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Naruto Knights Village

PostPosted:Mon Apr 30, 2007 7:26 pm
by Kakashi.Archive
One hundred years ago a demon fox attacked a village called Konoha. In an attempt to save the village the fourth Hokage sealed the fox inside of a newborn child by doing so he killed himself but saved the village. The child was named Naruto. Later in years he full filed his dream of becoming the Hokage. He died not to many years ago when the new Hokage came to the Village. Her name was similar to the fifth. Tsunada Hime became the newest Hokage to Konoha Village. She watches over everything that happens.

In the new years many Genin, which are lower rank ninjas, are much more skilled and have many new Kekkei-Genkai, bloodline traits, these are types of clans that have specific traits that no one else has. Such as the Uchiha Blood line. The Uchiha clan went into almost full extinction, but after a bit of time the Uchiha clan grew again. Also a clan known as the Kaguya clan came out of extinction.

There are many new Academy students at the Konoha School now that come from all over and have many different bloodlines. But also many new Chuunin and Jounin, which are higher rank ninja that protect the village. But the more and more years have gone on many clans have come from all over. Many feuds still go on between Konoha but are resolved.

The Chuunin exams are about to begin as all of the Genin get ready. The Chuunin exams are to test a Genin to see if there ready to go to the Chuunin level.

One group that’s on the list which is group 5 of the hidden leaf village has two brothers and on other person along with the group leader. First the group leader is Ronin who is at the Jounin level. He is of the Hyuuga clan, this clan specializes in the Byakugan also known as the all seeing eye. His rank for Jutsu’s is at a B level. He is very skilled and is very quick on his feet. One of the Genin of his group is also of the Hyuuga clan her name is Silvercloud. She is smart and as C level Jutsu. She is also in the middle of learning medical techniques. She has already learned most of what Ronin does but not improved. There are some things that she doesn’t know but in time she will learn them and at a fast rate. The to Brothers are named Kakashi, as in the one-thousand Jutsu Kakashi, but its his great grandson. Kakashi is already at a level that he must be watched over a lot. He learns at a fast rate and is part of the Uchiha clan. He has learned more the seven hundred moves at the age of thirteen. He hasn’t been aloud on any big missions but is capable of helping if need be. He has several A ranked Jutsu and has two S ranked Jutsu, but he’s not capable to us them for long. His brother Soulreaper or also known as Obito Is almost the exact same. One thing that they also have is from a different clan that was thought to be wiped out is the Kaguya clan who were famous for being able to Manipulating there bone structure.

“Silvercloud I see you’re here early as usual.” Ronin says as he walks up to a tree that Silvercloud was leaning against.
“Well I figured I would start studying some more moves from the scroll you gave me. Such as im learning this one. The Sixty Four Trigram Palm Rotation.”
“Your trying to learn a very hard technique that not many have mastered. But if you want I can train with you seeing as the to boys wont be showing up for at least another few hours.”
“Ok…”
“ What have you learned so far? You can show me…” Ronin put to his pointer fingers and his middle fingers together. “Shadow Clone Jutsu”

A exact clone of Ronin appeared in a cloud of smoke.

“Ok then this should be easy enough.” Silver made several hand signs in a distinct order. “Byakugan! Sixty Four Trigram Palm Rotation. Two. Four. Eight. Sixteen. Thirty Two. And last but not least Sixty Four.” Silvercloud moved at a very fast rate hitting every single Chakra point on the clones body. The clone disappeared in a cloud of smoke just as it had appeared.
“Well…I guess you learned that move….But you need to perfect your hits a bit more…Ill make a few more clones, I need to go see the Hokage.”

Ronin made twenty more clones of himself and then left as Silvercloud got to training on the clones.

Back at Kakashi and Obito’s house they were getting up. There parents died many years ago so they lived in a house alone and Kakashi was always the one taking care of his younger brother making food.

Ronin went to the Hokage office to find out what was so important.
“Ah Ronin I see you did come. I need to send you on a mission.”
“Cool another mission for Silver, Obito and I to go on.”
“No…This mission I need your whole team to go on. I need Kakashi on this one as well. This mission is to the Lighting Country. Three Genin that were suppose to show up to the Chuunin Exam. But there Sensei has become very ill. Unless you go and get them they wont be able to come to the Exam and that could cause a problems between the fire and lighting country. I need you and your team to get them. This mission is considered a B rank, and its not being listed.”
“Right lord Hokage. As a side note Hime why am I taking Kakashi? I mean this will be the first mission he’s going on that isn’t a D ranked.”
“I need him to go because he hasn’t been on a mission before and he will be going on many when he becomes a Chuunin. And this mission is not like many others. I feel that there might be some big problems that you might encounter, Kakashi should be given the chance to go on his first mission. You must leave first thing this morning so get prepared. You should be back in time for the Exams. You may also gather a few other people for this mission. There are not many left because they are out on other missions. Good luck.”
“Right.”

Ronin was heading back to Silver when he ran into a two people he knew.
“Hello Kenshin, hello ShrunkenCheese. I have a question for you. If your have the time im going on a mission and I would like if you guys tags along. You interstead?”
“Hell yes.” Kenshin said with a bit of enthusiasm.
“I’m game. I haven’t been on a mission in a long time.” ShrunkenCheese said with a little bit of a sluggish gesture.

“Ok then meet me at the front gate in one hour.”
Ronin turned away and started heading back to Silver as he then bumped into Kakashi and Obito.

“Well fancy seeing you guys this early. You need to head back to your house and meet me at the front gate. Were going on a new mission.”
“Well then I guess ill see you later Obito.” Kakashi sighed.
“No Kakashi. Your going on this one as well. I need you and you will have a bit of fun.”

Kakashi started jumping up and down in excitement. He grabbed Obito and ran home basically screaming. Ronin stood there a bit shocked then turned again and headed back to Silver.

When he got to silver he saw that she made very fast work on his clones, She was sitting on the ground.

“I’m a bit worn out but I have a bit more energy left.”
“Good then. Cause we just got another mission. I need you at the front Gate in one hour.”
“Ok I’m guessing your going to brief us when were getting ready to leave. Ill see you there.”

Silver ran home to get her stuff packed for, Ronin started to run as well, he stopped when he noticed one of his fellow Jounin, Raven.

“Ronin don’t ask me. You want me to go on a mission.”
“I hate when you do that. Reading my eyes the way you do.”
“I can do it. Ill pack my stuff. How long do I have before I need to meet up?”
“At this point about forty-five minutes.”

Ronin and Raven went there separate ways back to there houses to get ready.

An hour later.

Obito and Kakashi were the first at the gate. Silvercloud was the third person to get there, followed by Kenshin. ShrunkenCheese walked up with Ronin, they were in a very intense conversation because Ronin seemed very perplexed. Raven was the last to come, she took her time walking up to the group but when she got there Ronin got right into explaining the mission.

“Ok all. Iv asked you to come because the Hokage has asked us to go on a very important mission. We are going to the Lightning Country to pick up three Genin that are suppose to be at the Chuunin Exams. There sensei is very ill and cant make it at this point.”
Raven look up kind of puzzled.
“The why do you need us? This is a simple mission.”

“This isn’t simple by what the Hokage said. There will be a few ninja coming after us at the same time. That’s why I’m also bringing Kenshin are good tracker ninja.”

“I see, interesting tactic.” Kenshin said nodding his head.

“So this is how it will work. Kakashi and Obito while be in the front of everyone else. ShrunkenCheese will be following behind them. Raven and Kenshin will follow behind him look at the sides of the group. And Silver and I will follow from way behind using the Byakugan to see if there is anyone behind us. We need to get there in a timely fashion. We will stop during the night and that is it.”

“Ok got it.” The entire group said.

The Gate doors opened up as the group walked out.

Kakashi and Obito jumped up into the trees and started the mission off. The others followed in the order given by Ronin.

“Obito… Its going to be hard for us to keep it up but the only way were going to see an attack from the front is if we us are Kekkei-Genkai.”
“Right!”
“SHARINGAN!” The two of them said. There eyes went from a bright blue to a dark red tone. In one of Obito’s eyes it had a small piece of the wheel. Theirs three pieces of the wheel all together. In his other eye he had two of the wheels. Kakashi on the other hand had all three of the wheels in both eyes.

ShrunkenCheese heard the two of them up ahead…
“Well if there going to do it then I mine as well. SHARINGAN!”

Raven followed silently next to Kenshin.
Ronin and Silvercloud were in the back.
“We need to get prepared.”
“Right sensei.”
“BYAKUGAN!”
The Byakugan is a Kekkei-Genkai that gives the Hyuuga clan the ability too see three hundred and sixty degrees around them. It also gives them the sight to see threw things and also see things that other ninjas cannot. The can see the chakra points in a persons body.

It had been about 3 hours already. Everyone was tired and Kakashi, Obito, and ShrunkenCheese had turned their Sharingan off. It had wasted a bit of their chakra.

“Kakashi…I’m getting really tired. I don’t know if I can keep this up much longer, I think we need to tell Ronin.”

“Its ok, come here. Were ahead of the group. Ill carry you for a while. At least long enough so that your chakra can restore.”
Obito held onto Kakashi’s back and then fell asleep very fast. Raven was still wide awake when she had noticed something up ahead not far from were Kakashi was.

“STOP!”
The whole group stopped and met back with Raven.

Ronin looked at her perplexed.
“What wrong?”
“We’ve been spotted.”

“Obito its time to wake up.” Kakashi said as he set him down on the tree branch.

“Huu… What’s going on? I was sleeping.” A shurikan cut the side of ShrunkenCheese’s face.

“Get down, know!” Ronin yelled

A ninja they had never seen before was slowly walking up a tree not to far from there own. Not even a few seconds later three other ninja also walked up several other tree’s.

“You shouldn’t have come here. Its time for you all to die.”

ShrunkenCheese was the first to make a move. He kneeled down on the branch he was on.
“I hope this works. SHARINGAN! Hmmm. I wonder if there is enough shadows to do this. He put his right hand up, extending his middle and pointer finger he grabbed them with his other hand. “Ninja Art, Shadow Position Jutsu.” A black shadow from Shrunkencheese extended down the tree, when it hit the ground it moved threw the bushes on the ground. It started climbing up the tree closest to him that had one of the Ninja in it. The shadow linked to the ninja in the opposite tree. “Got him. You guys get the other three.”

“Obito Wake up KNOW!” Kakashi this time screamed in Obito’s ear loud enough to fully wake him up. “We got work to do.”
“SHARINGAN!”
“Obito. You know what to do.”
“Right. Lets hope the training paid off with you.” Obito said hesitantly.
“Ninja Art, Bone Structure Jutsu.” Both of them said at the exact same time.
Obito Put his arms out with his palms extended and something white started to extend from it. Kakashi on the other hand was hunched over. The same white thing started to appear.

“There from the clan that was suppose to be whipped out in the hidden mist Village. The Kaguya clan. We might not stand much of a chance against those too.”

Ronin had never seen this from Obito on any of the missions he had been on with him. Only the Sharingan was what he noticed.

Finally Obito had what appeared to be a white long poll in his hand. It took Ronin a second to figure out what it was.

“He can’t be. He’s holding his bones in his hands, and Kakashi’s back has bones sticking out of it. RAVEN. Lets get in there.” Ronin said with a loud mutter.

Raven opened up a small bag on her side and pulled out a large and sharp object.
“This should do nicely.” She then opened the object up to reveal a four angle shurikan. “Well then. Ill just use the same technique that Sasuke Uchiha used many years ago. You ready Kenshin.”
“Yup!”
“Good……Demon Wind Shuriken, Windmill of Shadows!”

-------To be Continued-------

PostPosted:Mon Apr 30, 2007 7:36 pm
by Hime
NICE I am the Hokage

interesting plot ....... want to see what's going on after

PostPosted:Mon Apr 30, 2007 7:40 pm
by Soulreaper
yea same here think this fight is gonna be interesting

PostPosted:Mon Apr 30, 2007 7:41 pm
by Kenshin
great story kak :P - i wonder what im ready for xD

yay im a tracker xD tht means i should have the shadow clone jutsu sweet

PostPosted:Tue May 01, 2007 1:01 am
by ShrunkenCheese
omg I'm in this... and I got a cool scar now.... and SHADOW POSSESSION JUTSU! Really good story kak, can't wait to read more!

PostPosted:Tue May 01, 2007 1:16 am
by Soulreaper
ShrunkenCheese wrote:omg I'm in this... and I got a cool scar now....
Scar?

PostPosted:Tue May 01, 2007 1:31 am
by ShrunkenCheese
yea, a shuriken cut the side of meh face, no I got a cool battle scar! lol

PostPosted:Tue May 01, 2007 1:57 am
by Soulreaper
ShrunkenCheese wrote:yea, a shuriken cut the side of meh face, no I got a cool battle scar! lol
Ohh yea i forgot bout that part lol

PostPosted:Tue May 01, 2007 8:03 pm
by ShrunkenCheese
yea, cool battle scar... all the ladies will love meh ^^ lol

PostPosted:Tue May 01, 2007 8:50 pm
by Soulreaper
your a idiot u kno that :lol:

PostPosted:Tue May 01, 2007 9:18 pm
by Starcomand
so where am i lol jk

PostPosted:Tue May 01, 2007 10:27 pm
by Soulreaper
lolz star

PostPosted:Tue May 01, 2007 11:40 pm
by ShrunkenCheese
haha yea'z I know

PostPosted:Thu May 03, 2007 2:25 am
by Kakashi.Archive
Hime was doing paper work as usual. She dropped her pen and went outside for fresh air. Not long, after she found some of the Genin of the village and started to hang out. Hime is only about twenty-six. She finds peace a good thing. She doesn’t like to fight let alone train. Yet if the time every called for it she could hold her own. Phoenix her assistant and also one of the council members of the Hidden Leaf Village always has to drag Hime back to her office so that she can finish the paperwork. Though sometimes people wonder if she is a good Hokage, she is the best of them so far. She is smart fast and is good with Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, and Tiajutsu. She is what is known as an S ranked ninja. Meaning she knows a lot of techniques and is very good with forbidden jutsus.

Kenshin of the Hidden Leaf Village is a hunter or tracker ninja. His soul mission is to find any Shinobi that were once part of the Hidden Leaf, if they are a threat he is to kill them that way no one can leak any information. No one knows that he is part of the Uchiha clan because he has not yet mastered the Sharingan. But he’s not just part of the Uchiha clan but he also has a darker side to him as well. He can break down his body to a molecular level and actually merge with other people. This attack is known as Kisei Kakai. It allows him to attack cells in someone else’s body from the inside out. Though the only downfall to this attack is if the person dies so doesn’t he. Kenshin is a B ranked ninja. He knows many jutsu but not anything of High standards beside the Shadow Clone jutsu.

ShrunkenCheese is also of the Hidden Leaf Uchiha clan. He hasn’t gotten the fully developed Sharingan but for a Genin has mastered enough to survive. He is only at a C rank but he is very skilled at chakra control. He is very clever.

Ronin and Silver cloud are of the Hyuuga clan. Ronin and Silvercloud are B-Ranked Ninja. Silver learns at a very increasing rate and has excellent chakra control. She will make a good Shinobi some day. Ronin is a good ninja, he didn’t learn at a rate like Silver but what he did learn has been perfected better then what most people can do. Ronin is a Jounin and Silver is a Genin that is looking to be a Medical Ninja like Raven.

Raven is a Medical ninja of the Hidden Leaf village. She knows the entire anatomy of a human, but the best part is she knows much about other animals as well. She can cut ten dins from the outside very precisely. She is very quick on her feet, and has an IQ of 354, more then a genius.

Obito and Kakashi are a mix of the Uchiha clan and the Kaguya clan, they are also brothers. The Uchiha clan was almost wiped out of existence, but the famous Sasuke Uchiha replenished the clan. The Hidden Mist Villagers on the other hand supposedly wiped out the Kaguya clan. The only one left was Kimimaru who served under the futile Lord Orochimaru. He was the last of the clan so no one knows how Obito and Kakashi have the bloodline in them. They are capable of manipulating their bones and growing new ones at a given will. Kakashi and Obito are both A ranked ninja, but Kakashi also has several S ranked techniques making him more dangerous then most people of the Hidden Leaf village. He is the older brother and that is always looking out for Obito while Obito is always learning and being respectful of his brother. He is also scared of him at times because Kakashi is known for losing control and hurting people. Obito is eager to learn anything that he can. Obito and Kakashi have each other’s backs.

Back at the attack…

Raven looked at Kenshin.
“Are you ready?”
“Yup!”
“Good. Demon Wind Shuriken, Windmill of Shadows.”

Ronin looked around and Kenshin was no were in site. –Thoughts- ‘” He must be on the ground getting around to the back of these guys while Raven attacks from the front. Good plan.”

Raven pulled her arm back with the Wind Shuriken, then while adding an extra thrust threw the Shuriken as hard as she could at the enemy that was farthest away. In mid are while rotating Ronin had noticed that there was something different about this Shuriken but hadn’t said anything. As the Shuriken was about to hit the Ninja that was wearing a Dark blue Mask and Black robes. He put his hand out in mid air and caught the Shuriken.

“Is that the best you can do? Maybe this will be easer then I though. Hmmm…Why don’t you take your Shuriken baa………”

Another Windmill Shuriken was sticking out of his side right about at heart length. The Shuriken he was holding blew up into smoke and Kenshin appeared. He wiped his forehead.

“Great job on the Transformation Jutsu Kenshin…”

“Thanks.”

ShrunkenCheese was smiling. He stood up off of the branch he was on. The ninja he had his shadow position jutsu on did the exact same thing. When ShrunkenCheese stood up he reached into his pouch he had on his left leg, and pulled out three star shuriken.

“You can copy anything I do because of my jutsu. But I bet you don’t have any Shuriken to throw at me. Do you!”

“Yes but I’m very familiar with this jutsu. And as long as your shadow is attached to me you cant hurt me without hurting yourself. So it’s a lose, lose situation.”

“That’s were your wrong.” ShrunkenCheese smiled. “You see I can hit you without hurting myself…Because your trapped in my clones Shadow Position justu.”

“What…. That’s imposable.”

“Hmmmmm… That’s your problem… You keep underestimating me… Time to finish this….”
ShrunkenCheese got behind the Ninja, then pressed his pointer and middle finger on the back of the Ninjas neck… “ I suggest you give up know… Or I will kill you.”

“Give up to a brat like you…your joking. Plus if you truly think you can kill me go ahead.”

“Death needle Jutsu!”
A needle appeared in ShrunkenCheese’s hand that was also know inside, the Ninja he was fighting, neck. He gasped once, then went frigid. ShrunkenCheese took a deep breath then sighed. He looked over were Ronin and Silvercloud were. Silver looked like she was holding her own, but something was wrong with Ronin.

“Silver… Get him from behind and ill go for the front.” Ronin said as he was shaking a bit in the arms.
“Ronin are you sure? I mean you don’t look well enough to fight head on.”
“Just do it.”

Silvercloud jumped into a set of bushes next to her. She then was directly behind the Ninja while Ronin dealt with the front.

“Your friend wont last long against me. He’s sick, and is in need of medical attention. I will make fast work of him then I’m coming for you!” The ninja looked at Silvercloud then ran strait at Ronin. Unfortunately Ronin couldn’t move in enough time and was struck with a shuriken in the stomach. He fell to the ground almost instantly.

“RONIN…. Your going to wish you didn’t do that.” Silvercloud placed her fingers together. She concentrated hard for a few seconds. Then she placed one hand above her head and the other down by her leg. She stretched out as far as she could. “Trigram sixty four palm rotation.” silver dashed towards the Ninja. She grabbed one of his arms. She then lightly touched his chest then released his arm. She then hit him sixty four times in the body in different areas each time, blocking all chakra flow in his body. He dropped to the ground.

“How can a young child such as your self be capable of using that attack at such a young age. The hidden leaf village is much more talented than my master had thought.”

Kakashi glanced down at were Silvercloud was. He noticed that the ninja had been wearing a earth country head band.

“Lets go. We are of no match for these Leaf ninja.”

To everyone’s surprise the ninja they thought they had killed got up, they grabbed the ninja that Silvercloud had attacked and fled from the area.

“Well… That was no fun. I didn’t even get a few seconds to hurt him…” Kakashi said with a enthusiastic face.

Ronin laying on the ground was starting to shake even more violently he was throwing up blood. As soon as Raven had noticed this she ran towards him.
“Ronin can you hear me. Look at me damn it.” She smacked his face a few times but nothing worked. Ronin had gone into shock. She placed her hand over his chest… A green glow came from it. Ronins wounds were starting to heal. “I can only heal him enough so that I can get him some better attention. Kenshin.”

“Yes Raven?”

“You take the others with you to the lighting country and get the three Genin that are suppose to come to the Chuunin exam. I need to take Ronin back to the Leaf Village and get him medical attention. You have two weeks to get back here before the exams start. Also be on the alert. I’m sure that’s not the last of those Ninja. I’ll get Starcomand to catch up with you as soon as possible. If he doesn’t catch up to you before you get back then best of luck to you. As for you four… I want you to listen to everything Kenshin says… As of know this mission is much more dangerous. The Hokage ranked it a B ranked. But even with your lovely display on the attack this mission is a A ranked.”

“We will Raven…” The four said.

Raven walked up to Kenshin and whispered in his ear… “Be careful… I’m not so sure that it was right to have Kakashi along on this mission. Let alone the fact that I’m leaving him with you. Keep a close eye on him no matter what. If he gets out of your grasp it could mean serious consequences.”
“Ok. Ill do my best with the four.”

“Good luck you guys and hurry back soon.”
Raven grabbed Ronin up and disappeared.

“Well then… Shall we continue. We sill have a few hours to go before were there and its going to be night fall within the next few hours. Let alone the fact the paperwork I have to fill out to get these Genin…Lets a get a move on.”

Everyone got back into there formation and started heading back to there original mission.


-----Far off With the Ninja------

“Master. We failed this mission. They had seven in all. It seems as if the Leaf villages Genin are stronger then we had thought. What’s your next wish?”

A person with very pail skin stood up from his chair. His long black hair trailed behind him.

“Iv dealt with the Hidden Leaf Village a lot. Yet your right in the past few years clans have sprouted up that were suppose to go into extinction.”

“Master there is also something else you should know. There was someone there. Actually what looked like brothers. They both have the Sharingan. But also ha-------.”

“The Sharingan. Already I can tell you this is going to be harder then expected.”

“But they also have the Kaguya blood line trait in them.”

“Kimi…ma…ru…” The figure stood there as if in a frightened state. “There might still be hope yet. If the two have the Kaguya clan in them I might be able to use them. I tried before with the help of the sand village to destroy the Hidden leaf but that failed, and the last thing I almost got eaten by my own summoning. I’m still not my full self. But soon. Very soon I will rise again. Prepare for the Chuunin Exams. I’m putting you in so that we may learn a bit more on these ninja.

----To Be continued----

PostPosted:Thu May 03, 2007 8:16 am
by Kenshin
poor ronin :(

why do i get the feeling tht orichimaru is behind this 0_o
then again he couldn't be.. sasuke killed him

yay i have shadow clone jutsu and i hope i master the sharingan soon :P

i rember that shurikan move from the mangas of naruto :P what a great episode :)

keep writing more!

PostPosted:Mon May 07, 2007 11:58 pm
by Kakashi.Archive
Kenshin and the group had been going since about nine am. It was know eight pm and everyone was exhausted. Finally up ahead they could see lights. A large village was up ahead not far.

“Ok guys, when we get there were going to the hotel” Kenshin said with what seemed to be short breath.

The arrived in the Hidden Village of Lighting. Kenshin found the best hotel around seeing the leaf village was paying. There were three keys given. Kenshin and Shrunkencheese shared a room Silvercloud got her own, and Kakashi and Obito got there own room. Everyone met in with Kenshin to get a small talk to.

“Ok guys we did very good. For the next few days where going to be here. I have to fill out applications in a few days. These are the rules. I want you guys to check in every few hours, no causing any destruction to this village either. We cant afford getting in trouble by this village.”

“Kenshin.” Kakashi had been standing against the wall by the window looking out at the lake that was about a mile ahead. “Obito and I are going to be training for the exams tomorrow at the lake over there. We won’t be back for a while and we won’t be checking in. We will be leaving early tomorrow as well.”

“Ok then. Just stay clear of people.”

They all went back to there rooms after that. Kakashi and Obito went right to bed, and Silvercloud took a shower and went to bed as well. However Shrunkencheese and Kenshin stayed up for a while and talked.

“Tomorrow I want u and Silvercloud to train most of the day. I need to make a small stop to see the kage of this village and then….” Kenshin hit silence when he heard foot steps in the hall. When they past he began were he left off. “I need to keep an eye on Kakashi and Obito. I can tell you why but I will be watching them train. I hope you guys can train hard and fast. The exams are only a week and a half away.”

“Yes Kenshin. I will do my best. I need my sleep, today has been long, and I’m exhausted. Good night Kenshin.”

“Good night Cheese.”

In the darkness a figure was listening to the whole conversation. It left in a hurry and returned to the confines it had come from. “Lord. The twins I talked to you about. They’re training at the Otaka Lake tomorrow. Shall I go and watch?”

“The figure stood up. No I will test them before the Chuunin exams start. I want to see if I can get them before it begins.”

First thing in the morning Kakashi and Obito got up. Kakashi started breakfast as usual and Obito was in the shower. Not long after they were both ready to go. They left the hotel about six in the morning. Kenshin had already been ready; he headed to see the Kage first thing. Kakashi and Obito left as Kenshin was leaving.

“Have a good day you two.”

The two said back “You as well Ken.”

Kakashi and Obito walked the entire way there. When they got there they started by talking. Kenshin talked with the kage and left almost immediately. He caught up to the area were Kakashi and Obito were. He was standing behind a tree and was not in sensing range for Kakashi to notice him.

“Its time to understand what Raven wanted me to watch him for.”

“Ok Obito you ready. We have done this before so this should be a breeze know.” Obito focused his chakra into his feet, and then slowly he walked out onto the water. Only moments later he started running about. “Good you got it down, are you good enough know that you can withstand that for a while?”

“I think so Kakashi.”

“Good… Time to train then.”

Kakashi without even focusing his chakra walked right out onto the water. Kenshin tried not to laugh thinking and knowing he could do the same easily.

Kakashi and Obito walked a bit more out into the deeper water. They faced each other. They were only a few paces away from each other. Kakashi looked at Obito deeply. He then nodded. Obito was the first to make a move. He started to sprint at Kakashi with a good strong speed. He pulled his hand back and sent a full strength blow at Kakashi’s face. Kakashi didn’t have time to think and was sent flying backwords. At that time Obito ran again ready to kick Kakashi as he go up. Kakashi looked up in time and grabbed his kick. He threw Obito into the air, then jumped up and slammed him into the water. He backed up and waited, Obito swam back to the top then balanced his chakra again and was again standing on the water.

Kenshin smirked. “This is what Raven wanted me to watch. This is merely child’s play. These two don’t have any type of talent besides Tiajutsu, and even that seems to fall short.”

Kakashi looked up at Obito with a smile. But something was different. His eyes were no longer blue, but a dark red, and in the redness were the wheels of his Sharingan. Yet Obito had not come to the surface unprepared. He as well had the Sharingan and was ready to attack. Kakashi pressed his fingers together. He then made several hard signs with them. Almost instantly Obito did the same thing, using the Sharingan. “Water Style, Giant Vortex Jutsu!”

Both made to large amounts of water flow up and the spin at the other. Obito was the first to move out of the way. He knew he would be hit if he hadn’t. Kakashi was next. Two huge vortexes of water went flying into different directions. One hit only a few feet away from the paralyzed Kenshin who couldn’t believe what he just saw. The other was sent into the air and crashed down next to Obito. Kakashi had already started his next jutsu without Obito knowing. “Water Style, Water Wipe Jutsu!”

Again Kenshin was surprised to see an advanced jutsu like that. Obito started dodging every attack that Kakashi threw at him. Obito couldn’t stop at all because Kakashi moved faster then he did.

Kenshin was standing there in disbelief at what he was seeing. He felt something on the back of his neck, when he went to brush it off he realized it was someone’s hair. He looked up and in the tree hanging upside down was a girl. “Hi.” Kenshin jumped back as she said this.

“Who are you and what are you doing here?”

“Hehe…I’m Faia. I’m one of the Genin you’re taking back to Hidden leaf for the exams. My kage told me I could find you hear. Sorry if I surprised you.”

Kenshin stood there. His jaw dropped. He couldn’t believe that a genin snuck up on him like that. “Ok so what are…umm… you doing here?”

“I figured I would come and meet you but I see your busy spying on those two boys over there. Hehe… Need to watch out some people would think you were stalking them.”

“I’m not stalking them you freakish person. You’re the one who is stalking me out here.”

“Mind if I stick around and watch? I like watching battles.”

“I guess not.”

“I need to learn some new moves anyways. I’m kinda bored with the ones I know now.” She closed her eyes. When she opened them they weren’t the green they had been but a dark red. Kenshin knew those eyes from anywhere.

“Your of the Uchiha clan aren’t you. Why are you living here? The Uchiha clan is part of the leaf village.”

“Talk later I want to learn.”

Back were Kakashi and Obito were, Obito was still dodging the wipe. He was trying to perform a hand sign but couldn’t focus on it while dodging. He finally got a second too jump backwords and away from the wipe to perform a new jutsu. “Water Style, Water Dragon Jutsu!” Kakashi’s Sharingan wheel started spinning to learn what Obito just did but he only had time for that. He had to dodge to large water dragon Obito had just summoned. His wipe had no effect on it. He dropped the wipe and started dodging every attack he could. He was on the run know with no jutsu to help him.

“Wow those two are good. They your students?”
“No…I’m just as surprised as you are.”

Kakashi took three of his shuriken out of his pocket and threw them at the dragon; they had no effect on it. He finally took a much more larger measure. As the dragon went down to attack again it was destroyed in an instant. When the water had settled Obito looked at Kakashi who had know, several bones sticking from his right arm. They extended out about five feet. They retracted back into his arm. He pressed his right hand down on the water top. Obito took a second then realized what he had done. He jumped up into the air just in the nick of time as more then a thousand bones came shooting up from underneath. Obito landed back much farther this time. Off in the Bushes a figure stood watching as the battle went on. He looked with his snake like eyes and smiled. “Its time.” He lifted up his sleeve to reveal a tattoo that had a snake and some writing on it. He bit his thumb and whipped the blood down the tattoo. He then pressed his hand that had the tattoo on it on the ground. Several symbols spread out on the ground in a small circle around his hand. “Summoning Jutsu!”

Kakashi again looked at Obito. “Its time to finish this know. You did well but I’m getting tired. This will only last for a small time but if you cant last threw it you will die. I hope your ready.”

Obito got in a fighting stance ready for what Kakashi might do.

“Hmmm that’s not how. O’well to bad…….. Mangekyou Sharinga------…” Kakashi stopped. He just had realized something had gotten in the water from the large ripples around his feet. He then looked at Obito. Kenshin had also noticed something was wrong. He looked on the other side of the embankment were trees stood and saw a very large tail slide into the water. He jumped out of the bush and onto the shoreline…

“GET OUT OF THERE KNOW!!!” Kakashi and Obito didn’t hesitate. They both made a mad dash for the shoreline. It was already to late. They noticed the outline of a very large object underneath the. The jumped to the side of it as it started to rise. The two were separated. The Object had breached the surface. Kakashi was the first to notice it was a snake. “OBITO RUN!” Kakashi screamed in a frenzy. He reached into his shuriken holster on his right side and pulled out three shuriken in hopes to distract it that way it wouldn’t go for Obito. It then paid attention to Kakashi, he realized that he had sealed his fate by doing so. He was struck with fear and could no longer move. Obito’s attempts to get his attention failed. The snake arched its head back and then swung forward to attack and eat Kakashi.

Obito was know in shock as he watched his brother about to be eaten. Kenshin didn’t know what to do. Faia was standing there in disbelief of what she was seeing. Kenshin closed his eyes and ran into the water. He ran across it with his eyes closed. He grabbed Kakashi and flung him across the water, when he opened his eyes they were no longer the light blue but it was hatred red. There was something much more different besides the color at this point, there was what appeared to be two wheels in his right eye and one in his left. “You idiot. Why did you just stand there, do I have to do everything myself or are you going to pick up some of the slack and HELP ME!!!” Kenshin pulled a long blade from his leg, the sheath it was resting within his pant leg. He then lunged at the snake with a full force, which didn’t help, the snake moved faster then him.

Kakashi stood up and spit down into the water. “So that’s how you fight with a new Sharingan, what a jerk. Son of aah.” He looked up again to see the snake again was looking at him. He put his hand up, more white bones were protruding from him. Five small bones were sticking from his finger tips, they shot out like bullets at the snake. They pierced the snake’s head but it wasn’t over.

Kenshin jumped on its back and ran up the snake’s neck, when he reached the top he slammed the sword down into its head, the snake let out a cry as he broke the blade of in its head. The snake fell back down at the water and floated motionless while Kenshin stood there. He walked up to Kakashi, and patted his head. “Sorry about that. I shouldn’t have said what I did.”

“Its no problem I guess.”

Kenshin was a bit happier know then he was because of his victory, but he heard a noise come from the snake. Everyone’s attention was now at the middle of the snake. Something was moving around inside of it, slowly the skin started to crack and what looked to be like a human stood inside of it and then crawled out of it.

“I see you defeated my snake. I guess you are of the Uchiha clan, and of the Kaguya clan. What are your names? I would like to know who my new apprentices will be.”

Kakashi stood there staring at the figure with a blood look in his eyes, he was so furious that someone had just tried to kill him for testing purposes. “Its not polite to ask for someone’s name when you haven’t given your own.”

“My name…… You don’t know who I am…”

Kenshin stood there and then gasped. He had just realized who he was.

“My name is Orochimaru. One of the legendary Shinobi of the Hidden Leaf village. I want you two to come with me.” He pointed at both Kakashi and Obito.
Obito sneered. “What makes you think were coming with a old windbag like you. Your pail and look like a freak.”

“Obito don’t push it.” Kenshin wouldn’t take his eyes off of Orochimaru. “Your great-grandfather Sasuke Uchiha supposedly killed him along time ago. His basic want in life is learning all the jutsu in the world, and he’s not to be taken lightly. He gave many Ninja curse marks to make the stronger and better, but at a cost. They were his forever. Sasuke was going to become a part of him when he was strong enough, but Sasuke put an end to that, or so he thought.”

“Yes the arrogant little ass thought he beat me but I escaped with major injuries. But I’m back and ready to take over what I want. I want you two to come with me so I can make you stronger and you can protect me. We can rule the world!”

Kakashi stood there with clenched fist. “Kenshin… This is the person who tried to destroy the hidden leaf village isn’t it.” Kenshin nodded. “THEN ILL KILL HIM MYSELF!” Kakashi made a dash at Orochimaru.

Orochimaru smiled. “You are part of the Uchiha, you’re a fool.”

“SHARINGAN!” Kakashi ran at him at a speed that was almost like his great grandfathers. Several bones started to extend from both of his arms. He struck at Orochimaru. Orochimaru dodged it. Orochimaru made several odd hand signs and then put his left arm out. Five snakes extended out from his arm. One bit into his left leg, one into his right, one on both sides of his arms, and one in his neck. Kakashi yelled very loudly as the snakes bit harder and harder.

“You wont be able to get these guys off of you. There jaws are made like your body and can turn to a steal when needed, that’s why they hurt so much. Know to give you my mark and its over.”

Orochimaru made several more hand signs, with only one hand. He then smiled as his neck started to extend. It was aimed right for the other side of Kakashi’s neck. Kakashi looked at Obito with a tear in his eye from the pain. Kenshin couldn’t even bare looking at this. Orochimaru got a sudden surprise on all sides of his neck. Kenshin, Obito, and Faia had all thrown Shuriken at him, each one piercing his neck. His neck retracted back and the snakes loosened up on there hold on Kakashi. Kakashi had tears streaming down his face. He had streams of blood trickling down his neck arms and legs. He couldn’t hold it in anymore. White and purple chakra was know visible around Kakashi. He hunched over and folded his arms in. His body was now like a rock. The snakes again tried biting down but this time they couldn’t. He was shaking know, he then arched strait up sending bones flying strait up threw his skin.

Kenshin and Obito were looking at him in fright, they couldn’t understand what was going on nor could they understand how they could see Kakashi’s chakra. Faia fell on the top of the water and they started to slowly back up.
Bones struck threw the snakes heads killing them instantaneously. Then Kakashi looked at Orochimaru and smiled. Obito realized what he was doing. Obito jumped up on the snake and got in back of Orochimaru. He then had bones protrude from his chest and stomach. Kenshin grabbed out a scroll from his vest. Faia found the strength to get up. She two grabbed a scroll from her pouch. Both Kenshin and Faia unrolled it, bit their thumbs and wiped there blood down the middle of the scroll. They then rolled them back up.

Obito and Kakashi pierced Orochimaru threw the chest, and back with there bones. Kenshin and Faia put the scrolls in-between there thumbs and pointer finger. They made several hand seals throwing the scroll into a different opening on there hands. They both were in sync with each other as if they had done this a hundred times. “Ninja Art of Sealing, Dark Creation scroll Jutsu.” They placed the scroll on the water top standing strait up.

“NO…I can’t lose again. Not like this. DAMN YOU ALL”

Two arms reached out of the scrolls. They moved up at Orochimaru. Faia’s scroll grabbed the right side of Orochimaru, while Kenshin’s grabbed the left side. The arms pulled at Orochimaru for a second then stopped. The arms then pulled at a fast rate pulling Orochimaru in half, blood went flying everywhere. There was a loud scream that came from him as it happened. Both scrolls pulled the halves they had into their scroll. Then silence hit. Kenshin picked up the scroll he had then walked over and picked up Faia’s.

Kakashi was worn out from using so many jutsu at once. Obito was worn out as well. Kenshin wiped the blood of his face that was slowly gliding down his cheek. Faia stood there with a smile on her face as if nothing had even happened. It looked as if she was going to go crazy at any moment. Kakashi’s bones disappeared back into his body along with Obito’s. Kakashi then looked up and then collapsed. Kenshin walked over and picked him up.

“Lets go back to the hotel. We need are rest, and I’m hungry.”

Obito stood there. He didn’t know what to think as Kenshin walked across the lake with Faia and Kakashi in arm. He couldn’t believe he almost watched his brother die, and he still wanted to know why Orochimaru was after them. He slowly walked across the lake after them. Then headed to the hotel were he didn’t eat but took a shower, tended to his wounds. He laid down in his bed staring at Kakashi as he watched him suffering. The snakebites were deep, they were also still bleeding. He grabbed a cloth and dabbed of the blood that was sliding down him. “You are an idiot.” He smiled and then sat there trying to make Kakashi comfortable and tend to his wounds.

----To Be Continued----

PostPosted:Tue May 08, 2007 12:14 am
by Kenshin
great update kakashi :) keep writing

mwhaa i learned sharingan and killed a legendary sannin in 1 day :P

PostPosted:Tue May 08, 2007 12:23 am
by Soulreaper
yea man that was good cant wait to see wat happens next

PostPosted:Wed May 09, 2007 10:18 pm
by ShrunkenCheese
omg awesome, and I'm pretty cool! lol, keep writing!

PostPosted:Thu May 10, 2007 11:37 pm
by Kakashi.Archive
Over the next few days Obito didn’t leave his room. He spent most of the day tending to Kakashi who was still sleeping. He hadn’t awoke since the attack.

Kenshin knocked on the door. Obito opened up and allowed him inside.

“How’s he doing?”

“Still is passed out. His wounds are still bleeding as well.”

“Orochimaru used a jutsu on him so that the wounds wont heal for several days, meaning he will have to fight to live. He’s doing good so far.”

Kenshin headed for the door. “When he does wake up, I don’t want you to tell him this, but the damage he’s taken from the attack.” There was a long pause. “He probably wont be able to do the Chuunin exams. Let alone that he might not be able to leave this village when we are.” Kenshin put his head down and walked out of the room.

Silvercloud and Faia had been hanging out a lot during the past few days. Faia stayed with Silver in her hotel room waiting to leave. Her male teammate, who Shrunkencheese had already met, hung out most of the day with Cheese. Crim of the hidden Lightning village is the leader of the group that is always protecting the others. And last of the group Icehaze. She has a very unique talent to manipulate ice and earth. She spent most of her time out training and was rarely ever seen by the others.

Obito had left to get some food, he was walking back upstairs when he heard a sudden thump. He dropped the food and bolted up the stairs, he slammed the door open to find that Kakashi was trying to crawl across the floor. He started to scream in pain as a trail of blood followed behind him.

“What the hell do you think your doing?”

Obito went over and picked Kakashi off the floor and helped him back in bed. He dabbed the blood off of Kakashi and went into the bathroom and rinsed the cloth off. He came back out and helped Kakashi get up so that he could change the sheets. He put a clean set on it then set Kakashi back down. “Get some sleep. You need time to heal.”

Kakashi past out again. The blood stopped oozing out like a sudden halt. Kakashi was no longer breathing heavy like.

The next morning Obito, Kenshin, Silvercloud, Faia, Crim, and Cheese met downstairs for breakfast. They were all talking and having a good time while eating. Just then as they were having there fun Kakashi came around the corner wearing nothing except a pair of boxers and the bandages that were covering his bites. “Morning everyone.”

Silver stopped eating and choked on her food. Faia’s jaw was dropped. Kenshin and Cheese couldn’t believe that Kakashi would come downstairs so indecent. Obito on the other hand was use to it and kept eating as if nothing happened.

Kenshin finally broke the silence. “What the hell….”

Shrunkencheese nodded his head. “That’s a easy way to put it. GO GET SOME CLOSE ON YOU PERVERT!”

Kakashi grumbled a bit. He walked over to the food cart and grabbed several plates of food, enough to feed about seven people. He turned around and headed back upstairs.

Silvercloud was still a bit curious on what exactly just happened. “Well he made an interestingly fast recovery……… Ok Kenshin what’s the plan for today?”

“I’m not sure yet. Seeing that Kakashi is back up on his feet maybe we could head out tomorrow back to Konoha. For know I guess you guys go train. Everyone will be staying at the hotel tonight. We will be leaving early tomorrow. I want to get a good head start back. I’ll be back in a while. I got some more paperwork to do. Talk to you all in a bit.”

Kenshin got up and walked out of the building. Obito still sat there eating. He had a good five plates sitting in front of him. He placed his chopsticks down and headed up stairs. Shrunkencheese finished only minutes later after him, then headed outside to meet up with Crim. Silver and Faia went out for a while to go to the arcade. They went around to the fun games and had fun for a few hours. Icehaze saw them and joined in not long after.

Obito did his normal routine and got in the shower, changed the bed sheets, then went outside on the balcony watching all the people below. Kakashi had gone in to get his bloody patches off of him. He took a long shower then got into a nice new pair of cloths that Kenshin had bought for him. It was a black silk shirt with white silk pants. It had a golden tie that rapped around the waist keeping the shirt from flapping.

Everyone met back up around lunchtime at a small shop that reminded them of the Eichi Ramen back in Konoha.

Kenshin had already ordered all the bowls of the delicious ramen while everyone slowly entered. “Ok so I have a idea for tonight. I know that some of you wont like it but your going anyways. Not far from here there’s going to be a big dance part, about eight tonight. I expect you all to be there. I bought some new cloths for you as well, they’re sitting on your beds. Kakashi it seems as if your already wearing yours, just try not to get it dirty.”

Obito and Kakashi looked up. “We don’t do dances.” Kakashi said setting his head back down and focusing on his new outfit.

“I don’t care your still going. Figure out who you guys are taking because I expect you to be there eight sharp.”

Obito seemed excited even though he wasn’t much of a dancer he was ready to party.

Icehaze looked up at Kakashi. “Will you go with me Kakashi?” This was the first time she had spoken to any of them.

Kakashi blushed. “He would love to take you Icehaze.” Kenshin said with a small smirk on his face. He whispered in Kakashi’s ear “know you have to. Plus Icehaze is a nice girl show her a good time.”

Kakashi looked at her. “Ya ill take you.” He smiled a bit as if semi excited slash scared. Kenshin yelled out and rubbed his knee. Kakashi had extended one of his bones over and gabbed it into his leg. He smiled back at Kenshin.

Later that night everyone had shown up at the dance at different times. Obito and Kakashi were the last to come. They all sat down at a table together, they looked over and saw Kenshin with a bunch of girls laughing in the corner.

Kakashi grunted. “Well know I know why he came. Don’t know why were here.”

Cheese stood up in a panic and walked over to Silvercloud. He stuttered “Umm.. Sil--- Silver….Will you ummm----dance with me?” He sounded as if he was going to run out of the room from anxiety.

“Sure ill dance with you Cheese!” Silver smiled as if she had been waiting for him to ask. Cheese was wearing an all white outfit with a black tie. Silvercloud was wearing a red dress made of pure silk. It had some flowers here and there on it.

Kakashi went over and grabbed Icehaze up and started to dance with her. She was wearing a black dress. It had several silver spots on it.

Obito walked over to Faia finally. “Would you mind dancing with me for a while? I understand if you don’t.”

“I would love to.” She said in a big smile. She was wearing a white dress with gold stripes on it. She had her hair back in a golden bun. Obito was wearing almost the exact same thing as Kakashi.

The party went on for hours. Everyone stopped and started dancing different times threw out the night. Kenshin had even gotten up to dance. But he wasn’t setting a good example with the girls he was with. They all danced with him at once. One girl attacked another for hogging Kenshin part of the time.

At about one in the morning everyone headed back home for sleep, knowing they were leaving in a short time.

Kakashi didn’t sleep that night. He sat out on the balcony and then climbed up onto the roof. He sat down looking over the whole village. His eyes quivered. “What is a matter with me? I don’t understand.”

At about six in the morning everyone had awaken and was ready to go. Icehaze was the first to go. She thought it would be funny to play a prank on Cheese so she did a small jutsu to freeze up the pipes a bit while he was in the shower. She laughed when she heard him come screaming into the hall. “WHO THE HELL FROZE THE WATER LINE?”
Faia and Silver also started laughing as Cheese headed back in to his room. Faia did a jutsu that heated up the water line this time. “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH”
Everyone was laughing know. Obito was laughing so hard he fell on the floor. Silver was also laughing so hard she started to choke.

It was about six thirty. Everyone checked out of the hotel and waited while Kenshin finished up the bill payment. He walked out moments later.

“Ok so is everyone ready? Its time to leave.”

Cheese was still rubbing lotion on the small burn marks he had from his icy hot shower he had just had. Faia couldn’t help but to keep laughing every few minutes. “Anyone order lobster? HAHAHAHA.” Everyone broke out in laughter and then started running for the woods as Cheese screamed following them.

It was only hours later they had taken a break. It was very hot out.
“Kenshin how much longer do we have? This is unbearable.” Silvercloud said wiping of her head.

“At this rate were going know its only about two hours from here.” Kenshin as well wiped his head. “Breaks over, we need to get heading if we wont to get there soon. Its already three now.”

Everyone got up put their water away. They started to walk along the road.

About three hours later they could see the wall of Konoha. They raced to the edge of the hill and looked out.

“WOOW.” Faia said stunned on how beautiful it was. “This is amazing.”

Kakashi looked at Obito. “Thank god our own beds again.” Kakashi said with a bit of a laugh. “Kakashi your and idiot.” Obito looked at him with a bit of a smile.

They all ran down the hill towards the gate. It opened up.

“Ok guys just cause were back doesn’t mean you can go off yet. We have to report back to the Hokage. Then we have to figure out what hotel we can get these three.”

Silver jumped up and down. “Faia can stay with me. Along with Icehaze.” She seemed a bit excited know that she was back home.

“Crim can stay at my house.” Cheese said with a smile.

They all walked up to the Hokage’s office. Kenshin knocked on the door. “Come in!”

Everyone entered the room. “You guys are back finally. Hello I’m the Hokage of this Village, and you three are?”

“Faia, Icehaze and I’m Crim!”

“Well welcome. The Chuunin exams start in two days. I have already registered you and here is your passes.” She reached into her desk and gave them a golden card. “Try not to lose that or it could mean complications for you. Know as for your hotels.”

“We already know were we are staying but thanks. Me and Icehaze are staying with Silvercloud, and Crim is staying with Cheese.” Faia said with a sadistic smile.

“Well… Umm. Ok then have fun and good luck on the Exams. Kenshin I need to talk to you alone. So you kids get going!”

Everyone waved and walked out. They all headed back to there houses and got unpacked.

“Did everything go ok Kenshin?” Hime said in curiosity.

Kenshin placed two identical scrolls on the table in front of her.

“What are these?”

“Those two scrolls both halves of the Shinobi, Orochimaru.”

“Your joking right? I mean Orochimaru was killed many years ago.” Hime was staring intently at Kenshin know.

“We had a big run in with him. But we used these scrolls and ripped his body in half. Sending one half into that scroll and the other into this one. He is more then dead I can tell you that.”

“Is everyone ok? I mean no one got hurt?”

“Well we did have complications. He attacked Kakashi. Orochimaru used a jutsu and made five snakes latch onto him. He was in bed for several days but had a good recovery. I don’t know if there are any adverse effects though. I mean I haven’t seen anything wrong but Kakashi is always shutting me out. So I don’t know if he’s fully ok.”

“I’m sure he will be ok. But we have bigger issues to attend too. The Chuunin exams are only two days away. We need to watch to make sure no one gets into a fight. Thank you for sticking with this!”

“Its no probs.” Kenshin got up and started to walk out. He turned around just as he was about to leave and asked Hime a question. “I need to know. While we were on the mission. Ronin…. He was hurt badly… Let alone he was very sick… Is he ok?”

Hime nodded but look as if she was sad. “He will be ok, but….” The room went silent. “It seems as if he’s suffered some large damages. He wont be a good teacher for Kakashi, Obito, and Silver. I need you to find someone to take them the rest of the way. See if Kane will help them or better yet Nintendo. He should be able to handle those three.” Hime smiled and then nodded her head at Kenshin. Kenshin nodded, then walked out.

For the next two days everyone trained hard. More and more Genin were showing up at the Village and registering for the Exams. Nintendo was the group’s new leader and had already filled out there applications. He had already passed them to them.

The night before the Exams were to start everyone was jittery. Silvercloud and Faia were nervous. Icehaze was calm as ever though. Cheese and Crim were also as nervous as Silver and Faia. Obito and Kakashi were talking in their house but still at ease. Kakashi was giving Obito tips to help him during the exams.

Everyone went to bed silently, waiting for what was to come in the few hours.

Sun broke threw the windows at seven. Everyone got up and did their normal thing getting ready eating breakfast. Nintendo went and got his group and the others. Everyone waved to Shrunkencheese and wished him luck.

Nintendo took everyone up to the room upstairs and let the others in but held his group back.

“I know I haven’t been your leader for a long time. But I want to say this. Good luck. You three will do very well. I’m sure of it!” He smiled down at them all.

“Thanks Nintendo sensei.” The three of them said. They all looked at each other. “Good luck to us all.” They all nodded their heads and smiled. Kakashi walked up to the doors and pushed them open. The three said, “The Chuunin Exams have officially begun!”

-----To Be Continued-----

PostPosted:Thu May 10, 2007 11:52 pm
by Kenshin
sweet oim a babe magnet lets party all night hahahah xD
* you didnt hav ot hit me with ur bone kak i was only helping* "sniggerz"

haha good luck with your exams :)

KEEP writing

PostPosted:Fri May 11, 2007 12:29 am
by Soulreaper
lol cheese got burned

PostPosted:Fri May 11, 2007 12:43 am
by Starcomand
:( im still not in it lol

PostPosted:Fri May 11, 2007 1:14 am
by Hime
I have to worry about everything

PostPosted:Fri May 11, 2007 4:27 am
by Soulreaper
Starcomand wrote::( im still not in it lol
you have your named mentioned if im correct?