speak there are hundreds of them in each part of the galaxy *Laughs evily* but anyway you won't be around to see the day when we take over the universe....Now fight! *pulls out saber staff and kicks Evan into a duel room and gets locked in with the one sith*
Figure:Oh by the way my name is Kyrona.......Lets get on with it!
Evan:Alright.*Pulls out black lightsaber*
Kyrona goes first with doing a kata but Evan countered with an Rdfa but then Kyrona dodged it and used force throw on Evan and Threw him into a wall that is in the other duel room but Evan recovers and then attacks kyrona with a lightning kata combo and then knocked Kyrona's saber out but spares her....
Kyrona:Grrrr bested by a kid.....but this isn't the last time we meet......FORCEPATH! *runs into a ship and escaped*
Pyra:What was that all about?
Evan:I don't know....But anyway lets rest its already 2:00 A.M.
as the wholeclan wentto bed the next morning came along...
TO BE CONTINUED!

PostPosted:Thu Jan 28, 2010 4:22 am
by Evan
part 6 coming soon!

PostPosted:Thu Jan 28, 2010 5:00 am
by SilentOne
pretty good story evan

PostPosted:Thu Jan 28, 2010 11:49 pm
by Evan
ty s1 :)