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The Beggining of Ends

PostPosted:Fri Sep 15, 2006 12:14 am
by Kakashi.Archive
They say every 10 thousand years a being is born with extream power. There brain adapts with more then what a normal human can. They can munipulate anything, water, fire, earth, wind, you get the point. It was said that the last time it happend the earth had been taken by Evil its self.Yet it was not destroyed it was sealed away in a cave of Ice forever. The year 2036 it happend again. A new being was born into a world of hate violence. And something else, the evil that was locked for ever,became unlocked on the same day. This event triggerd even more then that. Demons once again began to walk the earth...

Date: April 26, 2052
Tokyo Japan-after the 4th world war

16 years have past and a young man that was born 2036 has come to realize his power. Yet no one knows. no one knows that the evil was unleashed. Instead the dark lord desided to stay in hiding his name Ianatake Kaburama. The young man was always training and practicing to use his powers. But he also was hanging out with his best friend in the world. They always did everything together. But they manly fished all the time. His friend Keyoshi never new of his power. But yet it was about to be revealed. The young man Bakeira Kutazuma was about to have the battle of a life time.

"Bakeira, you are getting me wet you idiot"
"Huh thats funny i was not the one that desided to come nere the water...Hehe"
"I got one help me Bakei. HELP me its huge."
Just as he said this something pulled the pole right out of his hands.
"What the f--- you could have helped me. I wounder what it was anyways"
"Keyoshi get away from the water."
As he said this a large objsect came leaping out of the water. What ever it was wasnt human.

PostPosted:Fri Sep 15, 2006 12:39 am
by Kakashi.Archive
Part 2 The new threat

"uuh- uuh wha-wha-what is -tha-that."

"I am one of Ianatake Kaburam's many monsters. I am the weakest of them all but i intend to bring your body back Bakeira."
"Funny i dont remember giving you my name. What is your name and why are you?"
"I am Sugariea one of the Shinroye."
"Shinroye, now were have I heard that from...Ah i know you come from the depths of the Hidden forest dont you."
"No more talk im going to rip of that pritty little head of your body...NOW"
Just as he said this he slammed Bakeira into the water.
"NO Bakiera. Why are you doing this you freak?"
The water became calm all of a sudden. Several long pole like strands of water shot up into the air not hitting anything and makeing no attempt to fall on the monster. Right in the Middle of the large river something was also coming up.
"Bakiera. Your alive. But how are you doing this? What are you?"
"Im sorry you had to see me when i was mad. Now Suragiea...GO TO HELL. WATER SLICING WAVE!"
The poles in the water turned into what looked like blades. Very large blades. "STRIKE"
The blades fell right on top of Suragiea.
"Ha you missed...meeee."
The creature split right in half and fell.
"Dont come nere me Bakiera. Get back."
"My friend whould i ever hurt you? Just because i have a gift you are going to act like im a freak! Please dont hate me we have been friends for many years. I dont wish it to end like this. Trust me when i say, you are safe with me."
"Bakiera. I-im sorry. Forgive me, what was i thinking,if you were going to hurt me you have had many chances to do that. What was that thing?"
"Im not sure. But i intend to find out very soon. If that creature was after me then i must go. I need to find were it came from. As dangerous as it may be i must leave you and go."
"No if you go i want to go. I dont have a family just like you and dont want to be left alone here. Please dont leave me. I promise if things get bad i will run as far and as fast as i can. Plus i have my sword with me. Im safe. Please dont leave me here."
"Alright, Alright. You can come on one condition. You must stay at my side ever second. You dont know what could attack next. With the Juni army at ever corner you could be killed."
So the two of them packed what was necisary and left the home. They walked into the sunset but it was not a happy moment. Bakiera had many thoughts at that moment. Why was he being attacked? Why was this dark lord after him? Was it his powers someone was after? He walked confused into the sunset with out a clue what had transpired no even an hour ago.

PostPosted:Fri Sep 15, 2006 12:58 am
by DarkLink
its interesting... i would like to see how it turns out

PostPosted:Fri Sep 15, 2006 2:12 pm
by Kakashi.Archive
Part 3 Zombie attack

Both Bakeira and Keyoshi stopped during the night to rest...The next morning both began walking up the dark and quit road. No one had used the road for a long time, it was almost nothing at that point.
The sun was starting to rise as the two cept walking.
-Growl-
"Bakeira im starting to get really hungry can we stop for just a few minutes for a bite.Please."
"Your right im starting to get hungry too, fine then."
Both sat there for only a few minutes to eat some rice balls and drink some sakui. They yet again began to walk after.
A little later during the day they hit a very intersting little village, yet Bakiera did not stop there. He did not want to make enamys of the locals.
Later as they kept walking a figure was standing in the road way. Yet a stranging feeling came upon Bakiera that something was about to happen.
"Stop. You two arnt going anywere."
The what looked to be a man had his long arm out. Sweat was dripping right off Keyoshi's forhead.
"Who the hell are you and what makes you think you will stop me?"
"Heheheheh. You want me to show you what i can do to stop you."
The man began to change.
"Keyoshi, get back he is Shinroye."
The thing that was not even a second ago human was a giant creature. It had four legs and many what looked like tenticals coming out of its back. The creatures face was the most intersting of all. It apeared to have a split jaw on the bottom. It had very large and sharp teeth as well.
"I am Hungaria of the Shinroye. I come on behave of Ianatake to kill you Bakeira."
"Hu, all you pomp asses know my name do you. You think you can beat me your dumber then what you look."
"Bakeira stop, this one is mine."
Just as keyoshi said that he slowly drew his sword. "Im going to show you what true steal is."
"Go for is you little brat. I squash you into hell."
One of Hungaria's tenticals launched from behind him and went strait for Keyoshi. Keyoshi sliced it in two. Then suddunly 7 more launched from behind on the attack
-"He wont make it. He has trained with his sword but he never has had the chance to try it out on a live target. Im going to have to get in the middle of this if he cant win."-
"Know i got you, you little brat."
"NO."
Keyoshi was knocked to the ground. He did not move at all. Bekeira thought that mabey he was dead. But Keyoshi started to get up, as if some new will had helped him.
"I promised Bakeira that i would help him on this Quest to find Iantake Kaburam. Im not about to die on my first battle. Bakeira i too have hidden somthing from you. Now im going to show my real power."
A blue aora moved around Keyoshi and his sword. As if something was living in the sword , possesing it.
"Know you die."
"Demoned sword."
Keyoshi slashed down at the ground not at the monster. What appeared to be hands started to grab the creature and pull him under the ground. They stopped when just his head was visable.
"You cant win against me. Im one of the Jensukura clans best."
With that he stabbed the sword into the creatures head.

Silence hit.
"And you were acting like i was the weirdest thing you had ever seen. What the hell are you. I dont think that any normal little boy can make zombies reach out of the ground and suck people into it."
"Im sorry but I did not want you to see the true power of me and my sword. As we can see both of use were hidding somthing that we did not want the other to know. I was hoping that thing would not make me show my real power but as you can see i had to. So if you dont mind lets keep going and no more questions."
They both walked into the sun again, both silent not talking of the zombie sword that Keyoshi had.
-The sword that Keyoshi has the zombie sword as Bakeira calls it but is known as the Cognotory sword was made just for the very porpuse that Keyoshi used it. It is able to summon dead creatures that have been killed by the sword, only the strong are able to use it. It was created for one for the intent of ruleing the underworld with but it was placed in better hands.-

PostPosted:Tue Sep 19, 2006 10:24 pm
by Kakashi.Archive
I am not righting this anymore for it sounds to much like Samurai deeper Kyo. and a few other shows...Im not saticfied with it at all!

PostPosted:Tue Sep 19, 2006 11:23 pm
by DarkLink
i want a zombie sword :/
only 1 suggestion.... fix the typos >.>