in chapter 6 
PART 6! now shall comince!
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The next morning.......
Evan: mmm *grumble grumble grumble*
Necros:Evan.....Evan......EVAN........EVAN!!! WAKE UP! *uses force lightning on Evan*
Evan:Ulllulululululahhhh ok im awake I'm AWAKE!
Necros:ok just so you know I'm the one who gives wake up calls and if you don't wake up i will zap you till you wake up (my favorite part of the job!)
Evan:ok ok ok ok......so what do clan members do here?
Necros:hehe
5 minutes later
Evan:Umm nec why do i have to feed the rancors?
Necros:Cause i out-rank you so i can tell you what to do*hands tauntaun body parts* good luck! *pushes evan into rancor pens*
Evan:*gulp*
as all the rancors look at Evan
Evan:Ohh crap.......AHHHHHHHH!*runs and throws tantaun parts behind him*
Rancor:Rawr! *in his thoughts he says: OHH! A HUMAN! MUST EAT......OH A Tauntan leg!*
Evan:AHHHHHHHH!oh wait......they are all eating
as hime pops in
Hime:O.o who is that kid feeding the rancors?
Necros:Evan.....I am surprised he is still alive.....
Hime:Yeah......well how old is he?
Necros:11.......but i feel power inside him......
Hime:.......Yes.............We need to get him to the council though....
Necros:Why?
Hime:I don't know....All i know is that they want him ASAP
Necros:ok.........EVAN! COME HERE NOW!
Evan:*gulp* what did i do now?
Necros:Nothing....but i want you to follow Hime and I
Evan:Ok.....
Back at the Jedi Acadamy....
Luke:I sense some-one coming......
Kyle Katarn:Yeah.....so do I.........
as they both hear the door get slammed down
Kelthi:hehe hello Kyle,Luke
Kyle Katarn:What do u want? *pulls out lightsaber*
Luke:Kyle.....let me handle this....*pulls out lightsaber*
Kelthi:You really think you can kill me, a forcepath?! HAHAHAHA! *pulls out dual saberstaffs* *grins* Die.....Jedi
Luke:.........kyle..........Lets do this......
Kyle Katarn:.......CHARGE!
As both Luke and Katarn charge to attack kelthi simply uses force push and knocks kyle out on 1 push when luke hits the ground and gets back up
Luke:KYLE! *blocks kelthi's running kata*
Kelthi:Hehe You're next Luke.....
as kelthi uses force grip oon luke and throws luke into the wall as luke gets up and throws his lightsaber but kelthi grabs it and attaches it to one of his saberstaffs and then luke pulls out two lightsabers and attacks kelthi but kelthi counters it and throws luke down to the next floor as a bunch of jedi come to attack kelthi he mindtricks them all into being his minions as kyle wakes up and jumps down to the next floor and Luke and kyle both get into a saber clash with kelthi as the mind-tricked jedi go over and grab both katarn and luke and restrain them as kelthi walks over and bends both katarn's and luke's wills to his and then knocks both of them out as they leave.....
Kelthi:I knew they were weak.......TOO weak......
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!! the next part of chapter6 will come real soon
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The next morning.......
Evan: mmm *grumble grumble grumble*
Necros:Evan.....Evan......EVAN........EVAN!!! WAKE UP! *uses force lightning on Evan*
Evan:Ulllulululululahhhh ok im awake I'm AWAKE!
Necros:ok just so you know I'm the one who gives wake up calls and if you don't wake up i will zap you till you wake up (my favorite part of the job!)
Evan:ok ok ok ok......so what do clan members do here?
Necros:hehe
5 minutes later
Evan:Umm nec why do i have to feed the rancors?
Necros:Cause i out-rank you so i can tell you what to do*hands tauntaun body parts* good luck! *pushes evan into rancor pens*
Evan:*gulp*
as all the rancors look at Evan
Evan:Ohh crap.......AHHHHHHHH!*runs and throws tantaun parts behind him*
Rancor:Rawr! *in his thoughts he says: OHH! A HUMAN! MUST EAT......OH A Tauntan leg!*
Evan:AHHHHHHHH!oh wait......they are all eating
as hime pops in
Hime:O.o who is that kid feeding the rancors?
Necros:Evan.....I am surprised he is still alive.....
Hime:Yeah......well how old is he?
Necros:11.......but i feel power inside him......
Hime:.......Yes.............We need to get him to the council though....
Necros:Why?
Hime:I don't know....All i know is that they want him ASAP
Necros:ok.........EVAN! COME HERE NOW!
Evan:*gulp* what did i do now?
Necros:Nothing....but i want you to follow Hime and I
Evan:Ok.....
Back at the Jedi Acadamy....
Luke:I sense some-one coming......
Kyle Katarn:Yeah.....so do I.........
as they both hear the door get slammed down
Kelthi:hehe hello Kyle,Luke
Kyle Katarn:What do u want? *pulls out lightsaber*
Luke:Kyle.....let me handle this....*pulls out lightsaber*
Kelthi:You really think you can kill me, a forcepath?! HAHAHAHA! *pulls out dual saberstaffs* *grins* Die.....Jedi
Luke:.........kyle..........Lets do this......
Kyle Katarn:.......CHARGE!
As both Luke and Katarn charge to attack kelthi simply uses force push and knocks kyle out on 1 push when luke hits the ground and gets back up
Luke:KYLE! *blocks kelthi's running kata*
Kelthi:Hehe You're next Luke.....
as kelthi uses force grip oon luke and throws luke into the wall as luke gets up and throws his lightsaber but kelthi grabs it and attaches it to one of his saberstaffs and then luke pulls out two lightsabers and attacks kelthi but kelthi counters it and throws luke down to the next floor as a bunch of jedi come to attack kelthi he mindtricks them all into being his minions as kyle wakes up and jumps down to the next floor and Luke and kyle both get into a saber clash with kelthi as the mind-tricked jedi go over and grab both katarn and luke and restrain them as kelthi walks over and bends both katarn's and luke's wills to his and then knocks both of them out as they leave.....
Kelthi:I knew they were weak.......TOO weak......
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!! the next part of chapter6 will come real soon
Last edited by Evan on Thu Apr 08, 2010 2:35 am, edited 1 time in total.
chapter6 part2 shall comince
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Kelthi:I knew they were weak.......TOO weak......
while back at the Knights Reborn planet....
Raven:Good Evan your here.......we have to ask you something......
Evan:Yes?
Raven:Well the council and I Made two desitions #1 pick your main light saber and #2 You need to play some force pranks on some of our members >.> <.<
Evan:Why?
Raven:We think everyone is to strict...so we need some-one to loosen them with some force pranks......Can you do that?
Evan:yes....and i choose staff as my main lightsaber...
Raven:OK! Jawfin show Evan to the Force and Lightsaber arts and crafts room please
Jawfin:Sure ok Evan follow me
Evan:Awsome
as they were walking something was happening back at the acadamy....
Jaden:KYLE! *runs to look for kyle and luke*
as a figure appears
Figure:hehe i know you are a sith...
Jaden:Who are you? What have you done with kyle katarn? TELL ME OR I WILL BEHEAD YOU *pulls out dual sabers*
Figure:hehe it's me your new master......Kelthi
Jaden:MASTER?! Did you kill Katarn?!
Kelthi:no......but i will clone both him and luke and make sure they become our personal body guards....
Jaden:But i get to kill the real Katarn right?
Kelthi: *smacks jaden* yes....
as a bunch of jedi come over to stop them
Jedi#1:STOP! Jaden and kelthi you are surrounded! SURRENDER!
as both jaden and kelthi look at each other and nod
Kelthi:Jaden you know what to do.....
Jaden:Die jedi.....*Uses a force blast and it beheads all the jedi in the room*
Kelthi:Good work jaden...now follow me.....
as both kelthi and jaden walk to the main hall and see this giant jedi chess board....
Kelthi:.....wow.....You would think here they would have more non-life risking games...
Jaden:This is a new game......well come on we need to clear out this place and get our mind controled jedi to our transport ship....
as they finally get to the transport ship and fly to the main base....
Kelthi:ahh master Shadra we have returned with the people to be cloned...
Shadra:Good....Good...........you and jaden go to the cloning chamber...
Kelthi:yes master....
Back at the KR planet (its easier to type KR)
Jawfin:Alright mate we're here...
Evan:Ok
Jawfin:Here *hands the lightsaber parts* what color blade do you want?
Evan:Black.....Pitch black....
Jawfin:ok *hands evan shadow crystle*
Evan:Thanks!
Jawfin:No problem *walks away*
Evan:...OH WAIT JAWFIN YOU FORGOT TO SHOW ME HOW TO MAKE FORCE tricks.....oh he's gone......*starts working on saberstaff*
5 Hours later.....
Hime:Evan are you done yet?
Evan:yes....why?
Hime:Just wondering cause i need some sticks
Evan:Here use these *hands hime power sticks*
Hime:WHOA! THANKS!
Evan:No problem...well i will continue my work tomarrow and my room is 5 miles away.......i will go to sleep here for now......*goes to sleep*
Back at Evan's room
Kyle:Ugghhh i have NOTHING to do here.........i think i'll visit the council tomarrow........*falls asleep*
TO BE CONTINUED!
chapter7 coming soon!
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Kelthi:I knew they were weak.......TOO weak......
while back at the Knights Reborn planet....
Raven:Good Evan your here.......we have to ask you something......
Evan:Yes?
Raven:Well the council and I Made two desitions #1 pick your main light saber and #2 You need to play some force pranks on some of our members >.> <.<
Evan:Why?
Raven:We think everyone is to strict...so we need some-one to loosen them with some force pranks......Can you do that?
Evan:yes....and i choose staff as my main lightsaber...
Raven:OK! Jawfin show Evan to the Force and Lightsaber arts and crafts room please
Jawfin:Sure
ok Evan follow me Evan:Awsome
as they were walking something was happening back at the acadamy....
Jaden:KYLE! *runs to look for kyle and luke*
as a figure appears
Figure:hehe i know you are a sith...
Jaden:Who are you? What have you done with kyle katarn? TELL ME OR I WILL BEHEAD YOU *pulls out dual sabers*
Figure:hehe it's me your new master......Kelthi
Jaden:MASTER?! Did you kill Katarn?!
Kelthi:no......but i will clone both him and luke and make sure they become our personal body guards....
Jaden:But i get to kill the real Katarn right?
Kelthi: *smacks jaden* yes....
as a bunch of jedi come over to stop them
Jedi#1:STOP! Jaden and kelthi you are surrounded! SURRENDER!
as both jaden and kelthi look at each other and nod
Kelthi:Jaden you know what to do.....
Jaden:Die jedi.....*Uses a force blast and it beheads all the jedi in the room*
Kelthi:Good work jaden...now follow me.....
as both kelthi and jaden walk to the main hall and see this giant jedi chess board....
Kelthi:.....wow.....You would think here they would have more non-life risking games...
Jaden:This is a new game......well come on we need to clear out this place and get our mind controled jedi to our transport ship....
as they finally get to the transport ship and fly to the main base....
Kelthi:ahh master Shadra we have returned with the people to be cloned...
Shadra:Good....Good...........you and jaden go to the cloning chamber...
Kelthi:yes master....
Back at the KR planet (its easier to type KR)
Jawfin:Alright mate we're here...
Evan:Ok
Jawfin:Here *hands the lightsaber parts* what color blade do you want?
Evan:Black.....Pitch black....
Jawfin:ok *hands evan shadow crystle*
Evan:Thanks!
Jawfin:No problem
*walks away*Evan:...OH WAIT JAWFIN YOU FORGOT TO SHOW ME HOW TO MAKE FORCE tricks.....oh he's gone......*starts working on saberstaff*
5 Hours later.....
Hime:Evan are you done yet?
Evan:yes....why?
Hime:Just wondering cause i need some sticks
Evan:Here use these *hands hime power sticks*
Hime:WHOA! THANKS!
Evan:No problem...well i will continue my work tomarrow and my room is 5 miles away.......i will go to sleep here for now......*goes to sleep*
Back at Evan's room
Kyle:Ugghhh i have NOTHING to do here.........i think i'll visit the council tomarrow........*falls asleep*
TO BE CONTINUED!
chapter7 coming soon!
Evan wrote::O rly? Must've skipped it by mistake D:extremeAJ619 wrote:6 Chapters made while I was in church!*smacks aj* this story was around for a while nowYour good evan, just good!
i just did this chapter today
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Kyle:Ugghhh i have NOTHING to do here.........i think i'll visit the council tomarrow........*falls asleep*
The next morning....or is it?
Evan:...zzzzzzz.....*wakes up* OK...it's time to get up........ oh hey its only 1:00 A.M here.....*listens carefully*......
as all the sudden...BOOOOOM! the whole room started shaking as evan went outside to see whats going on.
Evan:What the? Bounty Hunters?! In a droid ship?! Well....its a good thing i made that saber staff...*grabs and activates*
as jawfin jumps in
Jawfin:Evan get back inside.... *pulls out lightsaber and activates* this is going to get messy...
Evan:But......what if you get hurt?
Jawfin:Thats why the rest of the KR council are here.
Evan:You sure you don't want me to help?
Jawfin:Not to sound rude but you would probably get in the way....
Evan:Ok..........hey where's falcon?
Jawfin:She'll be here....just wait....
Evan:She'll probably be too late! Let me help!
Jawfin:Ok fine you want to help? Release the rancors from the rancor pens.....here take the super speeder swoop....its not in stores yet so....yeah....I'm over-explaining arn't i?
Evan:*hops on speeder* yeah you are *rides off*
Evan:*listens to all the screaming and cries out in the distance* the life of a jedi is never easy....(and he arrives at the rancor pens)
Evan:*yells* HEY RANCORS!(Rancors look over) I'm gunna set you free! *destroys fence*
(as the rancors go torwards the battle over yonder)
Evan: ahh a beautiful sight *smiles* Now lets get back over there *gets on speeder*
Back at the battle field...
Jawfin: Where is she?! *stabs mercenary*
Phoenix: Don't worry, she'll be here.....
So you think i'm going to put a lot of information in this chapter huh? guess again! this one is getting split in half so HAH! so yeah.....second half will be coming soon! (TO BE CONTINUED!!! there i did a dramatic ending....HAPPY?!)
EDIT:sorry that this half is so short!!!
EDIT EDIT: sorry it took me so long to write this chapter!!!
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Kyle:Ugghhh i have NOTHING to do here.........i think i'll visit the council tomarrow........*falls asleep*
The next morning....or is it?
Evan:...zzzzzzz.....*wakes up* OK...it's time to get up........ oh hey its only 1:00 A.M here.....*listens carefully*......
as all the sudden...BOOOOOM! the whole room started shaking as evan went outside to see whats going on.
Evan:What the? Bounty Hunters?! In a droid ship?! Well....its a good thing i made that saber staff...*grabs and activates*
as jawfin jumps in
Jawfin:Evan get back inside.... *pulls out lightsaber and activates* this is going to get messy...
Evan:But......what if you get hurt?
Jawfin:Thats why the rest of the KR council are here.
Evan:You sure you don't want me to help?
Jawfin:Not to sound rude but you would probably get in the way....
Evan:Ok..........hey where's falcon?
Jawfin:She'll be here....just wait....
Evan:She'll probably be too late! Let me help!
Jawfin:Ok fine you want to help? Release the rancors from the rancor pens.....here take the super speeder swoop....its not in stores yet so....yeah....I'm over-explaining arn't i?
Evan:*hops on speeder* yeah you are *rides off*
Evan:*listens to all the screaming and cries out in the distance* the life of a jedi is never easy....(and he arrives at the rancor pens)
Evan:*yells* HEY RANCORS!(Rancors look over) I'm gunna set you free! *destroys fence*
(as the rancors go torwards the battle over yonder)
Evan: ahh a beautiful sight *smiles* Now lets get back over there *gets on speeder*
Back at the battle field...
Jawfin: Where is she?! *stabs mercenary*
Phoenix: Don't worry, she'll be here.....
So you think i'm going to put a lot of information in this chapter huh? guess again! this one is getting split in half so HAH! so yeah.....second half will be coming soon! (TO BE CONTINUED!!! there i did a dramatic ending....HAPPY?!)
EDIT:sorry that this half is so short!!!
EDIT EDIT: sorry it took me so long to write this chapter!!!