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Pre WARZ DAYZ
PostPosted:Fri Oct 05, 2007 6:20 pm
by Hime
Okay, since there is no update on side story.....might as well release the new one......
Welcome to PRE WARZ DAYZ
hope you like it
Maiden
A bunch of Bespin officers are on a transport unit. They are all heading towards the same destination. These special Operation units wouldn’t be called unless they are really needed. They are all trying to remember their role in this mission.
“Sir! What is the mission for us again?” One of the Bespin officers asks.
“Didn’t you pay any attention during the briefing??” the other officer answers back.
“I did. It is just that there weren’t anything said about that person over there. There wasn’t anything mentioned about that person who is sitting over there, if my memories are clear.”
“They are clear alright. But yea.....now you have mentioned it we heard nothing about this person who is coming on with us.”
A person sits somewhere in the far, dark corner, of the ship. No one sees the face of the person because of the darkness inside the ship. All they can see are the person’s legs which are showing in the light.
“I think that person is a force user, a Jedi. We didn’t know anything about him taking the same ride with us. HEY Captain! Why didn’t hear anything about a Jedi coming on to our ship.”
The Captain walks in with his gear. He stares at his men and smiles.
``That is because this happened right after the briefing. Since the Jedi`s mission is not going to cause harm or any obstruction to our mission, we let the Jedi on. Now remember, mind your own mission, and do not bother the Jedi at any means. That means do not provoke them into a fight or some sort.``
``Are they going to kill us or something with their all powerful force attacks?” One of the Bespin officers laughs.
“No, they would usually kill you with their boredom. But this time the one who is on board this ship is one of a kind. Whatever you people do, just stay away from this Jedi. That’s an order.”
The captain walks away after that. The rest of the special ops members are still staring at the Jedi, who is still sitting in the dark without speaking a word. The only sound the Jedi makes is the tapping on the ground. The tapping is very light.
“Hey everyone, watch this.” One of the Bespin special ops members says.
“Didn’t the Captain order us not to provoke or bother the Jedi?”
“Don’t worry about it. It is only just a little joke. Besides I heard that Jedi are friendly people.”
The officer then takes out his rifle and pretends to have accidentally drops the rifle. The rifle slips towards the Jedi’s position.
“HEY there Jedi! Do you mind tossing that back to me? You can easily use the force to help me. Mind you my rifle is heavy.”
The officer is still talking when he found himself being lift up in the air. The Jedi waves its hand to move the officer to his rifle. Other officers just giggle when this happened.
“Mind you, you are not that heavy for me to lift.” A female voice comes out from the Jedi. The female Jedi then shows her face and her upper torso into the light. The officers look and are shocked. The female Jedi is dressed in the standard brown lone robe. But anyone can see her black suit under that robe. She has very long and think black hair. Her skin is as white as snow. Her expression is also as cold as the planet Hoth. Everyone feels a cold chill as she makes a glance at everyone on the ship.
“It’s her! I cannot believe it is her!!” One of the officers yells out.
“What are you talking about? Who is she?”
“That’s the White Lady, Sword-Maiden, White Ghost....but I know she is known as HIME.”
“Are you talking about the Sword-Maiden who has skin pale as snow, but deadly as ice? That’s her?”
“By the force, what is she doing here? I heard that she is a hybrid or something. There are lots of rumours about her. ”
“Rumours you say? What are they?”
“There is one saying that she is a very cold and blood thirsty warrior when put on the battlefield. I read the records say that she is the zealot in the Jedi order. But it is due to her personality, she never got promoted to higher level.”
“But shouldn’t someone in master or higher level look a bit older?”
“Now that’s another rumour. It seems that over the years, she never shown any sign of aging. She always comes out of battle without a scar......”
HIME just lean back into the shadows and wait without saying a word. She has gotten use to people talking about her in front of her face as if she is not there. From the day she became knight, the world just become crueller and colder in front of her. She then closes her eyes and feels the moment of loneliness. Even though she knows this is not the best time for her to dwell in useless thoughts, she just cannot help it.
“Where is this life going to lead? Where am I going in this?” HIME thinks to herself and sighs. She looks up and still found those Bespin officers are looking at her as if she is some sort of exhibit.
PostPosted:Fri Oct 05, 2007 6:24 pm
by Starcomand
looking good hime
PostPosted:Fri Oct 05, 2007 8:42 pm
by Raziel

nice story

PostPosted:Sat Oct 06, 2007 6:00 am
by Kenshin
its pretty cool
PostPosted:Sun Oct 07, 2007 12:58 am
by Raziel
Hime this story was awsome keep it up ^_^!! and evil jeez lol there r lottas bespin cops in sw xD
PostPosted:Thu Oct 11, 2007 8:43 am
by Hime
Rushing beat
Somewhere on a distant planet:
Guns are blazing away, and bombs are exploding on scene like flowers blooming in spring time. A trooper is running and avoiding these explosions as if they are nothing on the scene. He runs to one corner and hides.
“This is team V02! We need back up! We need back up now! Situation is getting out of control!! We are losing control on point 483! I repeat! We need back up....NOW!”
The soldier then takes out a grenade and throws it towards incoming troopers. An explosion occurred, the soldier then runs as fast as he can towards his destination. The funny thing is, he doesn’t even know where he is going and coming to terms with all that is going on around him. The only thing he knows is to keep running. He reaches the front gate of a building. His instincts tell him not to go inside. He then avoids entering the building. Then again, the incoming fire from outside are too great for a person to run around. Certainly, he has no intention of becoming a walking billboard.
“I guess I have to take this route.” The soldier says to himself as he enters the building.
Going into an abandoned building without any backup is not a very clever thing to do for a trooper. However, for the little choices the trooper has, he just has to go against his own instincts. The first thing he does is to hide himself at a corner and check his own condition.
“Alright, less than two clips left of ammo. Grenades are out of the question in here. My scanner rendered useless during that explosion. At least I am pretty much still in one piece.”
The soldier then applies first aid on to his wounds before moving further into the building. He takes out a spray can and spray into the air. Upon the spray, multiple laser lines appeared in the air.
“Great, trip mines. One wrong step, I am going to have this building as my blanket.” The soldier sighs as he says. Suddenly, he hears footsteps from outside. He then drop don on to the ground and listen. Here is no mistake that the enemy troopers are moving in. Now, the soldier is being stuck between a deadly trap and a bunch of friendly enemy troopers who going to show him welcome by firing their blasters at him.
“Okay, do or die.....I hate this!”
The soldier then jumps through one of the gaps and keep moving on. He then stands in front of the entrance to wait for the enemy troopers. He then picks up a rock and then throws it when the enemy’s troopers. The rock touches the laze trap and hence activated it. The whole building collapses on those enemy troopers. The soldier makes for a long jump in order to get away from the explosion as far as possible. As he landed, he finds the explosion is catching up with him. There is no more time for him to avoid the attack. He covers himself and blazes for impact. Suddenly, someone is riding a speeder passes by and carries him away.
“Who.......what?” the soldier says to himself. He is too tired to react anymore. He just let himself fade into the darkness.
“Are you alright? You seem injured from head to toe. “A man’s voice comes into the soldier’s ears.
He wakes up and finds himself in front of a person in brown robes. It is no doubt that person is a Jedi from the Jedi Order. Only a Jedi would wear this kind of clothing.
“Oh good, you are awake. Now, we should get moving before this gets any more dangerous.” The Jedi says.
The soldier nods in respond. He is still amazed by the appearance of a Jedi. This is his first time meeting a force user face to face.
“Before we move on, I need to take you back to your tem. Tell me, which company are you from?” The Jedi asks with a kind voice.
“I am from the Rushing Beat Company, SIR.”
“Come now, there is no need to call me sir. That does not apply to our order.”
“I am sorry sir.....I mean......How do I address you then?”
“You can call me Phoenix. That’s my name. Now let’s take you back to Captain Sparky’s camp.”
“You are Phoenix. The Fire Bird of the Order, the Fire Sword of the Jedi.”
PostPosted:Thu Oct 11, 2007 12:31 pm
by Starcomand
great update hime keep it up
PostPosted:Thu Oct 11, 2007 6:06 pm
by Kenshin
nice update

PostPosted:Thu Oct 11, 2007 9:11 pm
by Raziel
nice story =-) looking forward for next chapter

PostPosted:Thu Oct 11, 2007 9:43 pm
by Hime
NOw I am rather puzzled about who sghould I introduce next???
any ideas?
PostPosted:Thu Oct 11, 2007 9:49 pm
by Kenshin
me and raz?

PostPosted:Thu Oct 11, 2007 10:33 pm
by Raziel
Kenshin wrote:me and raz? 
^_^ aye

PostPosted:Fri Oct 12, 2007 5:41 am
by Starcomand
me lol
PostPosted:Fri Oct 12, 2007 6:11 am
by Hime
The SD master
Inside the Jedi Temple, The Jedi council is setting up a meeting. They are reviewing the recent events of the Academy.
“The academy as a whole is functioning well. Most of our missions are successful. The students’ developments are very pleasing....”
“However, there is one thing we need to concern about.”
“Are you talking about her? Did she do something that causes attention again?”
“Yes.”
“I think we need to call in Master Danger again.”
Danger walks into the council chamber. He takes a seat with the council members since he is a part of the council as well.
“Greetings Master Danger, it pains us to intrude you from your duties. However, there are some news that needs your attention.” One of the council members says.
“Oh? What would that be?”
“It is about your student, HIME! She wrecked havoc during her last mission. Her objective was to capture a very notorious crime lord. She supposed to take him back alive!! However, she ended up silencing every single gang members and the crime lord too! Even though she managed to take down another crime organization, the price is too high. There is nothing left for anyone to identify. It is like she is acting as judge and jury.” One council member says.
“Her results are unquestionable. She executed her duties to the book. It is just that she takes her job a little too far. It is like she harbours a certain dislike towards crime and.....evil. Do you know anything about that?” One other council member says.
”I have known her for taking her business a bit too far. Then again, most of her missions are dangerous ones. Her missions are usually the highly dangerous ones. I trust her judgement. She completes missions that are lower than 20%. At least she always comes out from the mission unharmed. Moreover, those crime lords and their men would harm more people than she does.”
“THAT IS NOT THE POINT! The way she fights and the way she acts makes her looks like a Sith! She always isolates herself from the crowd. She only talks to a few people. She always trains by herself! Not to mention she is always cold to everyone!”
“Now that is being unreasonable! Those are just her personalities. Besides, the ones she silenced are criminals! Yes I do admit that she is not very talkative and friendly towards other people. She never harmed any innocents during her missions!” Danger replies.
“Well, no one knows when she is going to go berserk and kills everyone! I suggest we need to contain her! However, the council believes you, as her master, can council her to change her ways. Just so you know, we do insist that she changes her ways.”
“I do respect that decision of the council. But, I do trust my student’s work and her person. I personally do not disagree with how my student works on her case. Even though she has this cold expression, there is good inside of her. I know my student. I ask the council to trust my judgement.” Danger says.
“I hope you are right. Then again, I do hope that you know if you are wrong you know what the council would do. I still remember what she did to the Academy when she first set foot inside here?”
“With all due respect......she was being attacked by Stump and other student. She had to defend herself though.” Danger replies.
“She did gone berserk in the end didn’t she? She injured a lot of students in that incident!”
“At least no one was killed. Look, she has done nothing other than undertaking dangerous missions for the order. She put her life on the line more times than anyone else here. Mind if I remind you how hard she had to work through her ranks because of you people? She used a lot more time in the Academy to advance than anyone else here. She had to put up with more difficult tasks than anyone else. She gone through all that and now you want to contain her for her actions?” Danger asks.
“That is another matter. But know this: if we, the council, feel any sign of darkness coming inside of her. We will be forced to step in. You know what will happen. Consider yourself warned.”
“Just leave her to me. I was the one who brought her here! She is my student and I will care for her in any way possible. Just so you know, you are being really fair on her case though.” Danger says.
“Very well, we will trust this time. We hope we can see good results from your...counselling. This meeting is over.”
As Danger walks out from the council chamber he runs into his two padawans.
“Master, have I caused you trouble again?”
“No HIME, you are only following the will of the force inside of you. Those fools do not know who they are dealing with. I must say you are one of a kind. Now, let’s go and let me how you two have grown through the years. But HIME, your image remains the same as the first time I met you. Has the tides of time been kind to you?” Danger asks.
“I don’t know.”
“Ah....who cares about that HIME! Let’s go to the place we went last time with great food!” Lessa says.
PostPosted:Fri Oct 12, 2007 5:31 pm
by Starcomand
good story keep it up hime
PostPosted:Fri Oct 12, 2007 8:39 pm
by Kenshin
lolz funny last speech by lessa.. great story hime keep writing
PostPosted:Fri Oct 12, 2007 8:56 pm
by Raziel
great update ^_^. Looking forward for next part .
PostPosted:Sat Oct 13, 2007 10:18 am
by Hime
The case
Many force users have made themselves known through the universe by their reputation. One of them is HIME. Her arrival to the Academy is already one of the mysteries she has. According to sources, she has long, thin black hair. She has skin that is as white as snow. She has a personality that matches the weather of the planet Hoth. She is always alone. That leads to many rumours of her. Everyone knows if she comes to your door steps, that means bad news. Unlike many of her fellow Jedi, she refuses to take in any students. She does undertake missions from the Academy. However, she disappears from time to time. During that time, no one is able to find her, not even her master. There are only a handful of people whom she can call as “friends”. It is that handful of people whom can speak to HIME without any bad feelings. It is the same handful of people whom HIME deeply respects.
One of her rumours is that she never shows any sign of aging. Many Jedi and Sith wonder about her strong connection with the force to keep her image. Then again, her saber style is as famous as her rumours. She is used to use a certain instant kill attack. Many lightsaber users hated that and consider that a skill for people who do not honour the lightsaber arts.
Since HIME cannot find anywhere she belongs, that is why she is always on the move. She does that to find out more about herself. That’s seems to be her biggest motivation to keep her going. As mentioned before, she does have a number of friends in and out of the Academy. Other than those, she is all alone.
It is one of those normal days when a number of government officials come to the Jedi temple/Academy. Some Jedi masters along with some other Council members come out to greet them.
“What brings you to the temple?” one of the council members says
“We are looking for a number of the members of your order. We have a situation that we need the Order’s assistants.” One of the officials answers.
“I see we shall talk inside.”
The group enters the vast Jedi Temple. They walk through gigantic hallways to reach the meeting room.
“We have a situation on the planet Naboo. It seems there is a revolt going on. We need the Order’s help to calm the situation down.”
“If it is solely on settling diplomatic matters, the Order has no business with politics. The Order forbids any Jedi settling foot into any political matters.”
“I do understand. However, from what we have gathered, it seems the leaders of the revolt are a group of Siths. Maybe a Sith lord in the mist of things. That is why we need the Order’s help.”
“How can you be so sure?” one of the Jedi Masters asks.
“Master Ronin, please take a look at the sources we have found. Now, please take a look at this picture.”
Ronin takes a look at the picture with the other masters and council members. They see a shadow holding a red lightsaber. However, no one is able to identify shadow.
“That is why we have come up of a list of Jedi we need on this mission.”
“How many do you need? Who are they? You lot should know that the Jedi are doing their part in many corners of the universe. Let’s just hope that they are here.”
“Here they are: Kane, Newspaper Ninja, Lessa, and HIME.”
“You want the Sword Maiden to come on this mission?”
“Yes, is she here? We believe with these people’s reputation, we can solve this problem quickly.”
“That is the problem. HIME has gone missing again. It was after her most recent mission. She went to her quarters and then exited the temple. No one saw her after that.”
“Is there a way to find her, track her down?”
“I am afraid there is no way we can track her down. She is very hard to find. We don’t you find another one to replace her?”
“No...it has to be her!”
“Masters, I, Ronin, will undertake the mission to search for HIME and inform her about this mission.”
“Very well Ronin, you are to search for HIME and bring her to Naboo with you.”
PostPosted:Sat Oct 13, 2007 11:38 am
by Starcomand
great update hime keep it up
PostPosted:Sat Oct 13, 2007 1:07 pm
by Raziel

cant wait until next chapter

PostPosted:Sat Oct 13, 2007 3:42 pm
by Kenshin
nice update .. looking forward ot the next chapter
PostPosted:Mon Oct 22, 2007 10:14 pm
by Hime
The search of the Maiden
"So, Master Ronin, you will now undertake the task of searching the mission Knight HIME. Your mission is to locate her and to bring her to Naboo as soon as possible. That was brillant back there Ronin. You took that mission without having and kind of clues. You are so smart." Ronin speaks to himself.
He is beating himself for bring this kind of job upon himself. He knows needs to settle down and think. He just took on a very hard task. He then realized that he has no idea of HIME's behaviour. He is at lost. At this moment, Starcomand walks into Ronin's chamber.
"I heard you take on this great search for one missing Maiden. How are you even going to begin your search? Despite nowadays spacecraft travel, the universe is still a very big place." Starcomand says to Ronin.
"Nope, I have no lead. Plus, no one can sense where HIME is. It is not news that her force feels neither alive nor dead. This makes the search like finding a lightsaber in the mist of an ocean!" Ronin answers.
"Don't you find this rather intersting? I mean, in any normal cases, we only need our senses to find our answer. We feel very much powerless when we cannot use the force to do our own bidding. In this case, we cannot use the force to find hime becasue we cannot sense her. This makes us like any regular people outside. We cannot sense her thoughts, and everything else." Starcomand answers.
"Well, we cannot read her mind, nor sense her monvements. But she can do that to us. This makes us feel any regular people feel when they are being stare by any force users. I get the chills everytime she looks at me. I do sense the fear inside of me. The fear of being powerless.....it makes me shiver." Ronin says.
"Now, I do feel better about the search." Starcomand answers.
"Somehow, I believe you are not here just to have regular chit-chat with me. Is there something else you want to tell me about you being here?" Ronin asks.
"Oh right! The council is concerned about your mission being to hard and gives you too much stress on you. I am assigned here to offer any kind of help. I have also brought some information for you." Starcomand says as he hands a disk over to Ronin.
Ronin read the disk and finds out it contains the flgiht history of HIME's own ship, Akayuki. He wants to hit himself very hard for not considering that option.
"Am I glad that you are here. Look! She seem to have this pattern of disappearence during this time of the year. On the records, she seem to have travelled to the outter rims. That narrows are search down." Ronin says.
"Why, oh why does it have to be the outter rims? BUt more improtantly, what is she doing over there?" Starcomand asks.
The two decided to take this question to HIME's Master, Jedi Master SD Danger. However, Danger is currently on a mission and yet to be returned. So, they switch their eyes to HIME's fellow Jedi Knight, Lessa. Again, Lessa is on a rescue mission with Master Nintendo. Since the result doesn't bear fruit, they decided to go read about HIME's past missions and logs. Hopefully, from there they will find something useful for their search.
BLACK BIRD
Jedi Knight Lessa is carrying a little girl on her back while running. Lessa is running as fast as she can.
"Master NIntendo, I have got the cargo here! The cargo is safe. I repeat: The cargo is safe!" Lessa says to her transmitter.
"Good work Lessa, we are currently heading to your location. Just hang tight until we arrive! DO try to stay alive though." Nintendo replies back.
Lessa looks to her back and find out a number of bandits are cosing in to her position. She looks around and find no where to hide. That leaves her only one choice: fight. SHe ignites her lightsaber and start deflecting incoming shots and uses the force to lift up and heavy object to make a barrade. Lessa swings her lightdsaber wildly tp protect herself and the little girl. She starts to think if this any normal days, she would have no problem in this situation. That because in any normal day, HIME would be there and do most of the fighting.
"There is no end to this!" Lessa grunts.
Just then, a black ship dives down from the sky in high speed and provide cover fire for Lessa at the same time. The ship came in so fast that no one, including Lessa, seen it coming. When the ship almost reaches to Lessa's location, Nintendo jumps out from the ship and start fighting those bandits. It only takes a moment for Nintendo to handle the problem.
"Good work holding your own. I see Danger has taught you well." Nintendo says to Lessa.
"At least I should be thankful to the Black Bird." Lessa says.
"Or you mean the person who pilots the Black Bird?" a voice comes out from the ship. Both Nintendo and Lessa laughs once they heard the voice.
"Yes, I thank you two, Raven." Lessa says.
"You two better finish here quick. I just got another order from the council. I need to go back to the temple as soon as this mission is finished." Raven says.
"Always the busy girl, what is it this time?"NIntendo asks.
"Searching mission." Raven answers
PostPosted:Mon Oct 22, 2007 10:33 pm
by Raziel
Every time i read it , it gets better ^__^ im waitin for next update and great story.

PostPosted:Tue Oct 23, 2007 1:35 am
by Kenshin
great chapter hime ^^
PostPosted:Tue Oct 23, 2007 5:48 am
by Starcomand
great update hime keep it up