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 #3394  by Sparky
 
Ouch thats a bummer Kane... lol

 #3408  by Kane
 
Just my way of saying keep up the story!! Keep it coming as its shaping out to be a very exciting read!

Til then am awaiting my grisely end at hands of ....whatever it is that kills me :P

 #3790  by Hime
 
7 years ago prior to the war, Jedi Master Danger is walking down a valley on the planet Naboo. He was taking a journey in order to gain knowledge on the two sides of the force. There he entered a cave among the mountains. He was about to practice his daily meditation when he felt a strange presence in the cave. There he ventured further to investigate about this feeling.
“Strange this feeling is a presence of someone with the blessings of the force. It is nothing like jedi or sith. It is like….both.”
He journeyed further. There he found a human girl lying on the floor of the cave. She had long white hair and very pale skin for a human. Not to mention she was also covered with injuries from top to bottom. She did not have very long when the Danger discovered her. The Jedi Master wasted no time and tried his best efforts to stabilize her condition before he can move her out to get some professional help. Even the girl’s clothing was worn up but it is not hard for Danger to notice that’s a Jedi-type rode she was wearing. It supposed Danger’s guess once he saw a broken light saber hilt on the floor somewhere. Danger had no time to think about other things. All he knew was this girl’s condition is very serious and she needs help now. Danger was hoping he can tap his force energy in order to awaken the girl’s own force so that she can force heal herself.
“Come on, come on. You are the only one who can help yourself. I can only do so much. The rest is up to you little girl.”
Just at that moment, Danger felt a strong rush coming on to him. It felt like a gust of strong wind coming out of the girl’s body. Then, he saw the girl’s less serious wounds are healing up. Her long white hair started to turn back into black color.
“Interesing…..” Danger thought to himself. He then carried the girl out of the cave and got her to the nearest medical center. He also called his padawan, Lessa to come to see this. Lessa arrived in two days. Danger greeted her.
“Come my disciple….you need to take a look at this.”
Lessa came into a room, where she saw the same girl recovering in the healing chamber. Lessa and Danger got closer. Lessa felt a strong presence of the force from this girl.
“Master, I do sense the force is with her….but it is nothing I have ever sensed. She not a Jedi, nor a Sith. What is she?”
“That’s what I am trying to find out. I do not know…..may be she is from…”
“Master, that’s impossible.” Lessa argued. She then walked closer to the healing chamber. Suddenly the girl opened her eyes and stared at Lessa. Her eyes are red, blood red. Suddenly Danger stretched out his hand covered Lessa’s eyes and pulled her back.
“It may be a good idea not to stay too close from her. She is not dangerous but her defensive instincts are shooting off the chart. You should be most careful.”
The girl was transferred to another chamber when her condition became less serious. Danger and Lessa checked her condition everyday. The girl’s injuries were fatal to a normal person; she managed to survive from all that. It seems that the force was the only thing that prolonged her life until Danger discovered her. Her recovery rate was amazing ever since Danger tapped his energy into hers. Then, Danger and Lessa moved her back to the Jedi council. Danger informed a number of council members to survey the situation.
“Amazing…..you said you found her on Naboo? There hadn’t been any reports of crashed landed space crafts or whatever. How long have she been in the cave? Moreover, you mentioned about the hair color change. We better keep an eye on her.” Newise said to Danger.
“Then again, we all felt the strange presence from her. What have no idea who is she. We just have to wait till she wakes up.” Fluffy said. The Jedi Masters left after the conversation. Danger and Lessa remained to look after the girl. Who knows how many days have passed. One day Danger and Lessa went to check on the girl again. The girl finally woke up. The girl tried to get out of bed when she first opened her eyes. She was afraid, very afraid. Danger tried to help her up but the girl forced pushed her away. Then she looked at her hand with amazement. It was like as if she had no idea what she just done with her hand. She tried to speak but no words came out from her mouth. She then screamed in terror and everything in the room suddenly started flying in every direction. Her eyes turned red, blood red. Danger and Lessa hugged her.
“It’s okay. You are safe now…..you are with us. You are among friends. No one is going to hurt you.”
“Who…am….I….”

“HIME! HIME! What are you spacing off about? We still have a way to go. It seems that someone has already reached there before us. We need to hurry if you want to save your friends.” Kagetsuki says to HIME. HIME nods in reply.
“Just now….what was all this? Could it be…..” HIME thought to herself. She shakes off these uneasy feelings and follow kagetsuki.

Nintendo and the others are still fighting. Suddenly a huge piece of machine fell off from above. Everyone stopped fighting and look up.
“Okay people, our friend is here. Let’s get out of here!” Nintendo yells out. Everyone jump up to where machine fell off. They see a black rode figure with a white mask swinging a huge sword and cutting incoming troopers into pieces.
“Oh great….Tricky is at it again.” Starcommand says. They look behind and notice Martin, Templar, Chantelle, and Danger are hot on their tail. The strange thing is that the four just stand there and look, as if they are just scanning the situation. Then, the four jump towards the troopers and start attacking anything that moves. It only takes them seconds to finish off whatever the black rode figure left over.
“Tricky, get out of here! NOW! Find your master and get her here!” Lessa says to Black rode figure. Tricky turns around and start fighting Martin.
“What are you talking about? She is already here!”
Just at that moment, HIME and Kagetsuki rush into the scene.
“Lessa you are alright. Semms like the old man still alive too!” HIME says.
“Watch it HIME! I am not that old! HIME, this is no time to make jokes. Look OUT!” Nintendo yells. HIME turns around and blocks an attack from Danger.
“HIME look….I know it is difficult to say but we have to…”
“Oh I know Lessa….That is why it is my job to put my master to rest…..for his sake. That’s why I am here.”
“Well…I will help…since….”
“YOU STAY OUT OF THIS! You go take care of the others…..HE is mine. Please help Tricky to take care of channy of there.” HIME makes a hand gesture to tell Lessa not to jump into her fight.
“I will just pick a partner to dance with.” Kagetsuki says
HIME looks at Danger. Tears fall out from her eyes. She then ignites her saber.

LET’S END THIS……MY MASTER

 #3844  by SilverCloud
 
“I will just pick a partner to dance with.” Kagetsuki says


OM*GZORS!!!! HIME'S MADE THE QUOTE BOOK!!!!!!!!
that was awesome.... i think i'll go cry now... maybe it's just my cold... i dun care, it was still awesome...

 #3880  by Lessa
 
Great great!!!
I love that you put HIME´s history there, I would like to read more about that. Hope next update will be up soon XD

 #3928  by Chantelle
 
jeez what the hell happened to me, I dont remember being like that ;) :p

 #3929  by Melissa
 
I know your a really pain when ur drunk lol

 #5402  by Hime
 
“Remember your name now is HIME. Forget about your past, whatever sins you carried dies with you at this moment. You are longer your past self…..you are HIME. You are blessed by the force.”

Lessa jumped in front of HIME stopping her from advancing towards Danger.
“I am joining this fight whether you like it or not. He was my master too if your memories serves you right. I, too, have the right to do what’s right. If you don’t like the sound of that: Cry Me A River.”
HIME just smiled after hearing this. Lessa knew that HIME approved and they now posted a double stance. The two girls are both very famous of their combination attacks. Danger just kept of charging towards the two.
“You ready?”
“I am always ready….cannot believe we have to use this today Lessa.”
HIME on the left and Lessa on the right with their saber ignited and started their well know combination attack. Since the time after HIME was taken in by Danger, Lessa and HIME joined forces for countless times. The two developed this double attack combination “Dance of the Maidens”. A very coordinated combination between the two, they will shift styles, positions, and speeds at any time they wish. Nintendo continue his fight with Templar. The fight was in a deadlock. Nintendo and Templar gained no advantage against each other what so ever in the fight so far. Kane and Starcommand fought against Chantelle. Chantelle light saber whip was too hard to find any openings even with Star and Kane work together. Chantelle swung her whip around and began to twirl the whip around her. As if a light saber spiral was covering her from head to toe in order to protect her from any attacks, which is the reason why Star and Kane couldn’t find any openings.
Tricky was facing off Martin, but he was not doing as well as he thought. Tricky’s weapon is not a light saber but a huge regular sword. His attacks are swing his sword so that it drew a circle on the ground with the blade, then he would give it a full swing to knock his enemy or enemies to all sorts of direction. That worked very well for Tricky in a mobbing fight; that did not work as well against Martin. Martin jumped and steps on Tricky’s sword and kicked him right in the face. Tricky got launched right into the wall. Martin wanted to go up and finish Tricky with one blow, but a beam of white light came out and stopped the attack.
“Guess you have to dance with me for awhile for now. Hey Mask boy! Go take care of incoming troopers.”
“Don’t give me orders! By leave the troopers to me!” Tricky then jumped outside to take care of the troopers.
Danger is now having somewhat harder time facing off his former students. He tried to run somewhere else to fight. Then again, he found HIME caught up to him everywhere he went.
”You are not going anywhere….you cannot out run me before…you are not going to do it now.” HIME said. Then she found out that she fell into Danger’s trap. If he couldn’t beat the two maidens, he just had to beat them one by one. HIME has a much fast speed than Lessa and Danger, while Danger has a faster speed than Lessa. By that, it was easy for Danger to separate HIME and Lessa. The plan worked perfectly. HIME knew that Lessa couldn’t catch with her that fast and Danger is far too powerful to face him by her normal self. She then saw Lessa from a distance, but HIME needs to stop danger now. Lessa wouldn’t make it in time before Danger kills her. Lessa was desperately trying to catch up because she knew what Danger’s plan is. She then heard HIME’s voice from the communicator.
“Do not worry about me…..turn back. Do not try to stop me……please forgive me…I am sorry….you know you are not going to make it…”
“But HIME!!! ….You are not going to use THAT now are you? You spend YEARS suppressing it!!.....Please….I am near…I will be there soon….”
“Don’t lie to me…I sense you from miles away……Thank you for everything from then….till now…it has been …fun.” HIME then switched her communicator off. HIME then looked at Danger with a sad smile. Tears of Blood ran down her face as her eyes are turning blood red and her hair was starting to turn grey. Then HIME’s expression changed from a sad smile to a smirk then she started to giggle in an innocent yet menacing voice.
“Well, well, well. Aren’t this just like that time…you remember? Not that I care but I would be enjoy doing this. FINALLY I am cut loose, just to see how far I can go….”
Her hair was turning even greyer as she charged to towards Danger with her saber.


“So…you do not remember your name? Nor how did you ended up in the cave? You do not remember who trained you?” Lessea asked the girl. The girl did not say anything but kept on shaking her head as an answer.
“It seems she recovered well. Her mental state as stalling at a rate that no one has ever seen. I can sense the both sides of the force are repairing her systems.” Danger said to his padawan. He looked at the girl and smile. The girl just stared back at Danger with any expression on her face.
“Maybe is a good idea to take her around the academy. It is not good for her health to be locked inside her room all the time. Lessa, why don’t you take her around?”
“Sure, I was having the same idea! Come on, let’s go take a walk shall we?” Lessa then took the girl by her hand and they both walked out of the medical center. Danger was watching the two heading off then he sensed someone behind him.
“So….this is the girl you brought back from your little trip huh? Even she is like this how, but I do sense something else about this girl. You sure you are just going to send her out like this?”
“Yes I am sure, Nintendo. Yes I am.”
“Had she introduce herself to us yet? Or you fail to get the name like always?” Nintendo asked.
“Nope, she hadn’t spoken a word ever since she woke up. I only heard her voice once when she was screaming. I am sure most of the masters here noticed this anyways.”
“This can be bad….you know about the new students who are dying to have taste of real saber fighting against a sith right? What makes you think Lessa can protect her from everyone that comes after the girl?”
“Oh….no” Danger and Nintendo rushed out right away.

 #5418  by Nintendo
 
Whoa! Hime transformed?! Nice!!

also looking forward towards what happens next for both the main story and the history part. It really brings everything together.

 #5420  by Starcomand
 
yea has me so close to the edge of my seat im near falling off it lol

 #5509  by EvilIvy
 
O__O that is sooo great. And where the hell am I? ;)

 #5511  by Squall
 
were the hell am i !? lol

 #5520  by Lessa
 
omg... Hime nooo..why you didnt wait for me..damn my old bones..

and yay more history! I like to read about that!

 #5962  by Hime
 
By the time they arrived, they found the girl was on the ground holding up a training light saber, frightened. Lessa was trying to protect her from all others who had their sabers ignited. She seemed injured because her arm was bleeding. Nintendo landed right between Lessa and the others, while Danger went to check on the girl. The girl just kept on holding on to a saber and she was shaking in fear. Danger sensed a huge power is trying to come out from the girl and she is trying her best to control it.
“OK……..what happened?” Nintendo asked Lessa.
“Well….she was being attacked by some other elder students, especially the ones who are padawans. Since her dark side aura is as strong as her light side aura…..she was being attacked….by two of the students.” Lessa told the story:

Lessa was taking the girl for a little tour around the academy. She was having a good time doing that because the girl seemed to show signs of interest even though she didn’t speak a word yet. They arrived at the training courtyard where force users practice their skill. Lessa showed her rooms where Masters were training students with their saber skills. The two watched at the observing tower. Lessa was pointing at the masters and students to the girl and told her their names. The girl smiled and nodded. They then walked to the room where the students were being trained on force powers. There was no one there because no one had scheduled for training in this room yet. Lessa took the liberty to take the girl inside the training room. The training room is a big room with a lot of training sabers put alongside the walls and lot of moveable but huge objects. It is room for taking out training sabers and basic force training. Lessa showed her how the training works: things like using force push to push things over and use sense to sense clues around. Lessa showed the girl about force push by pushing a huge boulder. The girl wanted to try it too so she was staring at Lessa.
“Well…you want to try it too? It is quite hard to move things that size. Don’t over do it okay? Alright all you need to do is to focus your thoughts on to the rock. Think and feel that rock will move. It will move as you want it to be.”
The girl nodded and gave it a try. She tried but the rock just wouldn’t move. Lessa just stood there and watch. The girl tried to move it again; the rock didn’t move an inch either. The girl got a bit frustrated and glared at the rock. Lessa felt something was wrong about her glare. It felt like a sudden rush of energy came out from the girl. The rock just exploded at the moment.
“What…how did you do that? We better get out of here before anybody gets here!”
It was too late, a group of students already rushed in due to the sound of the explosion. They were speechless with what they were looking at. Then, they spotted the girl.
“I felt a huge wave of dark side aura. That could not be you right Lessa? Who’s that behind your back?” One of the students asked Lessa.
“Well, this girl is the one that my Master brought back. Please, she meant no harm to anyone here. You all can see she is trembling! I will take her back to her quarters right now.”
“Not so fast Lessa, if she can do that to THAT piece of rock, then we cannot image what happens if she unleashes that kind of power towards a person. Plus, I can sense a huge wave of dark side aura from that girl. THIS IS A JEDI ACADEMY!! Taking out Siths is our job. I cannot allow that kind of person to live.” The student said as he ignited his staff saber. Some other students ignite theirs as well. That gave Lessa no choice but to ignite hers as well. For she knows that the girl was unarmed. The girl herself was in deep fear. She had no idea why these people are after her. She hid herself behind Lessa.
“Look here, Stump. Please do not come any closer. I do not want to fight you. The girl had done nothing wrong. She is unstable but…”
“The more reason for me to cut her down. She is unstable and can be a potential danger to EVERYONE else. I have every right to cut her down. Now…..MOVE ASIDE!!” Stump pointed his staff at the girl. He was advancing towards Lessa and the girl.
“Why don’t you let the masters deal with it. Please do not tell me the reason you want to cut her down because you wanted to advance to a Jedi master sooner.” A girl jumped out from the crowd and ignited her yellow staff saber towards Stump.
“RAVEN, this is not your fight! NOW….STAY OUT!” Stump yelled at Raven.
“Normally I would agree on your actions, but for this…..isn’t it is better if we let our masters deal with it then causing a ruckus here? I hope you weren’t angry because you just lost a duel with me and you are taking your anger out on something else.” Raven said with a smile on her face. Stump glared at Raven and Lessa. He then looked at the person behind him.
“Well Axel….I guess we have no choice for us to do what’s right…..” Stump said. Axel nodded. They then jumped towards Lessa and Raven with full force. The two girls had no choice but the fight their fellow students. Some other students wanted to stop the fight but they didn’t know what to do or whose side should they be on; so they ended up just doing something called: getting out of the way. Stump was fighting Lessa while he actually used the force and moved one of the training sabers and used force throw to hit Lessa. Lessa just used her saber to deflect the attack. Axel was fighting Raven. He was having not so much of a good time. Raven’s skill “18 ways Bo-staff” was really powerful.
“You know this fight is rather pointless, why don’t we call it quits!” Raven asked. Axel just grunted and kept on fighting. He looked at Stump. Stump nodded and moved two sabers off the wall with force powers of course and threw them towards Lessa. It was so fast that Lessa dodged them but she forgot about the girl was standing somewhere behind her. One of the sabers managed to hit the girl on the arm. The sharp pain cause the girl collapsed on to the ground. Lessa looked behind and grasped. Stump took this chance and kicked Lessa to the wall and force chocking the girl. Stump was not only chocking her, he was slamming her from wall to wall.
“You caused me a lot of problems girl…..” Stump smiled as he was chocking the life of the girl. Raven wanted to help but Axel managed to keep her busy. Girl was being hanged in mid air and slowly she was struggling less and less. Finally the girl closed her eyes. Lessa just screamed.

 #5968  by EvilIvy
 
oh noes! Stump you b@stard!

 #5972  by Lessa
 
OMG!!!! .. ohh ..amazing! I love it!

 #5976  by Kane
 
o_0 Another cliffhanger dont leave us in suspense too long!

 #5978  by Akimoto
 
Hime wrote:“Remember your name now is HIME. Forget about your past, whatever sins you carried dies with you at this moment. You are longer your past self…..you are HIME. You are blessed by the force.”

Lessa jumped in front of HIME stopping her from advancing towards Danger.
“I am joining this fight whether you like it or not. He was my master too if your memories serves you right. I, too, have the right to do what’s right. If you don’t like the sound of that: Cry Me A River.”
HIME just smiled after hearing this. Lessa knew that HIME approved and they now posted a double stance. The two girls are both very famous of their combination attacks. Danger just kept of charging towards the two.
“You ready?”
“I am always ready….cannot believe we have to use this today Lessa.”
HIME on the left and Lessa on the right with their saber ignited and started their well know combination attack. Since the time after HIME was taken in by Danger, Lessa and HIME joined forces for countless times. The two developed this double attack combination “Dance of the Maidens”. A very coordinated combination between the two, they will shift styles, positions, and speeds at any time they wish. Nintendo continue his fight with Templar. The fight was in a deadlock. Nintendo and Templar gained no advantage against each other what so ever in the fight so far. Kane and Starcommand fought against Chantelle. Chantelle light saber whip was too hard to find any openings even with Star and Kane work together. Chantelle swung her whip around and began to twirl the whip around her. As if a light saber spiral was covering her from head to toe in order to protect her from any attacks, which is the reason why Star and Kane couldn’t find any openings.
Tricky was facing off Martin, but he was not doing as well as he thought. Tricky’s weapon is not a light saber but a huge regular sword. His attacks are swing his sword so that it drew a circle on the ground with the blade, then he would give it a full swing to knock his enemy or enemies to all sorts of direction. That worked very well for Tricky in a mobbing fight; that did not work as well against Martin. Martin jumped and steps on Tricky’s sword and kicked him right in the face. Tricky got launched right into the wall. Martin wanted to go up and finish Tricky with one blow, but a beam of white light came out and stopped the attack.
“Guess you have to dance with me for awhile for now. Hey Mask boy! Go take care of incoming troopers.”
“Don’t give me orders! By leave the troopers to me!” Tricky then jumped outside to take care of the troopers.
Danger is now having somewhat harder time facing off his former students. He tried to run somewhere else to fight. Then again, he found HIME caught up to him everywhere he went.
”You are not going anywhere….you cannot out run me before…you are not going to do it now.” HIME said. Then she found out that she fell into Danger’s trap. If he couldn’t beat the two maidens, he just had to beat them one by one. HIME has a much fast speed than Lessa and Danger, while Danger has a faster speed than Lessa. By that, it was easy for Danger to separate HIME and Lessa. The plan worked perfectly. HIME knew that Lessa couldn’t catch with her that fast and Danger is far too powerful to face him by her normal self. She then saw Lessa from a distance, but HIME needs to stop danger now. Lessa wouldn’t make it in time before Danger kills her. Lessa was desperately trying to catch up because she knew what Danger’s plan is. She then heard HIME’s voice from the communicator.
“Do not worry about me…..turn back. Do not try to stop me……please forgive me…I am sorry….you know you are not going to make it…”
“But HIME!!! ….You are not going to use THAT now are you? You spend YEARS suppressing it!!.....Please….I am near…I will be there soon….”
“Don’t lie to me…I sense you from miles away……Thank you for everything from then….till now…it has been …fun.” HIME then switched her communicator off. HIME then looked at Danger with a sad smile. Tears of Blood ran down her face as her eyes are turning blood red and her hair was starting to turn grey. Then HIME’s expression changed from a sad smile to a smirk then she started to giggle in an innocent yet menacing voice.
“Well, well, well. Aren’t this just like that time…you remember? Not that I care but I would be enjoy doing this. FINALLY I am cut loose, just to see how far I can go….”
Her hair was turning even greyer as she charged to towards Danger with her saber.


“So…you do not remember your name? Nor how did you ended up in the cave? You do not remember who trained you?” Lessea asked the girl. The girl did not say anything but kept on shaking her head as an answer.
“It seems she recovered well. Her mental state as stalling at a rate that no one has ever seen. I can sense the both sides of the force are repairing her systems.” Danger said to his padawan. He looked at the girl and smile. The girl just stared back at Danger with any expression on her face.
“Maybe is a good idea to take her around the academy. It is not good for her health to be locked inside her room all the time. Lessa, why don’t you take her around?”
“Sure, I was having the same idea! Come on, let’s go take a walk shall we?” Lessa then took the girl by her hand and they both walked out of the medical center. Danger was watching the two heading off then he sensed someone behind him.
“So….this is the girl you brought back from your little trip huh? Even she is like this how, but I do sense something else about this girl. You sure you are just going to send her out like this?”
“Yes I am sure, Nintendo. Yes I am.”
“Had she introduce herself to us yet? Or you fail to get the name like always?” Nintendo asked.
“Nope, she hadn’t spoken a word ever since she woke up. I only heard her voice once when she was screaming. I am sure most of the masters here noticed this anyways.”
“This can be bad….you know about the new students who are dying to have taste of real saber fighting against a sith right? What makes you think Lessa can protect her from everyone that comes after the girl?”
“Oh….no” Danger and Nintendo rushed out right away.
I have to admit, that was the first think i discovered when just looking at it xD

Maybe i'm to uhh... picky. (can't spell it)

 #5986  by Hime
 
thx aki
I should have been more careful

 #5987  by Starcomand
 
love the history we want more

 #6234  by Hime
 
The girl suddenly opened her eyes and Stump saw her eyes were in great rage. Her long hair changed color from black to gray. She looked at Stump and smiled. That moment Stump felt he lost control of her. The girl let herself go and landed safely on the ground.
“So….you actually thought torturing people is fun huh? Let me show you hell!” The girl said and laughed with an innocent yet menacing voice. Her hair started to turn from gray to white. She opened her hand and fetched a saber into her palm. She then ignited it and pointed it at Stump and Axel.
“What are you going to do? This is the Jedi Academy! You cannot misbehave in here! I am a jedi, what can you do to me?” Stump said in a trembling voice as he was backing up from the girl. The girl held up her saber and slowly advanced towards Stump. Stump ignited his saber and pointed it at the still injured Lessa who was still on the ground.
“Don’t come any closer. Or I will kill her! She is your friend right? Now surrender, before I am forced to kill her. NOW!!! I command you.” Stump kept screaming to the girl. Axel left Raven when he saw that and he jumped towards the girl. The girl just took out her left hand and formed a fist then pointed it to Axel. Axel was knocked down in mid air when the girl’s fist did not even touch Axel. She then turned her attention back to Stump. Stump was trembling while put his saber staff across the still unconscious Lessa’s neck. He was dragging Lessa with him while backing up.
“Why don’t you make it easy for both of us and let her go so we can settle this? It is still not too late.” The girl said to Stump as he was still backing away from the girl.
“Why should I? You are the one who should suffer and accept your fate! You are in a Jedi’s Academy. All the people here are my friends! You are dead, Sith witch! You are dead. So, why don’t you make it easy for yourself, just give up and let me cut you down….” Then there was a sound of metal hitting something came out behind Stump and he collapsed. The girl looked up and saw Raven was holding her staff saber hilt and trying to help Lessa up at the same time.
“Blahhh….you talk too much. Mind your surroundings you know. Hey you there with the white hair and the scary eyes. You can put down your saber now. It is alright now.” Raven said. The girl was about to put down her saber but she saw many other students start drawing out their sabers towards her as well.
“You people better stand down. I hate needless battles. But let me warn you: if you people start coming at me, you will be sorry. If you don’t like what I am doing or saying, you all can just cry me a river.” The girl said. Sadly most of the students did not listen to the warning. They all came towards her from all different directions. The girl leered at all of them and pointed her left hand up in the air. A shock waved was created around her and knocked everyone away from her. She looked and started swinging her saber. It was fortunate the saber was a training saber, or else many people could be killed. Still, it was not a good feeling to get stunted; many students fell in pain in the path of the girl. Lessa finally woke up and saw many students were on the ground but all of them alive. She looked up and saw a girl with white hair using a saber style that is like dancing.
“Dance of the sword maiden….That’s what it is we are looking at…..it is type of saber style only used by Sword Maidens. Legends has it….when a Sword Maiden started her dance. She leaves only the dead along her steps. Once the dance started, there is no stopping it until everyone is down or dead.” A voice came in. Raven and Lessa looked and saw Akimoto stood beside them. The girl looked at her saber and the others she cut down.
“Tch! It is only a training saber, no wonder it did not do anything productive.” She looked and stretched out her hand. Akimoto’s lightsaber flew out to the girl in high speed and landed on the girl’s palm slowly.
“That’s more like it! Clean up time!” Then she ignites the blue blade and charged towards Lessa and the others who were still standing. Raven had no choice but to ignite her saber staff and fight. Raven tried her best to knock the girl down but she found herself kept missing the girl by inches. The girl took one chance and kicked Raven down and charged towards Lessa. Lessa was about to get up and defend herself and Akimoto then suddenly the girl stopped her advance. She looked like she was in pain.
“Ahh….NOT NOW…..JUST A LITTLE MORE!!...NOT NOW!!” she said as her hair starting to turn back from white to gray and then back to black. Her aura starting to disappear and then she fainted. Akimoto tried to take his saber back when the girl woke and ignite the saber and point it against him. Lessa walked up and saw the girl’s face was in fear. She looked around and it seemed she found out what she had done. Lessa tried to calm her down and took the saber away from her but the girl just refused. The other students finally got up and starting to surround her. Lessa stood in front of the girl and ignited her saber. Danger and Nintendo just arrived in time.

“So….I see…no wonder this placed looked like a war zone.” Danger said. Nintedo just laughed. Raven came up to Nintendo and explained the situation as well. Danger ordered Raven and Akimoto assist the wounded to the medical center.
“Ohh…that’s going to be a lot of work for Silvercloud now….poor girl she is still in training….” Raven said to Akimoto.
The girl was to put on trial and presented herself in front of the council. The council members reviewed the video about the fight between the girl and the students.
“Her energy is off the charts. It is rare to see a force user using two sides and balanced in this stage. It is well controlled.” Newspaper Ninja said.
“Interesting…most interesting…..hey Shin, take a look at this…isn’t this kind of style….” Ronin said to Shin. Fluffy did not say a word when she was watching the entire video. Nintendo and Danger just hoped that the council members wouldn’t blame the girl for the damages. The council member stood up as they reached a decision on what to do with the girl.
“Master Danger, as one of the members in the council. We granted you the right to take this girl into the academy. Despite recent actions, she was proven innocent because she was provoked. It is now up to you to train this girl. She will be under your care.”
“Thank you.”
“But know this…if she goes wild again, we will not be as forgiving as this time. You have been warned Master Danger. You know she has no limits.” Fluffy said.
“By the way, you should give her a name. She cannot seem to remember hers anyways. Let her start anew.” Ronin said. Danger nodded in reply. He looked at the girl who is now staring at him straight into his eyes. He then smiled.
“You name now is HIME! You are blessed by the force……”
The girl just looked at him and smiled.
“HI….ME…..HIME” she said as she pointed at herself. A new day has come since then.
Last edited by Hime on Tue Jan 30, 2007 7:57 am, edited 1 time in total.

 #6235  by SilverCloud
 
it's so cool it makes me want to cry
raven's and aki's remarks, dark-HIME-chick goin insane... the part where i'm mentioned... THE PART WHERE STUMP GETS SLAPPED UPSIDE THE HEAD!! oh that was awesome...
ahhh, i'm in heaven

 #6334  by Lessa
 
ahhhhh I love visiting history! Give us more Hime asap!

 #6336  by Starcomand
 
great story hime and silvercloud the medic eakkkkkkkkkkk we are all going to die lol only jokeing cloud lol

 #6458  by Hime
 
Sparky and the others are still running to get to the core room. Then all of a sudden they hear a loud noise. It is as if something is collapsing from above.
“Everyone…..SPREAD OUT!!” Fluffy yells. Then they see the structure above them collapses. Loads of metal are falling down and then there is a shadow drops down. Everyone ignites their saber and cannot believe their eyes.
“DANGER…..how…what in the….” Ronin askes. Then they see a girl in white hair drops down also and start attacking Danger. She pays no attention to anything except chasing after Danger like there was no tomorrow.
“That’s…HIME!! But….what in the world?” Phoenix says to the others. Fluffy is as confuse as the others.
“Alright….Sparky, Raven and Ronin are going after crazy-mode HIME. The rest are coming with me.”
“Right.” The three answer. Just then they see Lessa lands right in front of them. Her face looks very distressed. She looks up and sees Fluffy and the others. They are just as amazed to see Lessa.
“LESSA! You are alright! What happened to the others? And…..” Shin asks Lessa.
“They are all fine thanks to HIME and.....wait…..have you people seen HIME? There os lots to tell but right now….have you seen HIME?”
“We were just about to ask you about that. We saw her went down that way. I have already sent Sparky, Raven and…..WAIT!! I AM NOT FINISH YET!!”
Lessa already dashes away before Fluffy can even finish her sentence.
“HIME…what are you doing to yourself….is there something you are hiding from all of us? Why are you doing this?”
HIME right now is having some what of a good time dishing out attacks on Danger. She uses “Dance of the Sword Maidens” once more. HIME now has lost her mind. She only focuses on one thing: killing her enemy. She knew that the Danger she is facing was counting on her going easy on him so he has an advantage. That is why she had to go into this mode. Now, she has no idea who her friends are anymore. She only focuses on one thing: KILL. Lessa knew about this. It was a surprise for her that HIME did not attack Sparky and the others.
“Sparky, Raven, Phoenix….listen…..DO NOT get close to HIME now! She is now a danger to both her enemies and allies alike. I repeat…..DO NOT get close to HIME!!” Lessa’s voice came out from Sparky and the other’s communicators.
“What? Then how are we going to stop her if she is like that? We are just going to stay somewhere far enough to watch her turning herself into a mindless killing machine?” Raven askes.
“I would be damned IF I ALLOW MYSELF TO DO THAT FIRST!! But you have no idea how to deal with her when she is like this! What happens if she is using that lovely sight of hers and staring at everything and EVERYONE with it? PLEASE….wait for me.” Lessa’s voice comes through again.
“Alright…..you have to keep up because our friend here does not like to stay at one place. She is going on a tour.” Phoenix says.
“Thank you….I will be catching up shortly.” Lessa answers. Phoenix and Raven gives out a sign.
“I do not understand…….is she really that matters to us? Like…not many people liked her anyways. Is she really that worth it?” Sparky asks. Raven and Phoenix just smile without saying another word. Then Lessa finally catches up with them.
“So…can you tell us how are we going to stop her now?” Sparky askes Lessa.
“To be honest……..I do not know if this will work or not. But, we are going to give it a try. So listen very carefully……..”

Scythe just finish with sending false commands to the ship in order to shut down its shields. He then rushes out to join Newsie and the others. Newsie is busy keeping the area clear while Stump and Axel volunteered themselves to safe guard the area.
“Hey why are you two here? Where is Newsie? Aren’t you two supposed to help him?” Scythe asks.
“Yea…we are just…safe guarding the area. I mean safe guarding YOU! You should be thankful for that.” Stump says.
“But….I am behind a locked room……Newsie is all the way out there!! You two should go, if not….one of you should go! Why are you two here anyways?”
“HEY! We think the situation needs two people; then it needs two people. And, if we want your opinion on this, we will ask for it. So, shut up and let’s go! I don’t want to get kill there.” Stump says to Scythe. Scythe just signed as he hits a switch.
In Space, EvilIvy and some others are fighting in space. She is getting worried because her squadron is getting hit really hard.
“Comon…what’s taken those guys so long……” then all of a sudden the shields went down. EvilIvy then wasted no time and ordered a full air strike attack.
“Hey people! We are going to put holes into this piece of flying box. You all better get out of here now!!”
“Sure thing Ivy! But you see…..we ran into some problems…..” Fluffy’s voice comes in.
“Err….What kind of problems? Not at this time!” EvilIvy is feeling frustrated.
“Well…for one thing, HIME well into her berserker mode. Plus, we ran into some old friends…..” Ronin’s voice comes through this time. EvilIvy just grunted. She knew there is not much she can do in her position.
Kagetsuki and Nintendo decided to trade partners during the fight. Templar goes on a thrust towards Kagetsuki. Kagetsuki jumps up and his left foot lands on Templar’s right arm which is holding his saber. Kagetsuki then uses his right leg and round house kicked Templar on the side of his head which sends him crashing into the direction where Martin is. Nintendo jumps out of the way and Martin gives way to Templar also. Templar crashes into a pile of broken machinery. Kagetsuki walks up and noticed the machinery is giving Templar quite a shock. Then he is not moving anymore. A round shaped mechanism fall off from Templar’s body. Kagetsuki walks up and checks if the Jedi is still alive.
“Wow….he is still alive after that. Well, never doing that again. It seems this piece of who-knows-what is actually controlling this person from the looks of it. Let me try one me time.” Kagetsuki thought to himself. He jumps over to Nintendo.
“Okay….do you see that round piece of machinery on his neck? Try take it off….if might stop your friend from killing you.”
“Great….can you please help those two over there? I can handle this person.”
“You sure?”
“YES! Both of us still have some unfinished business. So, let me handle my problems.
“Fair enough….don’t come crying to me later…” Kagetsuki says as he jumps off to help Kane and Starcommand.
Nintendo runs up to Martin. Nintendo then uses force speed and go on his high speed attack. He did not use it before because he was still trying to find away to save Martin. It seems that Martin knew Nintendo is going to do a hit attack. Nintendo rushes up and Martin dashes towards Nintendo. Nintendo knows his success rate is high but there is one problem. With Martin’s skill, he is going to receive a fatal blow from Martin as well. But that is the only way to safe Martin. Nintendo posts a stance then he charges towards Martin. Martin then charges towards Nintendo. At the moment Nintendo feels his entire life flows in front of his eyes. He only wishes time can just stand still for a bit longer. Then there is a sound of lightsaber slashing something metallic and a piece of round metallic machinery falls down in front of Nintendo. Then again, Nintendo sees Martin’s light saber is pointing at somewhere below his chest. He feels a sharp pain coming out from somewhere below his chest, somewhere close to where Martin’s lightsaber is point. Martin collapsed when Nintendo is trying to get up. That is because the pain is so great that Nintendo cannot even move an inch. Nintendo knows what happened during that split second back there.
“Sorry everyone…..I guess this is it. This is the best I can do…for everyone…take care from now on...” Nintendo says in a very soft voice. Then he is going to collapse. He now feels he can let go now after he knows that martin is now safe. Everything went black as Nintendo collapses on the ground.