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 #7574  by virus
 
oke ppl i need some help...:S

i need to make a RAP for school...

but i cant think of some good subject or a good tekst so can some one help me a bit :?: :?:


virus

 #7578  by Nintendo
 
Ok so what is the assignment exactly? Cause I can get you a rap or two but You need Somthing to rap about in order for it to work. Like...what are the limitations?

 #7579  by virus
 
it should be a clean rap ;)

no swearing cursing discrimination just clean :P

there is no subject...

i just need to have a rap about something and then i need to rap it in our class room and rcord it and put a nice beat under it thats all...

but iam not good at raping or even thinking of some lyrics :S

virus

PS: i got a dutch rap now but it wont fill 1min for now

PSS: that rap is a bout, world is to rushy so maybe a point to start your rap

 #7581  by Tricky
 
it should be a clean rap

no swearing cursing discrimination just clean
Looks like I'm out of the race.

 #7603  by Nintendo
 
The song I used is Talib Kweli ft. Mary J. Blige, I Try [instrumental]

This is a medium/fast rap and is meant to be said to be pronounced with very little ebonics (much like the I try song). This IS hard to rap if you dont normally do it but this is a freestyle I just came up with. This is just the first verse so tell me if this is something you had in mind.

introduce...beat drops
[Chorus X2] (sing it)
I fight
I Fight
I fight
You know I fight

The things that Ive seen that are my life are insane
seen a black kid try to be the best in a star wars game
he can probably take a whole clan all by himself
but he says he can cause his friends give him some help
The thing is he may actually be one of the best
Im the one that certainly can take on the rest.
To the point to where I may even seem obsessed!

[Chorus X2] next verse (unfinished)

You may think its wack im rapping about a star wars game
But to me... the rest of yall... are just lame
You may think your really the new jedi master
But im one with the force....im much faster
and I dont even need a blaster to take out your master
Im the one you need to prevent natural disasters
And I done even need a chick, you can have her.
Ill be the one that will do whats right
but if you fall to the dark then were going to fight.
You cant even see me, im so fast im out of sight.
I may even be the one to try to turn you back to the light.
Man this is crazy ....you cant handle my might.
you better listen This aint like flying a kite.
Last edited by Nintendo on Mon Nov 13, 2006 9:11 pm, edited 2 times in total.

 #7606  by virus
 
I like 8)

thats somthing i had in mind but my partner dis aproved it do take a game as subject but maybe i can convince him :P

i will try to make some own stuff into it

mnay thx already nintendo :P

i will tell you when we have the rap done and know the results form our teacher :P

*edit* are you on msn i cant find the instrumental
virus

 #7609  by Nintendo
 
ok Just something to get you started. W/e you do im sure it will be good so post it :P