hey all heres some of a new book/story im writing wanted your opinions for names on it
"Today is the day that we finally end this war" I said looking at her. She just stood there in silence looking worried. She looked like she saw into the future again. I had to ask her but i didnt want to know but before i finshed thinking i said it. "what are you thinking about" before i realized i said it she burst into tears. I sat there for a good ten to twenty minutes but who was counting when she stopped crying she looked at me. I stared back at her wondering when the silence would be broken then she spoke. Her words soft like always but with a lot of fear behind them. She said "please dont do this you can't win" i just looiked at her and all of a sudden i heard my voice. I said it without thinking "what do you mean i can't win i have fought this war for years lost over five million brave men. "I felt horrible after i said it but she just said simply "your going to die if you fight any longer and the world will die without you." then she told me what she saw in the vision of the future. I was shocked to know that the returning evil was far more powerful then I could ever hope to be. Then she told me there was one way to beat it. I asked her but she wouldnt tell me "Why? Why wont you tell me?" I kept saying and she just said "Isnt it obvious I dont want to lose you." I was shocked when she said this then out of nowhere she huged me and whispered "your the closest ive been to anyone." She said it with tears streaming down her face as she cried into my chest. I put my arms around her and said softly "You wont lose me I promise that i'll return to you when its all over." As i said this she warped her arms around me tightly and wouldnt let go she just kept saying no.
let me know of names you think of its kinda like the book merlin and great tree of Avalon both really good books
so please put names you think fit it thanks
"Today is the day that we finally end this war" I said looking at her. She just stood there in silence looking worried. She looked like she saw into the future again. I had to ask her but i didnt want to know but before i finshed thinking i said it. "what are you thinking about" before i realized i said it she burst into tears. I sat there for a good ten to twenty minutes but who was counting when she stopped crying she looked at me. I stared back at her wondering when the silence would be broken then she spoke. Her words soft like always but with a lot of fear behind them. She said "please dont do this you can't win" i just looiked at her and all of a sudden i heard my voice. I said it without thinking "what do you mean i can't win i have fought this war for years lost over five million brave men. "I felt horrible after i said it but she just said simply "your going to die if you fight any longer and the world will die without you." then she told me what she saw in the vision of the future. I was shocked to know that the returning evil was far more powerful then I could ever hope to be. Then she told me there was one way to beat it. I asked her but she wouldnt tell me "Why? Why wont you tell me?" I kept saying and she just said "Isnt it obvious I dont want to lose you." I was shocked when she said this then out of nowhere she huged me and whispered "your the closest ive been to anyone." She said it with tears streaming down her face as she cried into my chest. I put my arms around her and said softly "You wont lose me I promise that i'll return to you when its all over." As i said this she warped her arms around me tightly and wouldnt let go she just kept saying no.
let me know of names you think of its kinda like the book merlin and great tree of Avalon both really good books
so please put names you think fit it thanks
