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 #11129  by Sparky
 
wooohooo i got hit against a wall... i hate to see my health insurance history... XD. Great story hime!!

 #11241  by Lessa
 
eeeek whats with Rav, hopefully she is ok. I enjoy your story alot Hime! <3

 #11436  by Hime
 
The four of team land on top of a building when Garren and Kraxier come and show them the map. The female figure look at the situation on holographic display and the Knight Riders are busy coming up with a plan. Sparky wants to help but then he find out the Knights Riders are speaking some unknown language.
“Great, first I got myself launched into a wall. Then, these guys are shutting us out.” Sparky says.
“I think they still do not trust us. I hope Martin and Raven have better luck than we do right here.” Rage says. Just then, the female figure turns to Sparky.
“Okay, you two are to head to this location right here. Your friends are going to need your help.” The female figure says to Sparky.
“Alright, what about you? Aren’t you coming along as well?” Sparky asks.
“I have a bigger problem. I am going to deal with it. Fraiz and the others are staying here to take care of the incoming armor units. These guys are going to suffer a defeat today here. Then again, some other parts of the planet had been taken over.” The female figure says.
“They are going to set up base there. We are going to hold them here so that they do not push any further. Some others have already head to those places to show those non-force doofus that Shinsen is not easy prey.” Fraiz says. The female figure nods in respond and she disappears in front of everyone.
“We are going to learn some new things as soon as we are done here.” Sparky says.

Back in the orphanage, Loking, and Chantelle are both taking care of the KR members. Tricky, and Sidious are keeping an eye on Nintendo, Ronin, and Matt. Blade just doesn’t care any more. He cannot believe KR would do such things to Nako. The KRs are being located in separate rooms so they can recover faster. Nintendo, and Ronin are first to be completely recovered. Lessa, and the others are a little slower. Even though the care takers of the Orphanage do keep a caution eye on them, the KRs still have the freedom to move around and sometimes help out at the Orphanage. Since the Orphanage is located somewhere deep in the country side so the children and the others have no idea what is happening in the outside world. That day, HIME, EvilIvy, and Lessa are helping the children in farming.
“So, Nako and Loking usually handle all these children by themselves?” Lessa asks. EvilIvy nods.
“Yea! And what do you care? You and your not-so-mighty-council still want to runin everything here anyways.” HIME says as she is carrying buckets of water with the help of the force.
“What is your problem? It has been days since that awful encounter with you! Besides, I am not very sure if you HIME!”
“Oh yea? You are the one keep coming after me! I was careless that day! If you want a match, I am more then welcome to give you one right here, right now!” HIME says as she stands up and she is about to reach for her Lightsaber hilt. Lessa also stands up and ignites her saber. Just then, they see a huge basket of food supply landed in between the two.
“If you two have the strength to slice each other, slice these fruits and vegetables for a change.” Nako’s voice projects into the garden. Then children turn around as soon as they hear Nako’s voice. They all stands up and run towards Nako.
“Okay, Okay, I am back now. I told you that I am only gone for the morning right?” Nako comforts the children.
“Still feels that you should take Nako away from all these children anymore?” Blade asks Lessa and the other KRs. Ronin and Lessa have the guilty expression on their faces. Nako walk towards HIME.
“I heard your voice even when I was at the front door. What was going on?” Nako asks. HIME just turns away. Loking comes along and tells Nako everything. Nako then walks towards Lessa.
“Listen, I do not know what was on but I do hope you can forgive that girl. She is ina difficult position here.” Nako says to Lessa.
“The situation is not going to difficult if you admit who you are and then come back with us and stand trial. That will save us a lot of problem.” Ronin says as he walks into the garden. Then, he finds out all the children are glaring at him.
“Trial for what Ronin? This lady hadn’t done anything wrong. She didn’t leave this planet ever since she was here. Do not think your council can force her to do what they want. She is not you people’s lap dog. At least, not anymore!” Loking says to Ronin.
“But, this is standard….” Ronin is about to explain.
“Standard my foot!” Loking cuts him off. Ronin takes couple steps back from Loking.
“Look here, I am not looking for a fight. But, we still have a mission to complete.” Ronin says.
“Then to hell with your mission! You Knight Reborns are no better then those non-force force troopers we met back in those days. You power hungry blood sucking troopers.” Loking says to Ronin with a very harsh tone.
“Okay, it is alright if you are only targeting at me. I admit I was the one whole came up with the plan of forcefully taking Nako and HIME away. But if you are directing your hatred towards the whole Knights Reborn, that’s a bit overdoing it. I demand an apology NOW.” Ronin says. Loking just ignores him and then he walks away from Ronin.
“You people are still going to take Nako away no matter what?” Loking asks. No one answers Loking’s questions. Nako just walks towards Loking.
“It’s okay. Worst comes to worst I will just go with them okay?” Nako says to Loking.
“But…your condition, you know about your body right? Who knows what they are going to do to you!” Loking says
“Hey, there is something call Justice. If I haven’t committed a crime, there is no way they can add anything on me right?” Nako says with a smile. HIME heard this then she walk towards the KRs.
“Even though I do not have much knowledge about her, she is not the one who can commit a crime. I was the one you fought. Even though Nako here looks like me, she has nothing to do with it. If you are going to take anyone, then just take me.” HIME then stretches out her two arms.
“You say you have no memories about yourself? How so?” Nintendo asks.
“Well, I remember who I am…..but then they last thing I remember clearly is that I was inside a tube that is full of some sort of liquid. I struggled to get out. But the container was too strong for me to get out. The next thing I know is that I somehow lying on a table and many people in full chemical suit came to see me as if I was some sort of specimen. Then, I remember I was running in some sort of tunnel with this in my hand.” HIME says as she holds out her lightsaber hilt in her hand.
“So, did you go through any training to use this?” EvilIvy asks.
“No, but I have memories of me using this. I just picked it up on my own.” HIME answers.
“That would answer the lousy sword play she uses.” Tricky says to himself.
“Then what makes you go around the universe and do what you did?” Nintendo asks again.
“Listen up old man! The universe is still in a mess after the war. Many large estate owners and officials decided to grab power and let evil run loose. So, I have decided, if the force users and the non-forces are not going to do anything, then I will do something.” HIME says as she have an accomplish look on her face.
“That’s not anything to boost about! Have you got no regards of life?” Lessa says.
“Then are you saying that we should let those people run loose while the innocent suffers? Where is Justice I must ask? If you have a better way, I am very open.” HIME says.
“Well, gather enough evidence then put them through trial. Let the law handle it.” Lessa answers.
“Oh yea, that will work. Those people will just hire lawyers or bride whoever to get them out. Don’t you see, corruption is a huge problem! That’s why I have to do something. I have to, I need to in order to find myself again. I need to know that I am not some….half breed.” HIME says.
“Wait…..who called you half breed? Do remember?” Ronin asks.
“I don’t remember much. I just know that the moment I was awoke. Some person just came and he almost killed me. He has a lightsaber staff and he has a scar on his forehead. He just kept on calling me half breed; he says I deserved to die.” HIME says. Nako’s fist is shaking at that point. Everyone is paying attention to HIME’s story, so no one noticed Nako’s actions. Kurino, who is beside Nako at that time, her body starts trumbling at that point.
“Do you know his name?” Ronin asks.
“I don’t know if I pronounced this correctly……..but I just remember his name is…Stump.” HIME says.

 #11437  by Starcomand
 
great story as usual hime keep them coming

 #11457  by Nintendo
 
This should be a movie! So interesting. I love it.

 #11459  by Starcomand
 
well have to get someone to play u niny as ur to ugly for cameras lol only jokeing m8 lol we all love our ninny

 #11591  by Lessa
 
Ohhh here is Stump! Very interesting, hope you post another chapter soon.

 #11850  by Hime
 
“Raven, Raven…what are you doing sleeping on the floor like that?” Martin’s voice comes into Raven’s ears. Raven wakes up and start checking her body. There are no cuts on her body. The ground has no blood on it.
“What? I remember I was injured badly by some girl. I remember I saw blood coming out from my body. What’s going on Martin?” Raven asks Martin.
“I don’t know either. I was fighting some person from the Knight Riders. I swear that I saw that person did a point blank shot on my chest. I fainted, thinking that I am going to die this time. I wake up and then I there is nothing on my body. Well, the pain from the kicks and punches still in effect but I am fine otherwise.” Martin says with a smile.
“Well, at least we know we are not dead yet.” Raven says. She looks around and finds a piece of white feather is on the ground.
“That was no dream.” Raven thinks to herself. Suddenly, Sparky, Kakashi, Rage, and Fraiz land in front of them from the sky.
“So, that is the lady Swan met and messed her up huh?” Fraiz says. Raven just grunts at Fraiz as she heard that.
“So, yea, your comrades are gathered at Nako’s Orphanage. I bet she has her plate full now.” Fraiz says.
“So, what’s the plan here?” Martin asks.
“Simple, we are going to stop the invasion here and now. Since we are short of hands here, we need you four to do something as well in order to help out the situation right here. Two of you will need to attend to south side of the capital. The other two will help out striking at the main head on.” Fraiz says.
“Why do we need to protect the south? It seems nothing is happening over there, at least according to my scanners.” Raven asks.
“Your scanners are rather outdated for those non-force people. Even a force user cannot be that all-seeing and all-knowing. You people are not gods. The south needs to be protected because there are two people over there. They sit on thrones that made of laugher and life. We cannot let that place be destroyed.” Fraiz answers.
“Then, Rage and Raven will go. Martin and I will help out dealing with the main forces.” Sparky says. With that said and done; Rage and Raven take off and head to their speeders in order to go to the destination Fraiz instructed.
“Please go ASAP. There is someone over there you will meet. A lost ally you might say. You must go and protect that ally.” Fraiz says to Raven before she goes. Raven feels very uneasy about that. She feels that Nintendo right now is in pain.
At the moment Nako is throwing big rocks at Nintendo and some other KR members for accidentally scaring little children. The little children are cheering at Nako throwing rocks at them.
“Hey, we’re just practicing here! Cut us some slack!” Nintendo says. Then, a huge piece of rock lands on the back of Nintendo’s head.
“Wow! That flew very fast.” HIME says. Then she finds Nako’s smiling, but HIME can feel something is wrong. Nako then uses her cooking pan and smack Ronin in the face.
“Who told you to play and destroy my garden? The children worked so hard to make this garden pretty. You people are not going that low now are you? Rampaging inside this place is strictly forbidden.” Nako says.
No one tried to talk back to Nako. Even though Nako smiles when she is mad, everyone including HIME can see a demon face forming beside Nako.
“Good, no breakfast for the both of you!” Nako says as she walks back into the kitchen with HIME. As Nintendo and Ronin fallen into a state of depression, Lessa runs up and asks if she can help. Nako just shakes her head.
“No, no, no. You are a guess and you are the great council member you know. How can I let you work? Just look around and wait for lunch time. I cannot let the council member unfed right? Besides, it is really uneasy for me for you to pretend to be friendly with me.” Nako says as she walks away.
“She is still angry. I cannot blame her, but do give it time.” Loking says as he passes by Lessa. Lessa looks at Loking and finds him giggling.
“Some reunion this is.” A voice comes by and Lessa looks up and finds Tricky on the ceiling. He is currently playing chess with Matt.
“What are you trying to say?” Lessa asks Tricky.
“Oh nothing, I am just trying to describe the situation with the best wording of course. After all, I am not the one who ruined the fated reunion.” Tricky answers with a laugh. Lessa just grunts at Tricky and she walks away. She walks out to the garden.
“What is this feeling? I can feel something is wrong.” Lessa then runs back into the building. She wants to tell Ronin and Nintendo about this but the two are kneeling in some dark corner and murmuring about no breakfast. After breakfast Nako and Loking take their usual walk around the Orphanage. Loking feels Nako is unusually calm.
“You know they are very close right. Are you scared?” Loking asks.
“I should be. But then, you are here.” Nako says. Loking just looks up to the skies, not facing Nako.
“You do not need to hide it. You still remember the first time we met? Then they time there is only the two of us? I was so alone, even back in those days.” Nako says.
“I do remember the “you” from back then.”
“It was then when I met you. Without a single lie and regret, you stayed with me till the end.” Nako says.
“Well, I thought that was truly the end for the legendary …” Loking is going to say some more when Nako puts hand palm against Loking’s mouth.
“You told me this: You are no longer alone. You are the only one who ever did that. The only one whoever felt me was you, only your heart. That’s why I am not afraid anymore, no matter what the situation is.” Nako says. Loking is totally speechless.
“You are the one who gave me wings when I was not able to fly anymore. You have made me free from my past.” Nako says.
“Like I have always see heaven’s skies in your eyes, it is so clear. I too, have freed myself from my own past, because of you. Once again, I have a home and a good future. We are not going to let those people destroy it right?” Loking says.
“No, remember what you saud about when our smiles add together, a large rainbow appears? I guess it is time that we get to relive those days.” Nako says.
“No, we are going to end it. We are going to end this with our friends. At least we will have peace on this planet.” Loking says. The two keep on walking.

Not too far from the Orphanage, Uriyao and the Commander are planning something.
“If the force users are indeed in this place, then we would have a quite a hard time to strike at them.” The Commander of the Blood Hounds says to Uriyano.
“Hey, we got the numbers here. We can swamp them and you get what you want and I get what I want.” Uriyao says. The commander then stares at him. Then, a trooper comes back and reports.
“Sir, force users confirmed. There are at least eight of them. One thing is for sure, they are from knights reborn, no doubt about it. They are gathered at that orphanage. We cannot get any closer because they will sense us.” the trooper reports.
“It is good that you confirmed us about the force users. But did you manage to see anyone familiar?” the Commander asks.
“No sir, I couldn’t see them clearly. But from what I saw, there are some high ranking force users are here. I saw their armor and uniform.” the trooper reports.
“Good work trooper, you were really close to losing your head. But, you saved yourself from that.” the commander says as a branch falls down in front of the trooper. The trooper salute in fear and goes back.
“Now, we need to see who’s there, so I am sending in one of my…..students.” the commander yells out. Then, a dark shadow jumps out and kneels before the commander.
“Yes, master.” The shadow asks.
“Go to the instructed destination and destroy everything there. Use the skills I have taught you wisely. Remember to come back alive if you get into trouble.” The commander says.
“Yes, my master. What happens if I encounter force users?” the shadow asks.
“Then, you try to draw out as many of them as possible. You are a noble Jedi like I am. You should know what to do. I have hand picked you out from the elite. Show those trashes that it is time the Jedi council needs a good leader. There ways are outdated. You are my display of power. Now go, Spyder.” the commander says
“Yes, master. I will not fail you.”

 #11856  by Kenshin
 
nice hime ^_^ iv just caught up with the whole story.. i started to read it while im inactive i luv the ending of this part :D

 #11866  by Matt
 
another vgood chapter :) especially 'playing chess with Matt' :D (dont even know how to play chess >.>) keep writing Hime =)

 #11876  by Nintendo
 
Awesome Chapter hime! Loved it. Keep it coming!

 #11878  by Sparky
 
Keep it coming gurl... its a good chapter...XD

 #12002  by Hime
 
Back in the Capital, Martin and Sparky are following Fraiz to access the situation. When they arrive in the heart of the city, both Martin and Sparky are witness a game of cat and mouse of urban warfare. The city’s police and army join together with various civilian to fight off the incoming Blood Hound troopers.
“Didn’t know they would act that fast. I knew I should kill Uriyao that good-for-nothing-spoiled-rich bastard.” Fraiz says to himself.
“Tell me about this Uriyao, please.” Martin asks Fraiz.
“There is only one thing you have to know about him. He is one of those typial rich, spoiled brats who happened to have somewhat of an ambition. A fool’s ambition I may add. Just that he thinks he can do anything because he got his daddy’s money.” Fraiz says.
“Sounds like you are very fond of this Uriyao.” Sparky says.
“You know, if you are trying to make a joke or something, you are really bad at it.” Fraiz says as he jumps into the crowd of the Blood Hounds. He leaps down from the top of the building he was standing on and deflects a few laser beams along the way. The troopers are being blast away when Fraiz drops in the middle of them. It is only a matter of seconds that Fraiz finish taking the troopers from the area and the crowd cheers the Knight Rider’s name.
“Alright everyone, show these visitors that the people of Shinsen are not a bunch of push overs! Show them the spirit of Shinsen!” Fraiz’s voice roar’s into the air. It is followed by a cheer from all the civilians and fighting force around Fraiz.
“Wow, we never try bringing others into a fight. Yet, this person here has no regards of innocent bystanders.” Martin says to Sparky. Sparky is about to speak when he sees a group of jet pack Blood Hound Troopers heading their way.
“Like I said before, these guys are always updating their weapons.” Sparky says. The jetpack troopers start firing at the two. Sparky and Martin ignites their lightsabers right away. Martin doesn’t even wait for the enemy to come to him. He just charges towards the troopers. He jumps off the top of the building to another one. The troopers start firing as Martin gets closer to them. Martin deflects a few beams and sends it back to the troopers. Then again, these troopers are trained to change position after they have fired their weapons. So, not many of them gets hit by their own beams.
“Umm……so they have studied our ways like that huh? But they are not going to see this coming.” Martin says.
He then stretches his hand towards the troopers. The ones that are closer to Martin get caught by Martin’s force and go on a head on crash with fellow teammates in the air.
“That is going to hurt. Then again, Martin makes nice fireworks.” Sparky thinks as he watches Martin fights.
The remaining troopers then keep their distance away from Martin and some of them switch weapons from blaster rifles to rocket launcher. Martin just cannot believe what they are doing. If it is rockets, any force user can easily send the rocket back to them. The troopers fire their rockets not towards Martin but to the building where Martin is standing on. It only takes a few rockets to create an earthquake under Martin’s feet. As Martin trying to maintain his balance, the other troopers start firing their blaster rifles towards Martin. Martin has no choice but to flee to another building. The troopers then firing rockets to the next building before Martin can even set foot on there. So everywhere Martin goes, it is never stable. Plus, the other troopers are chasing him with blasters in rapid fire mode. Martin has to find a suitable ground as he is trying to defend himself. Sparky is about to comes to Martin’s rescue when another group of those jetpack troopers come to attack him. They are using the same tactics to Sparky. The two now cannot use force because they cannot reach that far. Plus, the concentration is pretty much shattered when the ground they stand on is not safe. Down in the streets, people are running away from collapsing building parts. Fraiz has to safe a lot of people from being bury alive. He looks up and sees Sparky and Martin being chased by jetpack troopers. He wants to go up there and help but there are just too many of those Blood Hounds around him.
“What are they doing getting themselves in a pitch like that?” Fraiz yells out from the streets as he fights the Blood Hounds. Martin and Sparky are still running from them, from time to time they manage to pick up a big piece of rock or metal by using the force and throw it towards the troopers. Then again, there troopers are trained elite. That kind of attack is not very effective towards them.
“Running like this is not going to do us much good.” Sparky says.
“I have an idea.” Martin says.
“Good, because I am very open to ideas right now.” Sparky says.
“Okay, launch me against them.” Martin says.
“What?” Sparky screams out. Martin just gives the facial expression of “Just do it”. Sparky grunts and he then fold his arms together. Martin then uses Sparky’s arms as a support and jump up into the air. His plan is to use that jump to reach the height of those troopers. The troopers are being surprised by such actions. Martin reaches them before they can even react. Martin manages slices down couple of them in midair and he grabs one of the troopers’ blasters at the same time. He wastes no time and fires on the remaining troopers. He brought down a number of them, but there are still many of them around. Both Martin and Sparky knows the same attack is not going to work twice on these people.
“Okay, that kind of worked. So what now, we throw rocks and use harsh language to attack them or something?” Sparky asks.
“Now, I am very open to any suggestions. Throwing rocks and harsh language are definity NOT going to work on them.” Martin says. Just then, a piece of white feather drops on Sparky’s shoulder. They both look up when a strong whirl wind comes upon them. There are many pieces of white feathers in the whirl wind. These white feathers blind the sights of both Sparky and Martin, as well as those jetpack troopers.
“If you want to fight them effectively, you have to blind their sights.” A female voice sounds in the whirl wind. Down in the streets, when Fraiz is fighting, he sees pieces of white feathers drop on the ground.
“What took you so long?” Fraiz says.
“What’s going on?” Martin asks.
“What makes you think I know?” Sparky says. The two look up and see a female figure in the mist of those white feathers. She is holding some sort of staff with a blade attached on both sides. Martin Sparky take a closer look and see the female figure is wearing a white armor with black linings and a white cape. She is also wearing a white helmet. She doesn’t say a word and she leap into the air and uses the dropping feathers as support to jump higher. Then, she starts swinging her staff and the both ends of the staff start to extend out.
“What is that weapon?” Sparky asks. Martin just shakes his head. The female figure is spinning in mid air as if she is dancing. The extended parts of the staff are swinging like ribbons in the air. Since the troopers are blinded by the feathers, it only takes a matter of seconds that they are all being brought down. The female figure lands as she is done dealing with all the troopers. The whirl wind stops as she gracefully lands herself on the ground. She picks up her staff and points it against Sparky and Martin.
“So, you are Sparky and Martin. I have read about you two about the battle of banisher. Even though I am pleased to meet the likes of you, I must say I am disappointed in your actions. I thought you two would be stringer to take care of those lousy jetpack flying losers.” She says to the two. She then grabs her cape and swings it. That moment, a lot of white feathers come out from the cape and then she disappears in of the two.
“Well, see you two later. I am a busy girl.” Her voice rings in the air after she disappears.
“Great, we met another weirdo.” Sparky says.
“Well, I am just glad that she is not who we are fighting against. I just wonder how’s she able to use all those feathers as support to jump that high.” Martin asks himself that. Then, they see Fraiz lands in front of them.
“Good job for being rescued by a girl. I also thought you two are pretty tough.” Fraiz says in a mockery tone.
“Yea, whatever, we have enough of that kind of talk for a day. Now what are going to do?” Sparky says.
“Now, we are going to see the main forces. We are going to end this little attack by taking out their flag ship which is located near by the edge of the Capital. We cannot afford to lose the Capital. If the Capital stands, then the planet still has a fight chance. We cannot lose no matter what.” Fraiz says. Fraiz then takes out a device.
“3812” he says to the device and there is a buzzing sound from the device.
“3812 confirmed: Star Slinger…..come closer.” The device responds. At that moment Sparky and Martin see a big speeder lands itself on the roof where the three are standing. Sparky and Martin are both amazed at the Speeder’s design. It seems it can fit two to three people on there. Also, the speeder’s have multiple functions. Not to mention the hidden weapon system on the speeder. It is something entirely new to the two KRs. The two even doubt if the non-force forces have this kind of technology.
“What are looking at? Get in…….you will be even more surprised once this baby is in action.” Fraiz says.
Last edited by Hime on Sun Mar 25, 2007 10:54 pm, edited 1 time in total.

 #12003  by Starcomand
 
great stroy as usual hime with martain haveing to jump from building to building to avoid everything will be interesting to c what this speeder can do

 #12046  by Lessa
 
amazing chapters Hime. Seems like KRs still have to learn many things. Keep it coming, I love it.

 #12065  by Kenshin
 
great job :P im enjoying this :-)

 #12268  by SilverCloud
 
/amslays scythe for threatening kurino...
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/amslays sidious for hitting scy.... even if he might've deserved it

okay... i got to page seven and realized that i've missed so many updates that i'm not going to be able to finish this right now, and when i get home -- weather permitting -- i'm going to go to Banshee's house... i can try to read more there, but it's likely i'll just read it when i get home, or face penalty of death by HIME.....

right-o, anways, i'm up to the part where Garren finally starts paying attention to Ronin. the writing is good, and the events are progressive (which is also good), and the non-stop-action makes me wish that i didn't have to go to english class soon. there are a few spelling errors, but i'm not my english teacher, so i'm not going to fret about it. other than that, you're grammar has improved greatly, and the bulkier parts of the story are good add-ons. you've already told me what's going down, so i'm a little crazy about that, but i'll get to it soon enough.

the new dudes are kinda weird, but they're highly entertaining, and good comic relief for the story. the personalities of the people we know are a little skewed, but i'm sure that's on purpose.


i'm kinda anxious on how this is going to work out in the end, but i'm sure you'll come up with something (if you haven't already, i mean i'm still way back in the story here)
<3 SilverCloud

 #12857  by Hime
 
Sorry for the Uber late release!!!

The three jumps into Star Slinger. Fraiz gets into the driver seat. He switches the controls back to manual. The star slinger then rushes off to the battlefield.
“There are others located at the front line as we speak. I thought it will be a good idea for you people to see the scale of this invasion. In shirt, this invasion is much bigger then we all thought. Some other cities are fallen. We are going to put the Blood Hound’s name to the test.” Fraiz says. Then he puts a button, the next thing Sparky and Martin feel is the ultimate speed experience.
“This….thing is fast.” Spakry says.
“Of course, this is our latest model! Star Slinger can as fast as any space craft. Due to its design and alloy, the structure is not going to break apart when it is in full speed. We still cannot go full speed yet due its heavy load. Once we unload something then this baby can go even faster.” Fraiz says. The Star Slinger, under Fraiz’s control is dodging incoming beams and missiles. The Bloof Hounds try to counter the Star Slinger with their speeder, but then it is not fast enough. The special alloy on Star Slinger can withstand almost any abuse the Blood Hounds throw at it. It is only a matter of time that the three see the main battle unit once they get outside of the city. Sparky and Martin see there are other Star Slingers out there fighting too.
“What do you look so surprise for? I am not the only one who possesses a Star Slinger. There are others in the Knight Riders also has it too. Alright, ready for some fire works and laser show?” Fraiz says. He then does a sharp turn with the Star Slinger and at the same moment a load of missiles appears in the front and on the sides of Star Slinger.
“You are firing this all at once?” Martin asks. He does not even get an answer from Fraiz, he just sees the missiles are launched and they are firing towards the main armor battle unit.
“This is a waste of missiles and rockets. They are going to be shot down when the Blood Hounds disable them with beams or something. You could have gotten us closer and fire them.” Sparky says.
“Watch and learn oh mighty KR.” Fraiz says. The missiles are deflecting all the incoming beams. Think of it like a mirror coating on the missile that reflects all laser beam attacks. Fraiz then increase speed and they mange to get a lot closer to the main battle unit.
“So, when do we get to jump out of this thing and get inside of that thing?” Sparky asks.
“You don’t need to. Someone else had already done that. He just entered when we are all busy firing missiles and rockets.” Fraiz says.
“All by himself? That’s crazy!” Martin asks.
“Well, he is one of our own. I know him well. Beside there will be some others going after him anyways.” Fraiz says.
“So they are just going to jump out of this thing and get in like that? You people are crazy!” Martin says.
“Who says we are not crazy? We are the ones who do know when to stop.” Fraiz says with a mocking tone. Sparky just feels a chill up his spine. Just then, the three of them see a sea of troopers coming straight for the defense forces.
“Ok, now is it a good time to let us out? Martin and I can hold these guys along with the local army. You can go on ahead.” Sparky says.
“Who elected you as commander of this Star Slinger? If I recalled this is my speeder and I say who gets to go and when!” Fraiz yells out.
“But look at the number of the enemy! I do not think the local army can hold them for long!” Martin says.
“That is why we are going to run them over with this beautiful piece of metal. Now hang on, this is going to be one hell of a bumpy ride.” Fraiz says as he presses a switch.
“But we are going to be blaster magnets once we are rushing it like that! We have a better chance to advance slowly! What are you people, crazy? You are going to get all of us killed!” Martin says.
“First, I do recall that I told you that we do know when to stop! Second, slow is never my term when comes to situation like this! So shut up and prepare yourself.” Fraiz says. The Star Slinger launches into the sea of troopers. Fraiz pulls the Star Slinger up and the speeder leaps into the groups of troopers. That is not a pretty sight. Then Sparky and Martin know that what Fraiz tries to do is to get all three of them to the troopers carriers so they can stop the troopers from coming out.
“This is not going to be easy.” Martin says.
“No one ever said it was easy to begin with.” Fraiz answers. He then hits another switch and a bunch of rockets came out from the Star Slinger and fly right into those troopers. A clear path appears after a huge explosion caused by those rockets upon impact. Then the Star Slinger drives through without any fuzz.

Outside the orphanage, a brown robed figure stands in front of the main door of the building. It seems the figure came here alone. Just then, two other figures appear from the main door. They are Akimoto and Scythe. The figure opens its mouth before the two begin to ask any questions.
“Your guesses are right. I am here to make peace with you. If you surrender yourself to my master, then your lives will be spared and be a part of the true Jedi Council.” A male’s voice comes out from the brown robed figure.
“You are a force user then?” Scythe asks.
“You still need any prove.” The figure says as he uses the force to pick up a large stone from the ground. Just then Ronin walks out from the building and faces the figure.
“So, you are a force user. Then do tell us who your master is.” Ronin asks the figure.
“My master said he will not reveal himself to people who are not going to be his allies. He only wishes to meet people who know what is best for them.” The figure answers.
“Do define what you mean by people who know what is best for them.” Akimoto asks.
“It means those who sway from the right paths are people who do not know what is best for them. Those are fools. You should be able to understand that by now.” The figure answers.
“Then, what is the right path?” Ronin asks.
“Of course it is those who join us to walk on the right path. It is those who gladly submit themselves to the right leadership. My master teaches the right path for the Jedi. So, I am here to ask you all to join us. Together, we will bring back the long lost order of the Jedi. One again the force user ranks will be pure once more.” The figure says.
“Then, there will be war on the dark side. The next thing we know is that innocent people will be killed. Did you people ever think of the bloodshed?” Ronin askes the figure.
“It is something needed. Don’t you see? It is a never ending war between the light and darkness. Nothing is more glorious than keeping those dark force users in line. Also, keep those who do not see things our way in line as well. My master taught me that. And it is true, live is much easier after that.” The figure answers. The others are speechless once they heard that kind of explanation.
“Okay, never mind your speech. Who are you?” Scythe asks.
“My name is Spyder. I was sent here by my master to tame all of you. Since you people refused my generous offer, I have no choice but you kill you all.” the figure says as he draws out his green saber.
“You are pretty stupid to come alone.” Scythe says.
“What makes you think I did?” Spyder says as he snaps his finger. Spdyer is smirking as if he is waiting for something to happen. Then again, nothing is happening after a while. Spyder begins to get impatient. Then suddenly, a voice comes into his ear.
“If you are waiting for your friends to start sniping on us, then you are wasting your time.” A female figure is walking towards Spyder on his left side. Then another voice rings in as well.
“Maybe it is a good idea for you to run home towards that mighty master of yours. Tell him: if he has what it takes to lead us, then show his ugly face and come face us. We will be waiting.” Another female figure is walking towards Spyder on his right side. Then another female voice rings in from behind.
“Alright, you people should stop now. This is not a battle field. Also, like all of you, he is a guess in my house. No one is going start a fight here.” Spdyer looks back and see a female with semi long black hair and with skin as white as snow. There is also a little girl beside her.
“My name is Nako, her name is Kurino. Maybe you can tell us what you are really doing here. If you insist on being rude here, I ear you may ended up just like your friends.” Nako says as she snaps her fingers. Then Spyder sees a lot of Blood Hound troopers are falling off from the surrounding trees. Spyder then looks back to Nako, she is still smiling at him.
“You are the half breed! My master spoke lowly of you! I shall take care of this matter!! DO NOT TAKE ME LIGHTLY!” Spyder screams as he swings his saber towards Nako

 #12859  by Starcomand
 
great story as always hime cant w8 to c what happens next

 #12861  by Kenshin
 
always leave it in a clif hangar :(

keep writing

 #13056  by Nintendo
 
Its what keeps the suspence ken! Makes it worth reading even more.

Great story hime love it all.

 #13102  by Hime
 
Just then, a huge sword flew towards Spyder from the side. Spyder has no choice but to jump away from Nako. Tricky lands himself in front of Nako. Scythe also leaps into the air and lands behind of Spyder.
“So, you people watch to sandwich me or something?” Spyder says as he posts a stance. Scythe ignites his saber. Tricky also pulls out the blade from his huge sword and ignites his saber as well. The two don’t put on any stances.
“Hey Scythe! Can you still pull this off after all these years?” Tricky asks.
“Funny, I was about to ask you the same thing.” Scythe answers.
“It doesn’t matter how many of you are going to fight me. It is going the some thing for me.” Spyder says as he pulls out a vase of serum. He then injects it into his body. Everyone takes a step back. Lessa, who on Spyder’s left side runs to Nako and Kurino. EvilIvy also comes and pull the two out to safety. Scythe and Tricky then leap into the air. Spyder just stands on the ground and waits. Suddenly a saber drops towards his head from above. Spdyder then steps to the right side and look up. Suddenly Tricky bursts out from the ground and kicks Spyder at his waist. That hit sends Spyder into the air. As Spyder tries to take control in the air, he finds Scythe suddenly appears behind his back. Spyders grasps and uses all his might to turn his body around and blocks Scythe’s attack. Still he received a kick from Scythe and falls heavily on the ground. Scythe lands lightly on the ground. The moment he lands on the ground, Spyder suddenly jumps up from the ground and launch himself towards Scythe. Spyder’s body is spinning in mid air; he is launching himself towards Scythe like a drill. Scythe then lean back on the ground and avoids the attack. Spyder then stops his attack when out of no where Tricky jumps over Scythe and gives Spyder a huge swing from his great sword like lightsaber. Tricky has great confidence in his strength. Normally, a person would have been sent flying. This time it is different, Spyder is able blocks Tricky’s attack on the ground. He doesn’t even move an inch. Spyder then uses in strength and knocks Tricky into the air by using the same great swing that Tricky used a moment ago. Tricky spins in the air and does a leap flip to ease the force that was put on to him. Still, he barely manages to land himself on the ground. Everyone is shocked at Spyder’s strength.
“Now, I can fight to my heart’s content with people like you. Now, prepare yourself, I am going to end you two with my artistic fashion.” Spyder says as he dashes towards the two. This time, both Scythe and Tricky feel Spyder’s strength and speed. Spyder’s strike can easily knock them away. They are using everything they can to withstand such strength. It is not a big surprise that the two get sent flying into the air later by Spyder. Spyder then jumps to the back of the two and kicks them down into the ground.
“Now, do you feel the might of the true ways of the Jedi?” Spyder says.
“You just injected something into your body! That’s not something a Jedi would do in order to win.” EvilIvy says. Tricky and Scythe get up from the ground, the two are covered with dust and sand.
“Guess, our own moves are not going to work huh? You want to use that together?” Scythe asks. Tricky nods.
“Come on! Give me your best shot! I am waiting.” Spyder says with a mockery tone. Tricky and scythe then hit another switch on their lightsaber. They then rush on to Spyder again. Nintendo, Ronin, and the other are busy trying to keep the children safe, since there are so many of them. Sidious cannot contain himself just from watching anymore. He too, jumps out into the fight. Ronin, Lessa, and EvilIvy grasp because they are afraid Sidious may ruin the formation set by Scythe and Tricky. Everyone in KR knows that both Tricky and Scythe studied under HIME. HIME taught them everything she can. One thing HIME get the two to do is to learn from each other. With this, the two turn from rivals to great friends. HIME also send them together to do missions, the two always watching each other’s back. Then one day, they decided to create a formation that they can use to fight strong foes. Now, with Sidious jumps in, everyone in KR fears the formation is going to be ruined. They think that Sidious does not know anything about the formation and how Tricky and Scythe fights, he is going to create more harm than good. To everyone’s surprise that Sidious fights the same way the two does. It is like the mixture of the two. He can actually mix in with the whole formation and make the team stronger. It is not easy for Spyder to fight against three lightsabers at once. Tricky will attack first and Scythe will come to fill up the opening, now with Sidious coming on to the scene. The second part of the formation became stronger. Now, Spyder is having trouble dealing with the three of them. It doesn’t take long until Scythe and Sidious both land a kick on Spyder. The only thing is that, Spyder’s body doesn’t even move an inch after being kick by the two. Instead, Spyder uses his body to launch the two back into the air. Spyder wastes no time to chase after the two. Sidious and Scythe then points their saber to the front. Just then, as Spyder is still in the air, Tricky suddenly comes up from below and swings his huge sword. Spyder then lower his body to block it. Then again, Tricky uses a lot of force in that attack. Even though Spyder manages to block it, he is still being hit like a baseball. While Spyder is about land on the ground, the three hit the second button and first button together.
“Maxium Cyclone” a voice comes out from Tricky and Scythe’s saber.
“Hyper Cyclone.” A voice came out from Sidious’s saber.
After that, three big and long cyclones come out from the three’s saber hilt. The cyclones are made out of the atoms from the blade from their lightsabers. It is a special device in the saber hilt that with careful use of the force can turn a blade lightsaber into a danger cyclone. It is direct hit to Spyder. There is a huge blind of light. Everyone besides the three covers their eyes. The two look at Sidious.
“How did you know that move? Who taught you that?” the two asks.
“My master taught me that. Who’s your master?” Sidious wants to ask more when he feels something is not right. The others look to the side. They see Spyder is still alive. But, it is clear that he has suffered heavy damage from the three’s ultimate attack. There is a small piece of rock he is holding with his left hand. Around Spyder, there are pieces of rocks on the ground. There is a big hole in front of Spyder.
“He pulled out a big piece of rock as a shield to protect himself from that attack. Amazing.” Ronin says.
“Okay, this is totally wasting my time.” Spyder says as he pants. The three wants to keep going but they had used up too much energy. Their bodies are getting heavy for them. Spyder stood up and injects himself with the same serum before and he leaps into the air and points his saber at Nako and Kurino. Lessa and EvilIvy then leaps into the air but it is too late, Spyder already got pass them and head straight for Nako and Kurino. Sidious and the two tries to move but their bodies are too tired.
“I have got you now!” Spyder says.
Last edited by Hime on Tue Apr 17, 2007 3:06 am, edited 1 time in total.

 #13105  by Starcomand
 
great story hime love the way u can write makes u want to keep reading

 #13106  by Nintendo
 
Nice I wonder what happens next! :)

 #13108  by Kenshin
 
good job :P

hmmi think i see spyders death soon haha xD
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