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 #31  by Craig
 
As the new generations knew….
There was a huge war occurred four years ago…
Reason still unknown….all they knew was that
Many force users perished in this war….
It was NOT a Sith Lord who started the war….
That’s because they were targets as well….
It was a war waged by non-force users against force users….
For the first time Jedi and Sith join together to face this threat
The last Battle was fought on the planet Fevidouv …


4 years ago….

“This is Command Center Tovck! Report your situation! Report your situation!” a man was desperately trying to get to the other side to speak. He’s wearing a full battle suit and had a light saber in his right hand. He turned around, there were two people standing behind him. One is a human female, with long black hair up to her waist. She was wearing a long black rode and inside is pitch black battle suit. Her skin is as white as snow. The other one is a human male. He is leaning on the wall waiting. He wears a full scale dark red battle suit. There is no way anyone can see his face because he is wearing a helmet. The battle suit is all of scars all around it. He looks like a seasoned warrior.
“This is not good…..maybe you two should go and…..”
“Look at the situation? Then, help out as much as I can, and if the situation gets real ugly then come back at once right?” The man in the scared battle suit said. The human female just looked aside and smiled.
“Remember, this is urban warfare we are talking about. Maybe the team outside just lost contact for a moment; Then again, we should all prepare the worst.
“Just what are those people thinking? One day they just came charging in with guns and start hunting our kind down. The problem is that it is not just any one group. This is almost the whole universe.” The human female said.
“It’s not almost. It is the whole universe! What did we ever do to them?” the man in the battle suit said.
“Well…according to them, they calmed that we the force wielders are the cause of war and chaos. We sure had some good role models….Darth Vader, Emperor, Marrick, and some others who started the war many years ago. There are others things among those guys. The only thing we all know is that…they want all of our kind…dead.”
“Meh!”
“Anyhow you two go take a look.”
Then the two went out the door and jumped into their speeders.
The situation is indeed chaotic. The sky is filled with different air crafts shooting each other. The ground was filled with force wielding troops and non-force wielding troops killing each other. Lasers and Light sabers are flying everywhere. Time to time there will be huge explosion and bodies started to fly into the sky. The two arrived at the scene.
They saw four huge AT-Four legged walker heading their way. The force wielding troops are being pushed back.
“Okay...it is really ugly. I cannot see Lessa and newspaper-ninja anywhere in there. I will go look for them. You go and see if you can do about the situation here. One more thing, do not die before me. If you do, I will come get you where ever you go.”
“Don’t worry, I will not go to places you cannot follow.”
Then the two went they separate ways.

Lessa and her troops were in the middle of the battle field. A better to put it would be the nastiest part of the whole war. Oil and blood sprayed on to her suit. That did not stop her from swinging her saber and hacking her way through the enemy’s lines. The problem is there were too many of them. It is like no matter how many times she pushes the enemies back, they will all come back in a matter of seconds.
“This seems endless…..not good at all.” She thought to herself. She used the force to pick up a lightsaber from the ground and threw it towards the wave enemies. A number of them went down at the instant. Her troops then dived forward into the front line. They all threw a bolt of force lightning and brought down a whole number of enemy troops. As one trained in Jedi arts, sensing danger is not a difficult task for Lessa; the only problem is she is in a middle of a battle. The hours of fighting has made her senses dull a bit. The moment she sensed danger, it was too late. She can only manage to escape before the plasma canon fired. She doesn’t have time warn her troops about the incoming attack. The only she see is the strong bright light of the plasma canon that erases her troops out of existence. The impact of the cannon created a shock that knocked Lessa out and send her flying back wards. Lessa adjusts herself in midair and lands herself safely on the ground. Then, she finds out she is being surround by enemy troopers.
“Down with the fore wielders! Killer HER NOW!!” The troopers shout as they aim their blasters at her. Lesser looked around, but she is completely surrounded that there is no way she can escape. She stands tall, put up her saber and a purple light comes out from the saber. The only expression on Lessa’s face is a smile. She is ready to go down in this fight.

“I guess I am not too late to have some fun.” A voice came in. Lessa looks up and see a shadow is diving down from the sky. The shadow created a shock wave upon landing. It knocked the troopers around Lessa and the shadow fly into all different directions. When the smoke clears, Lesser took a closer look. The shadowy figure stands up, and jumps inaction action slices a way for the both of them to escape through the enemy’s lines in a matter of a few strokes. Lessa already know who this is, she smiles and uses force speed and run. The two make their way under a ditch. They both sit down and start to breathe heavily due to the long duration of the force high speed running.
“I am sure you know how to make a better entrance than this. By the way, did you just say you are about to have some fun or something? Well, never mind, you are always more dangerous then you look, not to mention meaner. HIME” Lessa said
HIME took off her hood, revealing her long black air and her pale skin. She smiled.
“Now you are giving me way too much credit. But, I do hate much-not-needed-battles, such as this. It’s just that, I get so….blah. Let’s stop talking about me and my attitude issues. We need to get out of here. Ronin is busy taking care of the current situation and I can only hope that Newspaper-ninja is doing alright out there. I can sense him still alive at the very least.”
“You were with Ronin? Good! Let’s go find News and get to Ronin. We cannot afford to lose anyone there, like how lost Sparky not too long ago.”
HIME nodded, she knows too well that Sparky was gravely injured because he tried to warn the others about the attack. HIME and Lessa was about to get him in time. The injuries were too great that Sparky is still in the state of coma. If it was not for him, all the force users would be now dead. The two take a look outside and start searching for Newspaper-ninja. HIME knows that her job is to get Lessa and News back to safety with Ronin. That was what Phoenix told them to do. Then again, the situation is getting rather out of hand that she needs to do something about it. Then, a buzz sound came from HIME’s arm. It is the communicator on HIME’s battle suit. She put her left wrist up and a hologram came up. It is Ronin.
“HIME! HIME! Is this blasted piece of metal even on? I managed to find News. You found Lessa yet?”
“Well, I did manage to get her from turning into a hornets nest. What’s your position? We are coming over.”
Ronin gave HIME his position. Then he and News get back into action. He managed to find News in the think of battle. His situation was not as bad as Lessa’s. That’s why it was not too hard for Ronin to get News out of his situation.
“Ronin, if you have any bright ideas or suggestions…now is the time. You KNOW I am very open to suggestions and ideas.”
“Right now….just fight and slice as much as you can. HIME and Lessa will be here soon.” Ronin said
“Oh..great…I was afraid you will say that.”
Ronin took his staff and grabbed couple of shells and throw them. News pushed them hard into the sand. The incoming non-force wielding troopers are advancing in an endless wave. Ronin then take out a remote and press the red button on the remote. A huge explosion follows. The two use their cloaks and hoods to cover themselves from the incoming falling sand. They also need to get out of the way from all the falling body parts and machines parts.
“When it rains…it pours” News said. The two laughed at the situation. Ronin suddenly stop from laughing because picked up something from his helmet.
“Oh no….it seems that we create too much commotion around here. Something big is heading this way.” All went into silence.

Phoenix is still sitting in the base. He contacted the other sectors of the battle field. He knows that the war is going end on this planet. It is just the matter of who is going to win and how long does it take before the whole thing ends. Then, a hologram appeared in front of him. It is a female jedi dressed in the traditional jedi long robes.
“Hey! Good news Phoenix! All other sectors are under control. How’s red wing doing?”
“I am afraid not too good. I already send HIME and Ronin to support Lessa and News already.”
“I see…I am sending EvilIvy, Scythe, and Kane out to assist the situation then. We need to end this senseless war on this planet. How’s your side doing?”
“We are doing just fine. You all be careful alright? Fluffly out.” Then the hologram disappeared. Phoenix then take a look at the screen. He saw something big is heading where everyone is.
“That’s not good…I better go give those guys a hand or two.” He said.
Phoenix goes and adjusts his battle suit, then head out on to the battlefield. He is about to head out when he realizes that he needs someone to take charge at command center. He is in a headache now. Then he saw a signal coming in from a transporter. A hooded figure jumps out from the transport as it leaves. Phoenix goes to the figure and greets him/her. The person pulled down the hood and revealed himself as Nintendo. Phoenix knows better than anyone that Nintendo is the one man army as with some of the best fighters in the group.
“I heard the news from Kaweck Center. That’s why I am here. You can stay here and call upon the others. We need as much bodies as we can throw at this.”
“Well, Mutt, Raven and Tricky are leading the air forces battling as we speak. They informed me the skies are clear not too long ago. Plus they said they are coming for the incoming reinforcements of the enemies. Thing are looking up.” Phoenix said.
“Is that because HIME goes all crazy and slicing everything the looks like the enemies again? You know too well about her merciless approach towards the enemies.”
“You got to remember she is a hybrid of light and dark side forces. You heard about her story before. How she went through the stage between light and dark. She can be calm and graceful as and light Jedi can be. Then her bloodlust can be as merciless and insane as any darth Sith can ever be. There are only a few people she really respects. She is the lone wolf among any force users we know.”
“No kidding. No wonder a lot of people hates her. Still, she never cares…so seems that way.”
“Anyhow…I think you better go and lend the guys a hand.”
HIME felt a cold up her spine at the moment. Lessa is taking a rest after all the fighting. They finally meet up with Ronin and News. News has to once again tell HIME to call him Newsie than his name Newspaper-Ninja. HIME then gets into an argument with Newsie upon the topic. Ronin get caught in the middle trying to calm the two down. Then they all stopped and look up in the sky. From the sky, a few hooded figures landed in front of them.
“It’s good to see you people still alive and full of energy still.” One of the hooded figures said as the person removing the hood.
“You are done with your side already Shin? Anyhow…good to have you joined us.”

The others revealed themselves as Ice, Stealth, and Starcommand. They all exchange greetings to each other like professionals. Then, Ronin’s communicator is buzzing. He turned it on and sees Raven’s hologram.
“Listen up people! You have a mobile base heading your way. It is a G-class one. The best way to do this is to go have ground troops on inside and destroy the main core. The air force will keep them busy.”
“Sounds good to me, we will go inside and create as much ruckus as possible then. Ronin out.” Ronin said.
“Alright, you heard the woman. Let’s go.” News said to the others. They all cheered and start their operation. The problem is going into a mobile base is not an easy task. Even though they are force wielders and they can move really fast, they can still be picked up by the enemy. The last thing they need is to have the mobile base doing carpet bombing on them. That will be the end of the team. They need to spread out in teams of twos in order to move fast and get into the base with everyone unharmed. They sorted out the teams: Ronin is with Shin, Stealth is with Starcommand, Ice is with Newsie, and Lessa is with HIME. From Raven’s hologram vision they are shown what kind of base they will be looking at and they have to decide which way to attack. Shin has no doubts about Raven, and Mutt’s ability in the skies. The only thing he needs to worry is how get inside. A G-class mobile base is like two times as big as an Imperial Sector. It can go into space on its own and move on the ground like tanks. Just one of those can do a whole lot of damage.
“Err…eight lightsaber weilders are about take down something this big….that’s unheard of.” Phoenix says. He already sent Nintendo on his way. Kane, Scythe, EvilIvy are on their way too. Axel and Stump are on their way once they heard of the G-class heading on red wing. Right now, they need to get in the base first. The air force came just as planned. They start getting the attention of the G-class base. The others wait somewhere else for the perfect moment. Since the base is tuck somewhere in a ruined city; hiding is not a problem. HIME and Lessa hide themselves on top of a ruined building which locates at the east side of the base. They dash out from the rubble the moment the base get close enough. HIME throws her saber and a hole was made on the surface of the base and they dive in. Stealth and Starcommand located south side. They let the base pass through and then jump into through one of the back doors. Ronin and Shin take the daring approach. They smash their way in from the front. They jumped throw couple of huge rocks and smash it into the observation deck and begin their slicing and dicing. Ice and Newsie came through underneath the base and tried to get to the core. Since the base is really big, it will take them some time before reaching the core of the base and do some real damage. The other thing is never a good idea to have eight people to go against thousands. They all need to avoid as much fighting as possible. In this case Ronin and Shin need to take out as many people as thy can before more troops come in. Ronin takes out his staff and start swinging it like a windmill when he first land into the observation deck. No one on the deck saw that coming; plus most of the people on deck only arm themselves with a pistol. That is why it is not a tough job for Shin and Ronin. Shin throws couple of deck officers out the base through the hole they made. Ronin then smashes the communicating system with his fist then throw his staff into the line of troopers out the door who are trying to get in. Shin is done cleaning up the deck and stops the advancement of the base. The two then walk out the door and try to meet up with the others. The moment they walk into the hallway, they can hear lots of footsteps coming towards him.
“Heavy footsteps…..the death squads! We need to move fast.” Shin said
Death squads are troopers specially trained to take down a force user. Any lightsaber wielder knows there people should not be taken lightly. These men killed many force-users in the war. They are a pack of hunting wolves. They usually armed with the new weapon thunder strikers. This weapon shoots out a bolt of electricity which only target force users. It disables the use of force and then the squad can take a force user down without breaking a sweat. These people are armed with heavy armor with is semi-lightsaber resistant. It is a group that cannot be taken lightly.
“If this base has these troops contained inside, that means one of the head military heads is here.” Ronin said.
“No doubt, we need to move and hopefully the others are okay.” Shin said.

HIME and Lessa are both going through air ducks and avoided a horde of death squad troopers. They jump around ceilings and mind trick some unlucky weak mined personal to open doors for them. They both have a good time chatting along the way.
“I remember when I first met you. At that time, most people think you are the hardest person to approach. You can be the most forgiving and caring person, but sometimes you are wild and merciless.” Lessa said.
“It hasn’t change now does it? I only do what is right to do. It is true sometimes I take things too far; then again, I have zero tolerance over someone being a coward.”
“But you know your way of doing thing rile up a lot of Jedi! It is getting worst that even most Sith hates you! You do know that you only have a handful of people standing beside you! I can actually count them out with ten fingers!” Lesaa spoke with concern.
“Not many people are as friendly and as nice you. I am just being true to myself and to others. It is true that I only have a handful of people whom I can call them as friends. That’s why I will protect them as I will protect you.” HIME said with a smile. Lessa becomes speechless in front of HIME’s smile.
“That is why don’t you dare die before me okay? I say that too my friends. Now let’s go.” HIME said. Lessa can only follow close behind with disbelief. They walk through the main air duck system and reach the end of it. Lessa draws out her lightsaber and cut a small hole. They peek into it and see they are right above where Ice and Newsie are. Those seem like they are in some sort of trouble. That’s because HIME and lessa saw lasers are flying around Newsie and Ice. The reason being when Ronin and Shin causing so much commotion, the troops in the base are ready to go into action, then Ice and Newsie got into the base and managed to meet them head on. It was a matter of bad luck.
“What luck! We ran into a bee’s hive right the moment we set foot inside this moving metal house. I just hate the fact that this place is not much different than on the battlefield.” Newsie said.
“Well, at least you can move again on the battlefield. Here, we are kind of stuck in a hallway or a tunnel. We are easy targets here!” Ice answered as the two deflecting laser beams with their sabers.
Lessa wants to jump down to help but HIME stops her. HIME smiles and uses the force to pick up a pistol on the ground. HIME took the pistol and shoot at all the lights in the area. The moment the lights are out HIME and Lessa spring into action. Newsie and Ice correspond to their actions. The troopers are well trained to fight in any situation, but not in sudden changes. They do not know what hit them.
“Okay, force sensing does have its perks after all. Thanks you two. By the way, how did you two get here without much fighting or no fighting at all?” Ice said.
“You know there is something you have learned called mind trick. It comes in handy when you need to open doors and all. You don’t need to slice through doors and all. It’s useful.” Lessa said.
“Ice, I did say we should use mind trick! But you have to say something like “maybe nex time” and charge them with your lightsaber!” Newsie said.
“I thought that was going to be easy.” Ice said. HIME gives out a smirk and Lessa just cover her mouth from her giggling.

In the air, Raven, Mutt, and Tricky are trying to get all the attention of the base. So, far, everything goes well. Raven sees how the teams get into the base, she then start firing at the base like crazy. The gun fire from the base return just as insane as Raven did on it a second ago. To be honest, Raven almost had a breakdown when she saw Ronin and Shin slammed themselves into the best by throwing rocks and all. Then, she saw fire coming out from the inside the base she knew that everyone is making the non-force users troopers a living hell.
“So, what’s the plan? The teams are inside already.” Mutt asked.
“Well, they need cover fire when they get out. Besides, we still need to do some damage on this thing.” Raven said. Then she sees Phoenix’s hologram appears.
“Listen up everyone! Fuffly has news for us. It seems the other side is not going to back down. To our very own surprise, their military leader actually come here himself. His personal cruiser “The Banisher” is floating high orbit over Fevidouv!”
“That means we all need to go in space now.” Mutt let out sign as she said that.
Inside the base, everyone more or less took a deep breath or gasped. Newsie look to the others. He can only they them so far away because they left him when he was listening to the message. He can only yell and run up to catch up to them. Stealth and Starcommand meet up with Ronin and Shin after going through a think line of enemies.
“So, we are done destroying the command deck. Then, we just have to go to the core and throw couple of lighters then that’s it.” Shin said.
“Don’t forget there are goodness knows how many guards between us and our destination. They are going to fight harder because their leader has arrived.” Starcommand said.
“True, they cannot afford to lose a G-class like this. Then again, I always love big explosions.” Ice said to the others. They have already studied the structure of a G-class many times before. Plus, these eight lightsaber wielders had experience in destroying one or two G-class during the war. It is not a hard task for them; then again the G-class is so huge that they need to walk a long distance. They also need to figure out how to escape from the destruction later if they succeed in taking it down from the inside

In the air, Raven, Mutt, and Tricky are trying to get all the attention of the base. So, far, everything goes well. Raven sees how the teams get into the base, she then start firing at the base like crazy. The gun fire from the base return just as insane as Raven did on it a second ago. To be honest, Raven almost had a breakdown when she saw Ronin and Shin slammed themselves into the best by throwing rocks and all. Then, she saw fire coming out from the inside the base she knew that everyone is making the non-force users troopers a living hell.
“So, what’s the plan? The teams are inside already.â€
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 #33  by Craig
 
Tricky is still in space fighting off enemy aircrafts with Mutt. Suddenly he spots a fighter flying in a somewhat strange fashion. He then decides to follow it. Inside the fighter, Sparky is trying to switch seats with Stealth while trying to dodge incoming fire at the same time.
“Hey Mutt, are you looking at what I think I am looking at? Or I am seeing things?”
“I wish I can say you are seeing things. However, I am looking at the same thing you are looking at too! Who’s the manic pilot? Wait….that feeling…”
“Yes Mutt, I sense it too. I guess it is time for us to go down and take a look ourselves. Besides, it has been a while since the last time I have join forces with my master.”
“Sure thing, I am still amazed that why do you chose her as your master. The age difference is rather small. Oh well it is not my business anyways. Good luck tricky. I will still be up here. Someone needs to look after the air force anyways.”
“True.” Tricky says as he dashes his fighter as the same direction as the fight he saw. Inside the mother ship, Fluffy and the others are searching the core room while cutting down anything that stands in their way. After leaving trails of enemy bodies, they finally reach the main level. They look around and find couple bodies are laying not too far from them. Ronin and Lessa rush to assess the situation. Before reaching those bodies, Lessa sees one of the bodies’ head moves a bit.
“Hey that one is still alive. Wait…..it cannot be.” Lessa says to the others as they too rush towards the same direction. They then realize they actually manage to find Justin’s body. Judging from the surroundings, there was a battle here not too long ago.
“ummm….there were like…four people here. Those marks look like it was done by a lightsaber. Could this be done by Newise and the others who landed somewhere else?” Nintendo says to Fluffy.
“Could be but just look at the wounds Justin receives. No scratches and no cuts. The skin section looks fine, but all the joints in his body are broken from the inside. Strange wounds indeed, which one of us could have done this?”
“I know. It’s her. She was here not too long ago.” Says Lessa. Lessa is about to explain more when Shin suddenly covers her mouth and Fluffy makes a sign to tell everyone to hide themselves. Not too long later, a group of troopers came in. The person leading them is a man with a Captain rank uniform. When Nintendo and Ronin see him, they gasp in wonder.
“That’s Captain Jordan….the leader of the bloodhounds. This group is very famous for its effective tactics under Jordan. They have insane amount of battle experience and survived many battles.” Ronin said.
“The only thing we, as force users lags are organized battle skills. We are trained and used to move alone. While they know very well how to move as a group, and retreat as a group. They know how to use a group’s advantage to take down our kind. Sparky is now in a coma because of these guys.” Nintendo says to the others.
“Is there anyone who survives their wrath besides Sparky and not in a coma?” ask Kane.
“There is me, I was with HIME. And then it is Kagetsuki who according to rumors, single handedly vanished under the eyes of Captain Jordan himself. I do not know about the others.” Says Lessa.
Jordan looks at Justin’s broken body. He then turns to a certain direction and says.
“I know you are all here. You can come out now, Nintendo.”
Nintendo and the others have no choice but to come out. They all have their saber ready for action. Jordan has his squad ready to fire. He walks in front of everyone and gives a sign for the others to not to fire.
“Please, there is not need to be tense. I just want to talk…for now at the very least.”
Just as Jorda is still talking, a fighter rams though the wall between Nintendo and Jordan. Three shadows jumps out from the smoke and dust while everyone is still dazed. The three quickly cuts down half of the squad. Then, there is voice comes out.
“So, I guess I still have it after all this time. Hey guys, long time no see.”
“Stealth…Starcommand….SPARKY!!” Lessa and the others yell out.

To Be Continued..............

 #70  by Hime
 
HIME and the others are still trying to catch up on to the others when they all hear a huge crashing sound. Besides Kagetsuki, Raven and the others suddenly pause for a minute. HIME lets out a smile.
“So…..finally you are back. Lessa must be relieved now.”
“So, that presence….is that your friend?” Kagetsuki asks. Raven and Phoenix nod in reply. They are moving on to catch up with the others. As they are walking, Kagetsuki feels something is coming. He then gives a signal to get everyone to stop moving. It is then HIME and Kagetsuki spot a group troopers run by. Most of those troopers seem injured and they have dust and some metal scraps all over them. Phoenix sees one uniformed personal in the midst of the group. As interesting as it sounds, the four have no time to ponder about the situation; all of them dash out and start swinging their sabers.

“So, who’s on this ship besides you all? And who’s this person still laying on the ground. Good grief he looks like one of those obese crime lords on a certain planet that is nothing but sand. What did you people do to him?” Sparky asks the others. He is about to check who is that one the ground. A slap comes right behind at the back of Sparky’s head.
“Forget about the questions! I am so going to kill you right now? I did say, if we die from this, I am gona kill you right?” Stealth yells at Sparky.
“What? We are still alive now aren’t we?” Sparky answers with a smile. Starcommand just answers with a sign with his head shaking. Then, they remember about the troopers and Jordan. Since they took the time for their little reunion, the troopers and their commander are long gone. Stealth smacks his hand on to his forehead in distress.
“Oh…right…how many times this kind of things happen up till now?” Nintendo asks.
“Too many times I would say…..” Fluffy answers and everyone just nod to each other in response. Sparky just let out a nervous giggle. Then all of a sudden a door opens, and out comes a group of troopers. They are armed with any blasters, but they are all armed with some sort of bomb. They all throw the bomb towards Sparky and the others. The bombs break apart in mid air and release many small disks like mechanisms.
“Everyone look out!” Nintendo says.

“Alright we are done with the slashing, now let’s ask the questions.” Raven says to HIME. Phoenix goes up and pick up the officer of the group. HIME and Kagetsuki are surprise when they see the person is actually Jordan. He and the blood hounds managed to bail out when all the force users were still dazed by the crash back there.
“Tell me, why do you look so distress?” Raven asks Jordan. Kagetsuki comes over and stare at Jordan straight into his eyes. Jordan is determined that he will not say anything in the start. Then, he sees Kagetsuki’s eyes staring straight into his. He then remembers there is one person who can do the same trick; he also knows too well what that skill will be. This is one of Kagetsuki’s rare skills. It is a straight stare into another person’s eyes and goes into one’s brain to search for the answer they need. Kagetsuki calls it “Soul Hacking”. It allows kagetsuki to “hack” into someone’s mind, hence taking whatever information he wants. Kagetsuki suddenly looks troubled.
“By the force! This cannot be true.” He says to the others. HIME walks up to him and ask him what’s going on. Kagetsuki just stare right into HIME’s eyes, Raven and Phoenix have no idea what is going on. Then they just see HIME looks even more troubled. HIME looks to Raven and Phoenix.
“You two need to go warn the others ….NOW! There is more going on in this ship than what we thought originally. The others….they are in great danger. You two must help them now! We have our own business to take care of.”

 #1838  by Hime
 
Raven and Phoenix are both running back the way they came from in order to look for the others. Still wondering why Kagetsuki and HINE send them back. They follow Kagetsuki’s instructions. All of a sudden couple of shadows drop right in front of them, it surprised the two. They take a closer look and discover that it is Sparky, Ronin, Shin, Trace, and Fluffy. Judging from their battle suit, it looks like they just managed to walk through a hallway with nothing but lasers firing at them. Not to mention all of them look like they are in great pain.
“What happened? Who did this to you?” Raven asks. Phoenix notices there is a disk like mechanism stick on to everyone. The two start to remove the mechanism for Sparky and the others. They seem to be in better shape once the disk like object is removed. Phoenix picks one on the ground and takes a closer look at it.
“Funny…these things are small. What are they for?”
“Those…are use to disable our kind’s motor and mind functions. It caused us great pain once we had a single thought in our minds.” Sparky answers as he staggers towards the two. Raven and Phoenix just stare at this little piece of metal in amazement.
“Whatever it is, we need to safe the others. You two’s timing could not be any better.”
A group of troopers are standing and keeping watch in their recent captive in a chamber. A door slides open and their walks in the Admiral and his personal guards. The troops all make way for the admiral to past through. Spike inspects all the captives and gives out a very ugly smirk.
“So, I did not except we would be meeting so soon again, master Nintendo. It seems your so called power of the force is still no match with practical technology. You should consider that’s an honor, after all I am the one who defeated you.” Spike says.
“Don’t make me laugh! You only used your men as shields so that you can receive all the glory while the others fighting to their deaths. The other fact is, I have a feeling that little metal object is not made by you. You just took someone else glory. Have you even tried going into battle yourself? Or you are still fear of fighting some old man?” Nintendo asks with a smile of his face.
“I guess age had finally caught up with you, old man.” A voice comes from behind Spike. A person walks out behind him. Nintendo sees it and can only grunts at his position.
“I should have known….Gotenks. Only you can come up with these twisted ways to get make other people suffer. One more thing, I am o that old!”
“What are you going to do about it? You are captured, under our mercy. I told you once before I will destroy what I cannot control within my grasp.”
“Then you should remember you failed twice. You routed up the Sith to hunt down the Jedi in order for you to gain control over the force users. You failed that one and you started this war. Not to mention your multiple attempts to destroy this one individual. You framed her of murder of her master and acts of treason against the galactic alliance and Jedi order. She almost got hunted down by both Jedi and Sith. That only made her much stronger than before. You should see what she did to Justin. She is going to seek you out.”
“Of course I KNOW THAT! That’s only a matter of time I destroy that nuisance.” Gotenks slaps Nintendo in the face as he speaks. He then walks over to one other Captive.
“Lessa, oh Lessa. Out of all the force users I thought you are the most wonderful of them all. You disappoint me when decided to take part of this war as a force user. You could have been in great power and stand along side with us in glory as we clean up this plague. You hurt me the most when you decided to work with the half breed and recused the damned from our grasp.”
“HE is coming for you now. So is she. You better stop this needless conflict and everyone can return to their lives. That is the very reason why I fight against you and your lot.” Lesser answers.
“HEY! What kind of man are you? IS harassing female is your only way to show your manly side. If it is, you are one sad, lonely man.” Starcommand yells at Gotenks and Spike. Gotenks gives a signal to a guard who is operating in the holding cell. The guard then pushes a button. The next thing Nintendo and the others hear are the screams from Starcommand.
“How do you like that? How many times do I have to tell everyone do NOT CUT INTO MY CONVERSATION WHEN I AM TALKING! You are not paying any respect to the speaker.” Gotenks yells to everyone like a manic.
“I think this is the part he is going to pull out his gun and shot us in the head or something right?” says Stealth.
“I do want to see how you can talk after I fired lasers through that hick skull of yours!” Gotenks then pull his gun of and point it at Stealth’s forehead. Nintendo tried to use force but the device stuck on hi body causes him great pain if he even try to channel his force energy. He is powerless, so as the others. Gotenks gives a menacing smile while he is about to pull the trigger. Spike then suddenly put his hand on Gotenk’s pistol.
“Relax, my friend. I have a better idea. Start the testing!” Spike orders. The cells which hold the captured force users are sinking into the lower level. As the cells reached the ground, the device stuck on them fell off. Nintendo and the others broke free and start surveying the area. The room is very big. It is almost like a training courtyard. Something drops down from above as they are still surveying the area. It is a box containing their lightsabers. Nintendo and the others pick them up and check if any harm had come to it.
“Don’t bother checking it. I need you all to be in full strength to do this.” Spike’s voice comes from the speakers.
“What is the meaning of this? What do you want to do to us?” Lessa asks.
“Oh nothing just a little test on our new weapon. You should feel honor for being its first victim. I was planning to use it on you people last, but how ironic.” Gotenk’s voice comes on this time. As he speaks the doors slide open in front of Nintendo and the others. The other side is pitch dark, then a blue and green light lights up the dark. Two figures from the dark approach the team.
Oh no…..” Lessa says. Nintendo orders everyone to ignite their saber.

 #1839  by Starcomand
 
o im on the edge of my seat lol

 #1893  by Kane
 
The suspense :O I want to see what this weapon will be!

Oh... and im not dead yet :( :P

 #1912  by Starcomand
 
Kane wrote:Oh... and im not dead yet




my line lol


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 #1921  by Nintendo
 
I keep reading this story over and over again. I cant get enough of it!

 #2497  by Hime
 
A group of troopers are firing their blasters real hard. There are two shadows dashing towards them in very high speed. One of them draws out a white lightsaber and start slashing anything and anyone that stands in their way. It seems there is going to be a huge number of troops straight up ahead. One of the shadows jumps backyards to a certain distance while the other one still dashing forward. The one at the back pulls out a pair of pistols and put them together.
“Commencing direct support!”
“Wait! HIME! I am still in front of the….WHOA!”
The way is cleared afterwards. The two move on with great haste and non stop arguments.

Nintendo and the others are holding their saber and try to believe what they are looking at. Everyone is expecting some sort of machine that can blast them to millions of pieces. To their very disappointment, the so-called “new weapon” is nothing but four people; to even more deepen their disappointment, it is three force users. These force users equipped with some kind of armor. No one can identify them because they all have their helmets on. Lessa does felt something familiar with all three of them.
“I thought you people would come up with something more original than that.” Nintendo yells in a mockery manner.
“Well, no matter what you say. As long as it gets the job done, it is a good method. I miss the days when fore users had to kill each other with laser swords. Just watch to see it again.” Gotenks answers.
“Who are these three force users? What did you do to them? Release them you coward!” Lessa shouts out. Before she can get any answer, the three force users starts attacking without saying a word. They are very fast and hits very hard. Nintendo instructs the others on putting in walls of saber formation. He hopes that he can keep the distance between the three attackers far enough to say they can talk. He too, has a familiar feeling about this three.
“Do I know you? I sense we have met before. Why are helping these people fighting against us? I demand an answer.” Nintendo asks the three. The three saber wielders just turn their heads to each other and start their attack formation without a word. One jumps towards to group, one jumps the right and the last one jumps at the left. Then they use the force to rip the metal off the floor and use it as projectile weapons to Nintendo’s group. Nintendo and Lessa uses the force to haut the in coming metal pieces from the front while the others are protecting the two sides. The three attackers jump back after the attack and then dash out by using force speed right when they land on the ground. Nintendo, Lessa, Stealth and Kane waste no time use their sabers to attempt “communication” with the three. Nintendo takes the one in the middle, Lessa takes the one on the right, Kane and Stealth takes the last one.

On the upper level, Spike and the others are watching.
“Why are you doing this? Why don’t we just shot them and get this over with?” asks Gotenks.
“I just want to see their faces when they finally find out whom they have been fighting….that will be very interesting.” Spike says as he gives another ugly smirk. Somewhere in same level, a trooper is walking down the hallway during patrol hours. He is doing fine when he feels someone is poking his back. He turns around, there is no one else. He gives out a sign of relief and continues his duty. The hallway is not very bright due to the attacks of the force users. It is not surprise for a person to feel uncomfortable in this situation. He turns back and finds out he is looking straight at a white mask, then everything turns black.
“Too bad for you….well just like my master said: cry me a river if you dun like it. Time to go save that old man. Hope I can find her in this big….nevermind, why am I talking to myself?” he says then his disappears into the darkness.

“You almost kill me back there, you crazy woman! How many times do I have to tell you do not fire that blaster of yours!”
“You mean this? Scythe made it for me. He is a genius when it comes to weapons and armor. Just like this armor, he custom made for me as well. He is a very good student…..I have another one, he always wears a white mask that looks like is it crying or something…..”
“I am NOT asking about where did you get your weapons and your students!!!……I am asking about you almost killed me back there!”
The argument continues……

Nintendo and the others are still fighting. The three are proven quite a match for the four. Nintendo and Lessa have to use their own formation to fight the two. They called it “Double flying butterfly stance”. It is the best combination of mixing the skills of Nintendo and Lessa together. The two joined forces many times and eventually this style was born. It is a skill so powerful that can even defeat the likes of Ronin and Shin. HIME just decided to stay away from it. The two masked saber wielders are confused by the sudden change of fighting style. Before they know it, the tide of the fight favors Lessa and Nintendo. Their attack force the two masked saber wielders keep backing off. It is then Nintendo and Lessa manage to slice of the other tow’s masks and reveal the attackers true identities. Stealth and Kane manage to kick off the last attacker’s mask as well after getting hit so many times. The four take a good look at the three and fall into disbelieve. Lessa just keep shaking her head.
“Martin? Templar?......Danger….It cannot be.....what’s going on?”

 #2500  by Scythe
 
nice =P

 #2522  by Lessa
 
oh dear...!
Its more and more dramatic. I cant wait another chapter XD.
And woot Nin we are great team!!!

 #2528  by Chantelle
 
very good interesting read

I cant believe you have gotenks and spike as the bad guys ! lol

 #2529  by Lessa
 
I cant believe you have gotenks and spike as the bad guys ! lol


hehehe Channy - VLR - do you remember old times? XD

Anyways I like how Hime use them in her story - someone must be that bad and evil =P

 #2531  by Chantelle
 
yeah it does bring back memories

I think its very well done the way she dresses up and makes them up

almost professionally done

 #2546  by Kane
 
Woo I see combat!!! But I survived it :(

keep the installments coming Himeinteresting to see how this story will culminate. And who's in the final showdown heh.

 #2568  by Nintendo
 
Nice We are fighting our Friends! can you say PLOT TWIST!

 #3291  by Hime
 
“You haven’t seen the fourth one. You are going to be surprised. Now reveal yourself! I command you!” Spike yelled out.
Everyone had their jaw dropped when they find out the fourth figure is actually one of the missing Jedi, Chantelle. This is, even Nintendo is really stunned by the turn of events. Chantelle and the others give out a smirk on their faces and start their attack. Chantelle takes out a saber hilt and ignites it. To everyone’s surprise, what Chantelle is holding is a purple light saber-whip type weapon. She gives it a swing or two and dashes towards Kane.
“Channy!! It is us, Lessa and Nin! What happened to all of you? Stop!” Lessa screames.
“It is no use Lessa! They are either under the enemy’s control or they just switched sides. We have to defeat them either way in order to survive. Now, get yourself together and look alive!” Nintendo says.
Kane is running and dodging Chantelle’s attacks. He can successfully avoid getting hit but he cannot see any opening in Chantelle’s attacks. Lessa wants go help kane but she is being held up by Danger. Nintendo is fight Templar and Starcommand is facing Martin.
“Your work is ….. marvelous. Way more than what I was expecting.”
“Of course Spike, I thought of this moment every single day.” Tenks says. They are enjoying the battle that they are viewing. It looks like Chantelle and the others are gaining the upper hand of the battle.
The combination between Lessa and Nintendo broke when they finally notice who they are fighting up against. Danger and Templar took the chance and attack. Nintendo is fighting on equal footing with Danger. Lessa seem to have a hard time with Danger. Danger was Lessa and HIME’s master. Danger was the one who took HIME in and that’s how Lessa met HIME. It shocked Lessa when she got the news that her master was murdered. It even shocked her and the whole force wielding community when Tenks and Spike announced the suspect of Danger was a HIME. Every force users set out and hunt HIME down and almost killed her if it was not for Lessa, Sparky and Ronin. Finally they found out it was Justin who murdered Danger. Thus, HIME was clear from her crimes. Now she is fighting her presumed dead master. She doesn’t know what to do besides deflecting his attacks. Then, Danger manages to land a kick on Lessa’s stomach and send her flying to a wall. Lessa gets up and uses her left hand to cover her stomach.
“What am I suppose to do ....HIME….what will she do?” she thought to herself. When she looks up, she saw Danger is already charging at her at a very high speed with his saber aiming straight at her face.

Scythe and the others reach the control room. It is not a big surprise that it is heavily guarded.
“Scythe! You are the technical know-how around here…..just leave this to us around here!” Newise says. He draws his dual saber and jumps into the think of battle. Scythe then gets himself to work on the machines. Axel looks at Stump as he ignites his own saber.
“Yes, let’s go in and buy time, Stump. I will be right behind you.” Axel says that with a smile. Stump looks at Axel’s smiling face and has an uneasy feeling. Still, stump jumps into the battle along side with Newsie then Axel follows.
“Of course, I am right behind you….of course..” Axel says as he follows Stump.

“Surrender Force Rats! You are surrounded!” one of the troopers yells out to Fluffy and her crew. The crew has no idea if their sabers can deflect all the beams if the blasters start firing.
“What? You are going to draw all of your lazer swords and all?” the commanding trooper laughs at Fluffy.
“Ara….you have to be so rule.” Fluffy returns with a smile on her face and takes out a metal box. The box opens by itself and inside it contains a number of small metal tubes. Fluffy closes her eyes and the metal tubes start flying out in high speed and cut all the surrounding troopers into pieces. Fluffy opens her eyes as these metallic tubes themselves up right in front of Fluffy. Then, these little tubes all fly back into the box.
“What in the name of…..are those….how?” Sparky asks with wonder.
“With high intense concentration of the force and a bit of imagination, I built these small light sabers and get them to fly then start slicing. Oh, don’t look at me like that! A lot had happened when you were….away. And I am not chosen as the leader of the council just because of my good looks.” Fluffy says with a smile.
“Sparky……you have to be so shocked. She doesn’t like to show off unless she really needs to. I thought you knew.” Ronin says as he pad his hand Sparky’s shoulder.

Spike and his men are still enjoying watching the fight. Gotenks is laughing like a manic.
“You know. The old saying “keep your friends close, but your enemies closer” is so useful and so fulfilling.”
“But Spike, I still like to dispose of them myself. What happens if they actually win? You know these test subjects are not entirely stable. Once they receive the command, they will kill anything that moves. That is including us sir.”
“That is including us if we are in sight. I trust that you have safety measures right? There is nothing to worry about.”
“Yes sir, we can shut them down but it will take some time. During this time, they will start fighting and…..”
“Yes….I know….we will just shot them if we need to. After all, they are all disposable. They are not important.” Spike says with an ugly smile as he throws two cards with the picture of Lessa and Nintendo into fire.
“Oh really?” a voice comes out from no where. Spike and Gotenks turn around in shock. They find themselves facing a black robed figure. They cannot see the figure’s face because the figure is wearing a white mask. The mask’s expression is very sad, as if it is crying. Troopers bodies are laying behind the figure.
“GUARDS!” Spikes screams out and a number of troopers run in from the door and prepare to fire. The figure lowers its head and walks right up to Spike and Gotenks in incredible speed. The figure suddenly put its head up and it appears the mask has changed from a sad expression to a happy expression. The figure then lets out very high tone giggle that can drive anyone crazy.

Let’s get the Waltz started

 #3304  by Starcomand
 
loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it

 #3305  by Lessa
 
oooh dear Channy nooo - its so sad! Please hurry up Hime with another chapter.. it seems like someones gonna die soon :(

 #3313  by Scythe
 
meh! lessa! get back to bed u have the flu!!!!! SHOO SHOO SHOO! *sigh*

still a good addition ^^ =P

 #3338  by Kane
 
SOOOOO close!! all that ducking and weaving musta got me tired lightwhips style decapitation? ooooh <sits on edge of seat>

 #3381  by Hime
 
Okay....I wanna say:

1. request of charactistics of the story and casting are fine....so come and talk to me about it....I will try to dot he best I can

2. suggestions...of improvements are more than welcome..that means it my story suck as hell..then plz say so (hey! it is the only way I can improve!)

3. if you dun like your role in the story...come and talk to me also...do explain why...so I can make changes

4. spoilers are provided....the ONLY way youcan get them is to catch me on server or on MSN....You can only ask two questions and that's it until the next installment comes.....DO NOT ASK ME GENERAL questions!!! Ask me sopmething specific...and be warned I may chose not to answer due to very good reasons!!!

5. KANE you are gonna die but not that soon!!

PM me is also fine

 #3384  by Tricky
 
rofl, poor Kane.