Knights Reborn

I am attempting to design T-shirts. Thus, I want to know what people think! I am new to this and open to suggestions and feedback!

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I will be adding more "Products" when I make them. ^_^

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I'd try flipping the light saber the other way around and see if it would help not run through so much of the lettering

It was supposed to be on top of the letters. It actually looks worse when behind it - and if i flip it, it looks... un natural. When ever do you see a lightsaber upside down in star wars?

I would move the wording up a bit, and make it so that the saber doesn't go through "Happens."

EDIT: Maybe making the saber smaller, yet a bit fatter would make it avoid going through "happens."

Thats shad's line...

Hawk wrote:Thats shad's line...

No, not really.

Reflex wrote:I would move the wording up a bit, and make it so that the saber doesn't go through "Happens."

EDIT: Maybe making the saber smaller, yet a bit fatter would make it avoid going through "happens."

Like this?

I was thinking having the words offset a bit so the lightsaber joins the H instead of through by the A
like this?


although I do like the last version you made a lot too

Aayci Warrick wrote:I was thinking having the words offset a bit so the lightsaber joins the H instead of through by the A
like this?


although I do like the last version you made a lot too

Like this?





EDIT:

Added a new shirt design:
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Opinions?

Sry i didnt see the others, my comp didnt load it for god knows why, i like 1:1 the best

id buy 1.1 and 1.2

if they were for sale