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 #10476  by Lessa
 
Yes, very sad chapter! =(

 #10758  by Hime
 
Nako is standing at the top of a hill watching the night.
“The time is coming. And I am ready yet…..to face all of them.” she is talking to herself.
“When you are in doubt, and then let your mind go into space for a while. That’s what you have always said to others. Why can’t you do that yourself too?” Loking says to Nako as he approaches her from behind.
“I wanted to put my past behind me. Then again, who hasn’t tried to put their past behind them? The next thing they know, they get into action again. The result is either they take more blame or they get some credit.”
“You are not comfortable with going to into action again? I am sure if you kind enough to do something; they will be happy. At least, you will feel relief.”
“You have known me that well huh? Have you managed to contact the others?”
“Yes I have. They will be here in five days. They said we should just keep a low profile, at least for now. Things are getting out of control again soon.”
“Peace and comfort never last anyways.” Nako smiles as she says.
“Come on, it is late, we should go back.”

“So, you got a signal from EvilIvy?” Lessa asks Nintendo.
“Yes, days ago, both Akimoto and she went missing. Days later, she sent us a signal. We are supposed to meet her there. But since, you people are coming to meet us, so we decided to wait for you.”
“Then, what’s the plan? We all go or what? The orbit of this planet is filled with Blood Hounds. Shouldn’t some of us try to warn the government here as well?” Sparky says.
“Then let’s settle for this. I will take Lessa, Kakashi, Scythe, Matt, and Ronin to the where EvilIvy’s location. Sparky, you take the rest and go to the main government building on this planet.” Nintendo says. Everyone nods then they go by their teams.
After Sparky and his team left for their mission. Nintendo talks to his team.
“Okay, there is a high chance that we will encounter our suppose-to-be-dead friend over there. I can just feel there is something not right over there. But in any case, I don’t think all of us should go.”
“So, what are you thinking then?” Lessa asks.
“Yes, Ronin here has a plan for this. It is going to work. Ronin, please explain.” Nintendo says.
“With all that is going on in here. I think it is a bad move if we all move in as a big group. I suggest some of us will go and meet EvilIvy and some of us stay with the group. Here is what I think is best to do: Lessa, Scythe, and Matt. You three are going to find EvilIvy and Akimoto. Nintendo, Kakashi and I are going to be stay somewhere near the location and acts as support when needed.” Ronin says.
“Then, why are you sending us three?” Matt asks.
“Well, before I think I will just send Lessa and Scythe for this. Then, I think the mission will have a bigger success rate if one more person comes along.” Ronin explains.
“What are we doing over there?” Lessa asks.
“Oh about that, you are going to take the toughest role in this part of the mission.”

Nako, HIME, Loking, Sidious, Chantelle, Blade and EvilIvy are making dinner for the children. Tricky and Akimoto are playing with the children along with some staffs. The two are trying to do a puppet show. It is supposed to be educational and historical; but since the two are rookies in this field, the play turned into a comedy with puppets falling on top of each other. The back was taken down. Well, at the least the children seemed entertained enough. Nako just laughs when she sees the children are happy.
“Another day, another simple life.” Loking says to Sidious.
“Don’t you think we should be more careful? These people will come back, twice as strong!” Sidious says to Loking.
“Relax, you got us with you! What can they do? Send more people or robots with lightsabers sticking out of their arms or something?” Blade says. Then he looks at HIME.
“Yea! I will go and teach them a lesson or two……their problem if they don’t like what they see.” HIME smiles. Nako says nothing. Suddenly, Kurino ran to Nako and points her finger towards the direction of the front entrance.
“Well what do you know? They come back sooner than I thought. This time I am handling this.” EvilIvy and Sidious run out to meet their foe. The two come out from the door and see two shadows standing there. The two ignites their sabers and then jump out. The two shadows take out a metallic tube and then hit a button.
“Lightsabers? Who are you?” EvilIvy yells.
“EvilIvy? Is that you?” one of the shadows asks. It is a female’s voice.
“Lessa? You are finally here! Scythe! You are here too!” EvilIvy says with Joy. Lessa and Scythe both smile and enter with EvilIvy. Sidious does not appear to like the situation. The four enter the orphanage. Lessa is impressed by the size and organization of this Orphanage. She really wants to meet the owner of this place.
“Oh there they are.” Lessa and Scythe look and have their jaws dropped. Blade, Chantelle, and Tricky are shocked to see Lessa.
“So, you three are the owner of this place?” Scythe asks.
“No, they are.” Chantelle says as she points to a direction. Then Lessa and Scythe see Loking and Nako come into the scene. HIME and Kurino actually following the two from behind. Lessa and Scythe stand there and try to speak but words are not coming out from their mouth.
“HIME!” Lessa yells at Nako. She walks towards Nako and tries to give her a hug, but Nako just takes a few steps back from Lessa.
“You must have the wrong person. I do not think we have met.” Nako says. Lessa just stands there confused. Scythe runs up to Nako.
“YOU!! I thought you were dead. Now you are pretending you do not know us? How could you?” Scythe screams at Nako. Nako just gives a sad smile.
“Chantelle! Blade! What is the meaning of this? Why wasn’t the council informed about this place and HIME’s presence?” Scythe asks the two.
“Well, we were both shocked at first, but it seems Nako here is not the one you are looking for. Maybe this one behind her has some answers.” Chantelle says as she points at HIME who is currently standing behind Nako. HIME comes out and stares at the two in the eye. Lessa and Scythe take a look at Nako and HIME.
“Yea, yea, I know. We have enough of that facial expression already.” Tricky says.
“I guess, this is only going to get harder.” Lessa says to herself. She then walks up to HIME and Nako.
“How come you two are so alike? Nako, I don’t mean to be rule but are you hiding something?” Lessa asks with a smile. Nako just smiles back.
“What do you think?” HIME asks Lessa back. Just then Lessa put handcuffs on both Nako and HIME. Then, before anyone can react, Akimoto jumps out of nowhere and ignites his saber and put it against Nako’s neck. Scythe put his against Kurino’s neck.
“What are you doing?” EvilIvy asks.
“By the order of the council: we are to bring back HIME for trial. She has committed murder, mayhem, and assault on other planets officers. I am sorry. I do not want to do this.” Lessa says
“Then what does Nako has to do with all this?” Blade asks.
“We will find out who is the real HIME once we get back. Nako here will come with us. You know the rules! EvilIvy you are to secure a path for us. This is an order. The others are in position already.” Lessa says. Then Nako, HIME, and Kurino get drag away by the KR jedis.

 #10780  by Lessa
 
Oh dear! Seems Lessa is like good soldier - follows all orders lol. Hopefully everything will end good! I really love this story Kana, hopefully you post another chapter soon again :*

 #10788  by Starcomand
 
great story hime u just keep getting better and better at writing keep them comeing

 #10833  by Hime
 
“Lessa, what are you doing? This is not you! Why are you doing this?” Tricky says. Kurino is in Scythe’s hands. When she sees the lightsaber, her trauma starts acting wildly.
“Hey, don’t move around so much! I don’t want to hurt you!” Scythe says to Kurino. Then again, Kurino just keep crying and struggling around. She is calling Nako and her mother.
“Is that what you want to do here? You are so powerful that you are making little kids cry. Look over there, Sword Maiden.” Nako says as she gives a dark smile to Lessa. Lessa looks at Nako and feels a chill up her spine. She then takes a look at the direction where Nako is looking. Lessa sees many children are standing in front of her. None of their faces are happy.
“How are you going to calm them down now? You know you just crossed the line. Love to see if you can walk out of this one.” HIME says to Lessa.
“Call them back! Let them to fall back and let us through!” Akimoto says to Nako. Nako just doesn’t respond.
“Oh, so the once great and powerful HIME can only reply on mere children to help her escape huh? What happened to the HIME from before? Now, be a good girl and call your kiddies back so we can do our job.” Akimoto says. Chantelle ignites her lightsaber whip, Blade also ignites his saber. They are both stopped by Loking before they can do anything.
“What are you doing? Don’t you see this is unjust? Besides, don’t you care about Nako too?’ Chantelle yells to Loking. She then stops yelling when she notices the ground under Loking’s feet is cracking. The two then know their limits.
“Let go of big sister Nako you mean witch.” One of the little boys yells out. Two other children grab pieces of rocks and dirt and start throwing them towards Lessa.
“Let Kurino go!” other children start yelling. Loking then has to get the children back inside the building with Chantelle.
“Seriously, please let Nako go. That girl as well.” Tricky says.
“What or else we will be sorry or something? How about a NO for an answer?” Akimoto says.
“Haven’t you seen what she has done here? These children need her and Loking here!” Blade asks.
“I am sorry. But I am just following orders.” Lessa says.
“Alright, you will be sorry then.” Tricky says. That moment Sidious suddenly appeared behind Scythe and spend a straight punch into his face. Scythe is being sent flying and crash in to a tree.
“We told you that you will be sorry. Now be a good boy and let her go!” Sidious says as he grabs Kurino and ran back to where Chantelle is. Scythe wants to pursuit but he is stopped by Lessa.
“Relax, at least Akimoto got the named Nako and EvilIvy got HIME. We can still go.” Lessa says. Then suddenly, the four feel a huge pressure pressing down on them.
“What…..what is this power?” Akimoto says.
“Well, they are here.” Nako says. Just at that moment, three shadows descend upon the KR knights from the sky. They all dress themselves in grey roles and their hood pressed so down that no one can see their faces. One feature is visible is the light that come out from their eyes. One is Greed, the second is yellow, and the third one is blue. They all carried lightsaber hilts, but their hilts’ designs are much different than normal saber hilts. The one with the green eyes speaks.
“Word advice: let them go or you suffer for your mistakes.”
“Great, voice changers. Someone is being clean with tracks here.” EvilIvy thinks to herself.
“What?.....Who are you people?” Lessa asks.
“Last chance. Please let them go.” The one with the green eyes speaks again. The other two start walking towards Lessa and her group.
“This is the Jedi council’s business. It has nothing to concern you three. We can turn a blind eye on the three of you if you retreat now. We do not want any trouble.” Scythe says. The three robed figures start laughing.
“Oh, but causing and looking for trouble are our specialty, youngster. But since you lot refuse our offer. Well, we should show some…hospitality.” The one with the yellow eyes says. Then all of a sudden, the figure with yellow eyes manages to appear in front of Scythe and press his palm on to Scythe’s lower stomach.
“Be gone.” He says as he sent Scythe flying. An explosion occurs as Scythe lands on to the ground. The figure is still standing at the same spot with his arms out stretched. Lessa has no choice but to attack. She then uses force speed and attempt a lower body attack in order to surprise her enemy. Just then she feels a strong grip behind her back.
“You are fast, Oh legendary Sword Maiden. But, there is still room for improvement.” The figure says as he uses one hand to grab on Lessa’s robes and throw her away with one swing. Unlike Scythe, Lessa spins herself while she is still in midair and lands her feet on a tree. She wants to use the force and kick herself back to where she was before.
“Ah, good instinct, very much unlike the other one, I am quite interested in seeing your skills.” The same voice comes into her ears. Lessa is startled and as the looks to the side, she sees the same robed figure is standing beside her. A straight punch that is covered by a red glove is coming straight into her face. Loking and the robed figures are still waiting and having a stand off with Akimoto and EvilIvy. Just then, they see Lessa is being sent flying from the forest. She manages crash herself through couple of trees before she hits hard on the ground in front of everyone else. The robed figure with orange eyes jumps out of the forest and lands in front of the pit that was created by Lessa when she crash land on the ground. He makes a sound of disgust.
“She is still alive. I knew I should have hit harder.” He says as he forms a fist with his right hand again and aims towards Lessa who is still unconscious on the ground. Before the figure can shot his punch, suddenly a mini sand storm comes towards him. The grey hooded figure leaps into the air lands somewhere next to his comrades. Everyone is blinded by the sand storm. When the sand storm settles, everyone can see two figures.
“So, there are more of them.”
“Look like we have no choice but to step in.” one of the figure says. The other one nodded. Akimoto, and EvilIvy changes their facial expression from worry to relief.
“Nintendo, Ronin! What took you so long?”
“Well, the Knight of Speed is here. Let’s see who’s faster, friend.” Nintendo says. Ronin doesn’t say a word except he ignites his saber as well.
“Oh, what is this? It is Making-me-happy-day or something? I have been waiting for people like you. Let’s play.” the figure with orange eyes says as he adjust his gloves. Nintendo and Ronin can see under his robe, it is a Force-User armor in red and silver color.
“So, are just having a staring contest or fight?” the figure asks. Then Nintendo disappears into thin air in front of everyone. Next thing everyone sees is that grey hooded figure with yellow eyes gets himself sent flying into the forest just as he did to Lessa.
“Consider this is pay back for my friend here.” Nintendo says. He doesn’t even get to finish his sentence when a fist comes out of no where and knocks him down on to the ground. It hits so hard that even the ground cracks.
“Knight of the Speed huh? Let’s see how you face off with the Lord of the speed.”
Last edited by Hime on Wed Feb 21, 2007 6:00 am, edited 1 time in total.

 #10835  by Starcomand
 
oooooo getting interesting good how ones are useing their powers etc

 #10839  by Matt
 
It's my first post here but I love your story Hime. Can't wait for more chapters :)

 #10869  by Lessa
 
WoW!! scaaaarry! Hopefully our characters have any chance against them... This story is awesome Hime!

 #10918  by Nintendo
 
This is Awesome. The use of powers. The suspense. The story is great. I just cant wait till the next chapter.

 #10920  by Hime
 
Nintendo stands up and dusts off himself. He looks straight into his enemy’s eyes.
“Let’s do it.” He says as he takes out his saber hilt. The figure still stands there without taking a move.
“What? You are not going to draw out your saber?” Nintendo asks.
“Don’t need to. These will be enough by the degrees you wanted to play.” The figure says as he takes out his two fists. Then he suddenly claps his hands and the ground around Nintendo starts to break; then four huge rocks towered itself around Nintendo. Nintendo knows it is going to close in on him and make him like a squashed fly. He then jumps upwards right away. When he is in the air he hears a voice.
“Just where I wanted you, good boy.” The figure already followed him in the air, and a kick from the figure coming towards Nintendo’s wise. Nintendo suddenly disappear in thin air again. The figure then disappeared also. Then all of a sudden, the two appeared in front of everyone again. The two are standing facing each other. Then, Nintendo kneels down with one knee. He is using his right hand to cover his left shoulder.
“You can always ask for a rematch. You can also choose to give up.” The figure says.
“Not a chance.” This time Nintendo goes on the offensive. The figure also wants to charge forward when Matt jumps in the fight as well. This time it is two on one match.
“Oh dear, the term one on one does not apply anymore these days.” The grey robed figure with green eyes says. The figure with yellow eyes doesn’t seem to mind the situation at all. The others can hear him laughing when Matt jumps in as well. But then, this time, the figure finds this fight harder than the last one. Every time he throws an attack, one person from the other side will block it and the other one will attack at the same time. Matt was well trained as well. He can almost rival Nintendo himself. Then, just after a moment, the figure took a hit from the two and sent flying into a tree.
“Hey, you guys can fight all you want. But, want out for the trees! The children still need a place to live. What you people doing are not helping.” Nako yells out. Then, there is a two minutes silence from everyone. The yellow eyes figure stands up.
“I am so sorry. I promise I will be careful.” The figure with yellow eyes says.
“Hey Fraiz, seriously, this is not helping.” The figure with green eyes says.
“Oh, let’s see you do better, Garren!” the yellow eyes figure answers back. Nako just smack her forehead with her left hand.
“This is just unbelievable. They like kids.” Nako says.
“So, Fraiz, do you want to continue the fight? Or you want your buddy Garren there sub in for you.” Matt asks with a mocking tone. Fraiz stands up and dust off the dust o his body.
“Well, what are you waiting for? New years?” Fraiz says as he signals the two to come at him. So, they did. Fraiz just stands there and doesn’t move a muscle. When Matt strikes at Fraiz. His attack goes right through him.
“After image?” Matt is startled, but it is too late. Before he notices anything, a kick launched by Fraiz already sent flying upwards. Then the next thing Matt experiences is a high speed drop into the ground. All that happened before Nintendo even moves a muscle.
“Now, are you going to get up or give up this time?” Fraiz yells to Matt who is currently knocked out unconscious in a pit that was created during the crash. Suddenly something hits Fraiz head. Fraiz picks it up, it is a shoe. He looks around and finds Nako walking towards him. Nako takes the shoe away from Fraiz and use to smack on Fraiz’s head again. During the fight, Akimoto and EvilIvy were shocked when they witness Fraiz’s power. Their grip on Nako and HIME loosen already. The two took the chance and ran back to where Loking is.
“OW!! What are you doing you ungrateful woman? That hurts even with my helmet on! What are you crazy?” Fraiz screams at Nako.
“Not that! Look at what you idiots did to my garden here! You people are destroying everything around here! What did I tell you before?” Nako is angry.
“Fraiz, I think we should finish this quickly. You do know what happens what you tick her off right? I am sure you haven’t forgotten what happened last time.” Garren says to Fraiz. Fraiz quicky apologizes to Nako.
“Alright you bosos. Time to take this somewhere else.” Fraiz says to Nintendo and his group when suddenly a staff saber flies out of no where and a Force user warrior appears in front of Fraiz.
“Not on my watch.” The warrior says.
“Ronin!” Nintendo says. Ronin takes his staff and post a stance. Fraiz is about to go fight Ronin when Garren suddenly jumps and lands in front of Fraiz.
“Let me handle this one……peacefully.” Garren says as he draws out a big pistol and points it at Ronin.
“HOW IS THAT PEACEFULL? THAT’S A FREAKING GUN YOU ARE ABOUT TO USE THERE. ” Fraiz, Loking, and Nako yells out. Garren signs as he presses a button on his pistol and a laser blade comes out somewhere lower to the barrel of the gun.
“Looking at it, it is a freaking lightsaber with a gun attach to it.” Garren says.
“Then why don’t you make a guitar with a sword attach to it?” Nako asks.
“That’s because someone already took that idea.” Garren answers.
“Didn’t Kraxier already made a gun and a lightsaber together already? You took that idea from him too? You copy cat.” Fraiz says.
“Shut up! I didn’t know that someone already take that idea!” Garren answers.
“But you DO know about the guitar for some good reason.” Lokign says. Garren just keep yelling the word “shut up”. It seems they totally ignored or forget about Ronin. Ronin just stands there with his stance and watching them argue.
“It seems thet have forgotten your existence.” Nintendo says to Ronin.
“At true warrior never forgets about their enemy. It is their honor. So don’t worry, I will wait till they are ready.” Ronin answers. But, their argument went on and on. Ronin has enough of that.
“HEY! ARE WE FIGHTING OR WHAT?”
“Oh right, I totally forgot about your existence.” Garren answers as he fires a shot at Ronin without concern whether Ronin is ready or not.
“Hey! What gives? Don’t you have to wait till your opponent is ready then you strike? This is a warrior’s honor.” Ronin yells.
“Are you blind? I am no warrior. I am a gunner. I am carrying a gun see? And if you are so much of a warrior as you say you are; you should ALWAYS be ready for your enemy. That’s call being careful, warrior.” Garren says to Ronin. Ronin then spins his staff and launch his shadow blade style against Garren. Garren laughs as shoots to the ground and launching himself into the air. Ronin then chase Garren to the air when Garren’s red and white armor starts to change form. Armored wings come out behind Garren’s back. His gun blade changes form and he dash down towards Ronin and does a side slash. Ronin quicky tries to move to the side but then he receives a hot on his right side before he can do anything. When ROnin is falling down towards the ground, Garren also fires couple of shots at Ronin before he lands. The shots come out as mini rockets. So, the moment Ronin lands hard on the ground on his feet, he finds mini rockets are already closing in on him in close range. Then, there is a big explosion. Garren lands lightly on the ground. Everyone gasp when they se what just happened.
“By the way, I only pay attention to worthy opponents. You are not one of them.” Garren says as he reloads his gun. Then suddenly Ronin bursts his way out of the ground right in front of Garren and gives him an uppercut. When Garren is still in the air due to the uppercut, Ronin gives him a spin kick and launch Garren to a distance.
“Then you are wrong, let’s go.” Ronin says.

 #10921  by Nintendo
 
Nice Ronin :) This is getting Fun!

 #10922  by Starcomand
 
love it these powers are great

 #10927  by Matt
 
Fraiz = cheater ...Awesome can't wait for next one :D

 #10928  by Sparky
 
Some really good chapters there.... I haven't seen me anywhere for a while...lol

 #10932  by Lessa
 
Great chapter XD... I enjoy this a lot!

 #10973  by Hime
 
Garren stands up. Like, Fraiz, He dusts off the dust from his robe. No one can see Garren and Fraiz’s face because they are both wearing some sort of mask. But ine thing is for sure, they are enjoying watching and fighting this fight. Garren’s laughing voice comes through his mask helmet.
“I see, well I may be come to enjoy this. Let’s have some fun.”
Ronin doesn’t answer. He just jumps into the air and unleash his style. Garren shoots couple shots towards the ground and dust start flying up. He is creating a smoke filled area for Ronin.
“This is no use Garren. I can still sense you from all this smoke.” Ronin says it with confidence. Then there are six Garrens coming out from the smoke. They all start spinning in the air and launching a shooting attack above Ronin. There is no way and no room for Ronin to get away from that attack. What Nintendo sees is Ronin rows out from the blast with lots of damage on his armor. Ronin is panting heavily.
“What…What was that? I cannot find which one is the real one.” He thinks to himself. Sudden;y two more Garrens shows up with the same motion in the air. It is too sudden for Ronin to react so Ronin takes the attack at point blank distance. That attack does launch Ronin into a near by wall. All the Garrens then land on the ground with their pistol point at Ronin. After that, it is like the firing squad shooting at Ronin with sub-machine guns.
“Ronin!” Nintendo, Akimoto, and EvilIvy screams. They cannot see anything because all the dust is in the way because of all the Garrens’ shooting. After the dust settles, the three wait for the result of the fight. It is very clear that who is victor. But they can only see one Garren standing there. Ronin is gone.
“Surprise, surprise.” Garren and everyone look to the side. They see Lessa carrying Ronin’s unconscious body. There is Blood at the edge of Lessa’s mouth. She is panting heavily.
“It appears you are still not fully recovered from Fraiz’s attack. If you know what’s best for you, you and your people should stand down and leave this place. No, leave this planet. We are the protectors of this planet and its people.” Garren says.
“Not without her. We are supposed to bring her to the council.” Lessa looks as she points at Nako. Nako walks out from the other and approaches Lessa.
“What crime have I committed? Looking after children and having my own life? Must you always bring the war back into innocent people’s hearts? Oh, my dear Sword Maiden. I know how it feels when you lost someone close to you. But there is no way to try to revive your friend. She is dead. Don’t you think she had suffered enough from the eyes of her fellow Force Users? Please let her rest until she is needed again.” Nako whispers to Lessa. Lessa looks at Nako and grabs her hand. Nako pushes Lessa’s hand away and walks back to where Loking is. Lessa then bursts into tears and then she collapsed.
“I cannot believe this! First we got this unsolved mystery over the rampage of the suppose-to-be-dead-HIME. Then, we find two HIME here. And both of them do not want to return with us.” Nintendo says.
“Believe it. It is as real as it is craves in stone.” Garren says as he points his gun towards Nintendo. Fraiz also wants to go up there. Then they hear a voice inside their heads.
“Stand down! I can handle this from here.”
“Nako! What are you thinking? These people want you back for a bad reason! Not to mention we have other company is here. Are you sure about this?” Fraiz answers in his thoughts.
“Yes you do know how much I have grown after my little mishaps. And you do know I have Loking here. We are safe. Please, leave this to my care. I am sure there is a way for us to come to some sort of agreement.” Nako’s voice rings out again. The three robed figures nods.
“Consider you are being let off this time. Leave this lady and her work alone. You all have been warned. OH mighty KRs. HAHAHAHAHA” Fraiz says to Nintendo with a mocking tone. Then all three of them hits button on their wrist, and then they disappeared. Nako and Loking are left with the shocked and wounded KRs.
“Children, bring the stretchers and medical supplies. Nako, Blade, and Chantelle, please go prepare the medical center. Tricky, and Sidious, you two tend to the wounded. Threst of you, prepare something to eat and drink for these people.” Loking says. Then, everyone get busy. No one objects Loking. On the far hillside, the three robed figures are watching.
“Seriously, why does she want us to stop? We are not the ones causing trouble here.” Fraiz asks. Garren shakes his head. The figure with blue eyes speaks.
“We all know of their silly compassion towards allies and enemies alike. Or else, we would have to worry about scum like Uriayo. He would have been long dead Nako and Loking wants him dead.”
“Why are you so sure about their powers? We all haven’t seen them in action you know?” Garren asks. The figure doesn’t answer.
“By the way, the others have called. They said the other KR group is moving towards the central government building. Should we step in there as well?” Fraiz asks.
“Naaa, Kraxier and League will be enough to handle those goons. Chalice and Keteros can handle the other groups. We are staying here in case of anything. Besides, I do feel something unusual is head Nako and Loking’s way. It is better for us to stay here, remain unseen.” Garren says.
“What about those…KR members? What if they decided to try to pull the same stunt again?” the figure with blue eyes asks.
“That’s why we are here right? When things gets too out of hand, we go and give a beating of their lives. Besides, I do want to see how Sidious would handle things now.” Fraiz says.
“Why does Nako want to harbor these people?” the figure with blue eyes asks.
“Like hell we know. At least these so called elites are pretty weak compare to us.” Garren answers. The three laughs and then they disappear again.
Sparky and the others are heading to the government building. The next thing they see is the Shinsen army is under attack by an unknown group.
“What the? Is that a military coup or something?” Sparky says.
“Do you want me to go take a look or something?” Martin asks.
“Yes, take Raven with you.” Sparky says. The two take off to the scene. Martin and Raven look at the tow groups. One is the local planet military, and the other is some sort of private guard group and then in come some non-force troopers.
“What the hell? Blood hounds! What are they doing here?” Raven says. Then she uses the force to draw a non-force soldier to her. Martin grabs him and they all retreat to a corner. Martin takes off the force warding helmet from the soldier and stares striahgt into his eyes.
“Why are your people here? What’s going on? You will tell us everything.” Martin says as he unleashes mind-trick towards this soldier.
“Uriayo and his father stuck a pact with the Commander: To set up base, and to bring back the clone half breed.”
Both Martin and Raven gasped at the moment.

 #10983  by Tricky
 
Another post? You're on a roll, Onee-san. Keep up the good work. :)

 #10996  by Sparky
 
This good stuff.... This chapter is real good... do i save anyone yet?? XD

 #11007  by Starcomand
 
great storry looks like we got our butts kicked lol

 #11012  by Hime
 
“You got all that Sparky?” Martin says.
“Yea….so, we will be on our way. You two better go help out the planet’s defense against this wave of invasion. We cannot let Gotenks and his buddies have that way.” Sparky answers.
“Right…on it!” Martin says. Raven and Martin start running off to the main building.
“Okay, mindlessly slashing soldiers is NOT the way to fight this battle. I hope Nintendo’s group has better luck than we do.” Raven says. Before they try to plan anything, they see the planet’s civilians are being harmed by the non-force’s troopers. Raven grunts for a bit and start her pole-slashing upon the troopers. Those troopers do not even get chance to know what going on before they are dead. Just then, they see Sparky and Rage from afar are fighting some more troopers to save couple of civilians. Sparky and Rage both leap over some troopers and try to enter the government building. Then again, there are just too many of them.
“This looks like they have planned this for sometime. There are two armies. One it is because the non-force Blood Hound troopers. The other one is some sort of private army of some zillionaire name Hiriano. His son, Uriayo is leading the assault forces. So far we have no idea who the Commander of the Blood Hound is.” Martin’s voice comes out from the transmitters.
“Yea, ever since Jordan resigned. We have no way to know the new leader of the Blood Hounds. So far, from what I have heard, he is pretty much insane when it comes to personal fame and such. But, at least he takes care of matter faster than the old one.” Raven says to Sparky through the transmitter.
“At any rate, we have to take care of this mess right now. Those troopers are set out for a blood bath here. We have to stop them. You two try to enter the government building while Rage and I will take care of the matter outside.” Sparky says. Raven and Martin nod in reply. Martin then leaps into the air and start attacking the troopers. It is only a matter of seconds for Martin to clear up a way for both of them to go.
“Good warm up.” Martin says. Raven ignores him as she dashes into the building. As the two enters the building they see the elite guards are already waiting for them. The next thing they know is they are getting pin down. Martin then uses the force and then rips out a piece of the wall and throws it towards the troopers. The troopers whom did not get hit by Martin’s attack end up blind because of the dust and the rocks. Raven and Martin take this chance to dash forward and deal with those troopers quickly. They enter further into the building; they are surprised to see many dead bodies. However, those bodies are all non-force troopers’ bodies.
“Look at the wounds. They are done by a lightsaber.” Raven says. Martin is about to respond when he suddenly feels something is not right. He grabs Raven and jumps backwards. The moment they jump backwards, couple of gun shots lands on the group.
“Umm….not bad. I have to suggest that you two better go back and tell your Commander to leave this planet alone. Or lese, you are going to be like your Comrades here. By the way, don’t think you can win by taking over the government’s building. My friends and I already have this place secured.” A voice jumps out from no where. Martin and Raven look up and see a figure, covered in black armor with gold linings. He is wearing a black helmet with a purple visor. The gold linings on his visor shapes like an “X”. He points at the two KRs.
“So, what’s your decision? Do try not to disappoint me.”
“First’s off. We are not with the Blood Hounds. We are from the Knights Reborn. We are the good guys.” Martin says.
“Knights Reborn? I have never heard of that name. You sure you people are not some group who is trying to make a name for yourself or something?” the armored figure says.
“Alright, then at least tell us your name then.” Raven says.
“Why should I? I do not give my name to weaklings like you two. If you want to know my name, you have to try to prove yourselves worthy.” The figure says as he takes out a black and yellow colored mechanism. This mechanism shapes like the number “4”.
“So you want to fight or something, you cross face?” Raven says to the figure.
“Only if you are not going to retreat.”
Martin does not reply and then he leaps towards the figure and starts attacking him. Before Martin even close to the figure. The figure points his mechanism at Martin and shots fire out from this mechanism. Martin quickly rolls on the ground to get out of the way. He gets up and grunts at the figure.
“Oh, don’t give that look. I never said this is not a gun right?” the figure giggles. This time, Raven and Martin attack together. The figure quickly turns a switch on his gum and then a yellow laser blade comes out of the gun as well. He then blocks all the attacks from the two and then switches to his gun mode and fires. Martin and Raven manage to avoid being shot but still they received some scratches from the bullets. Raven has no choice but to unleash her “18 Bo-staff ways” on the figure. The figure laughs as he switches his gun back to sword mode and start fighting. Martin also joins in the fight because there is no time to waste on this fellow. The only problem is that this stranger manages to handle himself very well between the two elite fighters. The two always miss him by an itch of space. The armored figure suddenly switches from defense to offense. His style involves lots of slashing and then some gun shooting in between. That manages to keep Martin and Raven getting too close to him.
“We do not have time for this Raven. You better go on ahead while I draw his attention!” Martin says. Raven then uses force speed and leap away from the fight. The figure tries to stop Raven but Martin is doing everything he can to help Raven escape. In doing so, Martin manages to land a punch on the figure which knocks him down on the floor.
“You are not going to get pass me. I suggest you stand down or face the wrath of the Council.” Martin says to the figure. Then the figure laughs.
“Finally, you have shown some fight in you. Good! Good! Now, let’s play real this time around.” The figure says.
“Don’t you care about what’s happen here? You told us that you care about the people here. Shouldn’t you go and stop those troopers from hurting people?” Martin asks.
“Did I ever say I care? Besides, that girlfriend of yours is about to go to do the something I was about to do. Now, let’s fight.” The figure says as he suddenly disappears in front of Martin. Just then, Martin feels he has been hit by many punches and kicks. Then the figure appears in front of him and gives Martin a side kick which launches Martin into a wall. The figure is about to move again then all of a sudden his transmitter is beeping. He takes his time to answer his call then he turns back Martin who is trying to get up.
“I really want to settle this with you, but it seems I do have some conscience. I have to go help my friends now. Maybe we get to meet again some other time.” The figure says as he turns his back on Martin and walks away. Martin pulls himself together and leaps into the air and lands in front of the figure.
“So, you still want to fight?” the figure asks. Martin ignites his saber and he attacks. Before Martin can even think of how he is going to attack he feels something is pointing against his chest. He looks down and finds the figure’s gun is pointing at his chest. It is a point blank direct hit. The figure pulls the trigger and the shout of gunshot rings in the surroundings. Martin tries to move his body even though he ffels this sharp pain that is going through his body. His body won’t listen to him. He knows he is collapsing. He cannot see what’s around him anymore. All he sees at blinding yellow flashes.
“If you manage to get out of this alive, you can try to look me up. My name is Kraxier. Kraxier of the Knight Riders. That is if you can stay alive after this. Oh knights of the Knights reborn.” Krazier says as he walks away with laugher.

 #11021  by Starcomand
 
great story hime poor martian

 #11076  by Sparky
 
NOOOOO MARTAIN! I AM COMING TO SAVE YO HO ASS! ARN'T I??

 #11118  by Lessa
 
aww poor Martin.. Great chapters Kana, lol seems KRs have their a**** kicked a lot!

 #11124  by Hime
 
Raven gets to the other side of the building. She is expecting tons of enemies waiting for her. But then, when she gets to the site, the only thing she finds are dead bodies of the Blood Hounds and Uriayo’s men. She looks around and suddenly she feels something fell on her shoulder. She takes a look, and it is a piece of white feather. She looks up and finds lots of white feathers are dropping down slowly as if it is snowing. Raven looks around as the white feathers falls down heavier. It is getting so heavy that it blind Raven’s sight.
“So, you are the one called Raven? I have heard of you…..nice to meet you.” A female voice calls to Raven. Raven look around and still sees no one around expect white feathers. Then, Raven suddenly catches a grey robed figure in white and black armor dancing in the rain of white feathers. From the looks of the figure it is no doubt that’s a female. The only problem is that she is wearing a white helmet which covers all of her head. She is also holding some sort of staff with a blade on each end. Not a light saber. Raven then ignites her lightsaber staff as well.
“So, you have decided to fight. Very well, let me see your skills. Do please enjoy this little dance with me. If you can keep up that is.” The female voice rings inside Raven’s mind again. Raven starts to look around but all the white feathers blocked her view. She then start using force sense; but then she cannot sense anything. That is when a long white chain bursts its way out from the white feathers and heads towards Raven. Raven then jumps and uses her staff the block the chain. Just then, the chain binds itself on Raven’s staff like a snake and tries to pull the staff away from Raven.
“Knew it you would do that!” Raven says as she spins herself in midair. The chain let go of Raven’s staff.
“You are pretty good. I guess I have to go serious for a little bit with you then.” The same female voice rings again.
“Then why don’t you come out and face me instead of hiding yourself within those feathers of yours? How many more can you shed?” Raven says.
“Oh my! I have been in front of you the whole time you don’t know?” the female voice says as the snowing feathers turn itself into a whirlwind. The feather surrounds Raven like a wall which she cannot see. The walls of feathers are creating more distance from Raven instead of closing in on her. She is still wondering what’s going on when a female figure in grey robes and white and black armor dashes out with her weapon. Before Raven notices anything, the female figure is already behind her.
“It was a pleasure dancing with you. I hope you liked it.” The female figure says as she starts walking away. Raven is about to chase after her when suddenly she feels a horrible amount of pain coming out from her body. It is only then she realizes that her body is full of cuts and blood start spilling out from everywhere of her body.
“Oh no…” Raven says as she collapses on the ground. Blood start flowing out on to the ground. Sparky and Rage are both trying to clear out the area from the non-force troopers. They both run towards the location where Martin and Raven’s signaled them.
“What happened to them? More importantly what’s going on here? The non-force soldiers are retreating like something is chasing after them. Martin and Raven’s signal are lost. We are totally alone. We don’t even what happened to Nintendo’s team!” Rage asks.
“We are going to find out soon.” Sparky says. Then they walk to another street and find some Planetary Defense Forces are surrounding a local transportation. The other civilians are staying in their buildings and homes. The interesting thing is that, they are looking outside as if they are not afraid of the danger at all.
“Seriously, the people in Shinsen are much braver than the people from other systems. They are all sticking their necks and heads out the window as if they are watching a show or something!” Rage says to Sparky. Sparky is also amazed as well. The two then make their way to the local forces and introduce themselves. They are offering themselves to help with the situation. The local forces are staring at them with bewilderment.
“Knights Reborn? We have the Knight Riders here. So, what are you going to do with the situation? We have four bus been busjacked. These people are from the invading forces and they are holding civilians inside these bus hostage.” One of the officers says to Sparky.
“We are going to deal with the quietly. First, I need you all to form a distraction group. Then, my friend and I are going to slash in and deal with them peacefully. That way, we will decrease the chances of innocent people getting shot.” Sparky shares his plans with the local forces.
“It is a good plan, but it is going to take a lot of work. There are other invading forces around here. If we take too much time then……” one of the officers says.
“Yes, but isn’t saving people is important to you as well?” Rage asks. Then Sparky and Rage feel something just lands somewhere behind them. The two look back and see two grey robed and armored figures. By looking at them, one is a male and the other one a female. The female one is wearing a full set of jet black color armor with a helmet that made of the same color. The male is wearing a white and blue colored armor with a white helmet that has a purple visor. The soldiers and civilians start cheer once the two arrived.
“Knight Riders! They are finally here!” the people around Sparky and Rage cheers. The two look at the two figures, Sparky takes a look at the female. The way she moves looks very familiar. Then again, the two figures totally ignore Sparky and Rage and just walk towards the buses. As the two figures are walking towards the buses, the soldiers and civilians cheer even louder.
“To the busjackers scum and its leader: RELEASE THESE PEOPLE AND LET’S SETTLE THIS FACE TO FACE!” the female figure holds up a voice projector and speaks towards the buses. The crowd just cheers loud as the female figure speaks.
“What is this? Those two are treating this situation like a show!” Rage says to Sparky.
“How are they going to solve this situation with provoking these Blood Hounds? That’s it I am going in!” Sparky says as he walks towards the two figures.
“Excuse me there miss, I am Sparky from the Knights Reborn. What you are doing is not the way to save those people! Violence is not the answer to this situation! Please leave this to me, I am a professional.” Sparky says.
“So what if they are a bit violent? We are fine with that! You are the one who is annoying.” The civilians around the location start screaming at Sparky and Rage. The female figure doesn’t seem to pay any attention to Sparky anyways.
“If you do not release those people on the bus, then I am coming for you.” She says as she starts walking towards the buses. Then a voice from the buses comes out.
“STAY AWAY! If you come any closer I will blow these buses up along with everyone! So, you better listen to our demands!” one of the Blood Hound troopers speaks through the voice projector.
“Then try it! I dare you to try it! I double dare you to try it! I can assure you the people on Shinsen, no matter they are from the military or not are NOT AS COWARDARY AS YOU PEOPLE ARE!” the female figure speaks as she points at the trooper who is speaking. The crowd starts cheer even louder and they are throwing out paper pieces, ribbons, and party poopers.
“Yes! You tell them!”
“Yea, beat them up good and show them the spirit of the Shinsen people!”
“What is this? This is more like a celebration than a serious hostage negotiation! I must stop this!” Sparky says as he jumps and lands in front of the female figure.
“WHAT ARE YOU THINKING? HOW ARE YOU GOING TO SAFE THESE PEOPLE IF YOU STILL PULLING OFF THIS GRANDSTANDING STUNT?” Sparky yells at the female figure. At this time, Fraiz, Kraxier, and Garren land themselves on top of a building.
“Oh…..she finally comes out from her big day care center. This is rare.” Fraiz says.
“Her ways in dealing with terrorist never cease to amaze me. I certainly hope that Knights Reborn or Knights Reform person doesn’t get in her way too much or else…..” Kraxier is still talking when the three hear the female figure says “Stay out” and swings her arm against Sparky which knocks him straight into a wall.
“That will happen.” Kraxier says as he points at Sparky.
“I didn’t say anything about saving the hostages. In fact, that was never my objective. I am simply telling these busjackers is that there is NO WAY WE ARE NEGOTATING WITH TERRORIST!!” the female figure says to Sparky. Then she turns back to the Blood Hounds.
“So, you heard my short conversation there. What is your decision? If you are not coming out, I am coming after you! You people are dead either way.” She says as she starts walking towards the buses again. This time she even takes out a blade like weapon.
“Okay! Okay! We are coming out! You promise you won’t hurt us right?” The Blood Hound troopers come out and throw their weapons away and the local forces successfully get everyone out. The two figures from the Knight Riders do keep their word. The Blood Hound troopers are being arrested and send away. Sparky and Rage watched in amazement when they realized the two figures are standing right in front of them.
“Knights Reform right?” the female figure says.
“It is the Knights REBORN!” Rage grunts at the two.
“Whatever, there are still messes around the place. Show me what you can do.” The male figure speaks. Sparky and Rage nods in respond.
“Do try to keep up! We are going to deal with some armored units.” Then the two leaps into the air and Sparky and Rage follow them. The soldiers and the civilians still cheer and chanting the name of the Knight Riders.

 #11126  by Starcomand
 
great story hime heep them comeing
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