[deathscyth]

hello all as u all know from my previous post here i am a song writer i have been writing a new song and i hope u all read it and i hope u like it

now and then i come to see the truth beyond the lies
everytime i forgive the one i knew
now i know that you are not the same perosn
i fell i love with
everytime i see you i say what have you become
everyday and everynight i come here to say
i will not fall apon anymore
no more of your lies
no more of this fake reality
no more of this darkness
oh no oh no all i can see is the truth beyond the lies now
no more ever again

that is the song i hope u like it and plz give feed back

[Key]

did you make actual music for the song or is it just lyrics so far, cus I'd like to hear the instrumental part to this

[deathscyth]

i havnt made the music for it but itll kinda be like a sad fast tempo good beat all that

[Wind]

Really nice Deathscyth

[deathscyth]

thx man

[Seeker]

Nice, REALLY NICEE , you are a good writer, when i have a music band(i hope) we gonna contact :DD

[Clank]

*thumbs up*

[deathscyth]

Again thank you all

[LumberWolf]

Dude, that's great! if i had a little more practice, i think I could get ya some music........ but it would take A LOT more practice........

[Mai]

Aww I love it death<3

[deathscyth]

thankyou all and im glad mai i will post more soon hope u all give feed back

[MetaDragoon]

sad fast tempo

to be honest i don't think a sad fast tempo would be good for the whole song but then again i did not write the words and i don't really got a good ear for music lol

[MetaDragoon]

oh ya good job buddy

[deathscyth]

ty meta and if u knew the tunr of how to sing it u would know why its that tempo

[MetaDragoon]

ya true thats why i said what i said death

[deathscyth]

Ok everyone I posted a new song I left a message in it about eat song u all want me to record so go leave a comment and I will record 1 song for u voice only because my amp is broken