Knights Reborn

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Darkos Floating castle the new hell
Part 1 - 5

Several days went by, Ignis had received her treatments from the silver mint leaf. It was a tedious job but Hime completed it in no time. Ignis had several nights were she couldn’t sleep because the pain was so harsh.

After about four days past the mission, Kenshin walked into the room. “Hey Ignis, how are you feeling?”

“A bit on the shitty side, but I’m doing so much better then before.”

“Well that’s good, Hime is already sending us on a new mission soon. And I wanted to see if you have the stamina to go.”

“I don’t know, it depends on when were leaving and what the mission is.”

“Hime wants us to go on the newest mission she could come up with, the mission of Darko’s floating castle infiltration.”

Ignis’s eyes opened wide as she looked at her sheets. Sweat rolled down her face. She was unable to come up with any kind of response.

“Its up to you, Hime has giving you the option of going or staying here.”

“Uhhh…” there was a long silence in the room, tension rising. So many thoughts were rushing threw her head at this time. –“Do I really have what it takes to go head to head with someone if we get into a fight there?”- Ignis’s was starting to feel a weird sense of frustration. Then she felt the weird cold chill go down her spine, one that she never wanted to feel before.

A hissing sound in the back of her head made her realize something wasn’t right. “Come child, I have been in this world so many years, and now I have found a new body that I can control, Darko has become the most ideal vessel in this world. Hidden leaf has no idea im still alive, after countless attempts to kill me, each one as feeble as the next.”

Ignis stood up, “GET OUT OF MY HEAD!” She pounded her hands on the concert floor. As if Kenshin no longer existed she threw off her robe and put her ninja gear back on. A complete new outfit, Kenshin took one glance and noticed something appearing on the back of Ignis’s neck.

-“The curse mark. This cant be.”- Ignis opened and slammed the door shut behind her. Kenshin stood very still. He was amazed at the fact the curse mark would appear on Ignis of all people.

Ignis was completely blind to those around her, her one and only goal at this point was to find Tsunade Hime. She ran as fast as she could knocking into people but not realizing it. She even accidentally knocked on kid over but did not stop. Fear continued to rise inside. Killing all thoughts she made it to the Main head quarters were Hime was doing paper work.

Ignis didn’t even attempt to knock on the door she just pushed her way in. “Phoenix and Fluffy get out now!” Phoenix and Fluffy just looked at her amazed. “GET OUT!” Phoenix and Fluffy got to there feet and walked out.

Hime got to her feet, “What the hell is the meaning of this Ignis?”

“I don’t have reason to believe this anymore I know the fact that Orochimaru is still very much alive, and worst off he’s going after Darko. It was bad enough when I realized that hes also in my head somehow. He plans on attacking and destroying hidden leaf like he attempted so many years ago, and how I don’t know.”

Seconds later Kenshin burst threw the door. “Lord Hokage. Look at the back of Ignis’s neck.” Ignis put her hand over it to feel if there was something there, She turned so that Hime could see it now. A heavens curse mark appeared on her neck.

“No, this cant be happening, not again. This village took way to much of a hit with this pervious war, if you say what is true Ignis then Orochimaru will destroy hidden leaf and every other village. I bet Sasochi was under the influence of Orochimaru, and now that Sasochi is out of the picture Darko has become the new best body.”

Kenshin fell to the floor, -“I understand now, I understand what Kakashi was under.”- Kenshin got back to his feet as something hit him. “Tsunade, Kakashi…..” there was yet another awkward silence. “Kakashi, he’s not dead, I don’t think at least. He was as well under the influence of the curse mark. He’s been under it the whole time. And if my calculations were correct, he fact a death so that Orochimaru wouldn’t go after his Sharingan. We buried a fake.”

Fluffy and Phoenix ran into the room, “Is it true lord Hokage?”

Hime sat there stunned at what she was hearing. “Alright here’s the plan so listen carefully!” She looked at them all closely. “Fluffy I want you to get a team to go dig up were Kakashi was buried. Bring his body back here as soon as possible.” Fluffy nodded and vanished behind a large crack and smoke. “Ignis, I want you to assemble a team together, Take with you this list of Ninja.” Hime was righting out a semi large list of ninja. “I want you to begin searching for any traces of Orochimaru that you can, it seems that the curse mark you have on your neck is allowing you into his thoughts. But before you go I want you to go with Phoenix to get that mark sealed, that way it doesn’t take over.” Both Phoenix and Ignis disappeared. “AS for you Kenshin, I’m leaving you with the most important mission of all. Infiltrating Darko’s floating castle by any means necessary. Its going to be a long haul but if from what iv heard is true then we might just have an advantage for what comes ahead of us. Now go, take this list with you and round up the few ninja that you will need. Be fast and smart about this Kenshin. Take down every possible note you can and make sure not to get caught by Darko or Orochimaru or it could mean absolute death.

Kenshin looked at her as his eyes went into the Sharingan. But something was new about both of his eyes. They were no longer the Mangekyou Sharingan they use to be. It was rather hard to explain but his the ring in the center of his eye that the three pupils flow along was fused together now, and there were three small circles on the line that went around in a perfect circle. Three lines extended off those and to the end of his retina. From the rage and the excitement that was built up in Kenshin, he managed to unlock a extremely powerful Mangekyou Sharingan. Because one of the eyes were fake he was able to unlock it.

“If this isn’t Kakashi’s eye then who’s is it and what’s with this new power I’m sensing?” –“was this all an illusion, did I really have surgery? No I didn’t, its because of that, that I was able to unlock this form of Mangekyou Sharingan.”

Kenshin retrieved Kane, Lessa, Starcomand, Panther, Akimoto, Echo, and Raven as listed by Hime. He looked at the seven ninja. “alright, this is going to be a brutal task, but Hime has entrusted all eight of us to do this mission and do it properly. We have to infiltrate Darko’s floating castle in any possible way that we can. From there we must find every weakness and every strength that the castle contains. We will split up into teams once we have made it inside, the teams are as followed. Myself, Echo, Lessa, and Kane. The other team is headed by Raven, then Starcomand, Panther and Akimoto. Got it?”

Everyone looked at each other, “Got it.”

“Because of the fact that the castle moves Hime has asked that we don’t take any form of transportation such as a motorcycle. We could end up hundreds of miles from were ever we lay them. Now lets go!”


Phoenix and Ignis were down in a chamber that was not well known to the village. It was more of a catacomb leading to one central place that was well underneath the heart of Hidden Leaf village. Phoenix had used his own blood to make a seal running in all directions across the floor. “Alright Ignis, your going to be a bit weakened by me using the seal on you but you should be able to function fairly well.”

“What ever has to be done Phoenix, I cant allow the seal to run ramped within my body.”

Phoenix started making hand signs, he placed his right hand over the curse mark, “Ninja art, curse seal!” Ignis felt a slight pinch as the seal began to run up along her body and shrink into place around the curse mark. The curse mark however didn’t like that the seal was holding it in place and began brimming a bright red and orange.

Ignis looked over her shoulder at it. –“I control you, you don’t control me.”- Ignis put her hand over the mark and looked at Phoenix as she slowly got to her feet. “Alright now I must go, I believe you have work to do in Himes office again, sorry to say.” With that both disappeared.

Ignis went around so she could get all the people Hime had asked for. But things were not looking so good, every now and again the mark would burn. She managed to get Faia, Tsukasa, Sarah, Ice, Ronin, Blade, Woodchip, Zabuza and Sniper to gather. “Alright guys we are on a mission to find and destroy Orochimaru or at least get information on him. This is our mission at this time.


Fluffy and a team of ninja dug up the coffin in which Kakashi had been buried in. As soon as they hit it they were able to extract it from the ground in no time. They threw the coffin up on the ground, Fluffy wiped one hand across the top of it as if it was some kind of magical entity. They quickly brought the coffin back to Himes office. The sides were rapped with ninja exploding papers and such so that no one could get ahold of Kakashi's body. Hime made sevaral hand signs and placed her hand over the top of the coffin. "Forbidden scroll release!" The scrolls burnt off like they werent there and the coffin top poped just slightly. Hime lifted the top up and grasped her mouth in shock.

(Part 2 out soon)

Great Update Kakashi

Keep going =)

Hime stood over the coffin, her face was horrified. Several of the ANBU sat around her waiting for a response. “Are you sure you dug up Kakashi Uchiha’s grave?”

Fluffy looked at her. “The grave was specifically marked under Kakashi, there’s no way we could have dug anyone else up.”

“This cant be, this isn’t Kakashi’s body. Kakashi played us all for fools. This just proves that Orochimaru is still very much alive. He must have been trying to cover his trail so Orochimaru couldn’t go after him. Now I wonder why he’s started to go after the ninja of hidden leaf.” Hime has placed her hand over the top of part of the coffin, she attempted to ball up her fist but in doing so she cracked the side of the coffin. “Now Ignis has the mark. I think even to this point the entire village is under Genjutsu.”


Ignis was well on her way for her mission. She looked back. “Alright everyone our first destination might not make sense but we have to stop there for information, first stop is the bird country, then we move onto the Marsh country, Hime believes that we can get some info in Bird, but she has a suspicion that Orochimaru is in Hidden Marsh. We will have to be careful however, marsh isn’t well known to any country yet and the jutsu found there is unknown. We might hit some of Orochimaru’s cronies along the way.” Ignis seemed like she knew what she was doing but then suddenly hit a tree branch. Ronin picked her up and kept jumping threw the trees.

“Its ok babe I got you.” Ignis looked at him then lifted her hand for a second, she slammed her palm into his nose and then began jumping across the trees again. Ronin sat there for a second, Sarah looked at him and began laughing so hard. “HEY WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU LOOKING AT?!?!?”

Sarah kept going as he listened to her laugh loud.

“Why is it always me?” Ronin continued after thinking for a second.


Kenshins group however was having to many issues. Every few seconds Panther would complain about something not working right, however Echo didn’t help the situation. Every few seconds he would brush up against star and make several comments in his ear, to which they both began to laugh hysterical. At which point Panther thought they were talking about her. As if becoming a bat from hell she looked at the two. “Shut up unless you don’t want to make it back to the village alive.”

Kenshin made a sudden halt. “Enough, we made it to the castle it would seem.” Kenshin pointed directly up, almost what seemed a mile up the castle was floating there. “Now the question is how to get in.”

Lessa looked at him. “If I may I have an idea but we have to be fast about this. I have a special rope that will last maybe a minute before the tension of the castle moving snaps it. With enough applied chakra we can run up it before then or at least high enough to climb the rest of the way.”

Lessa was one of the quieter members but even so sense they had left the village she had made sure to calculate every step of the way.

Kenshin looked at her. “Alright you lead the way, ill be right behind.” Lessa looked at the thread and tied the ending piece to the base of a tree. “Alright get ready.” She attached five kunai to the end of the rope. She then used as much muscle strength and threw it. It landed a great hit into the side of the castle. Lessa jumped on and began running as fast as possible up the side of the rope while making hand signs. She then slammed her fingers on the rope then flipped over while continually running up the side of it. The rope went tight. “SHIT KEEP RUNNING OR WE ALL DIE AT THIS HIGHT!” Lessa looked back, -“ the jutsu’s not holding I cant seem to keep the castle and the rope in place, this line is going to snap any second.

But just as things seemed to fail Echo and Raven came running threw picking everyone up finally jumping on Echos back. His speed and strength were both impressive, Kane was most impressed. “HOLD ON!” His speed kept increasing every step he took almost as if he was a train building momentum. Nothing was going to stop him now.

The rope snapped, Echo couldn’t think of anything else to do so he flung everyone up into the air making a long chain, Starcomand was left to grasp onto the castle while holding everyone now. “I think I have an idea” Echo shouted up to Starcomand.

“Well spill it cause I can’t hold you all forever!”

“Swing us back and forth as hard as you can!” As soon as Star had built enough strength he flung everyone to one side, everyone put enough chakra into their feet to grasp onto the bottom of the castle.


Kenshin smiled. “Great thinking both of you, also great job with the rope idea Lessa, I’m sure things could have been much harder without it.” He nodded to the group. “Alright you remember the groups now, break!” Kenshin, Echo, Lessa, and Kane went running in one direction, Raven, Starcomand, Akimoto, and Panther went in a totally different direction.

Finally making it to the top Kenshin and his group looked around. “Holy shit, this place is big.” Just the path from were they were to the castle entrance was almost a mile or two walk. There were several fountains everywhere along with guards. They didn’t seem to smart but that didn’t seem to matter cause they were all over the place. There were trees shrubs and gardens everywhere as well.

Kenshin looked over at Echo. “Alright I need you to put up the Genjutsu for me, please.”

Echo looked around. “Look at the fountains, oooooooooow, aaaaaah” Kenshin looked at him for a second, he found the closest tree he could, and started banging his head into it.

“Echo pay attention to the jutsu and less with the other stuff”
Echo’s face went from happy into a very serious concentrated face. He started making several hand signs over and over again. “Genjutsu art, Temple of nirvana!” the genjutsu was released as all the guards began to fall asleep. “Alright the jutsu seems to be working.” Echo made a mad dash for the front door. Kenshin attempted to stop him but was unable to catch up. Echo even ran into people but nothing happened. He stood at the front door waiting for everyone else to catch up.

Starcomand and his group were having a bit more of a difficult time with things, taking the back entrance meant they had to scale a large wall. But after they did so things got so much easer. It was like a forest in the back so they had plenty of coverage.

The doors to the front creaked open, Echo was the first inside without hesitation. Kenshin, Lessa, and Kane soon followed. The castle inside was a total hell, the castle itself was almost like a large surrealism labyrinth. There were staircases leading to all different directions up down right and left. Kenshin looked around for a second. “It’s a genjutsu trap. It’s meant for those that can’t see through its illusion to tell that these staircases aren’t really there.”
A clapping of the feet scared all of them, they dodged for different corners of the room behind anything they could hide behind.

Starcomand and there group had now hit some trouble, Bui was standing outside in the back part of the castle obviously enjoying himself. Things had just become more complicated.

Someone slowly walked into the room. Kenshin knew who it was almost automatically.
“There’s no reason to hide any longer, I know you’re here.” Darko’s voice hissed from the shadows.
Kenshin was the first to step out. “So this is Darko’s Floating castle. There’s a lot more then what we’re seeing obviously.”
“As usual using the Sharingan to perceive all of my genjutsu. Why have you come? I don’t believe I sent invitations out.”
“Well you know me, I was never the one to knock.” A kunai shot out of the corner Kane was sitting in. Darko’s hand went shooting up into the air, and caught it.
Echo looked at him, as his eyes slowly melded into the first stage of Sharingan. He was a full blood Uchiha but his Sharingan had not completely formed as of yet. He looked up one side of Darko and down the other side. “Were fighting this shrimp?”
Lessa looked over at him then back at Darko.

Starcomand went running out of the trees. Followed by Raven on the right, and Panther on the left. Akimoto appeared behind Bui.
Bui looked around. “What is this? Someone has infiltrated lord Darko’s castle.” Bui didn’t have his armor on, and he was only in first state of his strength. “Your all wastes of my time.”
Starcomand gave Akimoto a signal. “Alright hold him as long as possible Star, and you two.” Akimoto turned around and began scaling the outside wall to the castle, the moment he came across a large window he fazed right threw it.
“Lord Darko will not be pleased about this. What do you think you’re doing?” Bui began making several hand signs that Panther was formulary with.
“everybody GET DOWN!”
“Lightning style, lighting barrage!” A large stream of lighting swept through and took out several of the trees.
Panther jumped back up. “Ushi ,saro, ne, I tori, ushi, uma, saro, ne tori. Earth style jutsu, Ground shatter!” The ground collapsed itself under Bui.

Akimoto was left alone in the halls of the large castle, he began searching for every possible route to take. The castle was a large labyrinth, every new hall he found took him farther and farther into the unknown.

Kenshin’s eyes went into the Sharingan.
“Hold on Kenshin. I’ll make a deal with you, you withdraw everyone from my castle and take something to your beloved Hokage for me, and I’ll spare your lives, because at the current position you’re in, there’s no way you could beat me our my army.” Almost on Q a bunch of Darko’s army men appeared alongside the outer walls. “I figure it’s an offer you can’t refuse.” Darko snapped his fingers as the wall behind him shifted open leaving Star and his group visible.
“Guess I have no choice.” Bui looked at Darko a bit flustered, but ready to take any order or any action needed. Kenshin grabbed the parchment and blew a whistle that he had up his sleeve. Akimoto sank down into the room they were in from the roof. Kenshin grabbed a handful of exploding notes and placed them on the ground, as soon as they detonated they all made a run for it before Darko changed his mind. He looked far below. “Alright time to use the new gliders Hime made for us specifically.” Echo without a second hesitation looked at them and jumped off the side of the castle. He put his hands and feet together so that he shot down like a bullet. Then suddenly spread his feet and legs so that a webbing opened up and took over his flight.
Kenshin and the rest dived down figuring that it was safe to go. They did almost the same thing following closely behind Echo. It took several minutes to land as for the fact the gliders gave resistance. But they all safely landed on the top of a large lake.
“Alright now it’s time to get back to hidden leaf and report to Hime. Also Akimoto you have to remember what you saw within the castle so that you can privately report to Hime.”

It had taken several hours but Ignis and her group had made it to hidden bird safely. She had the group spread out and look around for any clues to were Orochimaru might have been recently.



(Part 3 coming soon)

great update ^_^.

^.^ Great stories kak, just done readin all of em ^.^.


Is there any possibility putting me in the plot ^.^?

cuda sworn u were aposed to be my bro in it kaz xD lol

Finished readin them all kak,

great story, lookin forward to the next part

Kenshin wrote:cuda sworn u were aposed to be my bro in it kaz xD lol

lol, you can't predict what Kak has in his vicious mind planned for me, I bet it will be gigantic tree falling on my head ^.^

Ignis was doing her best to get information. She even resorted to being perverted. When she had walked up to a very perverted store clerk and asked him about anything strange he didn’t give her an answer. She bent over to pick up a pencil she ‘accidentally’ dropped. The clerk gave her all the info that he could think of and she strutted her way back out of the shop and thrust her hips to one side and went around the corner.

Blade had gone around a small village and rounded up a bit of information at this time. He was talking to a old man sitting on the side of the road. “And you say that he went threw here some time ago?”

“Whah yesh, he came through only weeeeeksh ago.”

“Thank you for your help.” Blade disappeared behind a wall of birds.

Woodchip was taking his time moving around finding information, seeing he hadn’t been on a mission in a while he wanted to check out the scenery a bit more then he wanted to work.

Everyone else seemed to be getting information here and there, but only enough that wouldn’t even satisfy Ignis. She finally made the plan to head out to there next destination. The group followed closely behind. “Alright guys its going to be a few days before hitting the marsh country. Keep alert for any sign of enemy.”

“Got it” Came from the whole group. Zabuza and Sniper took over lead of the group. Sarah stayed near the back.

“Alright now for the game plan to begin. BYAKUGAN!” Sarah’s eyes went from a normal blue to a sharp blue with veins extending from her eyes. A three hundred and sixty degree vision.

Blade nodded to Ignis, he then broke off from the group and went into a totally different direction as if he had something he needed to do.

Woodchip looked at Ignis, “Was there a change in the game plan?”

“No, Blade is doing something different from the game plan for a reason. He will be in hidden Marsh before us in the direction he’s going but that’s for scouting purposes only, and only one to two ninja should do that.”

Ignis jumped forward onto one branch then fell behind. “ILL CATCH UP TO YOU GUYS KEEP GOING, SARAH YOUR IN THE LEAD NOW!” Ignis stood on the branch and watched as they went ahead. Ronin stopped as well on a farther branch ahead, he looked at Ignis then turned and continued on with the rest of the group.

-“I sure hope you know what your doing Ignis.”- Ronin pressed on. Sarah was leader of the squad now.

Ignis stood frozen for a second. “Alright I know your out there, so you mine as well show yourself.”

Ignis’s eyes shifted from side to side. As three ninja with head bands she was unfamiliar with slowly erected out of a tree. “Figures enough someone was following us, I know you have been on our trail for about an hour, but that was enough for me.”

One of the ninja had a mask on his face, his heavy breathing made Ignis a bit frightened, but all the same she kept her cool.

“We are ninja from the hidden Demon country. We heard rumors that hidden leaf ninja were monkeying around here and figured we would stop in for a visit.”

Ignis smirked. “Flattering but you can leave now, I have no business with you the last I knew.”

“Oooh but you do. I believe your in search of Orochimaru if I’m correct. Well we don’t like him either but on the same note we don’t like anyone besides those of hidden Demon. Now I suggest you beg and hope we don’t kill you right now little girl. Orochimaru came from your village and his treachery will be repaid back on hidden leaf village, our Shinobi are far stronger then anyone from Konoha.”

Ignis looked at him for a second, “Why is it our issue that Orochimaru has hurt you? He left Konoha for his own ambitions and his on his own will. What he’s done isn’t our business.”

“Well you see, it is, to us of the hidden demon country we believe that if someone has hailed from a specific area but left they are still bound to that country. When Orochimaru left Leaf, he was still bound to them, so all he has done to others is brought right back to you.”

“That’s absurd, you honestly think we had a part of what ever Orochimaru has done to you.”

“We don’t think, we know, Konoha……”The ninja hesitated then hissed the next few words. “Is eevil.”

“You are wearing on my patience and you don’t want to see what I can do when annoyed or flustered.” Ignis looked at them with her eyes focused on what appeared to be the leader. Then out of no were the ninja to her farthest right began making hand signs.

“Forbidden dark art, Demonic mist.” The area began to become thick and heavy with a mist Ignis believed to be poison, but instead of it poisoning her, everything around her became heavy.

“Shit, I cant go out like this.”

Someone out of nowere picked Ignis up and brought her to the highest tree he could.

“Its me Echo, Tsunade Hime sent me as back up, she heard rumor that the hidden demon country would try to attack us. She’s sent me on another mission but thankfully I got here just in time.” Echo’s eyes went from a dark blue into a deep burning red, a second comma appeared in both his eyes. “I feel so much different then before.” Echo let out a deep breath. “Something is different for this battle.” He began making hand signs as the ninja started to climb the tree branches. “FIRE STYLE, FIREBALL JUTSU!” A large fireball shot out of his mouth taking out a long line of trees and setting the forest ablaze. He looked at Ignis. “Don’t know how I just did that, but it was cool.”

Echo jumped down the tree back to the ground as one ninja made hand signs running at him.

“That’s not right, iv never seen these hand signs before, WHAT THE HELL?!” Ignis looked down at him.

“There not of a faction that we are familiar with, be careful!”

Ignis jumped down out of the tree. “I have something to show you guys, I just recently learned it from some of the ANBU black ops.” Ignis began making a sign and then pulled out ten kunai. “Wind style jutsu, Rotating Shuriken.” As if they were now being held by some of her strings they kunai began floating in the air, Ignis placed her right hand with her middle and pointer finger standing up on end. The kunai launched forward and began to spin around making them like a drill. One of the kunai managed to hit one of the ninja. He fell automatically.

Before anyone could see it happen Ignis summoned one of her puppets the Crow to the fight. She took control over the fight with just him, using the Crow isn’t very hard but he packs a powerful punch, he has several points in the body were the joints break apart and become knives. He also can release a gas that is highly poisonous.

Echo launched forward and grabbed the mask of the guy who was talking to Ignis before. But he released it when he saw a set of demonic teeth and a face that was scarred beyond belief.

“What are these guys. Its like there…. There freaks.”

The Ninja laughed at him in the low hiss.

The ninja that Ignis had just struck down was already getting back to his feet. The small slash on his side that she managed to take out of him began to heal.

“He’s the healer of the squad that’s why he isn’t trying to get close for a fight, he just makes sure the other two stay on top notch. By the looks of it he uses a chakra scalpel that he can extend a far distance to repair his comrades. There form of Ninjutsu is out of this world.” The other ninja that Ignis noticed was no longer in sight came launching out of the bushes. The Crow blocked his path of attack. Ignis leaped far enough back to stay out of range.

Echo on the other hand was having no trouble with range. Echo was best known for his close and far range combat. Not matter what situation he was in somehow he would prevail. “FIRE STYLE, FIREBALL JUTSU!” Another shot of fire came spurting out of his mouth.

The ninja healing them made a sudden change. “FALL BACK!” They were gone within seconds. Ignis and Echo didn’t quite know what to expect. But they stayed on guard. Echo then jumped up to Ignis to make sure she was ok. “hahahah I knew that they would back off.”

Ignis looked at him as if she was rather interested in what Echo had to say. But to his surprise she didn’t really give a crap, she razed her hand slowly above his head, then crashed down on it with one great swipe of her fist.

Ignis took a few minutes to recover from the fight but she was perfectly fine. Echo however was trying to recover from a large bump on his head.

“So Tsunade sent you on a mission as well.”

“yea we got back from the castle before hand and she thou……”

“YOU REALLY WENT INTO THAT CASTLE?”

“Uuh yea. It was HUGE. But Hime sent me on a new mission to hidden demon. She fears something might be going on there so I’m going under cover to investigate.”

Ignis suddenly smacked herself in the face. “Sorry for that but I got to go, the group is heading to hidden marsh at the moment. Hime has reason to believe that Orochimaru is there. So were going to see if we can pick him out of the weeds.”

“Alright I should let you go.” Ignis got back to her feet and went running along the tree line, Echo started to laugh as his clothing changed into a demonic black and red cloak with dark grey pants and shirt. His face changed completely. The other three ninja came out of the tree line. “What a foolish little girl, she actually thought I was that pest Echo Uchiha. But we found out what we need know.”


Miles off Echo was running across the boarder into Hidden Demon not knowing of what to expect or what he was truly looking for.
“Its time to report back to the Mezukage now so that he knows of our guest and then we should follow that girl Ignis to see if there really planning on killing Orochimaru. So that when they do we can kill them for the pain he’s caused to our village.”


(Part 4 Coming Soon)

good update kak

thought i wus teh one owning it up

^.^ great chapter Kakashi ^.^ looking forward to see more.

Hey guys sorry bout the story lately, i wish to be doing more for each segment or a whole chapter but iv also been dealing with school and im also making the unvailing of the next thing i have going on.

So ftw i have a movie story coming out soon, kinda like the naruto movies but obvoiuly in story form , its totally diffrent layout from what i did and an ongoing plot with no small missions here and there, im not fully finished but its around 30-40 pages now. The story will be released when im done with it, figuring out a tital and making a front cover

so hold onto your panties

^_______^ Can't wait!!

*Grabs all his panties*

I can't wait for the next part =| but I'll try.. >.< btw Kakashi I's sorry for not commenting before but the story's awesome! I luffers it! <3













..... Is the next part up yet?!

^ lol no its not XD

great update kakashi, lookin forward to the next one. ^_^

Echo had just made it over the boarder of Hidden demon. –“Wow this place is a low beat run down place. It almost looks like a barren waste land but completely red. It must be located over a volcano.”-

Echo pressed on without any more hesitation. But what he hadn’t noticed was what was lurking in the shadows. Four unknown and very well invisible figures.

Ignis caught back up to her group. Still uneasy about what had just happened. –“That’s not right, Echo doesn’t have the second part of the Sharingan like that. Nor does the Sharingan have its swirls backwards. Something isn’t right about this whole mission.”-

Ignis and her team pressed on, making it far within the confines of Hidden Marsh. The search was now up and operational. To find any trace of Orochimaru.


Obito sat alone by the docs watching the water ripple. He skipped a rock across it just to watch how it moved. He let out a deep sigh of pain and turned around to notice Raziel coming up behind him.

Raziel was one to play mind games with people, and it seemed as he had a little game to play with Obito at this time. “Good morning Obito.”

“Oooh, uuuh good morning Raziel.” Obito blushed a little from the fact he forgot Raziel’s name. “What brings you down to the docs.”

“Oooh nothing really, a little relaxation, sunshine, and to tell you your brothers alive.”

Obito looked at him with the Sharingan fully open. “What did you say?” Obito grind his teeth together as he said this. “What do you mean by that? What kind of sick person are you?”

“Oooh I’m not trying to be sick, I’m just telling you Tsunade Hime is keeping from you the fact that Kakashi is very much still alive somewhere. And that Sharingan of yours that you thought to be his, is a fake. It was mere Genjutsu.”

Obito looked at him with a cold hearted look. He felt a tingling in his hands as they began to burn from him clutching them so tightly. “If you keep making up stories like that, I will kill you.”

Raziel laid back on the doc they were on. “You can try, but I assure you. My knowledge of jutsu is far surpassed yours.” Raziel closed his eyes for a second. He opened them up and looked far into the sky.

Obito kept looking at him for any sudden movements.

“I suggest you put that Sharingan away before I take it from you.” Raziel was very calm about how he said things but all the same Obito wasn’t going to take much more of this.

Thought the sudden clap of Obito’s hands surprised Raziel. “FIRE STYLE, DEEP DRAGON FLAME!” Obito let off a large burst of fire at once. Raziel leaped to the right just missing being scorched away like the doc he had been just seconds ago laying on.

Obito’s eyes were closed and his head tilted down. He had a very large grin on his face. “You might have a wide range of knowledge in jutsu, But I have something you will never understand.”

“Are you mad?” Raziel looked at him with some fear in his eyes. “I was only messing with you, but I wasn’t joking about your brother being alive.”

“ENOUGH! YOUR LIES END HERE!” Obito began making more hand signs. “Water style, water dragon jutsu!”

A large dragon rose out of the water and began its attack on Raziel. Raziel didn’t have enough time to make hand signs, all he could do was dodge the dragon. “OBITO CALL OFF THE DRAGON!”

Obito made another strand of hand signs. “WATER STYLE, RISING WATER!” A large strand of water came jetting out of the ground and water rising fast and high into the air. It cut right past Raziel, to which once again he had to dodge as fast as he possible could.

Raziel landed in what appeared to be a safe area to him. He looked up at Obito. “Alright, I warned you to stop, now its time to face my wrath.” Raziel began making hand signs now, the technique he was using was a bloodline trait cause no matter what Obito did he couldn’t copy it. “Forbidden art, Element assimilation jutsu.” Raziel’s body became water almost as soon as he said the jutsu name. Obito grabbed several shurikan and flung them at Raziel. It had no effect the shuriken went right threw him.


Echo had turned around just in time, missing several paper bombs attached to kunai.

He opened his eyes into the Sharingan. He stood in one spot looking around for what just attacked him. Out of the smoke and dust were four ninja just slowly walking into position of Echo.

“Well that’s not much of a welcoming party.”

One ninja with a facemask slowly walked forward a bit and looked at echo. “You have trespassed into Hidden Demon country. The penalty for trespassing is death.” Echo didn’t take his eyes off him.

“I am Zaku Metorashi. Of hidden demon.” The ninja kept looking at Echo with a deep heavy feeling. But he suddenly looked down when he realized that he was sinking into the ground.

Echo had made a shadow clone without anyone knowing, he was slowly pulling the ninja into the ground so that only his head was showing. “As flattered as I am to be killed I have a mission that needs to be completed. So I’m going to ask that you buffoons stay out of my way.”

The ninjas behind Zaku began making hand signs. The one in the middle placed his hands on the ground. “Earth style, earth style split!” The ground split around Zaku, leaving him room to get out of the hole.

Echo went into a defensive stance. He looked at the other ninja wondering what to do on a four on one situation. If these guys were strong he would have a lot of issues to deal with.

The ninja to his far left that was healing his comrades in a previous fight took a few steps back. His hands fast at work making hand signs. The ninja on the far right began making hand signs. “Expansion jutsu!” Just like the Akimitchi clan, the ninja expanded his whole body into a large ball and began spinning at a high velocity.

“Who are these people?” Echo jumped high into the air, just missing being crushed under one to two tons of fat.

“Ok this is going to be a pain in my ass isn’t it.” Echo smiled at them all. “Super Shadowclone Jutsu.” five thousand clones appeared. –“This will drain a big amount of my chakra but I know it will be well enough to beat these losers. All the Echo’s in the area began making the same hand signs. “Alright, FIRE STYLE, FIVE THOUSAND FLAMES!” Flames from all around began to go into one center target scorching everything. The ninja inside the jutsu began to scream as there skin boiled and melted. The temperature itself was hotter then that of the sun.

Echo’s clones disappeared. But as he realized that the attack didn’t finish off the ninja he had gotten right back to his feet and began making another strand of jutsu hand signs. “I don’t know what these people are, but there not ordinary Ninja, that five thousand flames jutsu should have killed each and everyone of them.” Echo finished the hand signs. He looked at each of the ninja, “Earth style, earth forest dimension.” The area began sprouting logs of wood everywhere that made a small maze for the ninja to get threw. Echo turned around, -“my only chance now is running, my chakra is to depleted to use Ninjutsu, and I don’t think taijutsu will get me anywhere.”-

One of the ninja jumped out of nowhere and attempted to attack Echo. Almost on instinct Echo attacked back. “LEAF HURRICAN!” The ninja went backwards and was stopped by one of the large logs Echo created.

Another jumped out at him. Echo leaped high into the air trying to avoid him. The ninja jumped into the air to attack as another ninja came up behind him. “LEAF WHIRLWIND!” Echo kicked them back both to the ground. Zaku jumped up in front of him now. “Now for the head idiot. LEAF THUNDER FIST!” Echo hit the ninja leaving a large cut on the side of his face. Zaku fell back to the ground hitting hard and breaking one of his legs.

Echo fell and then slowly got back up from kneeling. He turned and looked at them and slowly continued to walk to his mission area.


Ignis was very uneasy about the surrounding terrain. “Ok everyone keep on guard.” It took moments to under stand that they were not wanted in this village. Ignis was getting glared at from all over as she headed back into the woods. But something stopped her. It was a hissing sound, almost like a snake.

“Well well well, it seems as if the curse mark lead you right here.”

A figure standing in the shadows of the trees caught her attention. A figure with long black hair came slinking slowly out from in the tree branches. He had semi large earrings on, it looked as if he had some sort of strange markings on his eyes. His eyes alone looked almost like a snakes.

Ignis grabbed the back of her neck as the curse mark began to sting and burn.

“Oooh its ok, it does that time to time especially if your getting use to it.”

“Who are you?”

“Well I believe I’m the person your looking for, Orochimaru my dear. Yet I think you’re here not because of your village but your in search of power.”

“I would never work for someone as corrupt as you Orochimaru.”

Orochimaru let off a small giggle as if Ignis was just a flee in the world.

“You forget that I’m older and wiser then you or your pathetic Hokage. I’ve made it this far, what makes you think you have any way of beating me?”

Ignis looked at him. She became stunned suddenly, she saw her death in her eyes as if it had already happened. She watched as Orochimaru attacked her and she could do nothing.

She shook herself off for a second. –“No that’s the ninja art death stair. If I had fallen for that id be dead.”- She jumped out of the way just as Orochimaru threw a set of Kunai at her.
“Aaah so you did see the Genjutsu behind that. Clever little girl.”

“What are you playing at Orochimaru.”

“I’m testing your abilities. Seeing how far the hidden leaf village has come.”

“What do you mean?”

“Aaah in good time my dear. But for now ill leave you with this information, your ninjusu abilities have been far surpassed by what you believed them to be before. Your knowledge of jutsu is greater then it was before.” Orochimaru let off a weird shrieking laugh as he sank into a tree and disappeared.



(Part 5 Coming by Friday)

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