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PostPosted:Wed Oct 24, 2007 5:48 am
by Hime
flip side
In a school, a group of students are gathering around for story time. These children are ll 4-6 years old. They are all waiting for the story teller.
"What kind of story are going to hear today?"
"Yes I cannot wait! What is taking her so long?"
"Hey everyone quiet!! She is here!"
A lady walks in the room and sat down. She picks up a book on the ground.
"Okay! Everyone ready?" The lady smiles as she says to the children.
The question is followed by a loud cheer from the children.
After story time, she send all the children home. The lady quickly puts on a robe and hood. She then start cleaning up the room the children was in. At that moment, other teachers and care takers enter the room.
"We are always thankful for what you have done for the children and for us. You always bring gifts and supplies for the school everytime you come. However, don't you worry about what will happen to you if they find out you have been coming here year after year?"
The lady does not answer to the question. She just keep on doing her chores.
"We understand, but still feel free to join all of us for staff dinner."
The lady nods in reply. As she finishes her chores, she walks out to the court yard. It is already night time. She can see the stars shine brightly in the night sky.
"No one can understand how complex life is......just as complex as the realtions between stars."
Just then, she sees a brink of light soar through the sky. She takes closers look at the light. It is a burning space craft.
"By the force...." the lady grasps as she says.
The spacecraft seems to be heading to the ocation of the school. It manages to fly over the school and crash landed somewhere near the school. It does not take long for everyone from the surrounding are to notice the crash. Everyone rushes to the crash site. As every one get there, they see the lady is trying to put out the fire and accessing the situation.
"What are you doing? It is too dangerous!" the locals says to the lady.
"We have no time! There are still survivors in this ship. Help me to put out some of the fire! I will figure out a way to get inside!" the lady screams out.
Everyone gets to work upon hearing what the lady said. She somehow got the door opened and go inside. To the lady's surprise, the ship is full all youngings whom are going to be chosen by Jedi Masters to be padawans. The lady wastes no time to carry some of the youngings out of the ship. She then call out the others to help her to get everyone in the ship out. At least they get everyone who is seemingly alive out of danger first. She tells everyone to get awy from the ship once they get every younging out of the ship. Most of the students looks fine, but it is too late of rhte pilot.
"What do you think we should do with them? The local hospital is miles away. We only have local clinic here! The clinic will not be able to support everyone there!" the locals says.
"What about if we settle them inside the school? It is big enough to locate everyone in there." the lady suggests.
"They are too young to be Jedi." the locals commented.
"They are not Jedi yet. They are just youngings going to be padawans."
"You seem very knowledgable in these things."
"Well, I do know a thing or two about these things." The lady says as she walks away to prepare the location for the students.
PostPosted:Wed Oct 24, 2007 6:20 am
by Kenshin
great chapter hime :p i wonder if il be one of the unlucky ones tht crashed :p
PostPosted:Wed Oct 24, 2007 12:05 pm
by Raziel
nice chapter looking forward for next one ^__^
PostPosted:Wed Oct 24, 2007 5:06 pm
by Starcomand
great story hime keep it up
PostPosted:Thu Oct 25, 2007 11:05 pm
by Hime
The injured youngings are being located at the school. They are being well taken care of. Day and night, the villagers take shifts around to take care of those youngings. The lady herself never gets herself any rest. She is always here and there to tend to the injured and the wounded. It is lucky that most of the youngings suffered mild to minor injuries. The villagers buried the dead and make grave stones for them.
"Poor kids, they haven't got the chance to live a full life yet."
"Compare to them, we are lucky. They are going to be send into a world of violence and will be force to make difficult decisions everyday."
"Yet, we still need to tend to the wound. Let them know that they have to live well so that none of these kids will die in vain."
"It is still sad."
"The lady had spoken nothing of it yet. Isnt' she tired from all the work?"
"I don't know. SHe is like a machine."
ONe of the students manages to wake up. Everyone gathers around him. The head of the villagers comes forth and speaks to him.
"Oh I see you are awake now, child. You are very lucky that you survived the crash. You have fainted for three days now. How are you feeling? Can you remember any thing? Such as your name?"
"My name......Kakashi. I am a student from the Jedi Academy."
"Good....Kakashi your name is. Are you feeling hungry?"
"Yes I do! But, before that, I beg of you.....please tell me about my friends condition! Are they still alive? Where is Kenshin? Raziel? Saunby? Where are they?" Kakashi says as he struggles to get up.
"You must not be rash my boy! You just woke up from a crash! You should give your body more time to rest and recover. " the villagers says as he puts him back to bed.
Kakashi tries to struggle as a hand lays on his shoulder.
"I do admire your concern about your friends. You need to sleep. Sleep child, sleep....." a female's voice rings into Kakashi's ears. It is like a clear sound of a bell that makes people goes to sleep. He feels his eye lids are getting heavy. He turns around and find a brown hooded figure is standing behind him. Then everything goes black for Kakashi.
"Lady, what do you think....."
"He is just very much concern about his friends. Very much admirable. RIght now, he needs to rest. Let him sleep. " The lady says as she puts Kakashi back to bed.
She then heads outside to the crash site.
"This is going to cause more trouble for me than anything else. This should get those people's attention and have them up pick those kids up." The lady says as she takes out a device and press a button on it.
Couple days later, the Academy send in their transport to the planet. The one who lead this mission is SIlverCloud. SHe is one of the medical Officer in the Academy. SHe comes and inspect every younging's conditon and give them the proper health care.
"I thank you on behalf of the Jedi Council and Academy. May I ask you dear sir, were you the one who send out the siugnal to the council for us to come and pick up the youngings?" SIlvercloud asks the head of the villagers.
"No, it was one of the care takers of the school. She is a part timer here. You may not be able to find her. To tell you the truth, even we do not know where to find her."
"She works here part time? But you should know where she lives."
"Yes, but she always comes to us during a certain time of the year. Then she just disappear from everyone. SHe is always like this. She lives in the school when she is here. I do not know if she is even in her room right now."
"I see. Then it is too bad that I cannot thank her in person. Well, we must be on our way now." Silvercloud says as she reutrns to her ship. Upon steping into her ship, she feels someone is watching her from a distance. She then starts searching.
"SIlvercloud, we have to go now! What is it? Is there something wrong?"
"Oh, nothing." SIlvercloud replies.
She takes one last look around, and still she find nothing.
"But I swear I felt that something or someone is watching me. Somebody is over there. Could it be my imagination?" She thought to herself.
On a mountain not too far from where Silvercloud is located. The lady has been watching the whole event. She still has that hood to cover her head.
"So....her name is Silvercloud. It is quite a waste for her to be just a medical officer in the Jedi temple.She is pretty good. Come to think of it, that Kakashi boy is not bad too. Looks like we have some very interesting young ones this year. I better leave before something else happens." the lady says as she pulls down her hood. She then takes out a remote looking device and pushes a button. The huge rock behind her starting to disappear and expose a space craft in red color.
"Look s like we have to be on the move again.....Akayuki!"
PostPosted:Thu Oct 25, 2007 11:50 pm
by Raziel
great story and cant wait to see what happened to me ^___^ if i survived or not
PostPosted:Fri Oct 26, 2007 5:40 am
by Starcomand
great update hime keep it up
PostPosted:Fri Oct 26, 2007 5:53 am
by Kenshin
cool update ^^
PostPosted:Tue Oct 30, 2007 11:09 pm
by Hime
The lead
Ronin and Starcomand are on their way to the planet Felexica. They recieved a report from the recent events. A student from the crash encountered a force user with features similar to HIME. Another team was dspatched to look into this matter. Right now, Ronin is hoping this trip is going to bear fruit.
"You sure it is her?" Starcomand asks.
"Honestly, I am not sure. However, this is the most reliable source we have so far. We have no choice but to go find out." ROnin answers.
"I hope that you will find something on this trip......for your sake." Raven says to Ronin with a scarly expression on her face.
"Yes Raven, you are one of the few whom we can place your trust and lives on." Starcomand answers.
"I must say this is offical now: I hate you both."
"SO Raven, aside from you hating us, do you know who is leading the other team?" Ronin asks.
"Of course, the council sent out phoniex, kane, and EvilIvy on this matter."
"It is quite a combination....the council sure knows how to pick them." Startcomand says.
Moments later, the "Black Bird" landed somewhere near the crash site. The three decided to start from here and then head to the school to garther more information. Hopefully they can even find HIME on this planet. They meet Phenoix's team near the crash site.
"I guess this is becoming a common that the jedi council sent out two top three Jedis on a two men mission? To think that the council used to have very limited man power right after the civil war." Kane says.
"Mind you the same saying can apply to the sith as well. I heard that their numbers are increasing to the point in can even rival us. You do know they have some powerful fighters on their side too!" EvilIvy says.
"Come to think of it....it used to take decades to train a Jedi. Now, we have so many that ......"
"Ok Raven, we should focus on our task now instead of talking behind the council's back. However, I do think the Jedi nowasdays are more...aggerssive....they are looking for a reason to ignite their lightsaber every chance they get." Ronin says.
"That is why Master Danger had reported on the matter that students are lacking the trainning of heart and soul. The saber is improtant, but the making of a person is even more improtant." EvilIvy says.
"Is this the reason why HIME always refuses to take in any students?" Ronin asks.
"What you feel like you understand her feelings more or something?" Phoenix asks.
"Well, in her records she never trainned anyone after she got her Knight title. She never seem to take part in any discussion, meetings the knights hosted. She just takes on a mission and disappeared from everyone for a period of time and then comes back later. SHe just goes whereever the force tells her to. Or so as she claims." Ronin explains.
"Still, she was always viewed as the bastard daughter of the Sith because she is so distant from other Jedi. Not to say fellow Jedis always giving her a hard time. I cannot blame her....most people would have run away if all the people around you wants to kill you on the first day you come in." ROnin says.
"OH that day....yea....I can still remember it as it was yesterday. She went all crazy when Stump and some others went after her head." Raven says.
"Alright, let's get back on our tasks. We have a lot of work to do. We will keep in contact if we discover anything on our way." Phoenix says.
The two teams then part ways.
PostPosted:Tue Oct 30, 2007 11:15 pm
by Raziel
Great part __^^__ looking forward for next one
PostPosted:Wed Oct 31, 2007 6:05 am
by Starcomand
great update hime keep them comeing
PostPosted:Wed Oct 31, 2007 4:08 pm
by Kenshin
cool update
PostPosted:Fri Nov 02, 2007 7:45 am
by Hime
Ronin and his team start to gather information about "the lady" from the school. What they gather is that she process knowledge of advance science, history, politics, and philosophy. She came to the school to teach children who do not have enough money for proper schooling on this planet. It was told that she manage to came by one day and keep asking about the school. Before anyone knows it, she brought it money and supplies to the school. Then, she started to take on a teaching postion in the school. She is only here during a certain part of the year. She would come with supplies and materials for the school. She would live inside the school and prepare lessons for the students everyday. Then, she would go away before anyone would notice. Funny thing is that she never said a word about herself. She just work, teach, and help around the school and the surrounding towns and villages. The people around here just assume she is from the city. However, from people came by from the city, there is no people match the decription. One of her feature is her long, thin, black hair. Also, she has skin as white as snow. Then again, her personality is very pleasent towards the students. Even though she can be very strict in their studies, the students recieve a lot of care and love her. Therefore, she is very popluar amongs the students. Every year, the students waited for this time of the year for her arrival. Aside from teaching, she often take the students out on feild trips and let them run wild. She also hosts concerts, plays, and other activities for the students to make their life more colorful.
"Looks like she is well liked." Ronin says.
"We think that is her. However, the people around told us that she doesn't like to be recorded. That means no pictures, or recordings. However, one of the villagers took this during a concert. She is wearing a hood, however we can still see her hand." Starcomand says as he shows the recording to Ronin and Raven. Starcomand then points to a hooded figure. Ronin can see the hand of the figure. It is a white as snow.
"I really want to say that is person we are looking for. However, this is too evidence for us to take any guesses." Raven says.
"It is very true. This is too little for us to make any decisions. We will search around for clues fo a little longer from the nearby area. We can only hope that Pho's team found something that we didn't." Ronin says.
At the crash site, Phoneix and his team are still ooking at the wreckage of the ship.
"Master Phoenix, I have found something that might get your attention other than the cause of the crash." kane says.
"What is it?"
"Well....the door to the passager bay. It seems it got rip open from the outside. Not by anything solid. It seems someone uses the force to rip the door open to get the students out." Kane answers.
"Someone with that kind of force power? Ripping the door open just by using the force? There isn't many who can do that!!" Phoenix is shocked.
"More to the matter is that, the ship......it seems it was being shot down somewhere high orbit on this planet. However, I cannot identify the kind of weapon and type pf ship just by looking at the scars." EvilIvy says as she walksing towards Kane and Phoenix.
"We need to inform Ronin and the others!....." Phoenix says.
"One thing though: Our mission aside, we all know tha tthe council is searching for HIME. Do you think that she knows we are searching for her? ell,not exectly we, but the council is anyways." Kane asks.
"I do not know. But I think she knows, and she is avioding being seen and found by us."
"How can you be so sure Pho?"
"Well, even though she is not as friendly as you and Kane right here, she is not stupid. Her long time experience of staying alive outside all by herself must have taught her many things. She knows we are looking for her. It is just the matter whether she wants to be found or not."
"Okay then, why would she want to hide from her comrades anyways?"
"Comrades? She only use the word comrade of a few people. I cannot blame her, I still remember looking at the boulder she smashed on the first day she arrived....as if it was yesterday."
"We were all there.....we know" EvilIvy says.
PostPosted:Fri Nov 02, 2007 8:03 am
by Starcomand
great update hime keep up the writing
PostPosted:Fri Nov 02, 2007 12:38 pm
by Raziel
Great chapter. I cannot wait untill next one =D
PostPosted:Fri Nov 02, 2007 4:10 pm
by Kenshin
cool chapter.. keep it up
PostPosted:Sat Nov 03, 2007 1:52 am
by Raziel
I wonder if Pho, Kane and Ivy r gonna find Hime in next chapter
PostPosted:Sun Nov 04, 2007 9:54 am
by Hime
"She seems the type that goes by own way right?" Ronin says.
"Yes, I heard the council doesn't want to promote her because of her personality. It seems to everyone that she cannot be tamed." Starcomand.
"That only ncrases her dsappointment towards the council and the whole order all together. Therefore, she never get herself into anything that involves politics. She just does her police work." Raven says.
"She seems know her quite well." Ronin says.
"Mind you, I transpot her to most of her missions and back. You people have never seen her ace before she heads into a mission. That cold expression on her face would gives you the chill up your back. It seems like she is always already to dive into action. She never think about the odds she up against. Ever since that time she was left alone to fend for herself against a a group of siths."
"You mean she had to fight ll by herself? There hould be other Jedi around."
"Yes Ronin, she was totally outnumbered. There were other Jedi around. However, no one was willing to give her a hand, the odds should be even. She was beaten, alone. Then she goes.....you know. I saw the entire battle because I was the transpot to get everyone out of there. She was the last to get on. She was wounded from head to toe."
"How could any fellow Jedi treat each other like this?"
"You do not understand star, everyone thinks she is the outcast. She is like an exile in her own domain. She is so alone." Raven says.
"She looks for someone who can kill her." Ronin says.
"Yes, she gave me that feeling too ever since that battle. She is always as silent as stars in space." Raven answers.
Crash site rumble
Phoenix finish his report on the crash site. However, the council insist the the team is to stay longer on the planet.
"Those old people never let us have it easy huh?" EvilIvy says.
"Somehow, they are acting as relics of a pass age. They do not have to bear the burdens we have t bear now." Kane says.
"The prolbme we do not have a sage like figure like Yoda. Civil wars are breaking out here and there. The gave time for the Sith to gain power and number. Right now, I fear the Sith can even rival the Jedi Academy." Phoenix says.
"Hate to admit it, but these are very strange times indeed." Kane says.
"Could this be a sign o something terrible is coming? A horrorable is coming to pass?" EvilIvy asks.
"ENOUGH! Now it is not the time to dwell ourselves into silly, useless thoughts. We need to stay focus for now. Right now, we are about to have company." Phoneix says.
It is then a black robed figure appears from the cover of the night sky. The three cannot see the figure's face but there is no doubt that the figure is not a Jedi.
"This is not a place for you. I suggest you leave, or we will be forced to use force on you!" kane warns the black robed figure.
"Oh....use force...like this?" a male voice comes from the black robed figure as he leaps into the air and unleash force lightning on the three. The three Jedi quickly ignite their sabers and block the lightning.
"I got him" EvilIvy says as she leaps into the air and swings her saber at the figure's chest. The figure blocks the attack with his reb lightsaber.
"SITH.....just as I thought." Phoenix says as he quicky dive into the action
PostPosted:Sun Nov 04, 2007 10:06 am
by Starcomand
great update hime keep them comeing
PostPosted:Sun Nov 04, 2007 10:27 am
by Kenshin
great update
PostPosted:Sun Nov 04, 2007 2:10 pm
by Raziel
:O there goes the climax!!! Great chapter once again and i cant wait to see outcome of this battle.
PostPosted:Tue Nov 06, 2007 12:23 am
by Kane
:O :O A chance for me to get horribly disfigured? Although im sure Pho and Ivy can handle it ill just hang around at the back shouting encouragement heh, nice story so far Hime
PostPosted:Tue Nov 06, 2007 5:12 am
by Hime
Phoenix leaps into the fight and separate Kane nd EvilIvy from the Sith. He doesn't want Kane and EvilIvy to have any accidents. If it is possible, Phoenix would like to finish the fight himself instead. Then again, the Sith is a very capable fighter with a lightsaber. Kane uses the force to pick a rock and hauls it against the Sith. The Sith uses the force to stop the rock and changes its direction to EvilIvy. EvilIvy does a side leap to evade the attakc and points her saber towards the Sith's chest. Phoenix also goes for the sith's feet at the same time. Sith jumps and twirl side ways in the air and kick bot Evilivy's nd Phoneix's saber hilt away from his direction. He then lands a kick on the two Jedi. Kane takes this chance and dashes towards the Sith. The Sith lands on the foor and pushes Kane back. Phoenix catches Kane. EvilIvy then jumps over Phoenix and Kane while doing a frontal slash. The Sith blocks EvilIvy's attack with his saber but recieves two punches from kne and Phoenix. The Sith takes a few steps back. He then stands back up and retreats back into the covers of the night.
"Like I am going to let you do this!" Kane says as he thorws his lightsaber to the Sith. EvilIvy and Phoenix use force pull to pull the Sith back. The Sith is being pulled by the two.
"I guess I have no choice....." The Sith says she blocks Kane's saber and start charging towards the Jedi again. The time the Sith is unleashing his actually combat abilities to the three Jedi.
"Why are you here? What are you looking for?" kane asks the Sith.
"I am not in the mood to tell you my mission. However, this I can tell you, what I am looking for is not here." The Sith says as he fights. The three are having trouble to contain him. it is thanks to the good team work between the three that the Sith cannot gain any upper hand. However, the the Jedi cannot gain any upper hand either.
"Bah...this is getting no where. We will fight some other time." The sith says as he throws a flash bang towards the Jedi. The Jedi are blinded by the flash. The Sith uses this chance and fled into the drkness of the night.
"What do they want now?" Evilivy asks.
"I don't know. What I fear is not what they want, it's who they want." Phoenix says.
"We must inform Ronin about this. His team can be in danger!" Kane says.
Dark Side closing in
Jedi master Danger returns to the Jedi temple. His plan of a long rest comes to ruin when he is being called before the council.
"The Sith sightings....on multiple locations? Personlly, I do not think this is something small." Danger says.
"We all agree with you here, master Danger. Long we afraid the Sith will use other powers from the government to gain a foothold. The cases on Naboo and Phoenix's case are both very bold moves from them."
"I think it would be better for me to go to Naboo to look into this matter. Hopefully, by the will of the force, I cn find a way to end this civil war as well." Danger says.
"We ave already sent a number of Jedi to that planet. You summoned yo here not only to inform you about the Sith sighting but also..."
"HIME isn't it? You are all asking me where my student is? I am sorry to inform you that I do not have any idea where she is right now. I will go find HIME and find the truth about the Sith sightings s well."
"Very well, Master Danger."
Danger heads to his chamber after meeing with the council members. On the way he runs into Jedi Knight Chantelle and Jedi master Nintendo.
"I will be heading to Naboo." Danger says.
"We know. We are sent here to assist you in anyway we can. Beware, the dark side is growing stronger. These are very unstable times. " Nintendo says.
"To be honest with you....I have been feeling uneasy. Somhow, I feel like my time is closing in on me." Danger says.
"Now you are talking non-sense! I am coming with you on this one. Nothing is going to happen to you!" Nintendo says.
"This is just lik old times." Danger says.
PostPosted:Tue Nov 06, 2007 2:33 pm
by Kenshin
great update hime
PostPosted:Wed Nov 07, 2007 3:04 am
by Raziel
Another great part of this interesting story =). Keep it going HIME, story gets better and better each update