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 #44  by Craig
 
Chapter 1 "The Door"


-Sir I think Ive found something. You better check this- reported young private
-What is it solider?- asked Capitan Reeves turning and walking to the private. They got closeer the the rocks near them.
-Sir it looks like this rock is a masked door- comented solider. Indeed the rock, they were standing clost to, had shapes of a quite huge doors.
-Could this mointain be hidding something?- asked himself Reeves
-Well the only way to find out is to open this thing- Capitan turned to his division
-Soliders! Get to me at once. Were going to try to push this thing and open it- commended Reeves. The troopers followed the order and gathered round the rock placing thier hands on it, grabing it and waitting for further orders.
-On my three!- yelled Reeves
-One, two... THREE! PUSH!- yelled Capitan louder
They tired to push the rock with all their strength. Seeing it doesnt move at all Reeves joined them in pushing.
-No use...- commented Capitan- It wont move.
-What are you hidding there? Who the hell would wanted to seal something that hard? -Reeves started to ask himself again
-We will have to blow this thing up. Private Anders you will be responsable for placing explosives here- he pointed one spot on the rocky door- and here- said Reeves pointing another spot. The solider took off his backpack and got out of it two explosive materials. After placing them where he was instructed the whole squad left the door at the safety distance. Capitan Reeves turned to private Anders:
-Hit it!
Young solider pushed the detonator button and within 2 seconds the whole division was wittnessing a great explosion. It took about 2 minutes for all the sand and dust from the explosion to come down to the ground so the rock could once again be visable. The door was turned into bits. Slowly strange fog started to come out of the inside of the newly opened entrance.
-And so it is opened- said Reeves quietly to himself.
-Check your weapons boys. Were going in! -said capitan getting his blaster out of the holster.
-Anders, McKane you two will stay here and quard the entrance.
-Yes Sir!- replied two soliders
Reeves came through the door and so did the rest of his squad. To thier suprise as they started going deeper the inside of the mountain seemed to be getting incredibly big. There were some old drawings on the walls showing robed people. On one of the drawing there was a person holding a glowing thin sword. Reeves had no doubts it was a lighsaber as he was a good friend of Jedi Order and had seen a lighsaber in action way to many times before.
-Great... Just what I needed. The Jedi stuff crap. This is probabely somekind of temple or sanctuary- said loudly disapointed Reeves. He was hoping to find an old military base here or anything else but not a Force related place. The whole Jedi and Sith thing was allways giving him nothing but a headache
-*sigh*... Gilbert! Conctac with the Jedi Order and tell them we've found something that might interest them- said Reeves putting his blaster back to the holster.
-Oh and pass my 'hi' to Master Fluffy...

Chapter 2 "The dream"

-Surround her!- yelled a voice. Dozens of merceneries equiped with the newest weapons and armors started surrounding the lonely Jedi.
-Give up little Jedi and I will promise you a painless death- said the merceneries commander with a sneer on his face. She was tired, alone and slowly running out of Force. Trying to stay focused and not to show her tiredness to the hords of the enemy.
-I could promise you the same but it would be a lie- she pointed with her saber at the
commander
-Im coming for your head!- focusing on the Force and increasing her speed she rushed towards her foes. She knew the end is near yet she did not fear to face it. "Better to stand on your feet for whole life than to die on your knees"- came through her head. With one big swing she cut in half three troopers in the front line force pushing the other three coming at her back
.-I will show you why they call me Evil!- she switched to medium attack stance- it was her speciallity. Fanning more merceneries with the saber she backfliped at the back of one and pulled out the split pin from a grenade he had on his belt.
-Boom- she whispered to him and forcepushed him into the others. Explosion killed about ten merceneries but still that was not enought to end the battle. More and more soliders were coming at her out of nowhere. They opened massive fire. Normaly she would deflect the blaster bolts easly but she have been fighting for over an hour now. Her reaction were slower now and she started to make mistakes- terrible mistakes. One of the shots scratched her arm- she turned her head to see the wound. From the corner of her eye saw a person behind her back. It was a trooper. She couldnt belive- she was sure she broke the circle and that theres noone behind her.
-How the he...-the trooper hit her in the head pushing her down to the ground and putting his riffle close to her head.
-Now you die Forceuser- he smiled ironically. But just then in one second or less a purple
blade disspatched the troopers head from his body.
-Your head is mine!- said a female voice. A unknown young female holding in one hand a
purple lighsaber and offering the other to help her get up was standing before her now. She knew there was no time for questions- there were more heads to cut. To her suprise when she got up and turned around there were only three merceneries left who were allready being dealt with by a second mysteriouse lighsaber user. This one was for sure male- tall, medium builded, hodded in black robes. As he killed the last trooper he started walking towards her and her saviour.-Who, who are you?- she asked confused
-Evil Amy at your service!- the girl smiled to her.
-What? But who are you?- she asked again a little bit shocked
-Everything in its own time Ivy. Now wake up- The council wants to see you- said the male fighter
*Knock knock* She woke up
-Come in.
-Good morning Master Ivy- said the officeer- The Council wishes to see you Master- he added
-Just give me a second.
On her way to Council chamber Ivy spoted her ex-padawan Darfin
-Hey Darf!- she waved to him- wait up!
-Hi Ivy. How are you?- he asked politely
-Im fine thanks. Im heading to see the Council
-Oh really? Strange they wanted to see me too- he was suprised
-Well lets go than- she smiled as she allways do.
The Chambers door opened and the two Jedi walked in.
-Master Fluffy, Master Ronin, Master Lessa, Master Shin, Master Newspaper- they bowed to the Council- you wanted to see us- Ivy continued.
-Yes we did- replied Master Fluffy
-What is it then?- Darfin couldnt resist the waiting.
-We recived a transmision from Capitan Reeves- started Master Ronin- he found a mysteriouse cave on Cobul that might be Force-related.
-We want you Darfin to go there and ivestigate it- said Shin
-What about me?- asked Ivy
-Since this is your first mission after your knight trial Darfin we want your ex Master to
ge with you. She will check how are you doing on your own- cleared Master Newspaper.
-It will be done- confirmed Ivy
-You may leave now- ended Fluffy.
As the door closed Master Newspaper turned his head to Fluffy:
-Im not sure if this is right choice. I have a bad feelings about this...
-Your spending too much time with Katarn. He will do fine.
-Im not worried about him...

Chapter 3 "Blue run milk"

-Boy Im so nervouse- said Darfin -Just like before my trial-he added
-Calm down. Its nothing seriouse. Typical blue-run-milk mission. We come in, we invistigate, we leave. Thats all. What can possible go wrong? Besides you will have a chance to meet Cp. Reeves a friend of mine- replied Ivy
-I cant help it. I want to make a good impresion. I dont want to screw up something
-Dont worry. Im with you- she tried to cool him down- Now get in and lets go- said Ivy putting her pilot helmet on and getting to her xwing. Darf stood for a second thinking about his mission.
-Hell! Shes right. What can go wrong?- said to himself and jumped into his vessel. After 30 minutes they were allready drifting in outerspace. Meanwhile on Conbul Cp. Reeves decided to explore the mountain. His squad was going deeper into the caves passage. It seemed to them that it lasted forever- they were walking straight for about 40 minutes now and still they couldnt see nothing but a darkness. The fog wasnt helpiong them- they could barerly see each other.
-Does this ever ends?- said frustrated Reeves. As he said that the private who was walking before him almost fell down to the giant canyon. In the very last moment Reeves grabed his backpack avoiding soliders terrible death.
-Freaking fog! Freaking hole!- yelled nervouse capitan still holding the solider. -Squad
halt! Theres a canyon before us. Whole division stoped and two soliders helped Reeves
pulling back the poor private.
-Sodo! Prepare the grapple hook- ordered Reeves- and stick some goddamn flares here before someone gets hurt! Private Sodo started mounting the grapple hook launching device while two oher soliders started placing flares around the edge of the scarp. Few minutes later they were standing on the other side and were ready to continue their exploration. Back at the academy Master Newspaper decided to send one more Jedi to Conbul- just in case. He had a feeling of something big coming. Newspaper walked into one of the training rooms. As he enterned he saw two figures armed with dual sabers fighting each other.
-Oh this looks like some fun- said quietly to himself- think Ill join- doing a wallrun he jumped between the two fighters withdrawing his sabers and crossing them with both of the training jedis swords. All three smiled to each other and begun the fight. The jedi on his left jumped back and tried to suprise the other two with a butterfly attack. The second dualist watched him carefully and just before the attacker landed he lunged before his face cutting few hair from the attackers fringe.
-That could be a kill- he smiled and turned around to parry Newspapers incoming swing. Their blades crossed. They looked in each others eyes.
-I have to talk to you Star- said News
-Now? Let me kick your butt first old man- replied Star and they laughted for a second.
-That will be all for today K'mpok- said Star and turned his sabers off- Practise more on that butterflies
-So what is it?- he turned back to News putting his robes on. From the look of his face he knew it was something seriouse
-The council have sent Darin and EvilIvy on a mission to Conbul- they walked out of the training room
-I want you to go there- added News
-Is that necessery? Ivys more expirenced than I am- asked suprised Star
-There is something bothering that girl. She looks very deconcentrated. Im worry about her and I sens strange aura on Conbul- said News with a very seriouse face.
-If you want it that bad, sure i can go right away.
-One more thing before you go. This case is just between you and me, ok?
-Understood
-Now go. and may the force be with you- added News. Starcomand turned back and headed to the hangars. At the same time Cp. Reeves encountered another door. This one wasnt masked.
-Dont tell me we have to blow up this one too- said disapointed Reeves.
To his suprise as he got near it the door opened it byitselfs.
-Now thats what I like.
The squad walked in to a giant chamber. There was a huge statue in the center to with led a path made of blue shining gems. The statue was showing robed person (probabely jedi or sith) holding a small box in the right hand. "Probabely some Jedi artifact"- thoughted Reeves. Before the statue layed a black crate. Reeves aproached carefully to it with a blaster in his hand. He kneeled to the crate and opened it. It was loaded full of old lightsabers. He picked up one and tried to turned it on. The blade enlightened the whole chamber with a green color.
-Soliders! Do any of you know what is this? -he asked his squad showing them the saber
-No Sir!
-Belive me you dont want to know... This is a lightsaber. A powerful weapon of Jedi and Sith... Suddenly the door closed, and they heard a footstep. They looked around nervously but coulndt see anyone.
-Blast! I knew this will happen. Men! Check your weapons and form a line- ordered Reeves. A dark persons showed up out of nowhere.
-I hope the Jedi team will be here soon...- Reeves ignited the saber.
Last edited by Craig on Mon Sep 18, 2006 7:07 pm, edited 1 time in total.

 #2064  by Kakashi.Archive
 
WOW...That sounds sweet at the end...NOT A CLIFF HANGER...:(...lol